Jonathan1997
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I was just wondering I could see them on Amazon as an collection of short stories to start your self of in should you decide to be a professional writer.I have yes
I was just wondering I could see them on Amazon as an collection of short stories to start your self of in should you decide to be a professional writer.I have yes
Cheers . I actually just released my first book Chosen King on AmazonI was just wondering I could see them on Amazon as an collection of short stories to start your self of in should you decide to be a professional writer.
Cheers . I actually just released my first book Chosen King on Amazon
Wow. Congratulations!!!
CheersCongratulations I will wish you the best and I will give it a read.
Ah well. Another TL's over
Hopefully another one's on the way. And Chosen King to spend a good holiday.
It feels so weird for this to be over, but it did end on a mostly happy note in the end I'm looking forward to your next Stuart TL with Mary, Queen of Scots (and English)!
As you say you are publishing novels, a little note on structure. Normally at the end you build up to something , resolve it and then the final chapter(s) are an epilogue ( unless its an going series and a cliffhanger is desired ). You seem to just pretty randomly stop without warning. OK if its just a timeline but not in novel. You also have a fair number of chapters were you start something, say the situation in India, and it is never resolved or seems to knock on effects elsewhere, makes the chapter pretty pointless filler and in a novel would not go down well.Well, there you have it. After two years and 266 thousand words, A Britain of Panthers and Lions comes to an end. It's been a hell of a journey, and I'd like to think I've learned alot about the period in which this is set.
I'd like to thank you all for reading this, for commenting and for making suggestions etc. Your feedback has meant the world.
I've greatly enjoyed writing this beauty, and feel I've definitely improved as time has gone on.
Thank you all.
And on a cheeky note, if you're interested in the Stuarts/the late 17th/early 18th Century please feel free to get yourself a copy of my book Chosen King, which is available on Amazon.
Cheers!
Oh am aware, something I actively addressed or tried to in chosen kingAs you say you are publishing novels, a little note on structure. Normally at the end you build up to something , resolve it and then the final chapter(s) are an epilogue ( unless its an going series and a cliffhanger is desired ). You seem to just pretty randomly stop without warning. OK if its just a timeline but not in novel. You also have a fair number of chapters were you start something, say the situation in India, and it is never resolved or seems to knock on effects elsewhere, makes the chapter pretty pointless filler and in a novel would not go down well.
Ahh but that’s what ones imagination is forWell the last few chapters popped up quick.
I am glad that British America is sorted for now.
Sorry to read this is ending, I was looking forward to more and seeing how the Industrial Revolution kicked in and the AltVictorian era.
Good luck for the book.
It was a nice ride along.
I'm glad that I was able to contribute with ideas (and the whole Kettlers-on-Russian-Throne subplot/ATL Russian development; as well as some other ideas).