The young girl sat in the bed with her son and daughter in her arms and a smirk on her face.
She had won the battle
She had won the battle
hmmmm 🤔 you’ve got me thinkingAt least Katherine won't be beheaded. Will Edward die in 1553 and Katherine's son become king?
henryAt least Katherine won't be beheaded. Will Edward die in 1553 and Katherine's son become king?
The children are born in 1541, right? Henry Harold will be 12 years old when his older brother diedProbably
henry
Yep 1st may 1541 hence mays nameThe children are born in 1541, right? Henry Harold will be 12 years old when his older brother died
They need to use punctuation more often, and the writing style sounds too childish for my taste. It's still a good timeline though.Okay, it is a good start, but the formatting is a little all over the place. Do you happen have Grammarly, it can help your editing? Also I don't think a royal English family would use Jacob as a name. Thomas is more likely or Charles.
No I don’t have grammarly I might try it. Does it cost money?Okay, it is a good start, but the formatting is a little all over the place. Do you happen have Grammarly, it can help your editing? Also I don't think a royal English family would use Jacob as a name. Thomas is more likely or Charles.
yep I am still a kid I was figured out. 💀💀They need to use punctuation more often, and the writing style sounds too childish for my taste. It's still a good timeline though.
Or earlier because I want a Howard on the throne!At least Katherine won't be beheaded. Will Edward die in 1553 and Katherine's son become king?