Beautiful sentence
Would you have written this if Covid had never happened?
He had "to" not "too"
IT HAS BEGUN ! By the way, on full display kind of makes it sound like he is a model or something
Why do the bad guys always get the cool nicknames?? Makes it so hard to pick a side...
Can you change this? Its as if blood is ketchup to this guy
Can't argue with you there, dude bro (Did I just call Hitler dude bro?????)
Ummmmm..... maybe change the "ummmm" Just doesnt fit well
This seems like a movie scene (bad movie), can you just remove the part where the flare happens slightly later? Its useless suspense with seconds of difference between flare going up
Seems like an unrealistic movie scene
Grammar mistake: ",it was better to have them than to not"
"up" not "uo"
Brilliant sentence, but not quite right
: ( awwww I was kind of clinging to some sort of hope Austria could avoid collapse, maybe a coup against Hitler
That is such a BRUH moment
Hmmmm, here are some alternatives:
Operation/Case Doom ---- Fall Doom
Operation/Case Phoenix ----- Fall Phoenix
Operation/Case Prestige ----- Fall Prestige
Operation/Case Firestorm ----- Fall Feuersturm
Operation/Case Silver Fox (An OTL operation but ig that doesnt happen ITTL) ------ Fall Silberfuchs
Operation/Case Snake ------ Fall Schlange
Operation/Case Silver ------ Fall Silber
Operation/Case Sabre---- Fall Säbel
Sorry for the bad Operation names im not very good at that, but those are what I could come up with. Also could you get "Hyenas" into this timeline
somehow? Be it a tank, plane or individual, please have something named after Hyenas, they are JUST my favourite animal with the wolf a close second.
By the way, your right quite a clunky chapter but still brilliant! Thank you!