Igeo, that is a great new weeper origin! And most of your text could word-for-word be the narration boxes in the comic book that introduces him.
Only changes I'd make to make it a silver age comic: Change the "show them how depressing life truely was" to something like "make them see life as depressing as he saw it", change "boyfriend" to "suitor" or something, and change "screwed" to "ruined".
Only changes I'd make to make it a silver age comic: Change the "show them how depressing life truely was" to something like "make them see life as depressing as he saw it", change "boyfriend" to "suitor" or something, and change "screwed" to "ruined".