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Death does not come to make her a coffee

Death does not come to make her a coffee



“Death does not come to make her a coffee. […] In my life I have assisted many dying. […] And all they wanted was to live one more day. You say it's less? But you see, when breathing stops, how important is a moment! The Divine Justice is framed by the great Divine Love, and He forgive us with a sigh. That made me to think that a moment can be a time and a sigh can be a prayer. […] God wants a sincere heart and not thousands of prayers. He wants our hearts. Nothing is more expensive than the time from God. He gave it to us to save ourselves.” Excerpt from “The teachings of Father Arsenie Papacioc” [1]



The year of the Lord 1290, Thursday, December 21, Lyon, Kingdom of Arles

It was well pass over the midnight and the still sleepy priest climbed the stairs in a hurry. It seems that the King’s health had deteriorated very quickly and they fear for the worst. The priest had left the King in good shape in the evening and he had retired to rest a little. As personal chaplain and confessor of the King he had spent all the last days and nights without rest, praying ceaselessly near the royal bed. But the last two days his health had improved significantly and the doctors had given the assurance that the worst had passed and he was on the healing process. Those dam doctors which believed that theirs leeches and mercury and herbs and infusions were more useful than the prayers! However, regardless which treatment worked better and to the relief of the court, the King’s recovery was seen now certain, being just a matter of time. However, several moments ago, a servant rushed in his room and announce him that he should come immediately in the King chamber.

Making the sign of the cross, the priest entered in that big room warmed by two big masonry build fireplaces and several small other improvised ones, spread around the central bed. All around the walls were hanging thick tapestries, while on the floor were stretched big fluffy Persian carpets. The king suffered from fever and chills so they tried to warm him by any measures, including putting naked young women in his bed. All in vain… It seemed that the Angel of Death had sharpened his scythe for too long and he was now impatient to claim another royal life.

The 62 years old King was tiered to live but he do not wanted to get up. Not yet! He was worried about his immortal soul, he was worried about his Kingdom, he was worried about his family, he was worried about France… Many thoughts invaded his head that late night. Oh, why do God not give him a better health? He could fix all the things… How history will remember him? Was he a good King, a good ruler? Was he a good father for his children or a good son in his turn? Or a good husband for his two wives? Poor Constance of Aragon... he has mistreat her so many times and she had remained loyal, understanding and loving up to her end, some four years ago. Then, instead searching for wisdom and forgiveness in chastity and prayer, he found pleasure in the arms and legs of a young and innocent women. Well, Guiraude de Foix was not so innocent and she definitely never love him. But how could he blame her for this? He was not young anymore, not attractive anymore but full of weaknesses and always had pains. He had lost his charms, somewhere on the roads between Lyon and Paris.

Paris, oh Paris! He loved that stinky filthy crowded city! He was the only Capetians in life which still loved Paris for more than the fact that it was a cash-cow and willy-nilly de facto and de jure capital of the Kingdom of France… He never stepped back in Paris since he had left it in 1284… He wondered how looks the stained glass he commissioned for the future chapel of future Saint Philip of France. He never managed to see it finished. They said that it’s the most beautiful in the entire world, displaying many of his acts as his defence of Rome and, of course, his martyring under the walls of Seville. Oh, dam with Pope Urban! He died before the promised sanctification of his father had being materialized. King Philip the Great remained in the beatification stage and was not sanctified. And the following Popes… we can say that they were less complying. Pope Alexander say that he had way too much blood on his hands and too many bastards to be a saint. But how he dares! His father was a truly defender of Christianity and he was thirsty for justice and truth! He had given his life for Christ and for saving the lives of those ungrateful infidels. His father was admired, respected and loved by everybody. But again, how he will be remember? Will be understood? During his life he was respected but it was more out of feared than admiration. And he was loved even less than admired. When he was young maybe he was loved by his peers but then this loved become intimidation when he start to manipulate and play everyone on his fingers… Now, he looked around him and he see only frighten faces. Was they were frighten that he might die or they were frighten that he was not dead yet? The priest had come back… Had he confessed all his sins? He do not remember anymore… Oh, only if he had more time! Just a little more! A day or two!

A violent cough followed by terrible stomach pains put an end to his thoughts. And so ended the several moments of lucidity. The end was near…

The priest approached to give him the rites. By miracle the moribund to not spill them out… God was merciful! The chills calmed for a little… The King’ eldest son Louis, himself crowned junior King of Arles, entered in the room uncovering his head. Sorrow and concern could be seen in his eyes. He loved his father… in his own way. Always intimidated by him, always in his shadow, always compared with him, Louis tried to match him as best as he could. Many years ago, Philip had crowned him Junior King and give him gradually, more and more power and autonomy. Now, he was King in full right, uncontested for many years. But he had failed in one and very important task. He do not had children. His younger brothers had many, but he has not a single one. He had several stillborn ones, or several which died very soon after their birth, but no one could survive more than several weeks. He blamed for this his wife, Marguerite of Provence, the daughter of one of the most powerful of his vassals. He wanted her repudiated and being sent to a monastery but how could he to put in jeopardy his power and his crown by outraging her very powerful and well connected family?

Louis throw a look to his 22 years old step mother, Guiraude de Foix… What a tragedy! Becoming a widow at 22! Her son, baptised last year with the name Jean, will never knew his father. That boy should have being born to him, not to his father! Louis was jealous now on his father! He realize and chastise himself for his toughs. How could he be jealous on his old and dying father? He was still young! He could still father a child to whom he will pass the crown of Arles. What was wrong with him, or with his wife? Are they cursed? Are they sick? His brothers fare better than him.

Beatrice of Merania had brought to his younger brother Philip, after several daughters, twins boys. His brother was now the most powerful of his vassals, being ruler not only over the lands his father had given to him, but after the death Duke Otto of Merania, his wife inherited form her grandfather the rich Palatine County of Burgundy as well as the vast Meranian hereditary lands in the Empire. But Otto was not only a rich man, but also a powerful one. He was Elector of the Burgundians in the Holy Empire and Philip claimed the title in Beatrice right. After years of struggles and diplomatic manoeuvres, backed by tons of money, Philip was finally recognised Elector of the Holy Empire in that summer. Now his power and influence was even greater than him. But the two boys have sworn to their father to respect each other and never challenge the powers and the rights of the other. While ambitious, Philip was a man of word and a man of honour. He knew that he will respect the memory of their father. And he will do so!

On the other hand, he feared for their younger brother, Henry the King of Aragon, Navarre and Valencia. He and Henry had never get together. He was and remained an ambitious stubborn spoiled boy, always unpredictable and never trustful. But Henry had a lot of headaches with his own holdings. He will not challenge him. That spoiled little man! How lucky was he. Not only he won a crown, but three. Not only he had a boy, but three! Three in a row and his low born Italian wife was pregnant again!

Louis was stopped from his thoughts when his father had recovered back his conscience and stretched his hand to grab his own. Louis took it with emotions and see that his father hand was cold. But alas, his lucidity only lasted a moment. Then the moribund tried to inspire air but he could not breathe. A sort of snorting which seems coming from the other world gives cold sines to everybody in the room but especially to Louis. Then the old king tried to breathe a last time and die. His hand was still clenched to Louis which was dead-white on his face. It seemed that his father tried to cling to life trough him…

The other people in the room kneeled. “The King is dead!” said someone. Louis looked who had spoken. It was the Great Chamberlain. “Long live the King!” continued the same man, followed by other members in the room. The former queen and now freshly widow, Guiraude de Foix, approached Louis and kneeled in front of him, saying with a trembling voice:

My Lord King, I present you my homage to you. My life is now at your mercy.”

Louis received her homage with an absent look, offering his hand to her to be kissed, like for all the other members present there. Then In the room appeared Count Philip, the brother of the King, sweating. He was not in the palace, trusting the doctors that his father health was stable and he will recover. The two brothers embrace each other with grief.

“Mon Dieu, you are cold as the ice” said Philip to Louis.

He is no more, Philip. He is no more... He do not even reached the Christmas.“

***


The year of the Lord 1292, Sunday April 20, Paris


The bells of the Cathedral Notre Dame de Paris ringed joyfully the end of the mess and the end of session of the Great Assemble. It was the third time it had gathered under the wise leadership of Simon de Montfort, Count of La Marche and Grand Chancellor of the Kingdom of France. A couple of thousands peoples were gathered in the Cathedral Square, waiting the departure of the King which had officially presided the last session of the Great Assemble. There were rumours that the King’s men will throw silver coins in the square when he will pass through, therefore most of the ones who gathered were poor or very poor people. However, the King had left the building on a side door immediately after the procession of closing the Assemble session, not participating to the mass, but the ones waiting for him do not knew it or still hoped for the coins. Some three hundred soldiers were lined up to keep the order and offers protection to the members os the Assemble.

The doors of the Cathedral opened large and the men present inside poured out of it in a hurry. They were a motley crowd formed by nobles, clergy and burgers, all dressed with their best cloths, all impatient to go home. The gathering was futile one, several good decisions being taken. Once such decision concerned the creation of great royal barns to store grain for a better fight against famines. Other one, was the creation of a new Grand Company, using the same structure as the other ones, therefore restoring the number of such units back to 10 as it was on the time of King Philip the Great. Sadly, after his death, both the number of the companies and the number of soldiers per company decreased, not even referring to the quality of training and discipline of those soldiers. But slowly, those companies were restored back to their strength and composition.

This unit will reside in Paris, as the one which was initially assigned to Paris was moved to Rouen in order to ensure a better protection for the King which live there for most of the time. For Paris, it was also decided to move the cemetery of the Saints Innocents six miles out of the city, clearing the place which will be used for new buildings. Of course, all these decisions were backed by the assignation of the appropriate funding sources which were the hardest debatable aspects.

Simon de Montfort was proud of his achievements. He was the strongest man in France. And England, as he held a great deal of power over the Channel, especially grace of his uncles and cousins, the counts of Leicester and Nottingham. Alas, he was the most powerful man in the world. His nemesis, Philip of Arles, the only man who could dare to challenge him (and could be successful) was dead and his power was absolute. The King, was his own puppy. He approved anything he decided. He backed him for anything. He put all his efforts working for the good of the Kingdom and for the People. He do not work for free. He was the richest man in the Kingdom, holding not only huge amount of land, forests, mills, ponds, mansions, castles and the lordships of the counties of La Marche and Montfort-Aumory, but also huge amounts of money invested in several businesses, including tapestries and cloth manufactures, commerce enterprises, banking activities, etc. Other great nobles despise him for his involvement in commercial businesses but screw them! They were jealous on his wealth. Simon also administrated the county of Champagne as, after the sudden disappearance of Count Theobald V, the county was inherited by his minor son, named also Theobald. Despite the protests of the Countess-mother Beatrix of Bourbon, supported by his family and a part of nobles, the King had entrusted Simon to be guardian of the young Theobald VI. The wardship of Champagne was tremendously profitable and Simon filed his pockets with the profits collected especially from the flourishing trade. Indeed, he had become one of the most powerful men in the Christendom!

Simon sorted from the Cathedral and inspired a good breath of Parisian air… “Something need to be done with this smell” he thought. He make several steps toward the crowd when he heard his name. Someone call him. He stopped and turned. A friendly face approached to him, smiling. But who was he? He do not recognise the man. Maybe he was one of the bourgeois. The man approached to him and say to him and put a hand on his shoulder, like he wanted to congratulate him for a good job.

“Greetings from the Queen!” whispered the stranger approaching his head to Montfort.​

Then he step away and continued his road, disappearing into the crowd of men which sorted from the Cathedral. Simon do not understood what happens, but filled a terrible pain in the chest and on his left side. He put his hand and see that a trickle of blood was purring from a tiny wound. He look around him to find the man but he do not see it anymore. A terrible pain prevent him to breathe properly. Blood started to pour from his nose and the earth start turning. He could not speak anymore. He do not have enough air either. His hands do not listen to him anymore. Simon collapsed to the ground. Someone see him and yelled for help. It was too late. The stiletto blade that the stranger implanted between his ribs up to his hearth was not only sharpened and thin like a needle, but also dipped into a very powerful poison which cause paralysis. Simon was still conscious when his body functions start to collapse. He filled a terrible pain but he could not speak, not move. The death come rapidly but not swift. The most powerful man in France close his eyes for eternity several minutes later.

***

King Charles was informed by the death of his friend before even reaching Saint Denis. The 41 years old man had lost his only friend… He was now alone to face this dangerous world! And he do not even knew how dangerous the world could be. His days were numbered but he could not yet know. The Angel of Death was already in scouting mission.

Charles returned to the Royal Palace in the Cite where the rest of his family was already present: the Queen Christina of Norway and his two young boys: The 14 years old Philip, already invested two years ago as Duke of Aquitaine and Count of Poitiers, and the 9 years old Louis, who will become someday Count of something… maybe of Cornwall.

Soon after he entered in the palace, a servant approached to him holding a letter in his hands.

“Sire, we have news from Italy.”

“Call the captain of the militia. And the consuls. Call everybody! The assassin shall be found! He shall be found even if you will turn the entire city upside down!” yelled the king taking the letter.​

Furiously, he opened it and start to read, while still continued to walk with heavy steps. Suddenly, he stopped. A sort of a smile make its apparition in the coin of his mouth but it was soon chased off.


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[1] Approximate translation from http://www.fericiticeiprigoniti.net...-din-invataturile-parintelui-arsenie-papacioc and from http://ziarullumina.ro/duhovnicesti-moartea-nu-vine-sa-i-faci-o-cafea-7605.html
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PS: I hope this chapter was not too grim... but this one I had it ready...
 
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The Queen and her sons must be killed especially if their legitimacy is questionable.
Kidding aside good chapter.
 
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I agree. Our Eddy in the East must become King of France and Abyssinia :p

You forget England! Or you suggest that England shall be dumped as a too cold and too wet place in the favor of Abyssinia?

The Queen and her sons must be killed especially if their legitimacy is questionable.
Kidding aside god chapter.
No it would cause even more problem no this branch must die then Arles come back into the royal domain then the family die and France gain a Andalusia:p.

Those are a lot of killing you suggest... :p

Thanks!
 
I think it was a great chapter, and I for one hope that the future doesn't involve extinguishing an entire branch, there are other ways one can work.
 
So far from God, so close to the Khan
So far from God, so close to the Khan


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Flag of Khan Nogai Andrew I of the Black Horde*



The year of the Lord 1290, Friday 17 November, Szrebenik, Bosnia, Black Horde Khanate


Bosnia was burning. Literally. The air was full of heavy smell from the thousands of pyres on which the heretics expiates their sins, paying with their bodies in the hope to save their souls. Tens of thousands more, heretics or not, were already waiting them in the other life. They were the voluntary or involuntary casualties of the Great Crusade against the Bogomilism preached by Pope Alexandre IV which effectively started three years ago, in 1287. Many were the sins imputed to Bosnia, but his greatest sin was mentioned by a Serbian Chronicle:

“Poor Bosnia, sinful Bosnia! So far from God, so close to the Khan.”

The Bosnian tragedy was the consequences of an unscrupulous and ruthless ruler decision to kill multiple birds with one stone.

First of all, Khan Andrew Nogai I of the Black Horde wanted to get read of some inconvenient and disobedient vassals and bring that piece of land under his firm grasp. Secondly, he wanted to prove that his conversion was sincere and he was a true Catholic Christian to a Pope which wanted to let his mark in history. Thirdly… he wanted to keep his other vassals busy but also showing them what they should expect if they dare to disobey. Fourthly, he wanted to give some action to his warriors, to reward them with plunder and land, to keep them battle ready and why not, to attract foreign adventurers to boost his own forces. And what is better than a crusade not so far from home where you could go and campaign a season or two and then go back home relieved from your sins and loaded with plunder? It was not the first one of this kind. Pope Innocent launched one against the Cathars in the Languedoc 8 decades ago. Pope Urban sanctioned two. One against the Waldensian heresy in Northern England, while the second one was strict political, in Italy, for recovering his throne in Rome and get read of the anti-pope. We can also count the one in the Baltics, to subdue the Prussian pagan tribes, or the one in Iberia, to liberate the Christian land from the Muslims. All these were more available than the ones fought in the Holy Land…

When Pope Alexandre IV show interest to bring the Bosnian lands back to the true faith, Nogai spotted the occasion. Before the Mongols, the Hungarian kings tried repeatedly to enforce the Catholicism over the Bosnians and to eradicate the Bogomilism. However, as it was in Languedoc before the Crusade, the complicity between the local elites and the lack of an active royal power over the land, lead to all these attempts to fail. When the Mongols destroyed Hungary, they left the Bosnians alone, do not care about their faith… as long as they were loyal and pay the tribute. The Bogomilism flourished in the Bosnian Banates. The people saw in the destruction of the Catholic Hungary the sign that the Catholic faith was wrong and their one was right. The Bans do not repress it anymore and most of them even openly converted to this dualistic gnostic faith, closely related to the Catharism and Paulicianism.

However, with Nogai conversion to Catholicism in 1281, the Bosnians start to fear that their liberty of worship has its day numbered. Therefore, they start to get together and plotting against the Khan. When Nogai call them to war against the Golden Horde, only 200 Bosnians showed up. None of the Bans was present. And Nogai will not forget, nor will forgive it! When the war ended, he sent his troops to collect the money which the Bosnians would have spent if they would have responded to the call of arms. His men pillaged Bosnia ruthlessly, taking away everything they could indiscriminatively. In consequences, the Bosnian nobles bounded together in a league around the stronger of them, the Ban Prijezda II of Szrebenik, from the house of Kotromanić, hailing him Great Ban of all Bosnia in 1285. Prijezda officially recognise Nogai as his overlord, but he tried to find allies both in the interior of the Black Horde as in the exterior. He tried to gather support among the Pannonian Hungarians, the Serbians, the Croatians and the Dalmatians, while also contacting Vienna and Constantinople. Prijezda dreamed to a general revolt against the despised Khan which will lead to a reborn Kingdom of Hungary.

Fearing to face a coalition, Nogai contacted Rome. He offered to Pope Alexandre IV to solve the Bosnian problem and remove the Bogomilism once and for all. In exchange, the Pope will launch a crusade and will nominate him to lead it. It was the perfect time, as the Bogumils were high on the Pope list. Several years before, the Pope had removed the Bosnian Catholic Bishop for tolerating and even practicing heretical teachings and tried to re-organise the meagre Church local structure. However, the removal of the popular Bishop backfired and the remaining prelates and priests broke their ties with Rome and organize into an Autocephalous Church of Bosnia, heavily influenced by Bogomilism. It was an act of war against the Pope, who tried to persuade the Bosnian bans to restore the order but with no effect. Then he petitioned their overlord, the Khan. Nogai initially ignored the demand as he dislike to be involved in religious struggles, however, with Prijezda rise into power and the open pots against his authority, the Khan suddenly found his religious call. But he demand military and monetary help from the Pope.

In 1286, Pope Alexandre issued the Bull "Prae cunctis" in which he called for the crusade and created the Bosnian Inquisition, mandating “our faithful and honourable brother in Christ, King Andrew” to “uproot the heresy from his lands and purify his people.” He called all the true Christians to take arms and fight for the true faith. One year later, the volunteers start to gather in Szeged, the established point of gathering. Many were mercenaries without contract, adventurers and opportunists in search of plunger. Other were barons and nobles, mostly Germans and few Italians, which responded to the call out of different reasons, mainly religious ones (the promise forgiveness for their sins). They were in total some 8-9.000 foreigners which bolstered the Khan own troops only partially mobilized. Nogai do not wanted that all his troops to participate at once in the campaign as he do not wanted to let other regions unchecked, especially in the east were Golden Horde my come back again.

The Khan was aware of the potential of Western tactics and the power of western-style heavy cavalry and strong heavy infantry. While he had superb light cavalry armed and trained in the Mongol tradition, he lacked proper infantry, relying on local levy and vassals to provide the needed infantry for mountain, forests and siege warfare. And Bosnia was full of mountains and forests and they were plenty of strongpoints to be sieged. With the arrival of the crusaders, two thirds of them on foot and mostly heavily armed, he acquired a reasonable force to crush Bosnia. While some of them will return back to their home after they considered they cleaned enough of their sins, others will take their place in each campaigning season.

The brutality of this war was extremely high. A combination between the traditional ways in which the Mongols conducted their punitive wars, spreading terror and destruction, with the hate the two groups held for each other. In one side, the Catholics see the heretics as enemy of Christ, enemies of everything they held dearly as principles and lifestyle. On the other hand, the heretics saw the invaders as the sons of the devil, monsters which comes to tear down their lifestyle. There was not a war in which mercy was granted nor requested. It was a war of total destruction, exceeding in destruction the fights in Languedoc or in Yorkshire.

Prijezda knew he do not have a chance to take the field against the vast superior enemy, therefore he spread his forces and conducted a highly effective guerrilla war, with hit and run tactics, disrupting their communication lines and capturing or burning their supplies. Moreover, they tried to deny the enemy any possibility of supply on the spot, using the scorched earth tactics. This infuriated and frustrated terribly the crusaders which in retaliations destroyed everything in their path. Any enemy they captured was killed on the spot, if he was lucky, or killed slowly (after a good deal of torture) if he was less lucky.

After three years of fighting Nogai controlled most of Bosnia but he had not yet completely crushed the resistance. Since the capture of Szrebenik in 1288, at the end of a long and bloody siege, the Khan make from it his temporary capital, using it as principal base of operation. That year, the campaigning season has practically ended, and the Khan’s vassals and most of the crusaders returned home, with the promise that they come back next year. In Bosnia, Nogai kept only a part of his retinue plus several thousand mercenaries which will keep the order and will continue the fights in order to prevent the heretics to recapture the land. This was a wise move, as after the first year of campaign, when the army go home, the Bosnians recovered many lost places by attacking the under-maned garrisons, especially using the advantage to have accomplices inside and a fairly sympathetic population. However, this year was different. During the spring, Prijezda and several of the main Bosnian leaders were captured by trickery, being betrayed by one of his close-knits, one on who he had complete confidence. But that man betray him, being blackmailed by Khan’s own loyal men and Prijezda found himself surrounded in a remote area in the Bosnian Mountains by Nogai’s men.

His collaborators were impaled outside of Szrebenik, in full view of everyone (not before being tortured to find more information about the other pockets of resistance), Prijezda was still kept alive in a cage in his former castle, now royal residence. It was late in the evening and Nogai prepared to retire in his private apartments when a page announce him that a man requested an audience. It said that it’s urgent and important.

After asking for more details, the Khan decided to receive this strange man and invite him in the hall. Present there were only several guards, servants and his close councillors.

***

A 50 years old man entered in the great hall, making a great impression upon the present audience. He was 1.88 meters in height more than 100 kilos in weight, without counting the thick padded armour and his heavy sheepskin surcoat. On his left hand he carried a big helmet decorated with mottled cock’s feathers. The mail coif was pulled back unto his shoulders, revealing a grey-nearly white hair with a timid beginning of balding. On his clean shaved face he had deep wrinkles, true marks of his tumultuous life, full of twists and many ups and downs. He walked at a slow, lamely pace, using a great stick made of cornel to rest his broken right leg.

Dimitri Antonov was a man hardened by the vicissitudes of the life. He still remembered when his father, a Bulgarian named Ivan Antonov from Prilep, stupidly died being stabbed with a fork by an angry husband after catching his wife cheating with him. Being only 7, he and his 3 years old brother Nicolai, were left in the care of their mother Calina [1], which was pregnant in 6 months when her husband was killed. Calina was very affected by these events so she had brought to life a premature girl which died short after, leaving her mother devastated and with a very shaky health.

But the destiny was even harsher with the young boys, as the plague carried their mother only three years later, leaving both Dimitri and Nicolai orphans. They were brought by their maternal uncle which was a very wealthy Vlach shepherd native from Ohrid, owner of more than one thousand sheep and several hundreds of other bigger animals (horses, donkeys and cattle), while also having many servants, slaves and employees. His name was Iorgu Cornea and he was a very active and influent in the Vlachian society living in upper Thessaly. However, after the Mongol invasions of the Empire, the region had plunged into chaos and the central authority had vanished, leaving behind warlords which fought for supremacy. The inter-ethnical and inter-religious conflicts do not retarded to appear and the two brothers found themselves in the middle of a generalized war. Dimitri soon discover that his genuine skills for fighting, coupled with his high stature and his great physical power were in high demand. In just several years, Dimitri was already the leader of a small band of half-bandits, half-mercenaries, offering their services to wealthy men.

When Gheorghe Baciu start the revolt in 1268 against the Emperor Michael Assan, leading to the creation of the ephemeral Principality of Greater Wallachia, Dimitri and his companions decided to fight for the Vlach cause. Sadly… it was a lost cause. He fought well, but the army he fought with was defeated and scattered north in 1271. Therefore, he decided to drop the cause and take refuge in the lands controlled by the Mongols.

With several of his men he head north to Danube, crossing into the Timoc Valley when they were attacked again. This time, was a Serbian band which raided the region as they were fighting with the Vlachs of Severin for the control of the right bank of the river. Following the death of Berke Khan, the Black Horde had plunged in civil war and some of its vassals break free other start to settle their disputes. The Ban Nicolae of Severin was not spared of war and unrest. Dragged in the conflict between the Mongol claimants, he was also forced to fight against internal opposition and external rides, especially against the Serbians. Still, he enjoyed a great popularity as being the one which delivered the final blow to the Roman-Bulgarian army several years ago, so he managed to keep his people loyal and even expand his power and lands.

The band of Dimitri do not stay to fight the Serbians and run even northern, crossing the Danube somewhere between Orșova and Severin [2]. This also was the land of the Ban Nicolae and the road coming from Vârciorova to Orșova and followed the Danube till Severin was one of the main route which linked the Severin to Karan-Sebeș and the Transylvanian lands owned by the Ban.

They do not stay too much on the road, as they do not knew the Ban’s reaction to a band of men crossing north. Therefore, they climbed the hills and entered in the wood. Several miles north, they meet Vlach shepherds. They were from a neighbour community which lived in a large confederation of villages and hamlets gathered around the greatest and the most powerful village named Jidovștița. Dimitri and his companions decided to start a new life there, therefore they took wives from the other villages and build a hamlet of their own in a place named Jgheaburi (troughs), named after the nearby spring which was drained by the shepherds to allow a better water source for their herds. The place was outside of the other villages which composed the communal confederation but was of rare beauty.

The place was several miles inland from the steep coast of Danube, which was very climbing, in the middle of a hardwood, mostly different types of oak, mixed with other kind of three like beech, wild cherry and apple trees, ash and, especially, linden trees which transformed any summer into a feerie of beautiful odors. Those linden trees were on high demand for the beekeepers, which was also a main occupation in the villages. The climate on the Danube coast was more warmed than further inland with more precocious springs. Being oriented with the face to south, the first grass grew on the Danube coast very early, attracting the herds from the surrounding villages. The threes also were the first which budded, creating a delightful scene of raw green on different nuances. Also on these coasts, there were plenty of cornel bushes, an extremely dense and in the meantime elastic wood, highly praised alongside with the ash for making bows, arrows, spears staffs, maces, etc. However, when the sun burned the coasts during the summer, an invisible creature get out from the shadows to bask in the sun: the deadly and feared horned viper. Its venom had terrible consequences and could kill a man if not immediately removed. The locals, captured them and collected the venom for all kinds of uses, but especially for poisoning their blades and arrows, making them even more deadly.

Dimitri himself married a young girl, Elena, which he had 6 boys (Dumitru, Nicolae, Constantin, Ion, Petru and Mihai) and 2 daughters (Maria and Ana). Intelligent and charismatic, Dimitri remained the leader of the hamlet and become involved in the confederation political life. He was known as Dumitru (or Mitu) Anton or sometime Mitu Bulgaru (Mitu the Bulgarian). In less than 20 years he gathered a huge fortune, having many servants and employees, with hundreds of sheep and goats, tens of cattle’ heads, tens of horses, countless of smaller animals, he expanded his house, building a fortified mansion instead.

The source of this wealth and this tremendous rise was… at least suspecting. Some put this on behalf of his diligence, however most of the people suspected something dishonest in the middle. Some said that he and his other companions, were in fact bandits which operated on the other side of the Danube, pillaging far in the south. Others, believed that they had brought with them north a big fortune gathered from pillaging their way from Thessaly. Other suspected that he had found a hidden treasure buried under his lands, while others put everything on black magic.

Whatever was the truth, Dimitri become a prominent person in the entire confederation. The confederation was formed by several villages and hamlets, separated only by several miles to each other, having Jidovștița in centre: Dumbrava, Șușița, Topolnița, Balotești, Schînteești, Breșnița, Petroi, Luchița, Șulmea, Streneac, Săliște, Vîrbița, Matorăț and the newest one, Jgheaburi. In total, they were some 3.000 souls living there in a communal society linked together by family ties, cultural and socio-economic ones. It functioned as a whole like a Confederation of villages, being was self-governed and self-administrated, while bordering on the northern and western sides several other similar formations but far smaller and more dispersed. However, in the south-eastern side, there was the city of Severin, the capital of the Banate and one of the greatest towns in the entire Black Horde. This vicinity brought both advantages and disadvantages to the confederation. In one side, they could easily trade, being an important supplier of meat (in form of sheep and bovines chattel), honey and wood, while also buying from there all the necessary goods, the iron tools and weapons, as well as the cereals. On the other side, the ruler of the country look with greedy eyes to this prosperous but autonomous entity, trying to bring it closer under his authority. The most problematic was the case of the most eastern village, Breșnița, which directly bordered the lands of Severin, being only 8 or 9 miles away, and which see its lands enclosed by the Ban.

In 1284, ban Nicolae died and his son Ioan took the throne. Ioan was not raised to be a heir, as he had two older brothers (and another two younger) however they died one by one and therefore Ioan took the throne after the death of his father. Three years later, he used a legal subterfuge and annexed the village of Breșnița (being the closest to Severin) and most of its dependent lands to his personal domain, while also imposing a new tax on each chattel’s head sold in Severin’ markets. This measure hit hard the people of the Confederation and push them to revolt. Sadly for them, they were way to close of Severin to have any success and a detachment of soldiers was immediately sent to quell the revolted, a task which they accomplished with ease. For dissuading others further tentative, the soldiers hanged several notable members of the villagers, while also seizing several thousand chattels for paying the effort.

As vassal of the khan, Ban Ioan participated to the crusade, sending troops in each campaigning season. However, he participated personally only in the first one when he embarrass himself being put on flight by a force 6 or 7 times weaker than his one. But all these war effort was dam expensive and Ioan was not so willing to support it from his own pocket. Therefore, he start imposing new arbitrating taxes upon his subjects, while also began to size the properties of some of his vassals using different legal subterfuges or the brute force. Closer were they from Severin, harder they were hit.

The members of Jidovștița Confederacy were once again affected hardly. This time, they decided to change strategy. The members gathered in secret and decided to ask for justice to higher forums. A small mission, led by Dimitri Antonov, was sent to Nogai Khan to report the abuse and ask for justice.

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Dimitri arrived in Szrebenik accompanied by four other men but he was received alone to the Khan. He do not bowed to kiss the feet of the Khan as it was sometime used but make a short reverence. He then explain him in details which were their grievances and also ensure him that he did spoke in the name of the entire community and even more, as other smaller confederations of mountaineers were on the same side.

Nogai received him with a great deal of reservation…. Severin was one of his most powerful vassal and the previous Ban enjoyed a huge prestige and influence among the other Vlachs rulers in his kingdom… Ioan on the other hand, was less skillful diplomat than his father and he lost the support of other Vlach voivodes and Cneazs. Moreover, Ioan was his own brother in law… When Ioan raised to the power, his first actions were to consolidate his power by removing his contenders. He practically bribed his brother in law and suzerain to turn his eyes off from his acts and therefore he get read of his younger brothers and his uncles in a rather… brutal way. But while he consolidate his power by force inside the Banat, the other Vlachs rulers were extremely displeased and delimitate from his acts, even protesting against his measures, isolating Ioan politically. But Ioan do not care, believing that his alliance with Nogai is the cure for everything.

Sadly for him, Nogai become more and more worried of his brother in law, especially after he realize that how wealthy was Severin and how untrustworthy was his Ioan. Ioan had token his second wife from Serbia, without consulting him and against his interests in the hope of forming an alliance with the Kingdom of Serbia, another tributary kingdom of the Horde but one who often was in opposition to the Khan. The same Serbia who offered help to Prijezda and opposed to crusade. The Same Serbia who plotted with Constantinople in the hope of braking free. The same Serbia who become the siege of a virulent anti-Catholic rhetoric and the same Serbia who was on his list to “take care” after the Bosnian affair. Moreover, when he raised the banners for the invasion of Bosnia, Ioan participated with far lesser troops than it was expected and he abandoned the crusade way too soon and also covered of shame, alimenting the rumours that he was in a secret understood with Serbia and Bosnia. Furthermore, he repeatedly refused to pay the demanded contributions, or if he paid something, it was way less and very inconsistently.

Nogai had married a princess of Severin in dear moments for him, facing external invasion and internal rebellions, needing a strong and powerful ally. But this ally died years ago and his place was taken by a weak and hated ruler who could jeopardise his support among the Vlach population, one of his most loyal subjects. The desire to strengthen his rule, centralize his power and a fair share of greed sealed the fate of the Ban. With Bosnian thread calmed for the moment, with Prijezda in a cage and many of his supporters laying in sticks outside Szrebenik, Nogai could afford to pay attentions to other matters. The complaint opened the perfect occasion to bring Severin closer to the throne.

Stăpâne Doamne [3]” ended Dimitri his speech, “I have served you faithfully since the first day of your reign and my men alike. My two eldest sons had fallen faithfully serving you, the first at Bârlad and the second at Zenica [4], two summers ago. If it wasn’t this broken leg, I would personally join your mighty forces to destroy the plague that infected your Highness lands. We always pays our taxes, we always responded the call of arms. We always paid our tithe to the Church and, alongside my brother and my sons and my sons in law, we built the stone Church of Jidovștița with our hands. Please, my Lord, do not abandon us, your faithful subjects!”​

The old but very imposing man pleased the Khan which valued bravery and openness of speech. He dismiss him entrusting him that he will personally investigate the abuses and the justice will be served. After Dimitri left the hall and go to rest in one of the houses of Szrebenik where they had took shelter, the Khan sent after one of his most valuable mercenary captains. He need somebody with high intelligence and a good strategical thinking to do a very risky but very bold task, quickly and without error.

Some half of hour later, a man entered in the hall. He was dressed in the Mongol fashion and spoke Mongol language however he was not a Mongol but a westerner. He was 24 years old but he was already the commander of some 2.700 mercenaries in the service of the Khan who had participated in the Crusade but do not returned home for the winter. He had joined the Crusade with a small band of men two years ago but he immediately make himself valuable and raised to the ranks not because of his birth but because of his competence.

“I have an important mission for you,” said Nogai to the man standing in front of him. “I will go to Severin to meet my brother in law, Voivode Ioan. But you will go in advance to prepare my coming, accompanied by 500 of your best men. Once you are there, you will take the control of the fortress and ensure that Ioan is under your custody, but not like a prisoner but more like a hostage, so do not make show of force unless is really necessary. I would like to keep the appearances that you will be there to ensure my security and protection. After all, he is my brother in law so treat him well. Tomorrow morning you will receive the letters, so sleep well tonight as it might be your last well rested night for a while.”

The captain understood what was required to him and left the meeting without needed more explanations. He goes straight to his house were his three mistresses waited for him. He needed good food, good drink and good comfort before going to rest. His pages already sent the order to his men to prepare for ride.


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* The flag is indeed inspired from the flack of Nogai Khan, source Wikipedia (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nogai_Khan)
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[1] Calina was probably a derived form or a diminutive of Catalina or Catherine
[2] Nearby the location where today is the barrage of Porțile de Fier 1 (the Iron Gates), OTL Romania
[3] Approx.: “My Lord and Seigneur”
[4] At Bârlad, Nogai defeated the Golden Horde in battle and ended Ulacqi's invasion. At Zenica he fought an inconclusive battle against the Bosnians, which managed to retreat in order after inflicting heavy casualties

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Mention: this Chapter is dedicated to the memory of my maternal grandfather who had transmitted me the love for history. Some of the facts are inspired from the history of his family.
 
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Great update. I have a question, is the Jidovștița Confederacy a vassal on the same level as the banates?
 
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Great update. I have a question, is the Jidovștița Confederacy a vassal on the same level as the banates?

Hi,
The confederation of Jidovștița is a vassal of Severin but it is very different than the usual feudal entities. It's a kind of primitive republic formed by free villages, very autonomous, wich had a contract with the Voivodes to provide troops in the war and some very specifical taxes and aids. The Voivode oblige itself to protect the liberties and their rights. This kind of Confederations, also called "tari" (countries) were very spread in the mountainous sides of medieval walachia and Moldavia. Some (the most powerful) resisted up to 17 century (Tara Vrancei or Tara Barsei).
Those confederations were usualy at odds with the boyars and sometimes with the voivodes themselves (boyars too) wich wanted to get their land and to make them servs.

Jidovștița is a small cofederation and it is pure invention. However, the village (and most of the other mentioned ones) exist and it is one of the oldest village attested historiographycaly (by written source) from Wallachia.

ITTL, cause of the greatest development of Severin (strenghten by the Hungarians then by the Templars, then by the Ban-Voivodes) the place was more populated and it organized in a Confederation.

The Ban of Severin, wich also is Voivode of Hatzeg, Cneaz of Vidin, and count of several other places in Transylvania, has more the status of a Prince, with more power and freedom than a western Duke.
 
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Hi,
The confederation of Jidovștița is a vassal of Severin but it is very different than the usual feudal entities. It's a kind of primitive republic formed by free villages, very autonomous, wich had a contract with the Voivodes to provide troops in the war and some very specifical taxes and aids. The Voivode oblige itself to protect the liberties and their rights. This kind of Confederations, also called "tari" (countries) were very spread in the mountainous sides of medieval walachia and Moldavia. Some (the most powerful) resisted up to 17 century (Tara Vrancei or Tara Barsei).
Those confederations were usualy at odds with the boyars and sometimes with the voivodes themselves (boyars too) wich wanted to get their land and to make them servs.

Jidovștița is a small cofederation and it is pure invention. However, the village (and most of the other mentioned ones) exist and it is one of the oldest village attested historiographycaly (by written source) from Wallachia.

ITTL, cause of the greatest development of Severin (strenghten by the Hungarians then by the Templars, then by the Ban-Voivodes) the place was more populated and it organized in a Confederation.

The Ban of Severin, wich also is Voivode of Hatzeg, Cneaz of Vidin, and count of several other places in Transylvania, has more the status of a Prince, with more power and freedom than a western Duke.
Interesting. I really enjoy the amount of thought you put into this TL.

What aspects of the Vlach confederations are differing from OTL due to Mongol rule?
 
Interesting. I really enjoy the amount of thought you put into this TL.

What aspects of the Vlach confederations are differing from OTL due to Mongol rule?

They are somehow more organized and have more population. Plus they are also more diverse, including Balkan Vlachs communities migrated there in the half part of the century.
 
I like the abundance of details and minucia of the story. The only thing that isnt perfect is your english and it is pretty good still. Nogai's flag looks cool too.
 
I like the abundance of details and minucia of the story. The only thing that isnt perfect is your english and it is pretty good still. Nogai's flag looks cool too.

Thanks.

As for the English.... I am really sorry. I am very bad at foreign languages and I really appreciate the efforts of the readers.
 
It's okay. I was born being good with English, having fantastic looks, being a genius, bla bla bla. You were born with a superb capacity of story-telling and writing
 
It's okay. I was born being good with English, having fantastic looks, being a genius, bla bla bla. You were born with a superb capacity of story-telling and writing
Now, I'm brushing...

I really appreciate any constructive feedback and critics so, please shoot! :)
 
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