An Alternate Trek

Change of episodes

Happy New Year
I'm changing some of the Bradford Episodes around. I'm not going to give a full list yet as I'm in the process of changing my mind about some of them.
Sugar and Spice and Shore Leave are definitely going and Charlie X may well get a reprieve (as it is a Roddenberry idea so would have been made despite my feelings about it). Episode 13 will be "It came upon a Midnight Clear" despite it being broadcast about Easter!
I'm also moving up the introduction of the Klingons as I wish to explore how they actually feel about the Humans, especially as Humans seem to be Klingons who act strangely(very strangely if you are a Klingon!).
 
Series 1
Episode 13 It came upon a Midnight Clear Broadcast April 1st 1967

On mission date 525.12, the Endeavour is surveying the RoiIII system. The star is a white dwarf formed after a supernova. Captain Decker is completing his personal log. He notes that Dr Noyce suffered a massive heart attack and that it was Dr Fynely’s swift action that saved his life.
Admiral Sergei Karentov (Guest star Alfred Burke) decided that he would replace Noyce in the short term to as he put it “Practice some proper medicine”. He brought with him Dr M’Beke (Johnny Sekka)a medical doctor from Durban to be Fynely’s second and the human face for the Medical Centre (Fynely had been recalled to Earth for a bereavement).

The Endeavour picks up a subspace signal from a long-dead world. Joseph Holmes, on duty at the Science station on the bridge, claims it is impossible that a civilization could have survived its star going supernova. However the planet was so far from the star when it exploded that it escaped the worst.

Upon landing on the now-dead planet, the explorers discover that the planet holds the last remains of a race which was destroyed when the supernova hit. Their civilization was quite advanced ( about the level of the late 20th century), with remnants of art and other pieces of their culture. Along with a computer record of their entire history comes evidence that they had had a thousand years of peace before their extinction. Spock requests that Holmes determine when the star went supernova. He calculates that the star exploded in about the year 4200 B.C.

To his dismay, however, Holmes, who not only follows the Hanovarian Way is also a committed presbyterian, realizes that it would have taken about 4200 years for the light from this explosion to reach Earth, in the Eastern Hemisphere. This star was the same star that shone down on Earth the day Jesus was born, "The Star of Bethlehem". In front of Dr. M'Beke, Holmes cries out to God, to question why it had to be these people who had to lose their lives, why it could not have been a star with no life around it.

Surprisingly it is Braun and Spock who attempt to comfort him by reading a poem found among the archives of the advanced culture. It says that no one should mourn for them, for they lived in peace and love and saw the beauty of the universe. It says to grieve for those who live in pain and those who never see the light of peace. Braun says that "whatever destiny was theirs, they fulfilled it. Their time had come, and in their passing, they passed their light on to another world". Spock states that a balance was struck, and “perhaps one day we too will light the way for people yet to come." Their words and this quiet artifact consoles and encourages Holmes.

PS Yes they did pay royalties to Arthur C Clarke for this one. Although mindful of the audience they did make the ending more upbeat.
PPS No this is NOT intended to be the April Fool edition
 
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Series 1
Episode 14 The Lost Broadcast April 8th 1967

Mission Date 531.6 the Endeavour is mapping the Lorenzo Cluster with special regards to its jump points to other systems. When the ship reaches one jump point, they receive a pre-recorded signal (guest star Bernard Bresslaw ) advertising "The Weapons Emporium", and invites the crew to the surface. Then the Endeavour receives a weak signal that says “Keep away it’s a trap!”

The ship edges closer to the planet Lorenzo IV and to the crew’s surprise they find a very badly damaged Klingon cruiser in orbit. There are no life signs on the ship but there are, what the computer identifies as, human life signs on the planet’s surface. Karentov admits that the computers are virtually never able to distinguish Klingons from Humans (apparently they can just about distinguish a Northern Norwegian from a Klingon from the equatorial regions of Kh’onnos).

A security team led by Stiles plus Dr M’Beke beam down to where the life signs appear to be concentrated. They beam down into the middle of a firefight. Several Klingons are fighting small very fast moving probes which are appearing to be unaffected by the Klingon weapons. Stiles and his security team soon dispose of the probes. However the leader of the Klingons Quos (guest star Earl Cameron) tells M’Beke that the probes adapt to whatever is used against them. A force field, meanwhile, has been formed around the planet preventing the Endeavour from beaming up the security team and the Klingon survivors.

The survivors take refuge in a deep cave, however Stiles is injured by a probe. Stiles wryly comments to M’Beke that the only member of the Endeavour team to whom the Klingons will speak is M’Beke! Later on, after making Stiles comfortable M’Beke tackles Quos about this. Quos is reluctant but finally admits that it is because at least M’Beke looks like a Klingon unlike the whiteskins. He admits that while with their heads, Klingons know that all humans are genetically Klingon, with their hearts they cannot accept this applies to the whiteskins as well. This is even though they accept the whiteskins are warriors under the Code of kh’Less.

Klingons refer to all Humans as “The Lost”, as they have lost everything from their Klingon Heritage as well as being physically lost from the Empire. Meanwhile the Endeavour is attacked by a cloaked sentry probe, Decker finally manages to destroy it with a torpedo.

On the planet, Stiles whilst hobbling on a makeshift crutch discovers a computer terminal. He activates it, causing a screen to come on and the person whom they saw in the earlier signal explains that they are witnessing a demonstration of the "X-kaliba", a system of intelligent weapons, which are able to upgrade in response to any enemy threat.

Quos says that is what must have destroyed the Klingon Cruiser, they used their weapons so much that the probes adapted and destroyed their ship, leaving only the landing party alive. Quos attempts to negotiate with the computer, eventually agreeing to buy the weapons system. Satisfied the computer system shuts down. As the force field also disappears the Endeavour beams up all the survivors.
 
Questions

1. Did NET premier anything that had been popular in the UK, Canada or Australia before the other US networks?
2. I suspect that even though Roddenberry has brought at least the idea for "The Omega Glory" with him to the UK, there is no way that ITC are going to produce it in a form that he will accept.
3.Thinking ahead to series 2 (I know I haven't finished series 1 yet) anybody got any ideas as how to get David Gerrold to submit his Tribbles story to a British company?(and get Jerome Bixby to pitch Mirror Mirror to ITC as well?)
 
3.Thinking ahead to series 2 (I know I haven't finished series 1 yet) anybody got any ideas as how to get David Gerrold to submit his Tribbles story to a British company?(and get Jerome Bixby to pitch Mirror Mirror to ITC as well?)

I'm not sure they can do that. Instead, you may be able to get contemporary British scriptwriters to submit similar scripts. For example, the scriptwriters of the IOTL Avengers episodes "Man-Eater of Surrey Green" "Two's a Crowd" or "The Girl from AUNTIE" may possibly submit scripts similar to "Tribbles" or "Mirror, Mirror". Look through the episodes of IOTL "Dr Who", "Avengers" and "Captain Scarlet" episodes, see if there are similar ones to your ITTL "Tribbles" or "Mirror, Mirror", and get them to submit them ITTL.
 
Series 1
Episode 15 Brothers Broadcast April 15th 1967

Mission date 541.2, the Endeavour is docked at CSB Constitution dropping off Admiral Karentov and picking up Richard Fynely who is now acting CMO of the Endeavour. Whilst at the base a distress signal is received from a survey team on Jenkins III. Someone who appears to be the survey commander (guest star Donald Sutherland) is gabbling what can only be complete rubbish about the survey’s shuttle pod crew disappearing and the pilot committing suicide after crash-landing the shuttle pod near the base camp and then his body disappearing. Decker immediately volunteers to investigate. Braun inquires why when this is a Navy matter and Decker replies that the survey commander is his brother William Decker and that although they are estranged and haven’t spoken for at least 5 years his brother is not given to wild flights of fancy.

The Endeavour makes the jumps to get to the Jenkins system. Once there McKenzie manages to establish communications with the survey team. William Decker is very surprised to see Matthew Decker and also not that happy. The antipathy between them is plain for all to see. However William Decker does explain what has happened and what is happening. A crew took the shuttle pod to explore a remote area of the ice bound Northern Polar continent, which was green and verdant due to a proliferation of hot springs. All seemed to be well until the shuttle pod was on final approach when over the com they heard screams of “push it out” and phaser fire. The shuttle pod banked away and they couldn’t contact it.

Eventually it approached the landing field but crash-landed. As they approached the shuttle pod they heard a phaser fire again and they found the pilot dead slumped over the controls. There was no sign of the other 3 members of the shuttle pod’s crew. They put the cargo and the pilot in a warehouse. During the night there were crashing noises from the warehouse. When they went to investigate the warehouse had been wrecked, although nothing was missing except the pilot’s body. It was then that William Decker had contacted CSB Constitution as the nearest Commonwealth authority.

The next night two of the men posted as security guards had disappeared and their bodies could not be found although some of the packed trees from the polar continent appeared to be damaged as there were some broken branches. Decker beams down with Spock, Stein and a security team led by Lynch. Spock orders that the Endeavour keeps its sensors locked on the warehouse and he carefully scans the ground looking for clues. Stein suddenly gives an exclamation and tries to grab something on the ground. He swears volubly and wrings his hand. It appears that a strip of flesh has been torn from it. He says something about a moving stick with leaves but seems to be delirious so is beamed back to the Endeavour.

Holmes contacts Spock to say that there seem to be many more life signs than can be accounted for by the survey team and crew from the Endeavour. Meanwhile the professional relationship that the brothers were trying to maintain breaks down and they have a fight. Matthew finally floors William and turns his back. William suddenly screams. He is being attacked by lots of small twig like creatures, which have erupted from the ground. Matt Decker is also attacked, as it seems are other people who are outside. Phasers do have an effect and with difficulty the little twig like creatures are driven off. The survey team and Endeavour crew retreat into the main office block but Fynely is not willing to have them beamed on board unless they can guarantee that there are no creatures with them. As the creatures begin to break through the floor of the office Scott on the Endeavour has an idea. He asks them all to stand on the furniture. He then sets the transporter to start beaming from 2 feet above the ground. However on Fynely’s insistence he beams them into a cargo bay.

It is as well that he does as two of the creatures get beamed up with them. They are both phasered and put in containment vessels for later study. After 2 fraught hours Fynely lets them out of the cargo bay. Preliminary investigation of the creatures shows that they are mainly vegetable in character but are extremely carnivorous. However human flesh is toxic to them but that humans would be dead before the creatures would die. Fynely suggests that the planet is put under quarantine until further notice. Further study of the specimens should give ideas as to where they came from and how to contain them.

The Endeavour takes the survey team back to CSB Constitution and the Decker brothers part promising to keep in touch with each other, albeit with bad grace.
 
Series 1
Episode 16 The Forgotten Broadcast April 22nd 1967

On mission date 612.2, the Endeavour, arrives in the Adams system. They discover a malfunctioning black box from the CSS Pelican, which had disappeared in the mid 22nd century. Unable to get any useful information from the black box, they retrace the Pelican’s course to the third planet. Lieutenant Holmes is the only member of the landing party who beams up from the planet's surface, and exhibits strange behavior.

Braun beams down with another party to investigate. They find the inhabitants living in an apparently pre-industrial culture, with little or no individual expression or creativity. The entire culture is ruled over by hooded “Monks”, controlled by a reclusive leader known as “The Abbot” (special guest star Patrick Wymark). The landing party has arrived at the start of "Festival", a period of bacchanalian behaviour, which apparently is the only time that “The Abbott” does not exercise control over the populace.

Braun’s landing party seeks shelter from the mob at a boarding house owned by Reginald (Guest star Harry Towb), A friend of Reginald's suspects that the visitors are "not of The Book" (the whole of society), and summons Monks. The Monks kill Reginald's friend, Thomas (John Barron), for resisting the "will of The Abbot". When the landing party refuses to do as the Monks say, the Monks become immobile and Reginald leads the Enterprise landing team to a hiding place.

Reginald reveals that The Abbot "pulled the Pelicans down from the skies" and that his grandparents were Pelicans. Contacting the Endeavour, Braun learns that heat beams from the planet are attacking the Endeavour, which must use all its power for its shields. Its orbit is deteriorating and it will crash in 12 hours unless the beams are turned off.

A projection of The Abbot is projected into the hiding place, and Braun and her team are rendered unconscious by ultrasonic waves and captured. The landing party is imprisoned in a dungeon, and Lynch is "absorbed into The Book" and placed under The Abbot's mental control. Braun is taken to a chamber full of high technology, where she is to be "absorbed". But Jane (Joan Hickson), one of the Monks of The Abbot who is immune to The Abbot's control, rescues her and Heather (guest star Peter Thornton). Returning to the dungeon, Reginald and Jane tell how The Abbot saved their society from war and anarchy 6,000 years ago and reduced the planet's technology to a simpler level. Also the only inhabitants of the planet who can resist The Abbot to any degree are descended from crew of the Pelican.

Lynch summons the Monks to "absorb" Braun and Heather, who subdue them and done their robes. Jane takes Braun and Heather to the Hall of Audiences, where priests commune with The Abbot. A projection of The Abbot appears and threatens Braun, Heather, and all others who saw the landing party with death. Braun and Heather use their phasers to blast through the wall and expose the truth: the reclusive Abbot is actually a computer. The computer neutralizes their phasers. Heather argues with the machine, telling it that it has destroyed the creativity of the people. The computer shuts down and the heat beams stop, and the Endeavour is saved.

Decker agrees to contact the Commonwealth to send advisors help the civilization advance, free of The Abbot's dominance and the Endeavour leaves. However when the Endeavour reaches the jump point a force field springs into existence around the planet and the ship is informed that anything else coming through the jump point will be instantly destroyed. An Asteroid near the Endeavour is vaporised by a discharge from the planet. The message concludes with the comment that The Abbot hopes that this shows that it is able to carry out its threat if necessary and that the Commonwealth will no longer be forgotten. Decker orders the Endeavour to leave the system.
 
Series 1
Episode 17 Charlie's Law Broadcast April 29th 1967

On mission date 643.6, the Endeavour takes charge of Charlie Brown (guest star Dennis Waterman), a teenage boy from a small Klingon cargo vessel called the Prakciss. As a three-year-old child, he was the sole survivor of a transport ship that crashed on the planet Fazus on the edges of Klingon space. For 14 years Charlie grew up, stranded in the wreckage, and apparently only learned how to talk from the ship's computer systems that somehow remained intact.

The boy is to be transported to his nearest living relatives on Wessex, a Commonwealth world settled by Humans, and the crew of the Prakciss speak nothing but praises about Charlie. They seem, however, more than pleased to see the boy removed from their ship as soon as possible and after the transfer (during which Charlie gives an ominous glare), they bid the Endeavour an unusually hasty goodbye and depart. This is put down to them being Klingons and not really knowing how to deal with a human teenager. Charlie undergoes a cursory medical examination by Dr. M’Beke and Charlie tells the doctor that the crew of the Prakciss did not like him very much, and that all he wants is for people to like him.

Charlie quickly becomes obnoxious, and shows signs that he possesses strange powers. First, he develops an infatuation with Yeoman Amy Johnson (Gabrielle Drake), who is evidently the first human female he has ever seen and also comes from Wessex like his relatives. He presents her with a bottle of perfume, which turns out to be her favorite scent, even though there is none of it in the ship's stores. Having observed a man in engineering seal an agreement to go to the recreation room with a friendly slap on the rear, he does the same to Johnson, to which she of course objects.

Charlie meets Johnson and Rand later in a recreation room, where Spock (whom Charlie later calls "Mr. Ears") plays a Vulcanian Lyre, and Lt. D’Alembert sings. Charlie is annoyed with being a subject in D’Alembert's performance as well as Johnson paying more attention to the song than to him, so he causes D’Alembert to abruptly (but temporarily) lose her voice.

As the Endeavour reaches the jump point, it receives a message from the Prakciss, but the message gets cut off before it can be finished. Charlie makes the curious and sinister comment, "It wasn't very well constructed." But shortly after, Spock determines that the Prakciss has blown up. Progressively more bizarre events begin to take place aboard the Endeavour. For example, a cook reports that the synthetic meatloaf in the kitchen has been transformed into real sheep.

Back in the recreation room, Decker defeats Holmes at chess, beating Holmes' mastery of the game with his own quirky move. Charlie is intrigued with the game and tries to duplicate the same feat but loses quickly. Decker and Holmes leave the room, but an angered Charlie stays behind and causes the white chess pieces to melt, revealing he has both a bad temper and powerful telekinetic abilities.

Later, Decker tries his best to interest Charlie with something other than following Johnson everywhere, and attempts to teach the young man how to play Squash. Decker's training partner Crewman Cook (Robert Arnold), laughs at Charlie’s attempts, and Charlie makes him "go away"; Cook vanishes before Decker's eyes. Shocked by what he has witnessed, Decker calls for security guards to escort young Charlie to his quarters, but Charlie says he will not let them hurt him; he then makes their phasers disappear. Charlie admits he used his powers to destroy the Prakciss, but says the ship would have blown up on its own sooner or later, and regardless, he insists, "They weren't nice to me."

Charlie takes control of the Endeavour. He forces Braun to recite Earth poetry, turns Rand into a cat, and chases down Johnson. When she resists his advances he gets angry and makes her disappear, saying, "She wasn't nice at all." Charlie tells everyone that he can make him or her all go away, anytime he wants to. Decker and Spock attempt to confine him in a detention cell, but to no avail. Charlie goes on a rampage, insisting “Be nice to Charlie, OR ELSE!” transforming or vanishing members of the crew who mock him or rebuff him.

Decker has resigned himself to setting the self destruct and laments that this is beginning to get to be a habit, finding people with great mental powers and trying to destroy the ship to stop them. Two glowing spheres appears on the bridge, saying that their race gave Charlie his powers to help him to survive on their world, but these powers render him too powerful and therefore dangerous to live on Wessex. The spheres are sorrowful over the loss of the Prakciss (which they could not save), but return Yeoman Johnson and repair the damage Charlie has done. They apologize to Decker and promise to take Charlie to live with them. Charlie begs Decker for forgiveness and pleads frantically with him to not let the aliens take him away. Decker does ask if the spheres could take Charlie’s powers away so that he could live amongst humans but they refuse saying that he now couldn’t live without them, as they have become an integral part of him. So Decker lets the spheres take Charlie away.
 
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Series 1
Episode 18 Mutual Destruction Broadcast May 6th 1967

On mission date 687.5 the Endeavour is surveying the Lenard system, which is unusual as it is supposed to have 2 asteroid belts, however, on arrival, the Endeavour finds that the system now has 3 asteroid belts! The new asteroid belt occupies the orbit of what had been tentatively identified as Lenard III, which a previous probe survey had identified as being inhabited with evidence of an early industrial civilization. On investigating further, Spock infers that it was not a natural disaster but was caused by a deliberate act by persons unknown. Especially since the Endeavour intercepts signals from the planet pleading with an attacker to stop, offering complete and unconditional surrender.
Then, suddenly they come under attack. A truly massive ship about twice the size of the Endeavour suddenly springs into existence and fires upon her, causing damage to the jump engines. Decker manages to evade the ship by hiding amongst the debris of the new asteroid belt. Scott informs Decker that the damage isn’t serious and that the jump engines can be repaired within a few hours. Decker tells Scott to make it much shorter than that.
During a briefing over this ship's capabilities, Stiles suggests that the Endeavour attacks the vessel before it can destroy them. Spock agrees with Stiles' suggestion, believing that the Aliens will not be open to negotiation given the intercepted signals and the evidence of the destroyed planet.

A cat-and-mouse game ensues, with each ship having its strengths and weaknesses. The Endeavour is faster and more manouverable, while the Alien ship has a cloaking device, has far more power available and an arsenal of immensely destructive plasma torpedoes, but their range is limited and firing them requires so much power that the ship must decloak temporarily.

O’Gorman manages to tap into the Alien ship’s communication signals but is not able to establish a visual link. He suggests that the Aliens may well be able to do the same. That they are able to intercept Endeavour’s internal communication systems, becomes apparent when the alien ship keeps anticipating Decker’s maneuvers. Decker is forced to giving his orders in French, in the hope that the Aliens will not be able to understand as quickly. Luckily this does turn out to be the case and the Endeavour is able to badly damage the Alien ship.

In the final act, the Aliens, almost beaten, with their cloaking device damaged and malfunctioning dump a nuclear weapon along with other debris in hope that the Endeavour will get near enough to the weapon to be destroyed. However, Decker suspects a trap and orders a point-blank phaser shot that detonates the bomb. The Endeavour is badly shaken by the blast; Decker decides to use this to his advantage, ordering operations to work at minimal power to exaggerate the apparent damage. When the Alien ship decloaks to launch a torpedo, Decker springs his trap. The Alien ship is badly damaged, life support is failing and their power is off line.

Decker hails the crippled vessel and at last communicates directly with his counterpart, offering to beam aboard the survivors. The Alien commander, who looks humanoid with a heavy brow ridge and intricately braided hair, beard and moustache, declines, saying that it is "not our way to accept such assistance from inferior species”. The commander then triggers his ship's self-destruct, preventing its crew and technology from falling into Decker's hands.

Postscript
This episode was heavily influenced by war films such as "Run Silent, Run Deep", "We Dive at Dawn" and "The Enemy Below". It was unusual in two respects,firstly the Endeavour took the role of the submarine and secondly there were a good 10 minutes where the actors spoke in French and subtitles appeared on the screen. This was what caused the comments in the Sunday Papers the next day. Subtitles were not at all common on ITV (nor on BBC1 although they had been seen on BBC2) except occasionally on the news. Critics didn't know whether to praise ITC or to condemn them. Certainly it never happened again on prime time television on ITV or BBC1, and was rare in this time slot on BBC2 and Channel4 (from the mid 80s)until the advent of the digital channels in the 2000s.
 
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Series 1
Episode 19 Old Wounds Broadcast May 13th 1967

On mission date 713.1 the Endeavour arrives at planet M-113 to check on archaeologist Professor Robert Simard and his wife Juliette. Decker, Dr M’Beke, Lieutenant D’Alembert and CPO Webb (John Woodvine) beam down. Juliette (guest star Dinah Sheridan) arrives and seems taken aback at D’Alembert’s obvious hostility towards her. Decker takes D’Alembert outside to have a word and to remind her that she should be polite as Juliette Simard is also a renowned archaeologist. Decker goes back inside giving D’Alembert time to calm down.

Professor Simard (guest star Cyril Cusack) arrives and doesn't appear happy to see them, telling them that he and his wife don't need checking on, but that they do need more salt tablets to help them cope with the planet's hot, dry climate. D’Alembert then reenters the hut and Simard looks totally stunned as D’Alembert greets him with “Bonjour Papa”. It is revealed that Simard is D’Alembert’s father but that he had left her and her mother for Juliette ten years before. He had not been in touch with either of them for the past 3 years. Meanwhile Juliette has gone outside.Then they hear a scream from outside. They go out to find Webb, dead, with red ring-like mottling on his face. There's a plant root in his mouth and Juliette comes up, saying she saw Webb taste the plant and she couldn't stop him. Decker is skeptical that Webb would taste an unknown plant as he has twenty years service in both the Navy and the Fleet. Decker has Webb’s body beamed up to the ship.

Stein analyzes the plant, and confirms records showing it's poisonous, but skin mottling is not a usual symptom. M’Beke conducts the initial exam, but can't find any cause of death — poisoning or otherwise. Decker decides to remain to investigate Webb's death. M’Beke and Stein determine that Webb had every bit of salt drained from his body, which caused his death. Decker beams back down to the planet with M’Beke and two crewmen, Jeff and Martin (Mike Pratt and Kenneth Cope). They spread out to search, but Simard slips away and calls out to Juliette, saying he has salt. Decker and M’Beke find Jeff's body; unaware that Juliette is nearby over Martin's corpse. Both the bodies have the same red rings on their faces. She pauses and then changes her shape, turning into a duplicate of Martin. He meets with Decker and M’Beke and they beam back up to the ship to conduct a search from orbit.

"Martin" roams the halls and runs into Yeoman Rand, who is taking a food tray to Lt.Holmes in the botanical lab. "Martin" is attracted to the salt and follows her in, but the plants react badly to him. He leaves and runs into Lt. McKenzie, taking the hypnotizing form of a crewman from her memories in preparation for an attack. McKenzie is summoned to the bridge over the intercom. That and Rand and Holme's arrival break the trance.

On M-113, Decker and Spock find Martin's body and realize an imposter is on board. They find Simard, who tries to frighten them off with phaser fire. They flank and then stun him, and the dazed Simard says that his real wife died a year ago, killed by the creature, which still appears to him as Juliette out of true affection. Decker informs the ship of the creature's intrusion: "It's definite Number One, the intruder can assume any shape — crewman, you, myself, anyone, do you understand?" Braun acknowledges. As they're about to transport to the Endeavour, a frustrated Decker tells the Professor, "Your creature is killing my people!"

With Simard, Decker calls a meeting. M’Beke and Spock join them. Meanwhile Stiles finds another two dead crewmen with the mottling on their faces. Decker wants to eliminate the predator and insists that Simard help identify it. Simard refuses and Decker puts him in the brig. Taking the form of Simard, the creature goes to D’Alembert’s's quarters and asks her for help. D’Alembert sounds the alarm but the creature stuns her and begins to feed. Decker arrives with a phaser and a handful of salt and tries to entice the creature into attacking. “Simard” lunges for the salt and succeeds in knocking Decker’s phaser out of his hand, Luckily it is distracted by the salt and Spock manages to stun it before it turns on Decker and D’Alembert.

The creature is beamed back to the planet and the Endeavour leaves.
 
Series 1
Episode 20 Organia Broadcast May 20th 1967

On mission date 754.8, the Endeavour receives a signal from Fleet headquarters diverting it from its current mapping mission to another set of coordinates. On being asked why Admiral Bourne (Nigel Green) just says that it will all be explained when they get to their destination! Decker orders the jump and the Endeavour arrives in a system with 8 planets with the third one in the normal zone for habitable planets. Upon arrival at the planet they are hailed from the surface and Quos (Earl Cameron) speaks to them and asks if Spock, M’Beke and it appears grudgingly, Decker and Stiles will join him on the surface of the planet.

On beaming down they are met by Quos and his second in command Quohr (special guest star Gordon Heath). Quos welcomes them and introduces them to Quohr who has difficulty looking Decker or Stiles in the face although he will talk to them. When asked why he has asked the Endeavour to come Quos smiles and says because they have proven themselves as worthy of trust (see previous episode “The Lost”) and ask them to follow him.

To their surprise Quos leads them over a hill and into a village, which appears to be populated by humans! These humans look much like Earth Caucasians. Quohr comments on this to M’beke and says that is why the Klingon Ruling Council finally agreed to let Quos call in advice from the Commonwealth. “They are even less martial than you humans” Quohr exclaims. Quos agrees with Quohr, and adds “Your people put up a fight when we occupied your colonies in the War, These people do nothing! They smile at us, do as we ask and just get on with their daily life. We might as well not be here!”

M’Beke scans the villagers and notes that they just come out as normal humans and if dressed appropriately would pass unnoticed on any Human world of the Commonwealth. Perplexed Decker asks Quos what he would like the Endeavour crew to do. Quos says that they would really like any input that they could give. The Organians, to use their word for themselves, are even more like Humans than Humans! Quos then adds that they appear and act much like the image that the average Klingon has of Humans. Looking shamefaced he says that the average Klingon considers whiteskin humans to be placid peacemakers albeit ones with honour. They still think that the earth warriors have dark skins like M’Beke.

Spock asks how that can be when most of the crews lost in the war were, to use the Klingon phrase, whiteskins. Quohr replies that the High Command of the Fleet and the Ruling Council know differently, however it is due to disinformation put out by the Ruling Council that the average Klingon thinks that way.

Stiles meanwhile has wandered around the village and talked to some of the Villagers. “They think that they have always lived here”, he reports to Decker, ”but they have no creation myth or legends”. Decker thinks long and hard and asks Quos if the Klingons would let the Commonwealth send in specialists to investigate. “ It looks like there are more “Lost” than either of us think” he says and then tells Quos about the incident on Adams III.

Just then Braun contacts Decker and informs him that a ship like the one they fought in the Lenard system has come through the jump point. Quos and Quohr ask them to describe the ship and snarl “Rhihannaun” on hearing the description. Quos tells them that they were a little lucky in defeating the previous ship but that that did not detract from the honour in doing so. Then Braun announces that two more have come through the jump point. Decker asks Quos where his ship is and is told it is not due back for a week.

Decker sighs and says that if he had wanted to fight this much he would have joined the Navy! However given what he had seen the “Rhihannaun” do to another planet he was not going to just run away and leave the defenceless Organians to their tender mercies. Quos and Quohr both state that this is honourable and that again this shows that the Humans are worthy of being treated under the code. They ask to beam aboard with Decker to share the honour of defending the planet.

As the Rhihannaun ships converge on the planet. Scotty informs Decker that they can take out the Rhihannaun ships if they self-destruct in between them. Decker groans “Not again”. Then the Organians then reveal their true nature: They are not peaceful humans, but are highly advanced incorporeal beings. They instantly incapacitate the Rhihannaun ships and send them elsewhere. They tell the Endeavour and the Klingons that the Rhihannaun will not threaten Organia ever again but that they will meet them in the future. They also say that they are very pleased that their children have found each other again and that they are getting to know each other better. However the Organians also say that this system is off limits for both the Klingons and the Commonwealth until the Organians decide otherwise, possibly in a few thousand years.
 
Series 1
Episode 21 To Thine Ownself Broadcast May 27th 1967

On mission date 817.6, the Endeavour has stopped at CSB Franklin to replenish some supplies and rotate some crew. At the base Decker is surprised to be greeted by his brother William (Donald Sutherland) who is awaiting being posted to a new survey team after the incident on Jenkins III (episode Brothers) and is filling in his time doing administration for the Survey Office on the base.

William reveals to Decker that he has suspicions that Andrew Hathaway (guest star Richard Hurndall), the manager of an acting troupe currently on the base, is, in fact “Butcher Cumberland” , the former governor of the Earth colony of Alba who was responsible for the massacre of over 4000 people—including members of their family—20 years before.

At first, Decker is unwilling to believe William accusations. He states he is satisfied with the official version of history that Cumberland died in the aftermath of a battle between his loyalists and relief forces from the Commonwealth and that a burnt body discovered in the wreckage was that of Cumberland. He begins to doubt those convictions when William is found very badly injured, apparently left for dead, the next day under mysterious circumstances.

Decker contacts the captain of the transport ship that is to pick up the acting troupe, and convinces him to miss the pick up, effectively stranding the troupe. He then persuades Hathaway's daughter, Ann (guest star Anouska Hempel), into putting on a special performance for the crew of the Endeavour.

Decker's actions arouse First Officer Braun’s suspicions as Decker has never shown the slightest interest in any plays before let alone Shakespearean ones!. After doing some investigation on the ship's computer, she discovers that former Governor Cumberland had ordered the executions of more than half Alba’s population after the food supply was all but destroyed by a fungus. He also uncovers evidence that Cumberland applied his own ideas when he chose who lived or died. Furthermore, the vital resupply ships that could have saved the whole colony arrived much sooner than Cumberland had anticipated, rendering all the executions unnecessary.

The computer research also reveals that there are no records of Hathaway's existence prior to Cumberland's death; that there were twelve known people left after the massacres who could identify Cumberland, were he still alive; that, in the intervening years, seven of these had died, all under mysterious circumstances; that in each case of the deaths of the former witnesses, Cumberland's acting troupe has been somewhere nearby; and that two of the surviving witnesses were the Decker brothers.

Braun and Spock confront Decker with Braun's evidence and Braun's concern that another assassination attempts will be made on William Decker and one on the Captain. Decker confesses that he is unsure if Hathaway is Cumberland and he is unwilling to make such an accusation without proof. However the base is almost damaged by a phaser on overload left in William's hospital room whilst Decker is visiting him.

Braun and Decker have another conversation which is overheard by the Hathaways, who investigate. Andrew Hathaway, who for twenty years has tried to forget his past and shield Ann from it, learns to his horror that his adoring daughter has (by her own admission) been on a crazed crusade to protect him by assassinating the witnesses.

Ann then snatches a phaser from a nearby security guard and takes aim at Decker. Desperate to prevent any more bloodshed in his name, Hathaway jumps into the line of fire as Ann tries to shoot Decker. Hathaway takes the shot, dying. Ann breaks down and goes to a mental hospital, hallucinating that her father is still alive.

PS Thank you to all of you who read this thread. 10 000+ views is more than I ever expected
 
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Series 1
Episode 22 The Computer War Broadcast June 5th 1967

On mission date 842.1, the Endeavour enters the Lovell system to carry out a detailed survey. They find that there are two planets inhabited by the same species and that there is a great deal of communication between them but apparently no space flight. Decker orders that they should approach the two planets albeit carefully as some of the communications traffic refers to casualties from attacks. However even as they get nearer to the two planets there is still no evidence of space flight between the two planets even though McKenzie is now picking up signals talking about space born missile attacks.

As they near Lovell II, the Endeavour receives a signal not to approach the planet under any circumstances. Decker orders the Endeavour towards Lovell III and receives a very similar signal from them as well. Decker decides to investigate and Braun leads a landing party, which includes Spock, and a security detail led by Lynch, to meet with Lovell III representatives. They are met by a representative, Mian (guest star John Abineri), who escorts them to the planetary council. Both Mian and the council leader, Hana (special Guest Star Honor Blackman), sternly remind Braun and the landing party that they should not have come because the city has just been hit by a fusion bomb which has killed half a million people. Curiously, everything in the city seems intact and there is no visible evidence or sensor readings of such an attack ever occurring.

The landing party soon discovers that the war is entirely simulated by computers, which launch attacks and counterattacks, then calculate damage and select the dead. Citizens reported as "killed" must submit themselves for termination, stepping inside a disintegration chamber. Hana informs Braun that the simulated attacks and following executions is the agreed system of war decided by both sides in a treaty with Lovell II. A conventional war was deemed too destructive to the environments and societies of both planets.
Lovell II was settled by refugees from Lovell III when their alliance had lost a planetary war. Braun comments that it appears that it would have been like Mars being settled by the Alliance after losing WWV. According to Hana the planets are called Nara (Lovell II) and Venda (Lovell III). According to the Vendans, the computers calculated the Endeavour was destroyed by a destroyer satellite during the last attack, and the entire ship's crew must be terminated within 24 hours. Although the landing team is exempted from execution, they are arrested and held hostage until all Endeavour crewmembers report to the planet for execution. Mian has also been reported as a casualty.

In an attempt to lure the Endeavour crew down, Hana simulates Braun's voice and requests that the crew to come down to celebrate the newly established diplomatic relations with the Vendan people. Decker does not believe it and decides to have the voice analyzed. When the computer determines it is a fake, he realizes the landing party, and by extension the entire ship, must be in danger.

When Decker refuses the request, Hana orders the Endeavour to be destroyed, but the ship's shields easily repel the attack. Meanwhile Lynch and the security detail organize a breakout and capture Hana. They then find Braun and Spock and together with Hana beam back to the Endeavour. Hana is escorted to the briefing room where she breaks down, crying that the planet is doomed; with the treaty broken, the people of Nara will fire their conventional weapons in retaliation. Nara had already complained about Venda’s failure to comply with the treaty. Retaliation is now imminent.

Decker asks Hana if she really thinks that Nara is willing to start a REAL war, suggesting that Venda is also terrified of actual war. Decker encourages Hana to call a ceasefire instead so that the two planets, with the Commonwealth's assistance, can learn to coexist in peace. Hana desperately agrees, and Decker contacts the apparently equally panicked leadership of Nara. The Endeavour stays in the system between the two planets maintaining the ceasefire until the CSS Iowa arrives with a Commonwealth diplomatic mission.
 
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JJohnson

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On the first page, the shot with William Hartnell. What is it with the way BBC filmed the first season or two that made it look so...different, in comparison to US TV at the same time? It looked and felt more like a soundstage/soap opera than contemporary US TV. The same with late 70s/80s British TV - it just feels off, like a soap opera, making it harder to suspend disbelief. Is it frame rate? Resolution? Ambient sound on a soundstage? And that shot with Hartnell also looks a lot fuzzier than shots of the B&W Star Trek "The Cage."
 
On the first page, the shot with William Hartnell. What is it with the way BBC filmed the first season or two that made it look so...different, in comparison to US TV at the same time? It looked and felt more like a soundstage/soap opera than contemporary US TV. The same with late 70s/80s British TV - it just feels off, like a soap opera, making it harder to suspend disbelief. Is it frame rate? Resolution? Ambient sound on a soundstage? And that shot with Hartnell also looks a lot fuzzier than shots of the B&W Star Trek "The Cage."

We were more bothered about the plots than how it looked:D:D:D
It is true of virtually everything produced by the Beeb and ITV up until the late 90s. Even the exemplary programmes such as "I,Claudius", "Tinker, Tailor,Soldier,Spy","Smiley's People" and the entire "Blackadder" quartet (to name a few) look slightly ropey compared to US productions of the same time period.
 
On the first page, the shot with William Hartnell. What is it with the way BBC filmed the first season or two that made it look so...different, in comparison to US TV at the same time? It looked and felt more like a soundstage/soap opera than contemporary US TV. The same with late 70s/80s British TV - it just feels off, like a soap opera, making it harder to suspend disbelief. Is it frame rate? Resolution? Ambient sound on a soundstage? And that shot with Hartnell also looks a lot fuzzier than shots of the B&W Star Trek "The Cage."

I'm not sure this is a hard and fast rule. It's not a Brit vs US thing (see the latter series of "The Avengers", say the Linda Thorson years). Similarly it's not a 70 vs 80s thing (see series 1 of ST:TNG, which is *way* fuzzy). In the specific case of Dr Who, the picture is complicated by the process of restoration from degraded originals. It could be a PAL vs NTSC thing, but that would act in the UK's favour, not against.

The answer may simply be a BBC thing: less money means less good sound (less overdubbing), worse lighting, worse resolution, worse and smaller sets, more use of video vs film. See http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/VideoInsideFilmOutside
 
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May just have been my memories of VHS tapes recorded from the telly rather than seeing the DVDs now released, as I do see what you mean.
 
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