Map of the Fortnight 276: The Sick Man

The Sick Man

The Challenge

Make a map showing a declining great power.

The Restrictions
There are no restrictions on when your PoD or map may be set. Fantasy, sci-fi, and future maps are allowed, but blatantly implausible (ASB) maps are not.

If you're not sure whether your idea meets the criteria of this challenge, please feel free to PM me or comment in the main thread.

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The entry period for this round shall end when the voting thread is posted on Monday the 26th of June.

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For more than 1500 years, after the Revolution, the Sovetskiy Collectivity has dominated the Globe without sharing. Also known as the Gensekia, it is still the only real political entity on Earth and one of the largest in the solar system.
In the distant past, when the masses of men were enslaved by despots, the Prophet Kaal Maak had his revelation about the practice of labour, the idleness of the burzhuas, the ideal of the Prince worker. After a lifetime of righteousness helping the destitute, he left this world to continue guiding humanity with his spirit.
It was then that Stalnoy, son of Lenïn, took up his scythe and hammer and led an unprecedented revolt against the burzhuas and other despots throughout Evraziya. He became the first Gensek, the Father of the Peoples. The Bolshvikars, Stalnoy's personal guard, worked wonders in the name of Kaal Maak and their Gensek. Under his reign and that of his successors, harvests were bountiful, industries powerful, rivers diverted to irrigate arid lands, impassable mountains levelled by roads, leprosy and plagues repelled by medicine, and crowds freed from slavery. Unlike the peoples of the past, who based their kinship on race or philosophy, anyone on Earth could be a sovetskiy subject and enjoy the fruits of this garden. It was during the first century after the Revolution that the Collectivity launched humanity to conquer the heavens, in particular the Moon.
The Collectivity was a beacon of light shining ever brighter out of the World of Darkness.
But the enemies of the Collectivity were not so easily defeated. Burzhuas from other continents attacked the Collectivity and its communes with atomic zarbasis. The first half of the millennium was a terrible time for the Collectivity, with the lush World and nature giving way to ever-widening, barren deserts. Diseases of a new kind multiplied, and the completely polluted air became a poison for living beings.
The Burzhuas were finally defeated, but their defeat gave way to an era of great cold and ice. With the cities now destroyed, the few survivors once again organised themselves, once again practising nomadism throughout Evraziya. Although still standing and the sole winner of the war, the Collectivity found itself led by weak Genseks, regularly overthrown by their bolshvikars. The Collectivity was divided between potentates who were constantly at war with each other.
It was not until many centuries later that a new line of Gensek restored the Collectivity to its former glory. In the aftermath of the first millennium, the Nesterenko lineage took up Stalnoy's hammer and reunified a large part of Evraziya, rehabilitating towns, fields and industries. At this time, the Collectivity resumed contact with certain forgotten continents to preach the doctrine of Kaal Maak. It was under Gensek Piotr Nesterenko that the Collectivity succeeded in regaining control of the lost communes on the Moon and returning to the stars.
But after almost 400 years of glory under the House of Nesterenko, their glorious blood ran dry. Taking advantage of new, weak genseks, division resumed and soon ambitious men took control of whole swathes of the Collectivity and many of the communes. When the last Nesterenko was murdered, a younger branch, the Usmanovs, took over.
But the Usmanovs will not be able to live up to their forebears. Gensek Dmitriy Usmanov, although powerful and having managed to save many of the Collectivity's assets, had no direct heir after a long reign of 39 years.
A large part of the world turned away from Kaal Maak, the glaciers grew ever larger as the winters went by, the great princes and bolshvikars shared out more and more of the Collectivity's lands, the population, crushed by taxes, became distrustful, the lunar communes declined over the years and there were even rumours that the burzhuas would soon return from the dark cosmos to fall to Earth.
The Collectivity is the image of its Gensek, it continues despite its great age, but suffers.
 
DANUBIA: THE SICK MAN ONCE MORE
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Ok, so super late map, but the goal was to show a socialist Austria-Hungary Danubian Federation that went full NPA and is now paying the price for that. I really didn't have the time to do much of the lore, each graph took a while to make (and to calculate, but that's a long story).

BTW, for those who might find the proportions strange, it's because I used a logarithmic system rather than direct proportioning. Originally it was just meant to allow me to display the slices better, but as I thought about it, it seemed like the type of absurd idea such a system would operate with.

I am not particularly satisfied with the solution I found for the last map, but I wanted to show some of the violence that was happening to make this man sick.

And I think I'll leave it by here. Thank you @CourageousLife for extending the deadline a bit longer, it's always a pleasure to make a map for the contest :)
 
Full image: https://ibb.co/JzM9XBY

I’m also posting my belated MOTF contribution. Thank you for the extension @CourageousLife.

For centuries, the Priestly Imperium of Tydesklend has dominated Europe. From the Imperial Palace centred amongst the pyramids of the Rhine, emperors and courtiers sent out edicts that governed the Imperium, from Iberia to the Aegean, a whole world answered to the will of Oldenberg. In keeping with their eternal rival Assur (1), they formed the two eyes of the world. However, as the twentieth century (2) enters its third decade, the Priestly Imperium is in decay. Many centuries after the Chu triumphed over the Qin, the Zhao have expanded outwards until they stand at the frontiers of the decaying Szlachtez of Bolska, where feuding nobles wage wars only nominally bound in obedience. But although Zhao is the largest of the great Eastern Empires, and although it has recently shocked the Occident by compelling Ahsur to lease it a port and permit the red-robed monks of Zhurong to build monastaries within its borders, it is not the most advanced state – the real threat is Hinomoto (3). Hinomoto’s ships encircle the seas, and shocked the emperor’s subjects by even sailing up the rivers to threaten the magistrates; and this challenge has arrived as an impious dynasty has gone into decay, with much of Iberia only acknowledging Oldenberg’s suzerainty but appointing their own administrators. With so much of the Tydesklendish army tied up in the West, guarding the ports they have recently been forced to concede to the Hinomoto, they have also been forced to allow autonomy to the Dacians (4), and leave the miscreant Dukes of Vaelisch (5) to fend for themselves and do with their Hinomotish port what they can. Much of the barely rested Imperial army has been sent to Carthage, to compel the peasants there to provide the grain desperately needed to stabilize the empire. Diplomats are reaching out to the Danes (fellow victims of Hinomotish strong-arming) the Bolska, and the Ashurians, but it is unclear what can be achieved as the empire’s power wanes, as the Bolskan principalities are slowly gobbled up by Zhao, as Vangaladesa (6) takes its own naval base on the Carthaginian coast. Allegorical novels circulate, grousing that the whole Occident is guarded by a cabal of dying barons. Even in Oldenberg, it seems the Two Eyes of the World are beginning to fall shut, that the Great Man of the West is sick. Many hasten to receive Trostgeben (7) so that if they die, they will not be reincarnated as swine until the Last Day, but rather will ascend beyond the prison of flesh and its principalities of darkness (8), and all eyes look nervously to both east and west, peasants stumbling to work, intellectuals reeling from national blows, foreign soldiers awakened by the ten recitations of the morning prayer at dawn or by its eleven sequels echoing from the roofs, as even children learning that the eating of flesh may ensnare their souls in this world wonder what will become of the Priestly Imperium of Tydeskland.



(1) The present empire stretching from Transoxiana to Anatolia has a bit less in common with ancient Assyria than the Qing Dynasty had with the state of Qin. In fact, its philosophy would be recognizable to the Greeks and its poetry to the Persians.

(2) Using our calendar

(3) Zhurong was a fire god popular in Chu. In these times this religion has fused with Taoist philosophy (subsidized by Chu). I don’t think religions mix into syncretic blends nearly as easily as many people here do, but I do think that they can gobble up philosophies more easily than many people here do. Hinomoto is alt-Japan; it went into isolation around the 16th century, but reemerged a in the late 1700s due to resource shortages and has become a major colonial and the first industrial power.

(4) Alt-Romanian speakers who occupy much of the Danube. Medieval migrations went differently.

(5) Britain is majority Welsh, though they speak a language that has a largely German vocabulary. The dukes of Vaelisch are vassals of the Emperor, but they have their own vassal in Nordified Eirland. However, Eirland is falling towards civil war, and Vaelisch made a deal that now seems ill-advised with the Hinomotish

(6) Alt-Bangladesh. The second major industrial power of the world. Unbeknownst to Oldenberg, they are contemplating selling this port to one of the two other major Indian powers – Gholadoro (Gujarat through Southern Pakistan) or the Fourth Satvahanan Raj in the south. (The divided principalities in central India are not really in the running).

(7) A series of readings and blessings accompanied by vows of fasting rigorously until death so that the soul would be free.

(8) Opinions vary about the foreigners. Some hold they are demons attacking the land of the true faith. Some hold that they are fellow enlightened ones who simply used different terminology (after all, there are among them several anti-materialistic, vegetarian philosophies), others hold they are just barbarians who are very good at ship-building. Finally, a select few think that they herald the ending of the world, and that this is a good thing, for the liberation of all true spirit from the tyranny of the flesh is at hand.
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