Same, Ian Malcolm is my favorite character.
I like the idea of doing some relatively 'minimal' changes to The Lost World, like having a smaller cast and cutting out the San Diego scenes.
Any more suggestions for JP III?
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This website had an article on how JP III could have been better:
http://filmverse.com/2012/08/16/how-jurassic-park-iii-could-have-been-better/
And it raises some good points.
Overall I've been a bit disappointed with all the Jurassic Park sequels, even Jurassic World (though Jurassic World was fairly nice).
Overall my ideas would be:
Lost World: Jurassic Park
- Follow the book a bit more closely. The book itself was quite interesting and if done right, the fear factor on screen would definitely be there. Plus there was unused material from the first book anyway.
- Scrap the San Diego angle. Yes, a T. rex in a city made for some interesting action scenes, but storywise it makes Jurassic World seem downright ludicrous: There is no way that any park featuring ANY carnivorous dinosaurs is going to open after the San Diego incident. The US government is quite likely to draw up plans to napalm both islands after what happened in San Diego and they would quite likely have near universal support in the UN for it and I can't see Costa Rica opposing that (the Costa Rican government has to only see what happened in San Diego to imagine what might happen in Costa Rica if animals make it regularly to the mainland). Keeping the death toll moderate and crucially, ONLY on the islands, will make it more likely that a refurbished park would be allowed to open.
If wearing a Jurassic Park shirt is in poor taste because people died, what does it mean to open a fully functioning theme park with the same type of animals that rampaged through a major American city eating people?
Jurassic Park III
- replace Tea Leoni
- make the landing of the son (Eric) and the mother's boyfriend (Ben) on the island more credible. We didn't need the boat attacked by some unknown (and presumably Ingen created) sea creature, but rather just have the boat hit some slightly submerged rocks while the driver is not paying attention (it's not like he would necessarily know the waters off Isla Sorna intimately anyway) and the boat capsizes and starts to sink. So Ben and Eric detach from the boat lest they land in the sea and drown (you could maybe show a shark attack against the boat captain after the boat capsized to heighten the sense of danger) and then the winds carry the pair to the island.
- As per the suggestions in the link above, have Grant not be be duped onto Isla Sorna since he is the protagonist. Instead have them maybe attempt to dupe Grant, but Grant smells something fishy and they eventually come clean when there story doesn't hold up. When Grant hears that their son is on the island and they aren't receiving any real assistance, Grant decides to help them (remembers helping Tim and Lex and the bond that developed; also thinks about the missed chance with Ellie and the family they could have had) but only under HIS terms (this would require removing his phrase that no force on heaven or earth would get him back onto that island (or presumably Isla Sorna)).
- again as per the link above, leave some of the mercs alive a bit longer rather than have them serve simply as appetizers for the spinosaurus. If you need spinosaur appetizers, bring more mercs (maybe Grant wants more firepower), but have at least 3 survive for longer after they make it onto the island. In particular have Udesky live longer so we get to know more about him as a character, so that when the velociraptors cripple him and try to use him as bait then the loss we experience is somewhat like the death of Muldoon in the first movie or even worse from the point of view of getting to know a character and connect with him
- Don't have the group be rescued by Ellie calling in the Marines. That's deus ex machina and a bit lazy. Grant is smart. He's experienced raptors before. and if he is coming in on his own terms then he would likely have some kind of plan for the raptors. At this point some of Grants unused scenes from the book (using poisoned eggs) might come in handy.
If Ellie comes in to save them, have her do it without the marines and simply pick them up on the beach or at the mouth of the river...or even out at sea if they make it out on a boat (maybe using some unused material from the second book where the heroes make it out on a boat).
The more limited nature of both JP II and JP III sets the stage up for a Jurassic World where you can have a LOT of people being eaten/killed when the new park (inevitably) fails. This would then cap off the franchise since after Jurassic World, there would likely never be another dinosaur park opened unless it only had the most passive herbivores.
EDIT:
- Don't have the Pterandons escape. Yes, it made for an interesting shot at the end when they flew past the choppers, but in terms of the story it added nothing (apparently they were originally supposed to get into a fight with the raptors close to the end scene but with that cut, they could have easily cut out their escape from the aviary too and removed them from the flight home...or from the boat ride home if Ellie helps rescue them from a boat). except questions as to what the hell happens to wherever they land. With less dinosaurs making it to the mainland and wreaking havoc it again makes for a nice set up for
Jurassic World.
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Jurassic World
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Downplay the military potential aspect. It worked for a bit, but after a while it seemed ridiculous.
- Have more staff that we get to know. Even Jurassic Park seemed to have more staff in the control room (and they at least played much larger roles) and just in general. And this is a now fully operational and larger park. With apparently just a couple of people in control.