Of Rajahs and Hornbills: A timeline of Brooke Sarawak

Pre-Great War situation (Part 3/3)
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Fu Wei Han, The Imperial Sunset: Twilight of the Qing Empire, (Penang Nanyang: 2013)


One could say that the Sino-Japanese War was a mixed blessing for China: it highlighted the weaknesses of the imperial administration, yet showed where the paths to reform should go. But to the Qing reformists that held sway in court, it was nothing short of disaster. That Japan, of all nations, managed to go war with them and actually gain Chinese territory was a giant slap in the face to imperial prestige, and to their ideals of reform. Prior to this, it was thought that military might was all that was needed to ensure imperial strength. Now, it was clear that such actions must be followed with some notion of political or administrative reform.

Thus, with conservative nobles nipping at their heels, the Qing government enacted what we now know as the Thousand Edicts. Taking a leaf from their island neighbour, the years of 1896 and 1897 saw the near-complete overhaul of the imperial system: Sinecure posts were abolished, the imperial examinations modernized, a modern education system promulgated, capital investment and industrialization promoted, and – most importantly – a conscript army along western lines was pushed through, with advisors from Japan and the West being heavily courted for the endeavour. In short, the imperial court wished to achieve what Japan had for the past 50 years, in just five.

1897 was also the year Prince Alin came of age. Since his birth in ‘79, the boy-emperor had been nothing more than a pawn to the court, but his formative years saw diligent tutelage under his mother’s influence and a cadre of reformist ministers, whom tried to instil in him the values of adapting foreign ideas into Chinese society. With his 18th birthday, the court felt ready and dissolved the regency, enthroning Alin with the new title of Emperor Zhangchen. True to form, the new sovereign immediately proclaimed that the empire could no longer function as it once had, and that China should learn from the world beyond if it wished to progress and regain glory.

The court conservatives were horrified. Such drastic changes were contrary to the whole concept of Confucianism and of China, and they pushed hard for such changes to be withdrawn. Others turned to darker methods, and the decade closed with the emperor himself dodging three separate assassination attempts for his reformist attitudes. News of the Zhangchen government’s direction also stoked tension outside the Forbidden City; most welcomed the change in policy, but few enjoyed the disruptiveness that followed. The new mining and railroad concessions were all snapped up by foreign firms, some of which employed the treacherous Christians as their labourers. Industrialisation was also a large problem since Chinese capital was mostly tied up in war reparations to Japan, and what few factories that were built were jerry-rigged and prone to severe accidents.

Equally as disruptive was the imperial government’s new zeal against corruption, especially in the armed forces. Viewing the regionally independent armies and their bickering commanders as China’s weakness (popular rumours had it that several generals had used the Sino-Japanese conflict to enact long-standing grudges), the government began to craft an altogether new army in the Japanese style. Conscription was made mandatory, with the existing forces being the first to be trained, while their commanders were subject to scrubbing inspections and new rules that banned side-hustling. While everyone expected the armies to bristle at this decision, no one expected that a few generals would break off over the restrictions and become warlords in their own provinces.

This, coming on top of the anti-Christian persecutions wreaking havoc on the coast, quickly frayed the stability of the land. By 1903, Qing China was an empire partially in revolt…


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Desmond Lim, The Complex of the Chinese: 1896-1905, (Kenyalang Press: 1989)

…If history is truly written by the masses, then no example would be better than that of Qing China after the Sino-Japanese War. At this point, the national emotions of shame and humiliation were nothing new for the empire, but the recent war added a new sting to the wound. Even after the wars and annexations between China and the Great Powers, there was at least a notion of Zhungguo in respect to regional and cultural terms; that imperial superiority in art, culture, and military might would be unquestioned in at least the immediate Sinosphere. That Japan, of all nations, managed to fight and win territory and prestige destroyed that notion. Tokyo’s rise shattered what’s left of the cultural status quo.

For many peasants and townsfolk, their first reactions were to immediately uphold whatever is perceived as Chinese culture and preserve it against hostile elements. Unfortunately, this meant also targeting the most notable sign of foreign influence in the empire: Christian converts. The immediate aftermath of the war saw a dramatic rise in Christian persecutions, more ferocious and brutal than ever before. From Foochow to Tientsin, thousands, then tens of thousands of people fled from their own co-ethnics, moving only at night to evade violent mobs and newly formed secret societies. Whole families with just one Christian convert were targeted, ostensibly for failing to uphold traditional values. The Chinese Muslim community also became targets, but their episode quickly died off when their co-religionists in the Qing armies persuaded the court to impose harsh justice on their perpetrators. Conversely, Christian converts received little sympathy from the half-reformed armed forces, if at all.

With the bloodshed spiralling, the international community posted multiple vessels to keep their own citizens safe and warned Peking of sending troops to back them. Yet for most of the converts, salvation lay in three divergent choices: the coastal cities, the tropical Nanyang, or the Manchurian north.

For nearly all of them, the coastal cities were the first option. The opening of China had resulted in a few cities becoming hubs of Western activity; Hong Kong in particular had grown into a flourishing port, as did Shanghai and Tientsin. As such, these cities quickly became swamped with fleeing converts as they head to them for protection, ignoring imperial decrees and evading stationed sentries intent on halting the flow. Packed to bursting, these refugees spilled over into the surrounding lands, creating new towns, ghettos, and districts wherever they stayed. Friction between the newly-come and the established city folk were intense, with murders and violence breaking out even as both imperial authorities and western churches tried to contain them.

From this, two new choices were presented. One was to head towards the lands and islands of Southeast Asia, known back then as Nanyang to most Chinese. The region had long been a destination for the destitute, whom made it their home after serving their time as coolies or mine labourers. More recently, the rise of colonial empires had created entire new classes of the Nanyang Chinese, ranging from poor Kangchu spice planters to the rich and multi-racial Peranakan families. No wonder then that a fair number of southern Chinese Christians emigrated there after the Sino-Japanese War, with some estimations putting the number of migrants from 30,000 to as high as 300,000, though no one is certain. Settling down in Sundaland and Indochina, the newcomers were both boon and headache to the native and colonial governments, with their very presence unleashing unexpected consequences down the decades…

But not everyone headed south. Another option, favoured mostly by northern converts, was to head in the opposite direction, towards Manchuria. The frontier region had been forced open to outside investment following the war, and many western companies were out to hire prospective labourers. In the tension-filled air, rumours quickly abounded of the firms promising to protect the rights of Chinese Christians, sending a veritable flood of them towards the northeast. Despite prohibitive decrees, imperial scouts, and mobs of anti-Christian forces on the roads, around 20,000 to 60,000 converts and their families arrived to Manchuria by sea, hoping to become employed and protected by the new mining concerns mushrooming across the region. The firms’ foreign owners, most of whom were Japanese or Russian in origin, hadn’t actually promised such religious safeguards, but press-fuelled international opinion firmly made it clear what should be done for the newcomers, and to those that sought to harm them…

…The most confusing – and some would say, unsettling – part in the “Migration of Converts”, was the outsized role played by secret societies during the period. The Final Fifteen Years saw a large wellspring of brotherhoods, gangs, and heterodox militias coalescing across the eastern half of Qing China. Though the reasons for their formation during this era are still unclear, it was certain that local millennialism, combined with unusually dry seasons and the recent defeats in wars, played a role in their proliferation. While some were nothing more than religious groups, others – like the Society of Crimson Swords – were partial militias fuelled by a heterodox mix of Buddhism, Taoism, and traditional ancestor worship [1]. More disturbingly, some of these groups saw China as a land in danger and were near-puritanical in enforcing traditional customs and expunging Christian worship. Some of the worst murders in the era were done by groups like the Crimson Swords, whom began espousing to drive the “Foreign Devils” from the Sinosphere entirely.

Caught up in the events, the Qing government was divided on what to do. Many officials called for a crackdown to ensure general peace. Equally as many sought a dialogue with them to ensure an outer bulwark against foreign intrigue. Provincial lords were just as disunited, with many notables clamping down hard on the secret societies while others flirted with them in an effort to gain leverage with the imperial court. For the Crimson Swords, their nature piqued the interests of several officials of Shandong province in 1902, whom were secret sympathisers. Led by the prefectural archivist Li Hong, the bureaucrats wanted to learn more about the beliefs and motivations of this ascendant and outspoken brotherhood.

For Li Hong, he also brought some papers and inks to record his observations. As an archivist, perhaps he knew of the power of words…


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Zhang Vasiliy Anatolievich, The Imperial Web of East Asia: A History (Sekvoyya: 1994)

…When King Sojong proclaimed the birth of the Korean Empire from the Gyeongbok Palace and retitled himself emperor, he never imagined that his domain would be a hotly contested spot between two ascendant superpowers.

His wife did.

Whatever her faults, Empress Myeongseong was far more astute and observant than her husband, noting early on the murky threats that lay for the new nation. Japan was feeling myopic over their conduct in the war, yet it still viewed Korea as a place for expansion. Similarly, the faraway gaze of Russia has also resulted in some jostling in the new imperial court, with some officials urging the couple to err westward to St. Petersburg and the government therein. A hedging reformist, Myeongseong decided to err towards the latter and converse more with Russian envoys on administrative reforms. She also managed influencing the court to open military channels to China, which was already stitching-up its hitherto independent armies.

To the Japanese government, her actions were deeply enraging, and expansionist cliques quickly deduced that Korea would never be taken with her at the helm. However, the botched assassination plots of 1897 and 1899 only served to cleave a deeper wedge between Tokyo and Seoul, with the royal family evacuating to the Russian embassy each time for safety [2]. From then on, both the emperor and empress were escorted by a double contingent of half-reformed local troops and Russian military attaches, and by 1900 the Korean reforms took a distinctly Russian character: while administrative restructuring occurred at the local and even regional levels, executive power began to accrue at the hands of the royal court, and especially among Myeongseong’s family members.

And this was just some of the many, many complications that drove East Asia in the build-up to the Great War.

To put it simply, the nations of China, Japan, Russia, and Korea all realized that the regional status quo has shattered. But in its wake, conflicting policies arose as to what should be done. China’s reforms were done in the context of an empire fighting to maintain Confucian conservatism and international relevancy. Japan viewed itself as an ascendant nation and wanted a piece of Qing and Russian power. Russia herself aimed for regional expansion for both resources and prestige, and Korea attempted to play each side with the other in the hope of not being swallowed up.

Perhaps equal to the Korean complication was Manchuria. Swamped with Japanese and Russian mining companies, and with thousands of Christian converts arriving every year for protection against bigoted violence, there was severe international pressure to stabilize the region before tensions between various parties boil over into a bloodbath. The yellow press of Europe and the Americas called for aid and even intervention, though few western Powers wanted to go that far. It also didn’t help that the Peacemaker of Europe, Russia’s Tsar Alexander III, died in December 1901 from kidney failure, leaving his son Nicholas II to solve the Manchurian Crisis.

Goaded by international pressure to protect the converts, and following the policies already planned by his father for the region, Nicholas began to expand Russian influence into Manchuria, pushing for railroad concessions, extraterritorial rights, and for Russian mining firms to accept Christian (and especially Orthodox) workers. He also publicly donated funds to build churches and relief centres across the Chinese northeast, while his government warned Peking of severe retribution lest it continue to neglect its Christian minorities.

These actions rankled the Qing court, but they were too busy combating internal discord to act decisively against their neighbour. It also unsettled Japan, whom wanted no part in the religious debate whatsoever. Seoul’s conservatives were horrified by the Manchurian example, and quickly plotted their next move against the reformists and the royal family.

Globally, the complications also began to push several nations to new system of alliances. Japan, whom long sought control over Korea, viewed Russia as a potential threat and drifted towards St. Petersburg’s naval antithesis, Great Britain. The Korean court – or at least the reformist nobles – favoured a closer relationship with Russia while the conservatives erred to China; both sides didn’t want any notion of forming an agreement with Japan. China was too busy dealing with itself to care for global balances of power, though several nobles noted that a Russo-Japanese conflict could deflect pressure for the Qing government to bow towards either side…


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Notes:

First off, apologies for the long delay! I wasn't joking when I said domestic stuff in my family got bad. Hopefully the update makes up a bit for my long absence!

1. Ladies and gentlemen, I give you one of the TTL iterations of the Boxers! The OTL group would not be present here, due to circumstances being different, but some of the driving forces of the group (local millennialism coupled with the cultural backlash from the Sino-Japanese war) are still present, so it wouldn’t be too much to imagine a proliferation of secret societies in the following years.

2. IOTL, the Japanese managed to assassinate Empress Myeongseong/Queen Min by this point. Her TTL version is much luckier.
 

sxeron10

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Oh my god... The fuck am I looking at? This web of alliance is becoming bigger because holy shit, this is about to become World War I.
 
Glad to see this back up, and I hope at least some of your domestic issues are pandering out, I really hope things get better for you.
Fu Wei Han, The Imperial Sunset: Twilight of the Qing Empire, (Penang Nanyang: 2013)
Oh my lord.....are you saying the Qing are gonna die....:'(
On the other hand I love how complicated you've made the web of alliances. I cant wait so see how the Brooks solve their way out of this.:extremelyhappy:
 

PhilippeO

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wouldn't southeast also become Christian refugee ? That region full of dissafected groups : Hakka, Hill Farmers, non-Han minority, etc that in OTL participate in trouble and weakening of Imperial authority.
 
Congratulations, you have succeeding in create a web of alliance that made OTL look totally straightforward...and that resemble an oil deposit full of leak that had become the usual makeout point for chainsmoking teenagers
 
Interesting, a Manchuria with strong Christian presence.

Things appear to be heading for TTL ww1.
On which side will Germany stand in that war?
 
It still looks to me like Germany will play the part that the USA enjoyed OTL, backing the side they are more friendly with for most of the war, but only jumping in late to take credit for the win.
 
Old comments first, then new.

Second, great update, the tension are rising and the web of alliance is now more complicated, plus 27 million for Labuan? Sure that there are been riots and the goverment fell...it's more than a robbery

I actually had some trouble wondering if the figure was too low or too high. Exchanging territory for cash isn’t unheard of, but I wanted the cost to really bite Italy on the foot, but not too much that it would be rejected out of hand, while also placating both British and Sarawakian interests there. Guess I succeeded. :D


IRC (and i bow before people with more knowledge of the argument), the problem was really never the money available or the access to modern weaponery, more the political will and desire to spend it (and the problems the Hungarian part of the Empire had with a modern and capable common army).

Conrad, for all his fault (and there were many), was the best of the group and tried to reform the military (so an earlier WW can see the Hapsburg armed forces in a worse position in term of organization, tattic and doctrine than OTL)

Yeah, wars aren’t my strong suit, so I’m also opening the floor here. I’m guesstimating from here and there that Austria-Hungary’s army is as creaky, lopsided, and underfunded as OTL, riven with – as you say – glacial will and divergent policies. Perhaps it’s even more so ITTL; I’m sure Franz Ferdinand’s endorsement of the navy siphoned off some funds earmarked for the military, which compounded the issue. Oil or not, someone’s going to pay for all the maintenance.

Which is one of the reasons why (spoiler alert) I’m not going to be as detailed on the Great War as some of the other timelines here. I have a feeling that adding military detail and commander minutiae to so many fronts would just bloat all the instalments beyond enjoyable reading, plus distort this TL from its central core of Sarawak and the Brookes.


Oh my god... The fuck am I looking at? This web of alliance is becoming bigger because holy shit, this is about to become World War I.

On the other hand I love how complicated you've made the web of alliances. I cant wait so see how the Brooks solve their way out of this.:extremelyhappy:

Congratulations, you have succeeding in create a web of alliance that made OTL look totally straightforward...and that resemble an oil deposit full of leak that had become the usual makeout point for chainsmoking teenagers

…I still have a few more nations waiting to be included. :p

In terms of alliances, there’s actually not that many, at least when compared to OTL. The only credible alliances on the graphic map are the Russo-French one and the Italo-Greeco-Serbian one. Oppositionally, the British-Sarawak-Austro-Hungarian clump is mostly an economic/military agreement based on oil, not a defensive pact. Other than them, most of the empires and nations are just going along, aligning their foreign policies and interests with each other without signing any credible treaties. Johor may be under British orbit, but its government hasn’t signed any treaty of protection or mutual defence with London. Same goes for Korea and its governmental factions; they side with the big boys, but they haven’t (or don’t want to) form a ride-or-die deal with them.

Yet.

In WWI, Russia didn’t have an alliance with Serbia when it went to war. Their religious, political, and cultural ties were enough to push the scale. And above all else, you don’t need ink on paper to protect the interests of another nation, or to declare conflict to oppose other interests. Needless to say, everyone on that graphic map will be a bit blindsided with the Great War.



Oh my lord.....are you saying the Qing are gonna die....:'(

So Qing's gonna die as usual. But, what's next for China? Perpetual warlordism and division?

The Qing are not dead, at least not for now. For one, the reformists push for modernization went a lot better than OTL, where the court conservatives were able to push back. For another, China is spared from the Triple Intervention, because of its conduct in this TL’s Sino-Japanese War. The OTL conflict made Manchuria into a bargaining chip that Peking couldn’t even control, whereas this government has the region under full Qing sovereignty (though Russia and Japan are putting a lot of holes in that). There is warlordism and unrest, but not of the scale of OTL where the Boxers become almost an army in name.

Still, China is not out of the woods. The pace of the reforms are already causing unrest both inside and outside the government, and a fair number of low-raking officials are secret sympathisers of the anti-Christian secret societies, which are themselves being hard to control. Imperial industrialization is also going pear shaped, and there’s not a lot of capital on hand to create the industries of Meiji Japan. The next few years are going to be the absolutely crucial, live-or-die period for the Qing. If they can get it through, then the ‘twilight’ of the title would be just a transition phase. If they can’t… well, there comes the night.


wouldn't southeast also become Christian refugee ? That region full of dissafected groups : Hakka, Hill Farmers, non-Han minority, etc that in OTL participate in trouble and weakening of Imperial authority.

And they might not harbour good feelings towards the Chinese Christians, and vice verca. At this point, most of them want to seek shelter with their established brethren, not with people whom align differently in religion or ideology.

The Chinese southeast is currently restive but pacified, and the Panthay rebellion went under just as OTL. With Qing authority being somewhat slipshod after the war, though, there are some new rumblings. Watch this space.


I smell an independent Manchuria.

Interesting, a Manchuria with strong Christian presence.

There’s still a lot of unconverted Chinese and Manchu people still inhabiting the region, and tensions between them and the immigrants are still on the ‘uncomfortable’ scale. At this point, the number of Chinese Christians in Manchuria still pale to that of the locals, though they are climbing quickly in numbers and as a minority. The missionaries whom followed them are also edging the needle, especially those funded by Russia.

As for independence, many of the converts still have an inkling towards China, though not necessarily to the Qing government. Attachment to Zhongguo was still strong to many migrants back then, even those in Southeast Asia IOTL. It would take a huge political or cultural disruption to truly break that.



Things appear to be heading for TTL ww1.

On which side will Germany stand in that war?

WWI with a neutral Germany (or even opportunistic Italy-style Germany) would be pretty funny

It still looks to me like Germany will play the part that the USA enjoyed OTL, backing the side they are more friendly with for most of the war, but only jumping in late to take credit for the win.

Germany here had a different history. Bismarck tried to make his imperial alliances with other heads of state like OTL, but all of them collapsed following his exit, even the ones with neighbouring Austria (though the two empires are quite close…ish. Privately, the Habsburgs want Wilhelm to just shut his flap about Balkan slavs).

I have some interesting plans for glorious Deutschland, which may or may not involve putting off their involvement in the Great War for at least a year or thereabouts. After all, you can’t fight when your military and monarchy has some general-toppling scandals. :happyblush


I have a good feeling about China in the longterm. I hope I'm right :3

The word 'Twilight' can mean so many things, thus I don't know if Qing China would fall or not.

All I can say for now is that the War will the Qing China’s biggest hurdle. It’s going to mess with everyone’s plans.
 
mini-update: the twin sons of Rajah Charles
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At the mouth of the Sarawak River, mid-July 1905

Margaret Brooke sipped her tea.

“Sit.”

Her youngest son still stood.

From her view, the Ranee of Sarawak could almost see the gears turning in her son’s mind. Clayton Brooke had always been the thinker of the family, and he must have expected many things when she called him aboard the family yacht for tea. The breeze and light coming in from the windows bathed the small lounge in the warm atmosphere of Borneo, yet the face of the man standing before her was as distant and unknown as a polar trekker. He hadn’t expected this.

This being both the tea and the fact that Clayton’s twin brother was also present, sitting close by.

“Clarke.” He said.

Adik.” Clarke Brooke answered. No, mocked.

“Boys.” Margaret tensed. “I didn’t call both of you up here just to snipe each other. Sayang, please sit.”

The young son opened his mouth to argue, but his voice died when she gave him a severe look. Margaret had known little of motherhood when she first married into the family, or of Sarawak. But that was quickly remedied through the friendships and merry-making she made with the women of Kuching. Along the way, they taught her a thing or two on being a good parent as well. Not now, dear. Not now.

“…Sorry.” Clayton apologized, coming forward before sitting on the rattan chair. “Where’s father?”

“Out with the captain. I want to have a private talk with you both.” Margaret said.

“What is there to talk about?” Clayton asked.

Margaret stared at him, and then to his twin brother. She sighed. “I don’t know how I can say this lightly, so I’m just going to let it all out.”

“What is it, mother?” Clarke asked beside him.

She stared for another moment. Then…

“…It’s happening. Your father received a telegram early this morning. London’s asking us to fight.”

The faces of her sons said it all. Clayton’s reaction was one of shock, followed up with incredible concern. Clarke’s visage was also that of alarm, but it quickly changed to something akin to relief before he quickly hid it behind a veneer of stoicism. So subtle, yet so different. Despite their picture-perfect similarities, the Brooke twins’ personalities are always at odds.

“Before you boys say anything, I want both of you to swear to me one thing.”

“What’s that, mother?” Clarke, the eldest, asked.

“That the both of you care and protect each other. I know you and Clayton don’t see eye to eye on many things, but this is beyond all of us now. The war at Europe is coming here, and the last thing I want to hear are my sons squabbling while under fire!”

Margaret realized then that she was shouting. The silence was stark.

She inhaled. Then exhaled.

“Promise me, boys. Promise me.”


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Mary Schneider, A Peculiar Dynasty: The White Rajahs of Sarawak, (Ender Publishing; 2001)

… Being who they were, the children of Charles Brooke and Margaret De Windt grew up learning more than just mathematics or diction. Since childhood, all of them learned to speak in English and Malay, as well as understand the multiple tongues of Sarawak’s numerous tribes. Additionally, all of them learned to write those very languages in both the English alphabet and the traditional Jawi script, which was still used in certain contexts when dealing with the Malay community. While English governesses taught British poetry in the weekends, Kuching notables brought books detailing the history of Brunei, teaching the Brooke children how the Bornean empire waxed and waned in power.

Leading and governing was also another priority. After returning from their studies in England, a sojourn which took the better part of their adolescence, the Brooke twins were swiftly inducted into Sarawak’s eclectic Resident-Councillor bureaucracy, with the elder Clarke Brooke becoming the administrative Resident of the Lower Rajang Division while the younger Clayton Brooke became the Resident of the neighbouring Krian Division. The position was an important one, for a Resident was supposed to juggle his duties as a regional tax assessor, court arbiter, peacekeeper, and – if need be – war leader.

And in both cases, the Brooke twins did remarkably well. Archival records and local accounts both confirmed Clarke and Clayton Brooke as diligent and firm administrators, metering out justice and arbitrating disputes in their domains. However, it was their capabilities at war that differed the boys. The elder Clarke was a Brooke leader through and through, leading personally and preferring quick initiative to prudence. When a punitive expedition was launched, he would often sit at the head of the leading Prahu, commanding from the front. Clayton, on the other hand, was more methodical. He planned his attacks, preferred to counsel with other tribal notables, and often led while being ensconced from the centre of an expeditionary force.

As brothers do, the twins loved and hated each other. Clarke sniped at his younger brother for this defensive thinking, while Clayton mocked his elder brother’s daring-do and overconfidence. But with that, both of them advised each other on governance and often aided one another in times of trouble. It helped that both boys also kept in touch with their mother, the Ranee Margaret, whom made sure any small misbehaviours were kept from their father’s gaze in the Astana.

But in the last months before the Great War, something changed. Observers noted that both brothers suddenly became cold with one another, noting, as one Dayak chief stated, “as if a chasm had suddenly appeared and destroyed whatever bond they had”. Appeals for advice suddenly dropped off, as were shipments of supplies to each other’s Divisions. Whatever happened between the Brooke twins, they didn’t record it on their journals and kept the affair largely to themselves, so much so that even today, no one is really sure what exactly caused the rift between the two. A relationship spat is pointed as the most probable reason, though it is doubtful.

The sudden coldness concerned Margret Brooke, who tried her hardest to inquire as to the situation, though she was unsuccessful. As the Great War descended on the world, the Brooke twins carried on with the rift separating them, which caused no end of concern for the Ranee, or for the brothers’ headstrong sister…


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“I heard everything.”

“Oh, did your time with father went that quick?”

“He had some business with the captain. Mother-”

“-What do I do, Lily? What do we do?”

“I don’t know, mother. But we can’t give up. Not now.”

“But the war-”

“-I know, I know. We just need to think better.”

“I just don’t want… whatever happened, to hurt them. I’m scared, Lily.”

“So am I.”

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Notes: The Brooke family IOTL used local nicknames for each other, especially amongst the children, so there is precedent for them to utilise the local language for personal matters.

Adik = Little Kid in Malay. The term is generally used neutrally, but it can also be said in a more deriding context among disagreeable siblings.

Sayang = (My) Dear, also in Malay.
 
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I dont get along with my brother because he's......a dick, Zing!!!

But seriously great chapter, its always nice to see sarawak for a spell while we watch the greater happenings. Im interested in how Clark will grow as a leader with the tidbits we're seeing, I also hope we get more insight into the dynamic between sarawak and britain as the war goes on. Is Britain treating sarawak like a medieval vassal and just how much sarawak is willing to commit and wish for in return etc. Really good early christmas present though, hope everything is getting better for you!

(blows u a kiss):kissingheart:
 
Oh dear, dynastic drama as the war goes into the breach.

What's a royal family without some dynastic drama?

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I almost puked in laughter when I heard the word adik, because it has a different meaning in my mother tongue. :p

What does it mean? What does it mean!? Wait, it's not English is it?


I dont get along with my brother because he's......a dick, Zing!!!

But seriously great chapter, its always nice to see sarawak for a spell while we watch the greater happenings. Im interested in how Clark will grow as a leader with the tidbits we're seeing, I also hope we get more insight into the dynamic between sarawak and britain as the war goes on. Is Britain treating sarawak like a medieval vassal and just how much sarawak is willing to commit and wish for in return etc.

Would you believe me if I told you I just realized the word similarities? XD

For the narrative update, I figured that the story needed to have a transition point where the broader focus of the past is narrowed down back to the Brooke family. Plus, it's high time we are introduced to the next generation, and the Brooke twins are not going to be anywhere near the British definition of 'normal'. As for Britain itself, it's relation to the White Rajahs are still in flux, but the Colonial Office currently sees Sarawak as a cross between 'partner nation' and 'subordinate vassal', due to the kingdom's grey area status within the larger British Empire. After all, it's not everyday that a half-native ruler has contacts within the Royal Navy, or to converse directly with Hapsburg princes for oil rights.

As you can guess, the coming war will reveal just how odd this relationship would become.


Really good early christmas present though, hope everything is getting better for you!

(blows u a kiss):kissingheart:

As for personal stuff... I wish I could say things are getting better. As it is, my recent days have been tumultuous within my family, to say the least. I want to say that this website is my refuge, but I'll be (partially) lying if I said that. Still, I really do want to tank everyone for your support. There are no words that can convey how much your comments mean to me. Thanks, guys. :cryingface:
 
What is the source reference of this map?

Huh, it seems the original source for that map has disappeared from the net, but I used a blown-up version of this scanned map which originated from"Hornbill and Dragon. Arts and Culture of Borneo" by Benard Sellato. It's outdated, but the map is the most detailed I could find that shows the ethnic and cultural subgroups of Sarawak, Sabah, Brunei, and Kalimantan together.

Don't do that to us, I though it was an update!

Haha. an update will be coming soon, I'll promise you that!

Which may be a good cue to explain why I dropped off from this TL over the past two months and felt so morose in the last few pages beforehand. To keep things short, my parents divorced at the end of the year, and the whole family tree nearly split apart over the proceedings. After that, I went into a really depressive state and couldn't find the will to continue this. I managed to write a new installment over the past month that dovetails into the Great War, but it's extremely shabby and, after rereading it, contained a lot of omissions and errors that I normally would've corrected. So I've been slowly rewriting the part, but it won't be presentable for the near-future, and I don't want to post something that is really lacking in quality.

But I'm not going to lie down yet. And just to tide you all over...

unfinished map.png


I'm going for more than just a normal installment.
 
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