But seriously, it's fantastic that you're rebooting the story. I've already read Dragon of Harrenhal, and if you could infuse the skill in writing you've already displayed in that story into Dragon Commander 2.0 it would just blow my mind.
Yeah, that's a problem we have in common. Great ideas, but when we look back at our old stories certain parts of our souls just shrivel up and die with embarrassment. I swear I've dropped close to 17 stories for this very reason. :/
No worries, it's already a fair sight better than most of my own projects. Besides, I'm not hoping for bright and cheery. I've already read the little snippet where Dragon Commander Robb is ISOT'd back to canon, so I'm well aware of what the future holds for the Starks in this story. :P
But if...