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I am aware of the ratification process. I was stating (or rather, I should have stated) that any future Amendments would nullify the rights of African-Americans instead of just amending the previous rights without referring to the ratification process. My bad.

What one Amendment can change another can repeal.. you cannot restrict what a future Amendment can say!
 
26th June 1915, Atlanta, Georgia

Having commuted the death sentence for Leo Frank, John Slaton had been receiving the Devil's share of hatred. Reviewing the evidence and the testimonies, he believed, he knew that there was a great wrong committed. Hav -
- CRASH
'Jesus Christ!' shouted the Governor, looking at the brick thrown through the window.
'Oh!' shouted Sally -
' - Sally, stay inside the house,' he said, picking up a revolver and loading it. Taking it behind his back, he opened the door.

Outside was his consequence for standing against the popular opinion. For standing up for Leo Frank, this was his price to pay. Armed with torches, axes, knives and even rifles, men stood at his door. Looking around, the Governor managed to see the power of the mob. So numerous, that they covered every lawn and every inch of the street. Off the top of his head, the Governor believed that there had to have been two thousand people there. Some of them were wearing normal suits and normal clothes. Others were clad from head to toe in white, with a mask covering everything except for two eye holes. Two thousand men between him and the fifty men of the Georgia National Guard, as well as those of law enforcement on the street. Somewhere between one to two hundred police and National Guardsmen.

With this action the Federal Government would see Georgia in a State of rebellion and dispatch additional National Guard and regular troops to pu his down! I will be bloody. Dixon will most likely lose all support North of the Mason Dixon line and West of he Mississippi! As is, to overwhelm 50 guardsmen, the mob will probably 200 killed, and as many wounded at a minimum.
 
Oh Yeah, It's All Coming Together (The Pre-Patrick Warburton, Pre-Kronk Western Front Experience)
September was the time for hatred. For the people of Oslo and Rio de Janeiro and Lisbon and Madrid, they all clung onto the newspapers, to see the pictures of their own countrymen swimming in the waters. The testimonies did enough to inflame the passions.

In Brazil, President Venceslau Brás was placed in a quandary over the report on the 21st September. Arthur Peel, the UK Ambassador, stated that Prime Minister Lloyd George would fight for reparations for every Brazilian ship sunk by German U-boats if she arrived on the Entente side. As anti-German sentiments and peace settlements rise, the President agreed to the proposal. Peel was reminded by the President to ensure that British warships would guard Brazilian cargo transports as they reach towards the UK and Europe. Peel, in his professional matter, stated that he would see to it. On the 25th September, President Brás declared war on the Central Powers, although the news took until the 1st December to reach the whole country. Because of this, Brazilian men who were mobilised (about 50,000 by the end of the year) would be sent on logistics missions to free up French and British men. Meanwhile, transports were to be made between Brazil and the UK as well as Portugal and Spain, something that was unwieldy as the national integrated economy did not exist. This was exacerbated with a weak overland transport system that did not advance beyond mule trains. Due to this, it would contribute to a further divide within the Brazilian community and to the downfall of the First Brazilian Republic and the rise of the Tenentism Movement.

In Norway, much of the debate was surrounding what would occur in other nations as they had victims who suffered the U-boat attack. When it was clear that the Brazilians and the Portuguese would start supplying munitions, food and troops, Norway was inclined to do the same. Copper ore, large supplies of fish, pyrite and nickel would be given to both sides at the beginning of the war, as Norway maintained one of the largest maritime merchant fleets in the world. To maintain it, they required as much steel, coal and oil as possible. Debate had been beset by further trouble when the German and British Ambassadors made their way towards the Prime Minister, Gunnar Knudsen. Meeting with the families of the victims, King Haakon VII made sure to stay out of the public discourse on what Norway ought to do. On the 28th September 1915, Norway declared war on Germany and Austria-Hungary, with King Haakon VII ordering all lynchings of German-Norwegians to stop. When a protestor shouted "You are King of the Norwegians who live here!", the King responded "I am also King of the Germans who live here!". (1)
Because of the mobilisation, Norway mustered 20,000 soldiers at the start, with much of the manpower going to the Norwegian Navy. All efforts were to guard the merchant fleet between Norway and the UK as well as destroy any U-boats around its territorial waters.

In Portugal, lynching was open for civilians to see and participate in, targeting Germans and Austrians in whatever capacity. In this year alone, 8 Germans were reported to have been killed with a further 221 fleeing the country. As the fury grew, a total of 150,000 Portuguese men and African colonials would enlist to fight in Africa and Europe. They would join the fighting at Lorraine along with the Spanish in the winter.

In Spain, the deaths of the Spanish passengers as well as the destruction of the cruise liner had set off the Pro-war factions of Spanish society. This group was filled with:
- Carlists, who were traditionalists and royalists supporting the Bourbon bloodline of Infante Carlos, Count of Molina and his heirs
- conservatives formed in the Mauristas, a political movement that followed Antonio Maura that was set against King Alfonso XIII. Maura himself stated that the 1907 pact between Spain, France and Britain was still legitimate, therefore Spain had a legalist duty to follow its obligations
- Imperialists who were against German incursions against Spanish colonies
- Middle class people
- Professionals and intellectuals
- Catalan nationalists
- Republicans
- Socialists
- Liberals under Álvaro de Figueroa, who was leader of the opposition at the time.

Meanwhile, the peace groups in the nation worked around these groups:
- Upper class people, aristocracy and the rich
- The Catholic Church
- Spanish Army, which had much of its favour towards Germany.

For the entire month of September, the Maurist conservatives demanded Spanish entry into the war along with the Liberal Party and the leftist Republican Coalition (made of an alliance between the Radical Republican Party and the Republican Nationalist Federal Union). The inability for the Conservative party to to maintain a majority meant that Eduardo Dato had to approach the King to dissolve the Cortes Generales (the bicameral legislative chambers of Spain). Spanish politics for over 40 years was dictated on a system known as turn pacifico "Peaceful Turn", that the Liberal Party and Conservative Party would take turns being in power (as both parties were monarchist and upheld patronages from the upper class). Elections were thus decided in advance, in order to perpetuate the status quo and to shun third parties. As Dato was making his case, Figueroa arrived five minutes into the meeting. Figueroa asked the King for a compromise to not upset the system. Dato would also meet the British Ambassador (2) in a meeting regarding the future of German Cameroon and some sections of German New Guinea (which were not already claimed by Australia or New Zealand). These would be awarded to Spain if they joined the Allies. Dato, Figueroa and King Alfonso XIII had a long discussion as they saw Brazil and Norway declare war while the Portuguese increased their commitments.
Dato, in order to break off the ongoing debate, came up with the idea of merely supplying the Allied forces on the 25th. Spanish forces would not be committed to the fighting, but the Spanish would supply the Western Front via overland railways and mule-trains and automobiles. The British Ambassador came into the negotiations once again on the 29th September with a letter detailing the possibility of German weapons being given to rebel Moroccans in the Rif War (3). With this, the King called for mobilisation against the rebels in the Rif as well as those in the Western Front. On the 9th October 1915, the Kingdom of Spain declares war on Germany. At the end of the month, 100,000 would be mobilised on the Western Front at the Rhine River while a further 120,000 would be crushing the last of the rebels in the Rif (4).

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Second Battle of Loos otherwise known as the Battle of the Hohenzollern Redoubt

From the 20th September to the 15th October 1915, the Allied forces had started to form their preparations around defending the Loos area. With the Cavalry Corps and Indian Cavalry Corps pressed onto logistics, it was to be replaced by two British divisions taken from the Macedonian Front to aid XI Corps. In preparation for the attack, Plummer ordered tunnelling companies to go underneath the positions at either side of the Hohenzollern Redoubt, St. Elie and a position just north of Hulluch. For a month prior to this, under pressure and under the strain of attacks occurring above, the tunnellers tried their hardest.

At zero hour, the four explosive tunnels detonated with the Germans scrambling to deal with over 4,000 dead at once. The British forces, along with reserves five minutes later, attacked on either side of the Hohenzollern redoubt as it was being shelled. On the 22th, the Redoubt was stormed on both sides and the fighting was thick. As this occurred positions north of Hill 70 were attacked by British, Indian, French and Portuguese soldiers. Taking 7,000 casualties in 9 hours of fighting in the trenches, the force to the south managed to overcome the gap and managed to take Hill 70. It took until the 27th of October for the captured positions to be relayed back to the rest of the line.

On the 3rd October 1915, one division of Germans attacked the Hohenzollern Redoubt. Meanwhile, this was the time when the British began to use poison gas for their own purposes at Germans in Haisnes and Auchy. It wasn't until the 5th that the Germans were repulsed from the Redoubt. For the next 10 days, the Allied forces attacked St. Elie and Hulluch, which were defended with 2 German divisions. Both attacks were repulsed. The Germans suffered 31,000 casualties compared to 47,000 casualties from the Allies.

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Artois and Champagne

These two battles would complement the Second Battle of Loos, as the French implemented their elastic defence tactics (5). The whole of the Vimy Ridge was defended by the Allies, as the Germans attempted to press on with the defences around St. Laurent and Lens. Despite being prepared, the Germans could not be dislodged from their places in St. Laurent and Lens. The same was said of the British and French, that managed to hold onto the Vimy Ridge against German night attacks. German artillery and machine guns managed to wear down any advances to their positions while Allied attempts to knock out artillery and barbed wire also failed. By the 5th November, the two Allied offensives were aborted. A total of ~250,000 casualties versus ~110,000 German casualties.

With these inconclusive results (except for Loos), the British needed a lucky shot. Winston Churchill, the First Lord of the Admiralty, was the man that was going to shoot.

His weapon of choice: A couple of water tanks.

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Lorraine

The Germans brought out their ace on the 28th September 1915, in order to distract the rest of the front. Free from the mud and the trench lines further north of the Western Front, the Germans and the French had more of a fluid "back-and-forth". Over 50 long tons of chlorine gas was sent across the front lines, attacking the French. 18,000 casualties were sustained from the gas alone before the Germans attacked at Vogtsburg. As hard as they could and for as long as they could, the French 7th Army stood their ground. It was not until the 5th of October before the Germans were repulsed. 38,000 French casualties were sustained compared to the German's 29,000.

On the 3rd October, the French 8th and 9th Armies advanced north to reinforce the gains made over the year. The 7th and 8th would take the west and east bank of the Rhine respectively, while the 9th followed as occupants of the Rhine territory to ensure the Germans could not advance through the heavy-forested areas towards Colmar. At the end of the month, the French were joined by the first Portuguese and Spanish troops. These men, green and inexperienced, would be sent on logistics duties, far from the frontline fighting. This freed up a further 20,000 French to fill up the gaps within the three French armies.

On the 2nd of November, the Germans attempted an offensive through to Waldkirch, to aim for the weakened Rhine areas occupied by the French. 30,000 Germans took on one half of the French 9th Army as well as the 2nd Spanish Army. Being pushed back for the first eight days of the month to the outskirts of Gundelfingen, the Franco-Spanish forces hit back hard. By the end of the month, the Germans were pushed back to Steinach in the winter. After this, all Allied offensives were to cease. By this time, more and more Portuguese and Spanish troops came to fill the ranks of defence and logistics. By Christmas, the French 9th Army was at Steinach while the rest of the French forces were at the front line of Ettenheim in the east to the Lièpvre.

The failures of all German forces in the Western Front to push back the Allied forces led Kaiser Wilhelm II to dismiss Falkenhayn, Chancellor Bethmann-Hollweg and Gottlieb von Jagow (Secretary for the Foreign Affairs) on the 30th October 1915. This sent a message to those still in power as the event was dubbed "The October Dismissal". Clemens Ernst Gottlieb von Delbrück was made Chancellor, while Arthur Zimmerman was made Secretary for the Foreign Affairs and Paul von Hindenburg became the Chief of the German General Staff.

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1. From his OTL comment, "I am also the King of the Communists"
2. Due to Lloyd George's "win at all costs" attitude, he puts forward Kamerun as a gift to Spain should they join the Allies.
3. This "letter" was found to be a forgery in 1992.
4. Because of the greater contingent of soldiers, the rebels in the Rif will be crushed by mid-1917 with a further contingent from the Western Front going on.
5. Be aware, the reason why German implemented it was because they discovered plans the French were using. In ATL, they never find the plans and never implement the elastic defence doctrine.

I hope that this update was good enough. I will begin to take in comments as I go. Anyway, thank you all. Next post, Eastern Front up to December 1915. Until then, all comments are welcome and appreciated. Thanks.
 
I think that while could be very probable that any of his advisors would tell him it, even if he wouldn't know know very well, but he, probably, he would feel confident enough, both himself and in his supporters electoral strength or even , perhaps would be more probably that he really doesn't care.
Also, I think that, given the above mentioned, we can assume that if he could once somewhat would reach to the Oval Office, with his so wished Power, that he would will do even less) about the US Constitution specifically 'requirements/formalities'...
Given that most of his possible voters even if they would know (or read about it in the Press) about the US constitution Amendment process, that they would be probably to share his leader, low to null consideration about the US Constitution, if it could be between them and their leader's goals and promised 'new America'...

He'll wait and see what happens with the down ballot, to see if he can make a difference. That being said, any old political can promise something so outlandish and yet people will go for it. I'll make sure to be realistic about the sort of votes (Electoral and Popular) that the seven political parties get in the 1916 Election.
 
I have some of my grandparents high school( grades 9-12) text books from the 19teens, and they do a very good, if not better job, then current books, of explaining the Constitution and the requirements and Amendments. Many Americans will be aware of civics, also in 1913, over 53,000 union and 8700 confederate veterans reunited at Gettysburg, Pa. This people and their families will not support Dixon..

Good point. I'll be sure to note that.
 
You can still make Robin a comedian. Remember, he did 1hr photo without any comedy.

Given that the POD is too far back, it would be possible that he could take either the path of the comedian or the path of an actor. There are going to be a few differences with the actors in this timeline, Robin Williams not being a comedian is one of them.

Forgive me for saying this, but the comment doesn't make sense. The first sentence makes sense, but the second does not. The second sentence clashes with the first. Are you saying that he did films without comedy? If so, then why does the first sentence say "You can still make Robin a comedian". There is too much time between Robin's birth (June 1951 and November 1914) that it would be impossible for the same person to inhabit the same sort of role.

I hope this does help you and your English proficiency. I'll say this to you: some actors are going to go into politics. Politicians into other places and some comedians will be actors. That is all I will say with this. Hope this helps.
 
I am aware of the ratification process. I was stating (or rather, I should have stated) that any future Amendments would nullify the rights of African-Americans instead of just amending the previous rights without referring to the ratification process. My bad.

What one Amendment can change another can repeal.. you cannot restrict what a future Amendment can say!

Sorry, bad wording.

Correction: Any future Amendments that Dixon would want to put up would nullify the rights of African-Americans until they get repealed by a future Amendment.
 
26th June 1915, Atlanta, Georgia

Having commuted the death sentence for Leo Frank, John Slaton had been receiving the Devil's share of hatred. Reviewing the evidence and the testimonies, he believed, he knew that there was a great wrong committed. Hav -
- CRASH
'Jesus Christ!' shouted the Governor, looking at the brick thrown through the window.
'Oh!' shouted Sally -
' - Sally, stay inside the house,' he said, picking up a revolver and loading it. Taking it behind his back, he opened the door.

Outside was his consequence for standing against the popular opinion. For standing up for Leo Frank, this was his price to pay. Armed with torches, axes, knives and even rifles, men stood at his door. Looking around, the Governor managed to see the power of the mob. So numerous, that they covered every lawn and every inch of the street. Off the top of his head, the Governor believed that there had to have been two thousand people there. Some of them were wearing normal suits and normal clothes. Others were clad from head to toe in white, with a mask covering everything except for two eye holes. Two thousand men between him and the fifty men of the Georgia National Guard, as well as those of law enforcement on the street. Somewhere between one to two hundred police and National Guardsmen.

With this action the Federal Government would see Georgia in a State of rebellion and dispatch additional National Guard and regular troops to pu his down! I will be bloody. Dixon will most likely lose all support North of the Mason Dixon line and West of he Mississippi! As is, to overwhelm 50 guardsmen, the mob will probably 200 killed, and as many wounded at a minimum.

Can you quote the passage instead of copying and pasting? No offence meant to be given, but I cannot tell (and I reckon the reader wouldn't tell) which is a quotation and which is your comment.

That being put aside, the situation has been dealt with Georgia. More than 200 people have been killed and they are now dealing with the trial process (which will take years to deal with). Thanks.
 
Can you quote the passage instead of copying and pasting? No offence meant to be given, but I cannot tell (and I reckon the reader wouldn't tell) which is a quotation and which is your comment.

That being put aside, the situation has been dealt with Georgia. More than 200 people have been killed and they are now dealing with the trial process (which will take years to deal with). Thanks.
I was on my tablet and it does not always play nice with this site.. sorry..
 
Hi @Walter Rodney Kinghorn Just come across this Timeline, interesting POD but this last update has left me with a few questions:

1: I can understand the Portuguese and the Norwegians joining in on the war but the Brazilians and the Spanish declarations surprise me because I thought that the Spanish nation would be too poor for war and the Brazilians too far away. Not to say that they would not be angered over their ships sinking but to declare war like that strikes me as something that would require a more developed pod than some ships being sunk and civilians lost as Spain seems too divided in political terms and Brazil seems too far away to really care.

However, I will add the caveat that I am not an expert on either Spain or Brazil in this period and am basing this off other authors and experts reasons for why Brazil and Spain do not enter WW1 at all. I would just like some explanation on your reasoning for Spain and Brazil going to war?

2: I noticed that you promised Spain parts of German New Guniea, were those not already promised to the Japanese and thus cause more problems in the post-war world?

I thank you in advance for your time given to any future replies and look forward to the next instalments.
 
1: I can understand the Portuguese and the Norwegians joining in on the war but the Brazilians and the Spanish declarations surprise me because I thought that the Spanish nation would be too poor for war and the Brazilians too far away. Not to say that they would not be angered over their ships sinking but to declare war like that strikes me as something that would require a more developed pod than some ships being sunk and civilians lost as Spain seems too divided in political terms and Brazil seems too far away to really care.

However, I will add the caveat that I am not an expert on either Spain or Brazil in this period and am basing this off other authors and experts reasons for why Brazil and Spain do not enter WW1 at all. I would just like some explanation on your reasoning for Spain and Brazil going to war?
Well. while in the Spanish case,although for different cause to the ones stated by you, I could share your doubts...But before to post them I will wait to the OP's answering/argumentation...
Also, about Brazil, I think, that should be noted that, in OTL, Brazil entered to the War and for the same causes that in TTL.
 
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Also, about Brazil, I think, that should be noted that, in OTL, Brazil entered to the War and for the same causes that in TTL.
I did not know and therefore retract that part of my statement.

But I will admit it does still surprise me as I cannot see the reason to enter a costly war over such a thing. Although the fact they did perhaps reveals more about the difference in education between the modern concept and understanding of war that I have been educated in with the benefit of hindsight compared to back then and maybe if I was born back then the decision would make more sense to me.
 
But I will admit it does still surprise me as I cannot see the reason to enter a costly war over such a thing. Although the fact they did perhaps reveals more about the difference in education between the modern concept and understanding of war that I have been educated in with the benefit of hindsight compared to back then and maybe if I was born back then the decision would make more sense to me.
Well, while I tend to agree with you, but in my opinion, the true reason for the Brazil's decision shouldn't be looking for it, at the difference between the modern one and these times, 'sensibilities' and/or conception about the war, but rather in one that was very known and one's that still it's fairly common: the politic interest and/or the prestige politics. One's motives, that in this case (for the Brazil governments) could have had as a goal to get a seat in the Peace conference and/or to be counted among the victorious powers...
 
Hi @Walter Rodney Kinghorn Just come across this Timeline, interesting POD but this last update has left me with a few questions:

1: I can understand the Portuguese and the Norwegians joining in on the war but the Brazilians and the Spanish declarations surprise me because I thought that the Spanish nation would be too poor for war and the Brazilians too far away. Not to say that they would not be angered over their ships sinking but to declare war like that strikes me as something that would require a more developed pod than some ships being sunk and civilians lost as Spain seems too divided in political terms and Brazil seems too far away to really care.

However, I will add the caveat that I am not an expert on either Spain or Brazil in this period and am basing this off other authors and experts reasons for why Brazil and Spain do not enter WW1 at all. I would just like some explanation on your reasoning for Spain and Brazil going to war?

2: I noticed that you promised Spain parts of German New Guniea, were those not already promised to the Japanese and thus cause more problems in the post-war world?

I thank you in advance for your time given to any future replies and look forward to the next instalments.

Thank you for the comment. Things like this help to keep it real, despite it being ATL. Anyway:
Brazil goes to war, much like OTL but with the ship sinking and killing the Brazilians (kind of like a Lusitania Expy). That being said, I never had any intention of putting them into the fighting, just to be logistics and all that. Brazil was crappy in its economic system (how it was not modernised and how it took far too long for travel). As of now, they are fighting for reparations for every person dead from the ship's sinking. But that may or may not backfire.

Spain had the Liberal Conservatives (under Dato) which was neutral while the conservative Liberal Party wanted to support war. Spain was poor yes, but it had been fighting the Rif war for three years now. The British, in their struggle to win over allies, used the underhanded trick of forging papers that would grant the whole of Spanish Morocco to the Rif people (in OTL, the British forged a document which showed Nazi plans to redraw the lines in South America). King Alfonso XIII was an imperialist, he wanted an empire much like any other European state. The British in ATL promise to supply weapons to the Spanish in the Western Front and the Rif (acknowledging the 1907 Pact of Cartagena and enforcing it). This will mean that Spain won't have the same path as OTL.

Franco will have his uses.....soon.

The colonial question will be resolved in favour of all parties: The Australians, the New Zealanders and the Japanese will all take their pieces of German New Guinea and the surrounding islands and territories. None of them will be satisfied.

I did not know and therefore retract that part of my statement.

But I will admit it does still surprise me as I cannot see the reason to enter a costly war over such a thing. Although the fact they did perhaps reveals more about the difference in education between the modern concept and understanding of war that I have been educated in with the benefit of hindsight compared to back then and maybe if I was born back then the decision would make more sense to me.

I must admit that I am taking a huge grain of salt with the nations entering the war. That being said, there are a few people that will enter the mix. After all, I never said that Eric Muenter was dead.

I cannot doubt @Xenophonte and the reasoning and I say thank you for it.

The post will be up at tommorow, my time or 4 - 6am on the other side of the world. Or something like that. I keep forgetting that I am talking to Americans and Brits and all these people. That being said, I'll continue on my way.
 
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For the Spain's government agreeing to enter into the war, (imo) would be needed some more stronger incentives not only from Britain but specially from France. Cause while, as was shown in OTL, in the RIF war, Spain had had the capacity to deploy an expeditionary army (though it was for a 'Colonial war' and with some serious underlying troubles with their military leadership (as was shown, too, in OTL, Annual 'battle'). Also, I think that should be noted and considered that even even in OTL, the recruitment campaign hadn't been 'easy' (considering the intense, for these times, war propaganda, and the 'enemy') for the government that, OTL, should be faced an important popular and political resistance.
Given that and considering that the colonial 'compensations' offered/promised, so typical of these times, that, (accordingly the last update) are being offered in Spain, aside that wouldn't be, considered neither as 'enough' nor 'worth', as for justifying the active participation in the war. I think that these 'promises' would be perceived and quite correctly, by both the Press and the political opposition as a 'white elephant' kind of 'gift' or in this case war compensation.
Also, in any negotiation with Spain, the main interlocutor, who would lead the discussion would be the Allied Power more need for deploy more troops in the land and that also would be the one whose colonial and/or strategic interests could be the more aligned with the Spanish ones, and that would be France.
Also, aside of financial/military assistance and probably colonial concessions in Africa, I think that the Spanish government would need to ask for a revision of the French-Spanish treaty of the '12, concerning to both the Morocco status and possibly the redrawing of the French and Spanish interest spheres in the Spanish North African traditional area of interests.
Thus, in my opinion, if the Spanish government would avoid a greater a dangerous political backlash (especially after the casualty rate would start, (as surely could happen) to increase, I think that they would ask first and foremost political meaningful concessions.
Also, given the British interest in protecting Gibraltar, the last hypothetical French-Spanish point of negotiation, surely would of great interest and if not as active participant, at least followed with interest and attention for protecting the British interests there...
 
To the East, The Place That Victory Travels Least: September - December 1916 (Eastern Front)
Quick thing: Psoglav Offensive SHOULD be dated August - December 1915.

Thank you.

Advancing further south towards Przemyśl, the 14th Army and the Army of the Bug were shaken. Despite taking the city of Warsaw, they saw the effort of just 210 Russians hold off both armies. Not only did it spare the survivors of the 2nd Army, but it also allowed for a great shock for the many Germans that now march before winter comes in. These soldiers, who were commended with the attack against Warsaw (news about the 210 defenders was censored until after the war), were then ordered to take the fortress near the Carpathian Mountains. They were to be accompanied by the 1st and 4th Austro-Hungarian Army which would push from Austria-Hungary to knock General Yudenich out of his now defended position. The German 9th and 12th Armies were to advance eastward to take on the newly reformed Russian 1st Army as the northern lines begin to pull back.

On the 8th of September, the 1st Austro-Hungarian Army attacks the Gorlice-Przemyśl Pocket (where Yudenich's forces happened to congregate). Yudenich, whilst not being able to move, decided on defence prior to this date. Having his position closer to the supply lines from the Black Sea, Yudenich was able to press for a greater supply of artillery shells and foodstuff compared to the rest of the front. While this would sacrifice his post-war political chances, it would ensure that the southern contingent of the Russian lines would not break down.

Having staked defensive positions, Yudenich caught wind of the 1st Army's movements, firing his artillery and taking his army (now at 175,000 men) to prepare for battle. At 3pm, the 1st Austro-Hungarian Army attacks. With over a month to rebuild defences, stock up on supplies and reinforce broken units, Yudenich managed to overcome over five assaults made against the 1st. Had Yudenich chose to fall back from Gorlice, the 1st Army would have managed to push Yudenich back into the Ukraine. After five hours of attacks, Yudenich managed to sustain 9,000 casualties compared to 18,000 from the Austro-Hungarian troops. Falling back, the 1st Austro-Hungarian Amry would try to attack again for three days until the German 14th Army and the Army of the Bug arrived from the north on the 12th September 1915.

Every rifle and bullet was scavenged from the 7,000 Austro-Hungarian soldiers that died, as well as from fellow Russian soldiers. As Yudenich received the news of the German advances, Yudenich prepared for more defences if possible. Devastated from the attack on Warsaw, the two German forces could not deal with the fact that they would now be dealing with a large Russian force.

On the 25th of September 1915, Yudenich faced them all: The Army of the Bug and the German 14th Army to the north and the 1st Austro-Hungarian Army to the north-west. It was to be an estimated ~280,000 men versus ~168,000 men. If this attack went ahead, then there would be a great deal of trouble for Yudenich. He was the closest to the Black Sea supply line. If he was encircled or defeated, then all the hard effort would be lost.

At 10am, a massive artillery barrage came from all three attacking armies. Several positions of the Russian line were shattered, as were the outer defences at Gorlice and Przemyśl. At 12pm, the 14th Army and the 1st A-H Army attacked at once, with the Army of the Bug in reserve. At once, the front lines seemed to break down despite the best efforts of the defenders. Retreating towards Przemyśl, the Russians fought harder, trying to use as many artillery shells as possible for counter-fire (to destroy enemy artillery guns) and to hit infantry units. After the retreat, the Russians dug in and resisted the idea of retreating. With this mindset, the Russians sustained over 25,000 casualties but managed to inflict 40,000 in return. The fighting, which took over 16 hours, was devastating to both sides.

Except for one group of people.

The Army of the Bug.

5km from the front lines, the 70,000-strong force advanced towards the shattered front lines on the 9th October 1915. On the outskirts of Gorlice, Russian troops abandoned the area after two days of fighting. pushed back 15km eastward, the Russians set themselves in trenches that were dug during the time that Yudenich was not attacked. On the 15th of October, after some struggle, the Russians were relieved by the Russian 11th Army, which had managed to push back the 7th Austro-Hungarian Army thanks to Romanian assistance. With the 7th A-H Army in the Carpathian Mountains, the Russian 11th Army pursued them south and into the occupied Transylvania region before winter had set in. As for the Central Powers, the Army of the Bug had to stay with the 1st A-H Army around Yudenich's position to keep him pinned. The 14th Army advanced once again, as Siedlce was in the struggle between the reformed Russian 2nd Army and the German 9th and 12th Armies from the 28th September to the 9th November.

Once November came, the fighting died down and December was the lull in the front. No great plans were being announced, as news of the Lorraine Front began to trickle in. 1916 was going to be a tough year for both sides, as Yudenich remained in the same place and the German/Austro-Hungarian forces were still trying to knock Russia out of the war.

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The Downfall And The Return: A Little Story Of A Big Country
China. The Middle Kingdom. The one nation, in my opinion, which has had its fair share of triumphs and travesties across thousands of years in not only OTL, but also the many hellish and utopian places like those from Twilight of the Red Tsar, Fear, Loathing and Gumbo and its successor Rumsfeldia, A More Perfect Union and many more. What's to say that one more ATL China wouldn't hurt.

11th August 1915.

Speaking of hurting, the man at the centre of it all would be feeling it right where it was vulnerable. As he ate another course of beef, the pain of his gut had been acting up more and more. As he grew in power, so did the resentment that he had through the Chinese population. While he would prepare to make himself Emperor of what would have been the Hongxian Era, a movement would grow to oust him.

Finishing his meal, he would leave to go to the toilet. The public would be troubled by questions and speeches for the return of the monarchy, for the "Son of Heaven" to arise once again in the Middle Kingdom. They would be given the chance to see the man for what he was. An Emperor, worthy of the name in every way. He would set China right. The plan was set.

Of course, "the plan" didn't mean what Yuan Shikai believed it to be. Turns out, "the plan" was nothing more but the high content of urea in his urine as well as the symptoms that came with it. With his head feeling far too heavy, the man fell down onto the ground.

With the confirmed death of Yuan Shikai on the night of the 11th of August, the pro-monarchy forces of the Republic of China attempted to bring forward a proper successor to Shikai. The trouble was, the successor was Shikai's eldest son. Yuan Keding was not a man that took after his father. He lacked military prowess, with no record of soldiers under his banner or victories under his name. Political acumen was next to nothing in a man like Keding, having served as a low-level government official. Lacking the charisma of his opposing forces, Keding was immediately dropped from the discussions.

Enter Sun Yat-Sen. Scorned over the failed uprising in 1913, the man returned from Japan on the 22nd August to raise men and materials for a resurrected Chinese Nationalist Army (KMT) and to support his own effort to become President of the Republic of China. With Shikai's supporters not uniting under a single leader (with Li Yuanhong refusing to take power), Sun Yet-Sen declared himself President of the Republic of China. To help in this effort, he recruited two eager anti-Shikai bandit leaders to help in his effort.

The first was a man named Bai Lang, a man who raised a failed rebellion against the Republic who so happened to be flexible in his ideologies as well as his loyalties. The second man was an individual that would go on record as "China's Most Basest General". Zhang Dongchang, otherwise known as "The Dogmeat General". During the August and September of the year, Sun Yet-Sen recruited a total of 150,000 men in hastily formed divisions, with several thousand men having been trained with modernised weapons and tactics. With the death of Yuan Shikai, Sir John N. Jordan (British Ambassador to the ROC) was confronted with the presence of Sun Yat-Sen on the 28th August. On the 9th of September, after seeing the confirmation from Prime Minister Lloyd George, Ambassador Jordan declared that he would recognise Sun Yat-Sen as the legitimate ruler.

Without a clear leader, the Shikai-based group broke up. Zhang Zuolin, a loyalist to the late Yang Shikai, split away to attempt to restore Sun Yet-Sen to his rightful place after he was bribed with the chance to take a high place in the new order. In opposition to this, Duan Qirui formed the anti-Allied Anhui Clique on the 18th September 1915. With Britain, Russia, France aligned to Sun Yet-Sen by the end of the year, the only true opposition to him came from Anhui Clique, which had 100,000 men under arms by October. Other warlords and governors remained neutral. In the meantime, Sun Yat-Sen convened with several scholars such as Chen Duxiu, Cai Yuanpei, Chen Hengzhe, Li Dazhao, Lu Xun, Zhou Zuoren, He Dong, Qian Xuantong, Liu Bannong, Bing Xin, and Hu Shih.

These people would form the nexus of what would become the new China. They would begin what would become the Revolutionary Period of Chinese history, from October 1915 to 1922.

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