Look on my works. A Kura timeline. (motm)
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I definitely want to see where this leads - there can never be enough good ancient timelines, and this is both very ancient and little-explored.
Interesting TL.
If I may be frank, speaking as a designer, I don't care for the Title Font. It makes it all look a little tabloid-ish. I suggest either using a more commonplace serif font like Times New Roman or Garamond and making it a little smaller. Or go nuts with an archaic looking font that evokes cuneiform. Also, standardize the sizing of your fonts from page to page -- especially for the body of text.
If I may be frank, speaking as a designer, I don't care for the Title Font. It makes it all look a little tabloid-ish.
I suggest either using a more commonplace serif font like Times New Roman or Garamond and making it a little smaller. Or go nuts with an archaic looking font that evokes cuneiform. Also, standardize the sizing of your fonts from page to page -- especially for the body of text.
Kaiphranos
Donor
Interesting--I like the format; it certainly makes the timeline posts easy to identify at a glance!
Hnau
Banned
Can you use justified font format instead of breaking words up with hyphens between lines? Also, where exactly are we looking at in that second map? I don't see anything there that I can use as a reference, even though I know the narrative says its the Kura valley. May I suggest using a north-south orientation for the map to help with that? And also maybe show the Caspian Sea for easier orientation? This looks like a fascinating timeline. Best of luck!
Am I right in assuming that Havik the 26th's reign occurs at the end of the fourth millennium, around the same time as the rise of Sumerian and Egyptian civilization in OTL? Will these civilizations also exist in TTL, and do you plan for contact between them and the Kura? Also, do the Kura have writing?
Are you planning to continue this? The subject matter is very unique, and Bronze Age timelines are few and far between here.
