Dave Shoup
Banned
To the author - Wanted to say how enjoyable this is; nicely done. The "history" tracks with what the Germans did historically, with the obvious change in targets, and the BC government's actions are (essentially) historical (the submarines) and/or track with what went on in roughly the same period in Australia, New Zealand, etc. Also wanted to add the writing is good, with enough detail and characterization to make it enjoyable, but also moving the story forward. I've seen a few minor typos (isn't Connaught with two "n"s, for example?) but nothing major.
You may have already come across this, but there's an excellent source regarding the USN's organization during the Great War; see link below:
https://www.naval-history.net/xGW-United States Navy1917-1918.htm#7
The US Pacific Fleet was organized as a cruiser-centered force at the time, but usually had the majority (six or more) of the "Big 10" ships, which certainly could have given any cruiser smaller than Invincible or Von der Tann a bad day.
You may have already come across this, but there's an excellent source regarding the USN's organization during the Great War; see link below:
https://www.naval-history.net/xGW-United States Navy1917-1918.htm#7
The US Pacific Fleet was organized as a cruiser-centered force at the time, but usually had the majority (six or more) of the "Big 10" ships, which certainly could have given any cruiser smaller than Invincible or Von der Tann a bad day.
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