Hi I made this Q-BAM of 1940. Thoughts or anything I've missed?
Edited some minor details again
GENERAL
* You should give the date with more precision : December 1940, May 1940? With the day, if possible. I'll be assuming, giving some indications, that's late Late November 1940.
Choosing one would be better to sort out anachronisms.
* Depiction of inner borders is used inconsistently, and the choice of countries having them or not is rather arbitrary. I'd advise with not showing them all together, but if you prefer to do so, you should represent them everywhere.
WESTERN EUROPE
*Vichy France should be coloured as such (cream yellow) and, in metropole, as under German influence.
Northern France shouldn't be represented as a different country, but separated by a de facto border (red) and claimed by Vichy
* Italian occupation zones should be added
* Forbidden zone in France should be added
* Nord and Pas de Calais départements should be added to Belgium and Northern France military command and not just Nord département. It shoudl'nt be represented as the same country, tough.
* The darker outline on Germany is unecessary
* Iceland should be shown as occupied, not as part of the UK. An outline would be there preferable.
FAR EAST
* Indochina should be represented as Japanese occupied, but still under technical Vichy control (annexations and political reshuffle officially only happened in 1945)
AFRICA
* Egypt should be represented as under Brisith influence
* The aftermath of the Italian campaign in Egypt before Operation Compass should be represented : namely the conquest of some coastal points up to 80km from the border.
* Fight on Sudan should be pointed out, probably trough a red line.
* Vichy controlled colonies should be coloured with Vichy colour (protectorate shade for some), without influence from Germany to highlight the larger autonomy of Vichy in Africa (that is, without direct German interventionism)
* Free France should include French Camerun mandate, Congo and Gabon.