Amazing. Absolutely amazing. This is the kind of works that remind me why I love alternative history so much.
This is a particularly flattering comment. Thank you very much!
Thanks to everyone who's commented so far, I actually wasn't sure about this one but published it anyway – I think Paul is right that it's a shade
too exposition-heavy at times, and I could have explored things a bit differently in hindsight. Perhaps Fuller is on the train in the first half of the story, watching the New Britain flash by on his journey to Dover. Something like that. Still, the whole thing happening on the White Cliffs is something I liked.
On TRAAAIIIINS, blue Mikado Bulleids is exactly what's in mind, eagle-eyed readers may have picked up on the 'almost perfectly straight' track. I hadn't actually seen that mockup Iain posted, but it's essentially dead-on (barring the number/name plate, which would of course be a more AH design, probably a tad more art deco as Mosley seems to be into that sort of thing). BR (or something like it, perhaps with another name) has indeed come about pre-, rather than post-War. I leave further speculation in your capable gricer minds.
As for why Fuller wasn't just made a Peer, well, if he was made a Peer, I wouldn't be able to drop in the fact that by-elections aren't necessary anymore
That's really all it is. A bit cheeky, but there's also the wider implication that the Commons is becoming just as technocratic as the Peers – it's about service to the cabinet, not your constituency, certainly in Fuller's case.
There is definitely more fun to be had with Spart Germany, there's really a whole TL waiting to be written about a Moscow-Berlin 'red axis'. One thing I wanted to explore here was how far the reader could be brought along to root for a quasi-fascist, or at least rather undemocratic, 'dynamic' British government versus a vaguely red German one. The French sit in the middle, a bit stuffy and trying to modernise, but too many Petains and not enough de Gaulles (what he is up to, you'll have to imagine – I suspect he was one of the Four Colonels). I probably won't explore this world again, not in vignette form at any rate. Or maybe I will if I can't resist it. I quite like each vignette building a new world from scratch, though.
Anyhoo, thanks again for the feedback. Hope you're all having a tremendous Easter.