Stupid Luck and Happenstance, Thread II

Part 69, Chapter 1001
Chapter One Thousand One


15th February 1953

Berlin

“The former Prime Minister of Romania has died” Kat read aloud.

“Normally we send condolences to the families” Kira replied. The Romanians had been allies of Germany for decades and King Michael of Romania was a cousin of Louis Ferdinand, as well as the head of a Cadet Branch of the House of Hohenzollern. That didn’t mean that Kira liked them. Their constant squabbling with Hungary, also allied with Germany, had caused no end of headaches over the previous four decades. The former Prime Minster in question had been at the center of all of that for two of those decades. The death of Iuliu Maniu at the age of eighty was another geopolitical minefield to be negotiated.

“I will make the proper arrangements” Kat said.

“Thank you” Kira said, the less she had to think about that the happier she would be.

Kat looked down to the next story. “Congressman Joseph McCarthy of Wisconsin declares Kraut Scare bogus.”

Kira found that incredibly amusing. “He is not stupid” She said, “Half of Wisconsin is proudly German, you remember when we were there during the war.”

Kat had said in the past that it was an aspect of that region of the United States that had left her cold. It seemed like the people there had an off-kilter view of Germany like it had been during the nineteenth century. Fortunately, she had her hands full with the Kira’s security and the discovery that Kira was pregnant partway through that trip to say anything untoward. This announcement by the Congressman, no matter how self-serving was in keeping with a document that Kat said she had been handed in preparation for today’s briefing by the BND. Of the people of theirs who were embedded in the US Government, few had been discovered. Instead, it seemed like relative innocents were getting swept up and the Agencies of the US Government were stupidly purging themselves of people knowledgeable of European affairs. According to Kat, a friend of hers had been one of those innocents.

“I remember” Kat replied, “The BND suggests that you make no public announcements and strongly recommends that you keep your Hands out of the United States.”

“That makes sense” Kira said, “Have Asia and Kris been informed?”

“Yes” Kat said, “I think that Kris was disappointed, she had a lot of fun in San Francisco last spring.”

“An unattached young woman in a city full of University students” Kira said, “I’m amazed she had time to complete the mission.”

Kat just shrugged. Kira knew that Kris seldom had trouble keeping focused, still Kris had said that she had found Stanford University and UC Berkeley daunting because of the social aspect of American Universities. The alternative was Asia, whose silent nature would have drawn the worst sort of attention to her in that environment.

It was noticeable that they were not talking about the recent detonation of an atomic bomb in the Nevada Desert. Kat had already made her feelings clear on the subject. A couple weeks earlier Kat had slipped and told Kira that wars killed people like her. If there was another war, Kira would be removed from the City, the people in the neighborhood where Kat had grown up would go to work and life would go on. Right up until the instant they were incinerated. Nuclear bombs seemed to exist with the express purpose of killing civilians by the hundreds of thousands. Kira could understand that, Louis had been suggesting that the League of Nations needed to get involved before the situation got out of hand.

“I know that there are certain issues that bother you Katherine” Kira said, “I can always get someone else to discuss these matters.”

Kat looked at her and shrugged. She seemed to be saying “Have it your way” without saying so.

“France declares intention to develop nuclear arms” Kat read aloud. Kira almost groaned aloud with that news. That was possibly the worst of all worlds.

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“They always do that?” Aurora asked as they looked over at the Empress and the Gräfin as they sat at a table to one side of the Imperial Court deep in discussion. It was noticeable that the space was cordoned off and two armed men from the 1st Imperial Foot were standing there to keep anyone from getting too close.

“If Katy is in town” Kiki said, “She is my mother’s Aide-de-Camp, she advises her on International events, Intelligence and Military matters.”

“State secrets” Aurora said.

“Some of it, yes” Kiki said, “Then she meets with Antonia, the Obersthofmeisterin who does the same thing except with politics. It’s like a mini meeting of the Order of Louise every week.”

“Order of Louise?” Aurora asked. It was a reminder to Kiki that Aurora wasn’t really a part of the Imperial Court. Zella had declined to come this afternoon because she said she wasn’t feeling well. It was a reminder that what was happening to Zella was inevitably going to happen to them, at any time.

“It’s a chivalrous order for women that my Mother is the Grand Mistress of” Kiki said, “Charity, politics and other things. Katy is in charge of the part of it that does those other things. They are constantly trying to expand their role in the State.”

“That sounds exciting” Aurora said.

When Kiki thought about what she had said, she realized that it did sound exciting.
 
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Part 136, Chapter 2000


4th July 1978

Boston, Massachusetts

It was a hot humid, summer night which made most of the disguises that Tatiana might have employed impossible...


Just kidding... Or am I?

Given that it's taken just short of two years to get to this point, post 2000 isn't inconceivable...


And as much as you may joke about Tatiana following Mother into the family business, I could see Kat having an absolute shit fit if she tries. x'D
 
Chapter One Thousand One

“I remember” Kat replied, “The BND suggests that you make no public announcements and strongly recommends that you keep your Hands out of the United States.”

“That makes sense” Kira said, “Have Asia and Kris been informed?”

“Yes” Kat said, “I think that Kris was disappointed, she had a lot of fun in San Francisco last spring.”

“An unattached young woman in a city full of University students” Kira said, “I’m amazed she had time to complete the mission.”

Kat just shrugged. Kira knew that Kris seldom had trouble keeping focused, still Kris had said that she had found Stanford University and UC Berkeley daunting because of the social aspect of American Universities. The alternative was Asia, whose silent nature would have drawn the worst sort of attention to her in that environment.
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Kat is a known quantity. Except for maybe the US anytime she is not in a known place intelligence apparatus around the world kick it in overdrive. She is a known player in the game and will have some people both in Germany and the home countries of the different units, IE Deuxieme Bureau, MI 5 6 and SIS, what ever the Russian are calling it and the Japanese are calling theirs, having people do nothing but watch her in Germany and reporting back if she goes missing. I would not be surprised if there isn't a whole group of people who's single job is to watch he leave and where she goes everyday.
 
As I think about it Louis Ferdinand is probably the most respected leader on the World stage right now, yes he is a Constitutional Monarch but when he speaks on policy matters he speaks with the permission and full authority of the German Government.
He is the best salesman that Germany has and a visit from the Imperial Family brings prestige both to Germany and the country that are hosting them.
The fact that there are a lot of tourists watching the changing of guard is a reflection on the prestige that Germany and the Imperial Family has in the world.

As for the response to the Anti-German sentiment right now there should be a public relations campaign with the message directed to the American people that says "Thank You".
This is in response to the Tenth Anniversary of Empress Kira's visit to the United States in,which the American people bought a lot of German War Bonds to fight the Communist Soviet Union.
Based on the fact that the American people bought in OTL WW II approximately $185 billion in war bonds, I have estimated anywhere from 10% to 25% of that amount in German War Bonds were sold to the American people and that is anywhere from $18.5 billion to $66 billion that was sold, and the bonds should be starting to mature soon and that means a lot of Americans are going to get some extra money soon and that goes a long way in easing anti-German feelings.
 
Kat is a known quantity. Except for maybe the US anytime she is not in a known place intelligence apparatus around the world kick it in overdrive. She is a known player in the game and will have some people both in Germany and the home countries of the different units, IE Deuxieme Bureau, MI 5 6 and SIS, what ever the Russian are calling it and the Japanese are calling theirs, having people do nothing but watch her in Germany and reporting back if she goes missing. I would not be surprised if there isn't a whole group of people who's single job is to watch he leave and where she goes everyday.

Yes, they are watching her, watching her as the bull does the matadors cape and not spend one look at the other hand that holds a deadly blade. LOL
 
Yes, they are watching her, watching her as the bull does the matadors cape and not spend one look at the other hand that holds a deadly blade. LOL
More like the multiple "Helpers" that are now the successors of Kat in a sense, and armed with plenty of swords and other sharp implements....

Ironically right now only the British have an actual inkling of the existence of the "New Furies".. the girls trained by the Crimson Baroness of Berlin and the new Hands of the German Kaiserine....... should be amusing when Finley gets the clue that the damn German Bitch has now several girls trained to act as hers and the Kaiserine's hands.....
 
You know... the say that the only difference between a group of the junior members of the Order of Luise and a competent unit of elite light infantry is the hardware.
 
Not so much hardware as it's plumbing

I wasn't talking about the plumbing. It's more about exchanging sunhats for something with a bit more protection value and putting the fine china back into the cupboard and taking out the old cantine.
 
I wasn't talking about the plumbing. It's more about exchanging sunhats for something with a bit more protection value and putting the fine china back into the cupboard and taking out the old cantine.

And putting on the armored bustiers.
 
Part 69, Chapter 1002
Chapter One Thousand Two


4th March 1953

North Sea

The last few months in Scotland and on the North Sea had been fun, Carter though to himself with a bit of sarcasm, but it was becoming increasingly clear that wherever the SMS Bremen had gone it was doing it very quietly. A few days earlier the ONI had sent a memo suggesting that the Bremen must have headed back to port after it had broken contact with the USS Kendrick and Kaiserliche Marine had been laughing their heads off at the US British Navy ships that were attempting to locate the Bremen by slowly crisscrossing the North Sea during the wintertime and were getting tossed around. After the storm that had flooded the Netherlands the Brits had enough, they were tired of playing games with the Germans.

Captain Evans had been a more stubborn, besides that, having the Kendrick off the Frisian Islands in international waters gathering signal intelligence was considered valuable. Mostly that had come as watching German sitcoms and news reports broadcasting out of Hamburg, Bremen and Wilhelmshaven. Jimmy Carter had watched those news reports as the German Kaiser and his wife as they looked over storm damage in the Netherlands or doing something like dedicating a library or a hospital. They looked like prosperous middle-aged couple rather than what Carter figured royalty would look like. Frequently, they were pictured with their oldest children, Crown Prince Friedrich in particular. They seemed like they were hardly the sort of spoiled brats one might think royalty would be. Michael was involved with equestrianism, the press liked to picture him on his horse, Onnosel. They were also playing up that Princess Kristina had attempted to volunteer to help in the Netherlands.

When the German Kaiserin had conducted press conference that week there were two women flanking her, a Mistress of the Robes and a Mistress of the Keys. The later of the two was wearing a military uniform and she looked to be in her late twenties. That had caused some ribald comments until the Kendrick’s Intelligence Officer had pointed out that she had left two men bleeding on the sidewalk the one time the ONI had encountered her.

The Germans had made their annoyance at presence of the Kendrick known by sending out S-Boats. Fast and designed for these waters they had circled the Kendrick, never getting close enough to cause an incident but close enough to be annoying. The idea that they could go thirty knots or more in rough seas seemed unnatural to Carter. Finally, Captain Evans had enough and had turned the Kendrick for home. They were headed back to Scotland to take on fuel before heading back to Boston.

Carter was sitting in the control room listening to the hydrophone when he heard the SMS Bremen. He had been listening to the recordings of the Bremen for weeks, so he recognized her instantly. If she was here, then that meant that she was headed for either the entrance to the Wilhelm Canal or the Jade Bight. He picked up the phone and called up to the bridge. If they could get close enough to be there when the Bremen surfaced…

Then radar said that they had a surface contact out of the Jade, something extremely big. And it was right where Carter had been about to suggest the Kendrick to go. Leaving the Control Room and going to the rail Carter saw a grey ship growing larger by the second. Looking through his binoculars Carter saw the unmistakable triple tiers of antiaircraft guns and four turrets. As she drew closer Carter saw that she was the SMS Preussen. She could eat the Kendrick for breakfast without breaking a sweat. Then in the distance Carter saw a wake and the Bremen broke the surface. He couldn’t get a good look because the Preussen had interposed herself between the Kendrick and the Bremen. Looking up at the bridge Carter saw Captain Evans standing there coolly looking are the Preussen. They were still in International Waters and had every right to be here.

When Carter looked again he saw that the Bremen had extended her periscope and saw that a broom was being lashed to it. The traditional way that submariners displayed that they were coming back to port after a victorious patrol, a US Navy tradition that the Germans sometimes made fun of when they knew they were being watched. Carter had a feeling that he was not going to be happy when he learned what that was all about.

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As the SMS Bremen came into Jade Bight, Otto Kretschmer felt quite a bit of triumph. The Helmsman had gotten a bit impatient towards the end and they had gotten lucky that they had been able to relay a message from the listening post on Saint Helena giving Fleet Headquarters an idea of when they would be coming in. The American Destroyer had been waiting out in the North Sea for the last three months and the SMS Preussen had come out and placed her bulk between them and the Destroyer.

In Kretschmer’s opinion that shouldn’t have been necessary in the first place. He just hoped that the Helmsman would learn from this experience. As they pulled into the Jade, all nonessential crew were topside. There was a huge crowd and there was a band playing. He saw a globe banner and flashbulbs going off. Apparently, the secrecy surrounding the travels of the SMS Bremen was being slightly put aside for now. They had sailed into the record books and it was good that the crew was going to get their day in the sun.
 
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Holyknight wrote:
While there is the Kraut Scare, the general of the American Population and a good chunk of the common people in DC its ignorant still that the Germans ALSO have Nuclear Weapons. Truman and the higher ups on DC, and some parts of the Armed Forces's higher ups and officers are aware of it from years ago, but wisely have kept the fact out of sight and hearing.

The Germans have chemical and thermobaric weapons mounted on missiles, the moment the British detonated a nuclear weapon THOSE obviously can be mounted on a missile. Whether the Germans have them or not both the public and media will assume they do and it would do no good for the administration to deny it. (In fact in the long run it would be very harmful) If the Truman administration tries to play the possibility down they will lose credibility to the point where Truman may face impeachment, at any rate even (as it seems) he was frantically working on an atomic weapon he will be seen as ‘failing’ the American people because we have no way to deliver any such weapon to any target unless they reveal some advanced secret project but I doubt there’s anything credible in the pipeline at this point. (Rolling out anything like the B-36 will make them laughing stocks and the military will know this already having seen German air power up close in Mexico. I admit it’d be cute to see them roll out a working B-49 Flying Wing but truth be told it’s really not much better despite some stealth characteristics)

The only ‘hope’ here is that in parallel with the weapons project they were moving ahead with a missile project that could carry the early bombs and unfortunately that’s probably unlikely. Though again due to butterflies it’s unlikely that people like Von Karman came to the states, (though running a Guggenheim foundation section/chair is still pretty prestigious and pays well) so the chances that someone like Robert Goddard is tapped instead is much higher. And without all those “‘foreigners’ out to steal his patents” he’s likely to push forward aggressively with his research. He was also just as much a nurturing mentor so it is likely that he and Jack Parsons hit it off as well and THAT could cause solid propellant research to really take off. (Goddard’s know for liquid propellant but he was as interested in solid since it offered easier construction and operations)

My ‘gut’ tells me though the US will not have anything though. Maybe a jet powered B-36 (B-60) which is going to be ineffective against anyone else’s ‘modern’ air defenses or a set of subsonic or barely supersonic ‘cruise-missiles’ but nothing that can credibly be a ‘deterrent’ to any German or British aggression.

The question is what type in quantity? Obviously they went with the “gun-type” weapon first but even without Oppenheimer there were plenty of others who had done the math on the implosion type enough to know it should have worked. But getting one will take time and effort and while less efficient with their nuclear material the gun-type bombs are easy to build in quantity and there are pretty straight-forwards methods of ‘boosting’ their yield so it would make sense the early weapons will mostly be of that type. The ‘funny’ thing is given the problems the US had with the implosion type it’s not unlikely that while actual construction stopped testing of sub-scale components and assemblies probably still occurred for the gun-type since it was such a straight-forward and know to work design. Oddly enough, (and this happened OTL as well) it is quite possible the weapons the US deploys in numbers are actually on average less powerful than the German or British designs but also much lighter and more compact making them easier to deploy.

In any event the weapon is useless without a delivery system and the way things have been going the US doesn’t have anything in the pipeline and the media (his opponents will make sure of this) will quickly pound this point home with the public.

While the weapons portion of the Manhattan Project was shut down it is highly unlikely the nuclear power program was so it’s likely there are more than a few ‘reactors’ around up and running in the US already and I’m rather surprised they haven’t deployed nuclear power navy ships yet as they are pretty obvious and the Germans have them while the British and French will have them in-construction.


Note there was NO way the Germans could have ‘sabotaged’ the nuclear power section of the project in such a way as to stop US research and development along those line short of trying to cause a meltdown which isn’t as easy as it might seem. (They could start a fire in the graphite reactor but the Hanford designs were different and in either case the ‘sabotage’ would be quite obvious) So it is likely the US has stockpiles of enriched uranium and some plutonium to draw on to build weapons. (Unlike OTL the removal of the plutonium and other ‘poisons’ from fuel rods is more economics than weapons requirements)

But beyond that since the nuclear power aspect is both proven, (you can’t make bombs unless you make working reactors first and they have to be WORKING reactors capable of producing power as well as materials) and shown to be effective there is no reason to limit research into them. Further since the US doesn’t get caught in the cycle of requiring massive amounts of plutonium, which can only be used in implosion bombs, then sticking with the pressurized water reactor makes less sense. So it’s possible the US has moved on to other types of reactors that are more aimed at commercial operations. It’s be neat if they had some thorium reactors but that’s probably too much to hope for.

Oh and PM while the OTL scientific community was quite split on US deployment of nuclear weapons once the Soviets were known to have them and early proposals for ‘limitation’ or ‘control’ were clearly not going to happen most including Oppenheimer came to conclude that parity was the only option. TTL it is obvious the US is behind and most will assume with Germany VERY far behind, (the community knows each other quite well) and will therefore offer to work on any US project to counter what will be seen as an aggressive, conflict driven, (look at all the ‘wars’ Germany has been in compared to the US) authoritarian state’s possession of such a super weapon. They probably won’t LIKE having to do so and would prefer a world without such weapons (because who trusts ANY government with that kind of power?) but that train has left the station already so it is what it is. Oppenheimer might stand aside, (the ‘security risk’ angle is more likely the main cause) but he’d be a main ‘voice’ in trying to get the world to NOT build nuclear weapons or find a way to get control under the LoN if possible. Now being behind already TTL, (like the USSR was OTL) means the US will be far less inclined to consider either option. Especially those higher up knowing that Germany has been actively hiding it’s weapons development program.

I’d actually argue that having Oppenheimer oppose development TTL makes little sense. He only became embittered when he was railroaded out of atomic research and then only became opposed to further development after the atomic arms race took off. Once the USSR had the bomb he was very vocal that either the world came together to figure out a way to control nuclear weapons OR the US would be justified in matching the other nuclear powers production by itself as the only way to deter atomic attack. That was the stance of most of the ‘scientific’ opposition through the mid-60s since it was clear no other nuclear power was going to limit itself then clearly the US could not do so. In this case there is no compelling reason to believe that any possible nuclear power is going to NOT develop such weapons and every reason to assume that the nation that has nuclear weapons is going to be able to dictate to any nation that does not have such weapons. Scientists working on the German weapons could ‘afford’ to oppose the research as they were aware of other possible research and knew Germany was in the lead. The US scientist have no such choice or illusion.

Something to also be aware of is that the “New Manhattan Project” will have access to the records and designs of the previous one and will quickly deduce the design WILL work. Beings we have already established it was modular and base on pre-manufactured components it is going to be VERY easy for the US to re-create a working design in a short time. The biggest delay is going to be rebuilding the manufacturing system but once that is done the US will be able to mass produce the weapons.

The down-side is since Teller was discredited by German sabotage but DID in fact help with a workable design it is likely any notes he left on “super-atomics” may draw US research down the wrong path since OTL his concepts were in fact totally wrong. On the other hand Stanislaw Ulam OTL came to the US for a job not fleeing Europe like most scientists so if he’s in the US and working on the project it may actually be easier for him to have his ‘breakthrough’.

Now one thing that comes to mind is that the majority of the ex-Soviet scientists that OTL worked on the Soviet atomic program are probably still in Russia and while they also are probably more concentrated on atomic power once the balloon goes up with the British atomic test I have no doubt the Czar will come up with weapons program as well. THEY were the ones who came up with a working weapons prototype of the H-bomb even though America detonated a research bomb first. (1 November 1952 for the American test bomb and August 1953 for the ‘boosted-hybrid’ fission-fusion bomb and November of 1956 for the first actual hydrogen bomb but both Soviet devices were ‘weapons’ size whereas the American device was not)

Now unless Germany is restricting other nations (somehow) from developing nuclear energy systems the cat is truly out of the bag at this point.

Randy
 
Still going very strong, and the single thing I look for first when I turn on my computer. Such a finely tuned assortment of action, adventure, family, and the big picture. This is the sort of thing Turtledove can only dream of writing.

Kat is a known quantity. Except for maybe the US anytime she is not in a known place intelligence apparatus around the world kick it in overdrive. She is a known player in the game and will have some people both in Germany and the home countries of the different units, IE Deuxieme Bureau, MI 5 6 and SIS, what ever the Russian are calling it and the Japanese are calling theirs, having people do nothing but watch her in Germany and reporting back if she goes missing. I would not be surprised if there isn't a whole group of people who's single job is to watch he leave and where she goes everyday.

Perhaps it's time for someone to think of the idea of body doubles for Kat. Once someone finds out that there are doubles, the paranoia will increase exponentially...
 
Perhaps it's time for someone to think of the idea of body doubles for Kat. Once someone finds out that there are doubles, the paranoia will increase exponentially...

Hmmm, rumors of a "Kat" production system and ICBM technology.. Yep that would ensure no one cares about something as 'piddly' as an atomic bomb THAT is for sure :)

Randy
 
As the SMS Bremen came into Jade Bight, Otto Kretschmer felt quite a bit of triumph. The Helmsman had gotten a bit impatient towards the end and they had gotten lucky that they had been able to relay a message from the listening post on Saint Helena giving Fleet Headquarters an idea of when they would be coming in. The American Destroyer had been waiting out in the North Sea for the last three months and the SMS Preussen had come out and placed her bulk between them and the Destroyer.

In Kretschmer’s opinion that shouldn’t have been necessary in the first place. He just hoped that the Helmsman would learn from this experience. As they pulled into the Jade, all nonessential crew were topside. There was a huge crowd and there was a band playing. He saw a globe banner and flashbulbs going off. Apparently, the secrecy surrounding the travels of the SMS Bremen was being slightly put aside for now. They had sailed into the record books and it was good that the crew was going to get their day in the sun.

. . . Aaand a WEEK later, Heads are going to positively ROLL by the droves in Both Whitehall and Washington DC, as due to this trip of the Bremen being a "Peaceful One" they are going to publish the route that the Bremen took, alongside with the Oceanographic data for scientific Analysis....And in the process shoving their thumb in the eyes of the RN and the US Navy as they can see that the damned Krauts/Jerries practically passed by Pearl Harbour's door and NOBODY detected them....For not talk of nearby Australia, India, South Africa.....

....Short to say there will be a LOT of Sailors that are going to be VERY unhappy as they are shoved into Mandatory Anti Submarine Warfare classes both theoretical and practical until they can do it asleep....
 
. . . Aaand a WEEK later, Heads are going to positively ROLL by the droves in Both Whitehall and Washington DC, as due to this trip of the Bremen being a "Peaceful One" they are going to publish the route that the Bremen took, alongside with the Oceanographic data for scientific Analysis....And in the process shoving their thumb in the eyes of the RN and the US Navy as they can see that the damned Krauts/Jerries practically passed by Pearl Harbour's door and NOBODY detected them....For not talk of nearby Australia, India, South Africa.....

....Short to say there will be a LOT of Sailors that are going to be VERY unhappy as they are shoved into Mandatory Anti Submarine Warfare classes both theoretical and practical until they can do it asleep....

Eh, not so much as it's pretty clear they KNEW something about the Bremen or they wouldn't have been trying to catch it. "Peaceful" is going to be tough to sell once anyone gets a look at it since the 'purpose' is pretty obvious. Panic once people (the general public) notes every time the Bremen was "in-range" of a major city on that cruise if they DO release the course map. (Highly doubt they will though they may release pics of it surfaced at various areas. Aka I doubt they did the 'whole' trip submerged... Specifically they had to surface to put the broom on the periscope :) )

And arguably they weren't really trying as hard as I think we're thinking they were. Otherwise they would have been more coordinated AND there would have been more than a single US destroyer involved. And the tech on the destroyer wasn't all that advanced either. (I'll note again once it 'pinged' the decoy game was up and Bremen either went really, really deep, ran away or it had to sit there while the active sonar passed by which probably won't work. If it runs its noisy, if it sits still then it is likely 'spotted' by the active sonar. Not even modern subs can hide from an active sonar. Why don't they do it more often then? Because sending out an active ping shows exactly where YOU are as well which isn't as clear as you'd think from passive systems. And why didn't they ping them the second time? Preussen or no they can get a general read of the Bremen with active pinging and in international waters while it's impolite its not a direct hostile act.)

Two points to PM:
And it was right where Carter had been about to order the Kendrick to go.

Oh hell no he wasn't :) He would 'suggest' or 'advise' but it's a LONG walk back to the States if he "orders" the ship to do something when the Captain is on the bridge ;)

I will also point out this took to long and it is unlikely they don't have all hands alert was before the Preussen comes on scene so even WITH the Preussen interposing itself:
When Carter looked again he saw that the Bremen had extended her periscope and a broom was lashed to it.

Then they will have photographers, movie cameras and dozens of expert "Mark 1 eyeballs" on target enough to get a very clear picture of what the Bremen looks like. While a ok 'scene' for the story it doesn't make sense that they'd even consider this is they were going for 'stealth' as they don't need to surface so far out nor during daylight.

Ok one MORE point on the above and following, and this one while again an ok scene has severe issues:
The traditional way that submariners displayed that they were coming back to port after a victorious patrol, a US Navy tradition that the Germans sometimes made fun of when they knew they were being watched.

Eh, no such 'tradition' in TTL's Navies. This was a OTL WWII submariner 'tradition' but more importantly (and the Germans would be aware of this) "clean sweep" is NOT what a "broom" on a mast means at all:
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Clean_sweep_(naval)

The Bremen's captain just announce his boat is for sale... I don't think that's what they were going for :)

Randy
 
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