We aren't allowed to offer opinions anymore without being called jerks?
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Writing two paragraphs being a judgmental prick instead of just exiting a page isn’t “offering an opinion”. By definition, that is being a jerk.We aren't allowed to offer opinions anymore without being called jerks?
Saying "To say this is bad writing is probably a compliment" is not offering an opinion.We aren't allowed to offer opinions anymore without being called jerks?
If you would indulge me for a second here, are you new to the Internet, buddy? Don’t like, don’t read is kind of the law of the land. There’s a handy dandy little button to back out of something you don’t like and you can trot on your merry way to read something else that’s more credible for your taste. This is a timeline about Charles V marrying Anne Boleyn and Henry VIII marrying Isabella of Portugal, the rest of us are having plenty of fun taking the story as it comes and not complaining about “credibility”.I was not being mean, I was trying to point out since this is in pre 1900, not writers forum, you have to be credible. A child who is a Tudor prince just being left alone by water after demanding to swim is not credible, him sneaking out of the nursery or something distracting people so he can slip away would have been better and more believable. Honestly you do seem to enjoy killing child characters far to much and it gets in the way of credibility.
Oh bless your heart I wasn't referring to youWe aren't allowed to offer opinions anymore without being called jerks?
Also, Eustace de Blois, son of Stephen I of England, dying choking on an eel the same day Eleanor of Aquitaine gives birth to a son for Henry FitzEmpress?Things in real-life that are probably not credible:
- Philippe de France, older brother of Eleanor of Aquitaine's first husband, dying in a horse-riding accident when a pig ran under his mount and made the horse trip.
- Charles VIII hitting his head on a lintel and dying in the same palace he was born in. Louis III died in a similar accident, though he was trying to rape a young girl.
- Queen Victoria having the hemophilia gene and passing it on to her descendants, which caused the distrust of the Romanovs and accelerated the Russian Revolution. (Do you know how many tls there are in which QV is not born with the hemophilia gene?)
- Charles II inheriting just the right amount of defective genes to suffer lifelong illnesses and be infertile. His older full-sister Margarita Teresa had none and gave birth to four children. This led to the effective end of Spanish dominion on the world.
- Great Britain, a tiny island north of France coming to rule most of the world.
- Alexander the Great never losing a battle.
- Genghis Khan going from a impoverished exiled boy to killing enough people to cause a climate change. At least 16 million people today are descended from him.
- Genghis Khan destroying Baghdad, thus bringing the Islamic Golden Age to a screeching halt.
- The rise of the Catholic Church.
I guess God, or whoever, would not be well-accepted by yours truly.
I know that. I just agreed with the other poster that the scenario with Teddy's death seemed forced.Oh bless your heart I wasn't referring to you
I have written a timeline with Poland winning the 1863 uprising, so realism is not what I'm interested into and your story is really good Pandizzy; yes, children can drown fast I never said it is unplausible I said that if you wanted to save him, it would have been realistically possible if he yelled. While Teddy is probable dead, it could be a false flag cliffhange. Obviously I would prefer the scenario in which he lives, but hey, its your story, so it is fine either way for me. No criticism here, only a consideration.The thing nobody really knows about drowning is that a lot of times, they are silent. You're so desperate trying to keep your head above the water that you can't even yell, or else your mouth will flood with water.
There have been cases where drownings ocurred when a lifeguard is present.
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Ok do as you wish, I'm sure she won't mind if she doesn't have someone agreeing with a condescending dickhead and also brings up other stories here commenting on itI know that. I just agreed with the other poster that the scenario with Teddy's death seemed forced.
I think I'll be taking people's advice about leaving this TL.
Let's be real: if I wanted him to be saved, I wouldn't have him jump in the poolI have written a timeline with Poland winning the 1863 uprising, so realism is not what I'm interested into; yes children do drawn fast
I have written a timeline with Poland winning the 1863 uprising, so realism is not what I'm interested into and your story is really good Pandizzy; yes, children can drown fast I never said it is unplausible I said that if you wanted to save him, it would have been realistically possible if he yelled. While Teddy is probable dead, it could be a false flag cliffhange. Obviously I would prefer the scenario in which he lives, but hey, its your story, so it is fine either way for me. No criticism here, only a consideration.
Is this something personal? It reads like it's something personal.To say this is bad writing is probably a compliment, it feels like forcing an outcome regardless of if it makes the slightest sense. A child of his rank would not just have one attendant, there would be at least a servant or two hovering in the background to act as fetchers and carriers. Even if you ignore that, she has a child who demands to swim and then just goes off leaving him next to water on his own? Unless she is simple in the head, that just does not happen especially as she is very conscious of who he is.
Exactly what I was thinking. So, let see what this sad happening shal bring.Let's be real: if I wanted him to be saved, I wouldn't have him jump in the pool
If people weren't rude about a story someone is writing for fun none of this would've happened...Should just go with what CalBear said and move on. Although just want to say yall should probably hang the cape, since from what I can read the original poster certainly wasn't the meanest in this discussion. Stop the flame and hop on a jacuzzi people.