No, everything else you suggested is good.It's effectively a British equivalent to the Brooklyn. It has one triple 6" turret less, but because of the fifth turrets restricted arcs of fire that's not much of a handicap in practice.
It was you who poo pooed my idea of bringing development of the 4.5" forward 5 years and suggested that I use the 5.1" instead. If it hadn't been for your suggestion the ALT Edinburgh would have been armed with twelve 4.5" in six Mk III UD mountings.
You don't agree with specifically. Aside from that, is there anything about the ALT Edinburgh that you disagree with generally?
I'm going back to having the Admiralty developing the 4.5" gun from 1930 with the resources used to develop the 5.1" gun and some of the extra money that is available ITTL.
I poo pooed that idea because the drivers that led to the 4.5" don't exist that early. And frankly, given a choice between the 4.5" and 4" I'll take the 4" there, too. At least the 5.1" has a clear performance advantage over the 4", unlike the 4.5", which is has so marginal and advantage it's not worth the extra weight and strain on the loaders.