'Ai Orsa' – The Hunt, A Saka Novel

Pasyai IV
Paśyai
Chief's Hall, Kaotkvima, Dead of Winter, 135 BC

"WHY? WHY IS IT THAT NO ONE IN THIS FUCKING ARMY HAS WITNESSED THAT OUR ENEMIES HAVE GATHERED NEARLY A THOUSAND MEN AT OUR GATES?" shouted out Paśyai, slamming his fist on the arm-rest of his chair. The entire hall was silently watching their lord rage like a bear stung by a bee, snarling and stomping everywhere. Paśyai saw that some hung their head in shame like the old rider and his band of scouts who had told him this news. Others followed in suit like most of the Virgka clan. They simply defied this rage, ignoring it and some even smiling smug smiles to themselves. Their point had been proven, the foolish young son of a usurper had already brought the tribe to a ruin within a year. He had challenged forces greater than his own riders.

'They think this is a reason to oust me. I'll show them. I'll prove myself a great Murundao, I'll ride alongside the Hvakina by the time I'm dead, a sword of the Wild Hunt.'

Tears had began to well up in his eyes but he held them in as his blood began to boil. He was a man now, sixteen years of age, lord of the [1] Nahvonai Saka and the Kardaka. He would not act like a little boy who had his food stolen from him. 'Never.'

He straightened himself up, shaking his fist and loosening his posture. Weakness like this was becoming a problem for him ever since the night mares had started. For months they had come, just a few similar dreams of him being chased by nameless voices through vales and glades of the land. The air was thick and cold without respite, there was no one but him but these endless voices of hate and darkness.

He cleared his throat, sucking in all his fears along with the phlegm and spit. "I know what all the great warriors and the aijhysäta seated here think. They think that a son of an usurper has no right to rule let alone lead the tribe to war. I have led my people down nothing but dark plains according to the Wolves and the Vultures would prefer there be no war at all."

He paused for a second as even the wandering eyes fell on him. He had their curiosity before, now he would get their attention.

"So I say it here and now. My father was an usurper of the great warrior Härao."

As soon as this statement had been uttered the silence in the room went from being one of uneasy tension to being a silence so thick one could take an iron sword and cut right through it. The profoundness of this statement was immense, Paśyai noticed as he looked around the room. The expression on that of the Wolves was that of victory, the one on the band of rider's of shock, Pallana looked as if he could cry and all his śyaos were shocked.

"My lord, please don't denounce your father like so. He defeated Härao in fair ritual combat," explained Pallana as he spoke from the side of Paśyai. He then looked at the Wolves who sat on one side of the room looking at the slightly raised platform where Paśyai sat with Pallana and Śaoysta on either side. "These men only hated him because he was an orphan, like all Imyarao, who cast aside his destiny and fought. They also spite him because he refused to raid neighbouring tribes and the Yavanas.

Murundao, I beseech you. Calm down your wrath and march back to Huẉïśgrutka so we may live to fight another day. We may perhaps even be able to bolster our numbers with some more of other tribes joining us."

Paśyai's brow creased at this statement. He felt anger bubbling through him like a river of fire, as he clenched his fists. "Did he? And how did that work out for him? The Yavanas scorned him and cast our peoples out when he offered to fight alongside them. Our people were split in two by his indecisiveness. He made us suffer a long march south only to take us back into these mountains where our horses could not ride freely as they did on the open Steppe.

He refused to fight Yaojhi like a brave man. He was as weak and spineless as the Saka who followed that knave Hora to the dusty south. I shall not show such cowardice against the Paorśava, these-"

Paśyai did not get a chance to finish the sentence, a deft slap landing on his face. Śaoysta rubbed his hand and mumbled something, tucking it back in and folding his arms. Paśyai put his hand on his face and winced, having gone bright red there and leaving a searing pain like holding a bar of burning iron.

He looked at his śyao with shock. The pain he felt was nothing compared with the surprise.

"I was but a young boy when your father ordered the great wandering. The Hunt it was called. Because it was not just a normal wandering for new pastures, for this time around there were no pastures left to move to," he said looking into the empty distance. "The Yaojhi had burnt everything, the Maś Sakadai, Saka Raoka, Saka Kaśfao and many other tribes joined us Haomvarka on our voyage. Those who stayed were put to the sword."
He then looked at the young king and poke coldly, "Don't think you know about the steppe my lord. Your father sacrificed everything he had to make sure his people could actually eat and not starve. He offered refuge for people who were misguided by their chiefs.

Don't think you can state what bravery is. Your father defined it my lord."

The small heated hall sat in silence for a few moments, no one daring to make a move. Too many things had happened suddenly today. Cracks had began to show in the leadership of the tribe and army. And sudden realisation came to Paśyai that these cracks had always been here, he had just been too blind to realise this. 'Hatred runs too deep in my people, the Aijhöna [2] that surround me have never let me see how my people actually live. They have taught that the goat herders, craftsmen and loggers are weak. They have tricked me, fooled me into thinking only the hunters are strong. Maybe Pallana is right, I am but a chold who does not understand.'
He then thought about the words he had uttered before, tears welling up once again. 'Father? How could I insult beloved Papa? I'm sorry, Papa. I'm so sorry.'

Nothing was said as Paśyai got to his feet and took a deep breath. He then raised his arms and took his helmet from the side of his chair. He then placed his helmet on his head and unsheathed his word pointing hit up. The entire hall looked at him expectantly, trying to anticipate what he might do next.

"Saddle your horses. Fill your quivers and wipe your swords clean. WE RIDE FOR BATTLE!" he roared, his words echoing across the room and soon being followed by the frenzied and ecstatic howls of the Wolves as well as the wild cawing of the Vultures. He looked to Pallana who simply stared at the floor in despair, then moved his regal gaze to Śaoysta who simply continued to stand as he had before, loyal to the death. Then he looked to the band of riders who had come originally to tell the news. His eye fell on one of them, a man who was probably no more than five or six years older than himself. There was something about the man which was interesting, something which gave Paśyai a niggling feeling at the back of his head.

He snapped out of these simple thoughts and went back to the most pressing thoughts of them all. 'It'll be suicide. How can we face a large army like this in such a tight valley. They have surprised us and we are not ready and we are very weary. The horses won't be able to move properly in battle. But I can't go back now. Not now after everything I've said. Oh, Papa you ride with the wild hunt. Please ask Hvakina to ride alongside us, for otherwise I may ride alongside you sooner than you might have expected...'



[1] Nahvo or Nahvonai - North or Northern
[2] Aijhöna - Silver blood, the term used to define the nobility in Saka clans.
Höna - Blood


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Well this is it. A small update before the Battle of the Two Fingers, which shall decide the fate of Kashmir and perhaps the entire sub-continent.
 
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The long awaited battle is here and Paysai will at least go out out with a bang.
Kind of sad that he's only sixteen though. But that's the way of the ancient world.
 
Bvuda II
Bvuda
The Battlefield of the Two Fingers, Dead of Winter, 135 BC

He heard the horns being blown from both directions as the massive cluster of Saka horsemen stood waiting for the enemy. And as the sound of the Paorśava horns broke through the still air in the area in this small valley, he could see their foe speckling the horizon like tiny dots, a caravan of spears and banners off in the distance.

He looked up at the grey sky and gave a deep sigh. The heavens showed that there would be now snow today, instead taking a even more hellish stance. Hard balls of ice were falling down upon the armour of the warriors assembled on the battlefield. Slowly he could see the enemy taking formation in a distance, also slowly marching forward towards the Saka lines. He could fear his horse growing nervous underneath him as the enemy marched forth. ‘Don’t blame the poor thing. It’s a death trap, we won’t be able to ride properly in such a small place.’ But if there was anything life had taught him so far, it was to not question the words of his chiefs and leaders so he trusted their line of thought.

Then the horn blew. He steadied his horse and got his bow out, drawing an arrow and pulling it back till his ear. He noticed that everyone around him had done likewise, but they hadn’t fired yet. He waited for others to fire so that he wouldn’t make a mistake. Then he saw the men around him ride forward, their arrows bow still drawn in the same position. He nudged his horse into a canter and did the same. Riding forward till they were only a hundred metres away from the approaching enemy, still maintaining their bows in the same position.

As the enemy arrows began to pepper the Saka force, finally another horn was blown this time around to fire. At a range of less than sixty metres the Saka horsemen let loose their arrows into the enemy soldiers. No sooner had they done so, they wheeled back around and rode away. Bvuda drew another arrow and turned around firing it into the ranks of the enemy forces, while riding away from them.

As they rode away from the enemy, he turned around to see how much damage had been wreaked upon the enemy. To his surprise the enemy had continued to march forward despite the obvious losses that they had taken. The call for another volley was made, a horn being sounded. As he prepared another arrow, something came flying out of nowhere and landed right next him in the ground, making his steed buckle nervously.

‘An arrow? Seems like they’re returning our gracious gifts.’

He once again rode forward with the rest of the mass of horsemen, pulling back his bowstring mid-gallop, aiming it towards the slowly approaching lines of the Paorśava army. As soon as the shout went out, he loosened his arrow upon them, and gracefully turned his mount around at the last second. If only Father could see me now, it wipe the scornful look off his vile face. He almost stopped his horse then and there at the thought of his father. The father who had cast him away for taking a poor non-Saka woman as his wife, a tanner's daughter. 'Father and the rest of the Virgkao may be silver but Deyki, she, she is gold.'

Almost being, the key word, the thrill of battle keeping his head in the moment. Another arrow landed next to his horse as he galloped away, causing the stallion to swerve to the left. He nearly crashed into another warrior who was riding next him, but managed to steady horse quickly enough.

“Oi, calm boy! Calm,” he shouted to the jittery beast as he stroked the back of its neck. “In the entire stables we Virgkao have, they had to give me the horse with cowardice flowing through its blood.” ‘Probably another one of Father’s ploys. He probably handpicked this one for me.’

Once they had ridden away back to the main , they once again turned around their horses t for another volley. Bvuda’s eyes grew wide in surprise at what he saw. The enemy continued to march forward, despite the immense casualties they had taken. Yet this tide of spears and steels didn’t seem to stop. The horn went out once more, they were going in for another volley. This time he knew he had to fire as many arrows as he could into their ranks.

Once again he rode within the mass of Saka horsemen, charging ahead. He readied an arrow, drew it back to his ear and fired. As soon as he had set one arrow loose, he drew another one and fired, aiming and getting a man straight in his throat. A third time he drew his bow and fire it into the ranks of the Paorśava army, as he rode towards them. All the while it seemed like they had no intention to stop marching forward. His third arrow also found its mark, this time in the chest of an unsuspecting soldier. ‘Poor fool.’ By the time he had drawn his fourth arrow the foe were dangerously close. He knew this was the last one he would get to send into the enemy. As he set it loose, his horse stumbled upon some rocks and the arrow struck the shield of a soldier instead of his head.

Barely a metre away from the cold spear tips of the enemy, he swerved his horse around rode away, getting a quick glance at the riders who had decided to wait till the last second to loosen their arrows upon the enemy. Out of the corner of his eye he witnessed one man who had waited too long and rode his horse into the wall of spears that was oncoming. Even though the unlucky soul’s arrow found a victim, every man the outnumbered Saka lost was a grave blow.

As he rode away back to the lines of the Kardaka warriors, he saw them proudly adorned in their furs and rough spun tunics, armed with their axes and spears on foot as they were accustomed to fight. The sleet and hail didn’t seem to faze them a bit, he noticed as he grew closer to them. These men were the true rulers of these mountains, regardless of who claimed kingship of the lands. And the murundao Paśyai stood there amongst them, in all the dignity a boy of barely sixteen could muster faced against a massive enemy army. As he rode towards the warriors, he heard a few horns go off behind him. In curiosity he turned around, witnessing a band of heavily armoured horsemen streaming through the ranks of the enemy spearmen. They butchered any man who had been lax in their haste to get away, giving chase to the Saka who had been a little bit more diligent.
As soon as he saw it Bvuda tugged the reins of his horse to go faster. ‘Not that he needs any encouraging, the coward.’ As if the beast read his thoughts, the black spotted stallion rode ahead as fast he could. Soon all the surviving Saka riders were amassed behind the Kardaka lines of infantry, loosening their arrows into the enemy and facing the wrath of the enemy at the same time.

Bvuda tried to get his horse to calm down and face the oncoming wall of enemy spears, but the beast could not handle it. It reared back and tried to flee in the other direction, causing a general ruckus amongst the line of Saka warriors. In a swift move, he lashed out and grabbed his quiver before jumping off his horse. A stray arrow found it's mark in the horse's head and the stallion crashed down nearly crushing Bvuda's legs. ’Bloody coward, he nearly took out my legs before he got to use his.’

As he staggered onto his feet his eyes met what was happening back in the thick of the battle. The Paorśava warriors were nearly upon the Kardaka footmen and some Saka riders were preparing to make a charge into the wall of enemy soldiers. He instantly picked up his quiver and strapped it around his waist. Then breaking into a sprint, he ran straight towards the back of the group of axemen, making his way through the ground which was starting to get extremely muddy and tough to walk on.

Once he had made it to the rest of the army, he elbowed his way through the thin and dense line of foot soldiers, seeing men being struck down by the enemy arrows beside him. Yet he pushed on till he was nearly at the front of the battle, where he witnessed the lord Paśyai fighting alongside the solemn man who had disciplined him in front of the entire council. The young man struck down man after man without remorse, his beautiful axe a blur of steel. ‘That beast there is a far cry from the pitiful looking boy I saw sitting with the aijhysäta.’ Turning from his thought back to the battle happening around him, in the midst of the fighting he saw a Saka soldier who was laying on his back, weapon out of hand, and a enemy warrior about to run his spear through the ailing fighter on the ground.

He rushed towards the Paorśava spearman and thrust his sword into the back of the man. His unwitting foe crashed to the ground like a felled tree, never knowing the face of the man who had slain him.

"Never let anything stop you from helping the helpless, my love?"

“No, no, no. Not now. Please not now,” he whispered to no one in particular as he helped the man on the ground back to his feet, handing the man a dagger from his person. “No Deyki not now. I can’t think of you and our little one now. Not amidst all this.”

The man on the ground simply dusted himself before he patted Bvuda's back, thanking him for the weapon before picking up the spear off his assailant and rushing off into the fray.

Turning around he saw that the main Kardaka line was starting to move back slowly and many Paorśava were starting to fill the space between the dismounted Saka assa-barrai [1]. They were going to be stranded. He knew that many of his fellow dismounted warriors would start falling to Paorśava steel soon, they were simply not prepared to fight on foot. Those that had retained their mounts had already ridden back behind the Kardaka lines. 'By Tajuka, so much for “ride to battle. And the Halsuhvayyao [2] will probably stay to guard the gates of Kaotkvima. No, we will have to fight on foot.'

He tried to push his way back towards the main line, striking down a Paorśava warrior from behind and kicking another into the cold slush of the ground. But even as he tried to clear a path, two more would come and fill the gap left by a dead foe. Slowly they were surrounded and left fighting in small groups. Heavily breathing Bvuda could feel himself starting to take a toll from the cuts and wounds all over him.

He slowly staggered past a dead Saka man on the ground. It was getting late and he knew it. The chance of him getting back to his wife and unborn child was small, some would say even impossible. ‘Never thought it would end like this. On my own two feet with a sword in my hand. I don’t believe it, a sword. Heh. I even gave away grandfather’s dagger,’ he wryly chuckled and thought. But as he struggled to keep himself up, wading through deep muddy ground with the battle going on around him, he saw another dying man. The figure on the ground wasn’t Saka but Paorśava. As the man was dying and coughing up blood, no sun to light his soul but the clouds of a storm. Strangely no hate or pity filled Bvuda but a sense of duty when he saw the scene. ‘Whatever this man’s story was it’s now over. I shouldn’t let the last words of his tale be filled with pain and treachery rather than glory and honour. Just like mine will. Yes my story. Perhaps it's better for me if I join Hvakina and his riders sooner. At least there will be a tale about me. At least I won't be forgotten like thousands of souls here today will. If I do get a good tale about me, perhaps even a song, I hope Deyki’s baby will hear it. Hear about it's father.’

He leant forward on his sword plunging it into the man’s heart, ending the wretch’s pain. However it did not soothe Bvuda’s. Regardless, an energy filled him, a second wind as such. The winds, rain and sleet had not stopped falling from the heavens instead empowering. There was no great dishonour left for him, no ties but the woman he loved and their child. ‘I’m already been cast off from the Virgkao. But I’ll show them I’m no embarrassment. I’ll be the a true wolf, the one who howled while pack whimpered.’

“MAOKI HÖNA!”

He howled like a wolf, but he had no pack. Yet he raised his blade to fight. He attacked a well-armoured foe wielding a mace. The man swung at him with full force and Bvuda only narrowly dodged the mace crushing his foot. Wheeling around he swung at the man from the left and cut his ear before the man moved. His enemy turned to him and roared swinging the mace at his face. Ducking down, Bvuda rammed his sword through the man’s stomach, forcing it through the chainmaille. The man spurted up blood, flinging it all over Bvuda’s eyes.

Once he wiped it from his eyes he saw that many of the Kardaka troops were starting to make a retreat as was his chief. Paśyai, cushioned in five or six arrows, turned his horse around and raised his sword shouting orders to follow him, the remnants of the horsemen starting to exit alongside him. A blind betrayal from their king, the one who they fought, died for. The sight of this fueled Bvuda, it fueled him with something that he hadn't felt till now; anger.

‘The foolish boy, if he runs now it’s all over for the Sakai people’s. The Paorśava will burn down Huẉïśgrutka, Kaotkvima, Kalhaka, every town. We will all pay the price for his hunger. If only Mogha was still Raomja. Now this idiot son will ruin all that Mogha had saved from the Yaojhi.’

As rage pumped through his veins he slew another man, lopping the head off the Paorśava warrior from behind. ‘No honour means there can be no dishonour.’ Turning around there was another warrior, this time actually facing him. The man thrust forward with his spear, piercing Bvuda’s leather armour and plunging into his gut. He howled in pain as the cold steel was ripped out of his body as quickly as it had entered, the rain dripping upon his grimacing face.

The pain made him stagger back, dodging the next attack from the spearman. Not willing to risk a third encounter with a spearhead he leaped to the man’s side and plunged his blade into his foe’s ribs. As the Paorśava warrior collapsed so did Bvuda clutching at his gut as blood streamed out of his mouth. Yet he would howl once more. ‘Mae šisbak virgka.’[4] With that thought he mustered all his remaining strength and roared.

“Maoki höna, maoki höna, maoki höna, MAOKI HÖNA!”

With that Bvuda crashed to the ground backwards like boulder when it fell from a cliff. As the grey heavens spat down their fury and the mud started to engulf him he kept his ears open. At first all he heard was the clash of steel and the shouting of men and their own war cries. But to his surprise he heard a chant rising . A chant of how in the end all who hunted in their life, whatever their prey, their prize, they would find it in the end. And he knew that even though they may have lost this battle, the war was not lost. Deyki would have a child. Their child.

But she would be made an outcaste. The Aijvirgkao would make sure of it, make sure she would have to live in the mountains away from the safety of the town. At the mercy of the Wild Hunt and any kind soul. The young Muraonda would not dare to interfere against the traditions of his aijhysäta. That’s when his eyes flew open. Life had always been cruel to him. But he had to make sure it would not treat his child the same way. He had to.

With all his might he tried to open his eyes, instead coughing up more blood. They were shut like a mountain pass in the dead of winter. He was cold and slowly drowning in mud and rain, just wanting release, escape from the world that caused him pain. Yet the pain would not lift and Bvuda’s limbs refused to move. As the chant of the Saka grew louder and men trampled around and trod on him he wondered why they said these words. He had his reasons. What were theirs? As he drifted into darkness he only hoped that Deyki had a bright future.

That was when the tears started flowing from his face and began mixing with the blood, phlegm, mud and rain. ‘How much of it do I regret? None. I am not a fool to think I am born from silver. I am made from mud and ash, to them I shall return.’ As he was resigning himself to the arms of the Wild Hunt, Hvakina coming forth and offering to him a mount, fully saddled and valiant unlike his previous steed. He smiled and reached out towards it as the Wild Hunt blew on their conches and a roar of great men was heard...

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[1] Assa barrai – The core of the Saka army, the horse archers.
[2] Halsuhvayyao – From the word ‘Halsa’ and ‘Vayo’, these were the few infantry warriors available on the Steppe. Belonging to the Massagetae tribe the name means, Tower Winds or ‘towering winds’. This is due to the fact that they were lightly armoured so as to be able to still ride horses to and from battlefields and also dismount quickly.
[3] Maoki Höna – “My Wild Blood”
[4] Mae šisbak virgka - “I am a true wolf.”


 
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Epic battle

It's nice to see again this tale with excellent describsion of the misadventures and the final epic for the young warrior Bvuda and the uncertainties are raised about the fate of his family ...
 
It's nice to see again this tale with excellent describsion of the misadventures and the final epic for the young warrior Bvuda and the uncertainties are raised about the fate of his family ...

Yeah, Bvuda's becoming one of my favourite characters to write, since his story represents the rigidity in Saka (especially Massagetea/Massakao) culture.

I should mention, the Virgkao (Wolves) are from the many Massagetae nobles that migrated with Mogha and the Hayaskamao (Vultures) are descended from Saka Sogdianai, the ones who used to inhabit regions closer to the Greco-Bactrians making them more open to trade.

Glad to see this is back.

Great battle-scene too.

I'm glad to be back as well. Now I've got more time RL I'll try and devote it to this TL.

Thanks, I've kept the ending ambiguous so you guys can keep guessing who the battle is won by and how.
 
Since this is one of my favorite TL...
I have nominated this TL to compete for a Turtledove, but to pass the process of elimination, this nomination needs to be seconded... ;)


Sorry if I give anyone false hopes of an update in this great TL, which I hope will soon be updated again... but I think this is an effective way to reach all readers of it. :(
 
I don't think I've ever seen a novel style TL reach completion!
From one look you can tell that it'll never end, moving at a snail's pace.

I don't want to rush you, but maybe you can pick a quicker style? :(
 
I don't think I've ever seen a novel style TL reach completion!
From one look you can tell that it'll never end, moving at a snail's pace.

I don't want to rush you, but maybe you can pick a quicker style? :(

I understand your worry and all I can reassure is that Ai Orsa will be finished I've got the basic storyboard charted all the way to the 1300s. Testing these days is hard and RL has sort of caught up to me, but all I can say is that I have actually got three to four chapters which I haven't updated onto the board due to multiple reasons in RL.

For everyone that enjoys Ai Orsa don't worry within a month you'll get regular updates restarting. I know I've said it before but this time I mean it I swear. :biggrin:
 
Heliocles II
Heliocles
Alexandria in the Caucasus, Dead of Winter, 135 BC

“Then it is settled. I shall wed your most lovely of daughters, Helena, and thus ensure that all children born from this union shall have the blood of Perseus mix with the blood of Iason. When shall it happen?”

“It is wonderful that you are accepting this most humble of offers I have presented before you Megas, there is no greater honour for me than to see my daughter wed to the true heir of Eucradites.

We should see you union arranged before the gods on Brumalia [1] and secure this alliance one once and for all.”

Heliocles put on the friendliest smile he could muster for his host and soon to be father-in-law as the big burly man picked himself up and left the room, hands rubbing together in the cold winter frost and keeping that wicked grin of his smeared all over his face.

Heliocles had been allowed safe passage and stay in this small town and fort of Kophene [2] on the charity of Governor Proxenus and his machinations. While all other men of power and title in the area had turned him and his tattered, wandering army away, Proxenus had greeted him with open arms and welcomed him into his care.

‘Maybe I should be thankful for it. At least I don’t have 600 hungry mouths to feed anymore. Yet this has all happened in a rush and I still don’t fully trust him…’

He got up and walked across the marble floors of the room and onto the balcony, looking out of the window towards the yonder, two pleasant sights greeting his eyes.

Helena, the shifty governor’s daughter and his betrothed had a face that was very nice on the eyes and was one of the factors that had made him even consider the alliance. He probably wouldn’t find a suitable candidate for marriage otherwise, no great Bactrian houses remained and foreign sovereigns would have been much more cautious in wedding into a king without a throne.

His eyes moved from the comely lady to the sight of snow capped yet still green mountains before him, rolling away and in the distance Kophene town could even be sighted, pristine and free from the filth that begins to consume large settlements.

“Well the many spears and elephants that come with the marriage could perhaps help me reclaim Baktra one day. 4,000 is no small figure and my men couldn’t hope to take on the Tókharoi with the current state of their equipment.” He whispered to no one in particular.

Much time passed as he saw his future wife and her father depart from his balcony spot, seeing them and their armed guard mount up, riding off back towards Alexandria over the mountains towards the north.

‘Huh. The city lies to the north of here. Perhaps this is a safer place to be than Alexandria. Heh but you can never be south enough these days, what with the amount of hordes and barbarians roaming about these days.”

He continued to lean against the balcony and watch life in the fort go past when it hit him. South. There in lay the cause and answer to his problem, the one man who could help him reclaim his crown.

H e rushed off the balcony, through the room where he had held audience with Proxenus and down to the main courtyard of the fort. He rushed in and all there looked at him as if he was some sort of mad man.

“Where is General Eumenes?” he asked a passing guard who was counting some rations, slightly irritating the man.

“He is down in the wine cellars my king, no doubt trying to aid in the upcoming wedding festivities. But I beg your pardon Anax, if you don’t mind I need to finish doing these numbers. Ledgers help maintain everything from the smallest of inns to empires you know.” Heliocles looked sheepishly at the man as the grizzled soldier went back to his numbers.

“Yes of course my good man. Keep up these standards,” he apologised to deaf ears as he retreated from the scene back into the building.

He ran past some servants gossiping about the bad quality of fabric a distant merchant was peddling, a soldier of his who seemed to be talking to his shield in a most disconcerting of manners, two guards were rolling some dice and betting on who would take their next shift and other manners of life.

Finally he arrived to a flight of stairs that took him to the bowls of the building. Inside he saw Eumenes talking with a servant about the 'terrible' quality of wines in the area. Why is he always lying about these small things?

“Eumenes?”

The man turned around and signalled for the servant to exit. “Yes my Anax?”

“I believe I may have found a solution to our lack of a patron and soldiers.”

“What would you mean my lord? Governor Proxenus has already pledged to give us ten-fold the men we have. He will give you soldiers and you will give him prestige, or was that not the gist of your meeting with him?”

“Yes it was, but those shall become a part of our core forces and 6,000 will seem like a pittance compared to how many men I think we could have if we approach the right person.”

Eumenes simply looked at Heliocles for a moment before realisation dawned upon him. He shook his head as he put the ladle he had in his hand down upon the casket the servant had brought out.

“Surely you are feeling comedic today, because anyone being rational and serious would not consider such a thing.” Eumenes proclaimed trying to shoot the idea down. “What you are doing is trying to pick up a cool ember. It may not look that hot, but by the gods can it burn you.”

“Come on Eumenes. Surely dealing with Menander can’t be that hard. I don’t plan to go back on my deal with Proxenus, I simply wish to get a better one with the most powerful ally I might have remaining.”

“Powerful he maybe, yes. But Menander is an Emperor proper and while no one is arguing the legitimacy of your title you are still but a Megas Anax, while he is a Baseilios. And without Proxenus’ help we don’t even have a real army to speak of.”

“Are you trying to say he would not help me against the vicious Tókharoi that ravage Bactria? That he would not help a fellow Greek in need? Because if I remember properly he signed a treaty with my uncle agreeing that both are heirs of Alexandros.” Heliocles said his voice gaining a bit of heat and traction.

Eumenes let out a sigh and rubbed his temples. “Alright my lord we shall try. I shall send a messenger to Menander requesting a council. We shall then gather a small band of riders hetairoi [3] and ride out to Taxila to talk with him.

But do not be surprised if the terms he puts before you are heavily in his favour. He would be a fool to not do so in likelihood and trust me Heliocles, Menander is no fool. One does not become Emperor of the Indus easily, neither does one easily crush the might of the entire Sangas Empire either. Vasomattros [4] and his massive force were crushed at Sagala by Menander.

And my final request is that you would atleast wait until after the wedding my lord, we need those soldiers to not look weak and malleable before him or else he would set his terms even lower.”

Yet Heliocles did not care about any of the statement after the fact Eumenes had agreed to send a messenger to Taxila. ‘I trust in the word of Menander, his reputation precedes him and he is a firm believer in the enlightened ways of Boddo [5].’

“...My lord? It is utmost critical you have been listening to me.”

“Hmmn? Wedding? Oh yes of course, we shall definitely go after the wedding...”


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[1] Brumalia is an ancient Athenian festival that was celebrated mid-winter. It was the only appropriate festival I could find for the time.

[2] Kabul’s Greek name.

[3] Apparently all elite light cavalry post-Alexander was referred to as hetairoi or ‘Companions’, even through the Diadochi period.

[4] Vasumitra Sunga. In OTL he was the only capable Sunga emperor after Pushymitra Sunga himself all others were just capable enough or complete cronies to their nobles.

[5] Buddha in his Greek translation.

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Short update, but its back. Should see next update in a week, Or two. :coldsweat:
 
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Pasyai V
Paśyai IV

The Battlefield of the Two Fingers, Dead of Winter, 135 BC

The horns blew and his Kardaka warriors surged forth with renewed zeal. His honour would be forever stained due to this, but the day was about to be won and it was victory through treachery. Hvidimva had come through for them and slowly trapped the Paorśava army in the two peaks. The enemy soldiers slowly began to falter as realisation struck them and they began to panic, starting a rout. But there was too much to run away from and not enough to run to, as much of the retreating soldiers had their path by the easternmost of the Two Fingers.

He spurred forth his horse and rode into the fray once again. ‘The less that survive the better.’ he brooded as his axe plunged into the back of a fleeing spearman, severing the terrified man’s spine at his shoulders. Paśyai then proceeded to completely trample the man’s body in the process of seeking out another unfortunate victim for his bloody axe. He swore that it had grown some sort of grim personality within the duration of the battle, as all the men he left behind had been hacked into the most gruesome of shapes and pieces. ‘I shouldn’t look back. Won’t be able to sleep well for the next few nights.’ But deep down he knew that he hadn’t been able to sleep regardless for weeks.

Trotting around, he dodged an arrow flying towards his head and narrowly avoided being speared by a particularly oblivious Paorśava warrior. He brought his axe down on the man’s head, almost cracking it open like an egg. A particularly bloody and hairy egg.

All around him pandemonium reigned and he could tell that his men would chase the Paorśava down and probably leave none alive. Reflecting his own particularly dark thoughts on the matter as another fleeing was cleaved in half by himself. ‘The Kardaka in me really shines through sometimes.’ All around him the vicious axeman only seemed to further his point, as out of the corner of his eye he saw one of his men punching his foe into the muddy and damp ground, drowning the man in the sludge, still extremely thick from the hail that had been falling some time ago.

‘Hard to believe it was but a few moments ago that these very same men were about to be scattered to the wind by these Paorśava.’

He had thought that no miracle short of Hvakina and the Wild Hunt themselves descending from the heavens atop their moonlit steeds would have saved them from certain defeat. Not that this was any less miraculous than that, yet still the point stood.

The battle was over though, the ground a mix of thick mud and a red vapour quite akin to that one would find sprayed at the bottom of a waterfall. ‘But its red. That water isn’t red is it?’ He cantered his horse along the fields untowards where he saw the red coloured triangles of a traitor. To him it was a strange concept, to make a sigil of oneself on something as degrading as cloth, something that tore and could be ripped by a bare child. Though they didn’t have many of them, the singing and prancing stag statues that they carried in on sticks were definitely more defining and striking than cloth. ‘How can I be surprised? Somone who keeps their most honoured symbols on something as fickle as cloth that flickers and flares in the wind can simply not be stern like the gold and purity we have.’

As he trotted Hujsïka to the small open aired tent that this Hvidimva had set up, he saw the warriors of this warlord that had come to his aid. Someone who had not been as well versed in the arts war, by a scholar as great as Pallana, would never have seen it. But to him it was clear what the scene that lay before him was saying.

A captured Paorśava soldier was dragged along the ground, the man being of obvious wealth due to his armour and gilded garments. ‘Such a powerful man can not die in battle. No, at the very least he is a rich trader that tried to become a warrior, someone that’ll fetch a handsome price. At most he is the chief of a distant tribe, a great chief that has had his honoured trampled and shat open by someone he once considered a friend.’ He slowed down his mount to see the scene unfolding before him with great intrigue.

The unknowing soldiers of Hvidimva tied the rich lord to a post where he was restrained with ropes. Surprisingly the man had very little cuts, but somehow looked frailer than even the most mud-stained wretch in the warlord’s forces. A well equipped and burly looking man from Hvidimva’s camp came and looked the defeated, betrayed looking and weary Paorśava with a smile most wicked. And by the time the malicious officer started talking to the broken man Paśyai hadn’t even try to translate the words the man was speaking into the broken Paorśava that he spoke, he could tell the talk was one of a victor crushing the hopes of an old nemesis and bitter rival.

The triumphant warrior in red then looked towards Paśyai. The young chief instantly snapped his head away and spurred Hujsïka forth, trotting forward a distance towards the tent. ‘What should I care? It’s a rivalry probably like all others which span a lifetime. One stole a possession that belonged to the other as a child and it only escalated from there…’

He arrived at the makeshift cover and tethered his horse to one of the sturdy wooden poles that stood erect, holding the white tent in place. Underneath the cover stood a large man looking down on a table, rubbing his temples as two men around him argued and were undoubtedly causing a fire in the man’s head like a flame that started on dry grass it burnt quickly and it could rise high. Very high in fact, as he witnessed the large man bring his fist down and smash the table, silencing the two in an argument.

The clearly frustrated man then noticed Paśyai walk in, his expression warping into one of curious intent. The man beckoned one of his subordinates to make way for the young victor.

“Ah, look who it is my friends! Rajasya Parvatam [1], the king of the Mountains, lord of the Wilds and commander of the Horde. Our new suzerain stands before us,” he proclaimed with a chuckle. A moment passed with him looking expectantly at his two officers. “Oh bloody hell, bow you fools, bow before him!”

A sudden look of understanding filled the blank faces of the two as they nodded and complied with the orders of their commander. Facing Paśyai they both gave a generous bow but something seemed off about it to him. It wasn’t as if the bow was lacking in respect or form. ‘These men don’t have any true loyalty, to me or their previous king. Malformed demon or not, one does not simply betray their chief.’

Paśyai waved them off and stood at the table, viewing before him a map with all the divisions of the Vale of the Paorśava. On the map he saw the many strongholds of the various powers in the realm, the amount of money that they have as well how many men each province gives to the war effort.

“It’s intelligence we gained from the old lord Jnaneśvara.” Hidimba said looking over at the young chief checking out the documents. “That one’s a wily dog despite his age I can tell you that much.”

Paśyai continued to study the map, trying to ignore the Traitor Lord that was in front of him. He glanced up from his map for a second, just to see what the others there though of his silence. Looking up he saw the big bearded man across the table looking at him intently with a grin on his face.

“Come one, drop the act little King. I know that Mlechccha rajas are brave, but it is still a bit head strong to come into the camp of a man whom you don’t even know without a guard.

So tell me, here you come like you have been done a great disservice by me. I know that my methods to ensure victory were questionable in some regards. You are master of the mountain and vale now, Srinagar is all that lies between you and all opposition being crushed. So my friend if I were you a little respect would perhaps be given to me.”

Paśyai sighed a heavy breath. ‘Going to have to address him now.’

“My father, may he ride free with Hvakina, had always taught me to honour any oath that I made. No matter the cost for my own glory, an oath breaker is the most vile creature, even more cursed than the twisted soul that sits in Srinagar.

My tutor, Pallana, has only reinforced these messages to me throughout my life, making sure that my rule of the Sakadai was just and honourable. So forgive me if my gratitude is lacking in lustre. Don’t think that I do not appreciate the aid that you lent. All the soldiers under your banner have definitely help bolster our numbers. Especially the number of spearmen that you Paorśava can field.” He said looking up, mustering as stern a face as he could. Hvidimva had just won him the battle and perhaps the entire war. Paśyai simply could not afford to look weak in front of this man who could unmake him as king just as soon as he had made him one.

Hidimba looked back at him softly, but it was not reassuring. In fact the look was unsettling. ‘He’s judging me, trying to make a verdict on whether he I am strong enough to resist him trying to rule through me. Well I am born of Mogha the Hunter and Uharde of the Kardaka. I’ll not let some oath breaking Paorśava rule me.’

So far the aides of the Paorśava lord had been just silently listening to the discussion and events transpiring. Hidimba gave them a look and signalled them to leave the tent and attend to other matters.

“Very well, perhaps the gods have gifted you with a richer soul than mine, but at least you admit that I am to be praised for my heroic deeds. Now I want to talk rewards.” he explained twirling out the dagger from his belt into the map of the Vale. It narrowly missed Paśyai’s hand and cut into the part that marked Srinagar.

‘Bastard. I should have brought my aijhysäta. Well, brought what’s left of them anyway.’

“What exactly do you want me to do Hve…-Hvidimva? There is not much that I can offer you right now, all the tribesmen will return back to their families for a winter or two. We have different ways of governance compared to you Paorśava lords.”

Hvidimva’s hand swept the general area of the map with his hand and his smirk grew. “Well my first request then would be to find out how our new Raja rules. How do Mlechchas govern a realm? How does one differentiate between any of your peoples?”

“Well.. um… there are six great tribes which comprise our peoples. When my father first bought our tribes here he settled with the Kardakas, my mother’s people who live in the village of Achiktasho at the foot of a mountain sharing the same name. They were then gifted a gold standard in the style of all Saka tribes, that of the snow leopard and were brought into our fold.

On the hills around Achiktasho live my tribe and my father’s, rises the Singing Stag of the Saka Haumavarga in redoubtable Huẉïśgrutka. To the south of there lies the most populous tribe of the Mas Saka, whose symbol is the Ram under the Willow tree. They have the village of Kaoktvima. Go a bit east and you find Kavotṣema [2] whose residents are the Saka Tigrakaoda with the standard of the Rearing Stallion. Continue to the south where you will find the Saka Rauka with the Wrestling Stags, from where I get the greatest riders and warriors for my forces in Hamdraosi [3]. And the last great tribe within the Saka are the Raoshalana of Kaolana [4] who are like the Kardaka in a sense, they only joined our migrations after my father convinced them. They have the standard of the Sun Ablaze above the Stag.

There are many smaller tribes within my domain but they co-exist in the villages of many of the larger ones. Each tribe pays a tax in promised warriors and delivered gold every three cycles of the moon and trade is conducted between the six villages.”

The big Paorśava chief nodded and looked as if he was processing something out of his memory. He then turned and faced Paśyai with a intrigued yet confused look on his face, his eyes glinting despite their dark shade.

“Surely this cannot be all of the Mlechcha on the great plains beyond the mountains?”

“No. Pallana has told me of the events that transpired before I was borne into this world. He told me about how a fraction, maybe every one in three clans, father approached to migrate from the Yaojhi’s bloody conquest turned him down,” Paśyai recalled from his lessons with Pallana. He had cared not for what the history of the Saka was before his Father had rallied them. Paying attention to such lessons was such a bore, why would you when you could practice riding with Śaoysta ? “And the great Hunt was further split when Father ordered his aijhysätaand friends, Hora the Dreamer and Jhoilasa the Yavana, to take the larger part of the tribe southwards while he went and found a home amongst the great Pamara Talooki.”

“Very interesting,” the other man whispered, leaning over the map and twirling his moustache. “Well you have fulfilled my first request for my aid. I only have one more request in total…”

“What is it?”

“Give me the city of Srinagar once you are done with your armies there. Take whatever you want, by the Indra burn down the place if you want. Just leave the palace and the Brahmana’s quarters standing.”

“What’s a Braomën?”

“A Brahmana,” explained Hvidmva. “Is the physical manifestation of the God and universe. They are the tenders to Angi’s fire, the ones who keep Indra’s wrath and storm at bay. They conduct all ceremonies and rituals so that Surya will rise and make sure the Sun illuminates the Earth. They conduct the rites that keep Holy Ganga flowing as well as her Sarasvati and her five lesser sisters. They are the ones who make sure we are worthy to be judged by Yama. “ Hvidimva then saw the guards around his tent were creating a bit of a ruckus and retrieved his dagger from the map and back into its sheath.

“Very well, it seems as if I need to drill some discipline back into my soldiers. The victory seems to have gone to their heads, despite the fact that the war is not yet over and a few more battles are coming ahead of us.

We shall talk again my young king., perhaps somewhere on the campaign way. Until then.”

Paśyai nodded back at him. “Until then.”

Turning around to leave the man to his devices with his soldiers, he walked back towards Hujsïka. As he walked the muddy ground of the fields, he noticed the sleet and hail of the battle and the past two days had slowly begun to clear and the sun was starting to shine through , melting some of the snow on higher peaks and warming the ground.

Whence he reached Hujsïka he saw the beast peacefully waiting for his master to return. Paśyai walked up and stroked the weary beasts mane, giving it a smile.

“It’s been a long day my friend. You’ll get your well earned rest once we get back to Kaoktvima where I’ll get you a nice and warm stable to sleep in.”

He untied the tether from the post and mounted the animal, turning him around towards the Saka camp which was further from the Two Fingers, more towards the north. As he was riding back he noticed the post where the Paorśava soldier was being interrogated by Hvidimva’s men was empty and only some blood stains left there. ‘I don’t think this is a man you can cross with and come out without a few scars. I wonder what the Withered King in Sirnakar [5] did to raise his ire.’

With the thought he nudged his horse’s reins and they galloped off towards their camp, where they would surely be greeted with the stoic faces that come after a victory as costly as this…

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[1] Rajasya Parvatam – King of the Mountains

[2] Kavotsema – Blue clayed land. So called for the type of bluish looking clay they found near the stream running past the village.

[3] Hamdraosi – Where the wind blows. It’s named thus for the windy pass that it was built near.

[4] Kaolana – Rendition of Gelonus. The tribe of the Gelonii were identified to be the same as the Roxalani in the same area. The Alans aren’t exactly Scythians, they’re Sarmatians. The Roxolani clans that followed Mogha decided to give their new home the same name as the old one.

[5] Sirnakar- Srinagar, Saka style.

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Well here comes another chapter. Hopefully I conveyed Hidimba's character well, I doubt my narrative and prose in this TL sometimes. All events throughout the story seem a bit too formal for me and that's something that delays updates a lot, because I keep rewriting paragraphs until they seem right (Well seems being the key word). I'm reading quite a lot of other TLs on this forum and try to pick up as many tips as I can from them, as well as books that I read outside of the wed. You know. Real books :p.

But joking aside, all constructive criticism and comments are appreciated. Heck I don't mind if you just say outright why this thing sucks or if I should restart some of my old projects instead of this.
 
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Man... I don't even know what's going on anymore. It's been so long since I last read this and there's no way I can keep up with these characters and the plot... lol
 
Man... I don't even know what's going on anymore. It's been so long since I last read this and there's no way I can keep up with these characters and the plot... lol

Sorry about that, seems like I've become a GRRM in the making :p. (As in a confusing plot line. I'm nowhere as great a writer as him.)
 
So, is Paysai's honor called into question because his ally is a traitor.

Hm, very interesting to see how the Saka will recover from this battle too.
 
So, is Paysai's honor called into question because his ally is a traitor.

Hm, very interesting to see how the Saka will recover from this battle too.

Oh be assured, the Saka won't recover from this properly for a while to come. Their manpower reserves will need to fill up again as many tribes (especially the Saka Rauka) have had their young men die in droves.

So further conquests probably won't happen for now.

But the war isn't over and Srinagar still stands.
 
Oh be assured, the Saka won't recover from this properly for a while to come. Their manpower reserves will need to fill up again as many tribes (especially the Saka Rauka) have had their young men die in droves.

So further conquests probably won't happen for now.

But the war isn't over and Srinagar still stands.

Yep.

I remembered to take a look back at #90 again.
I'm very interested to see what kind of leader those upcoming years will mold Paysai into.
 
Alright so next chapter is going to be a six month time skip to the Sack of Srinagar as it's walls fall down. We'll see lots of familiar faces as well as hear news of what the future bodes as theological questions are raised alongside the matter of practicality to ruling a foreign populace versus sticking to time honoured customs of your ancestors.

Time for a Map.

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1. Lavonodha Kingdoms - A small decentralised and autonomous region, Menander mostly leaves the Gurjar, Abhira and Bhila clans who slug it out against each other alone. Menander is an ardent supporter of Buddhism whereas the Lavonodha petty clans are Jain in their practice, infused with folk beliefs. But he doesn't mind as long as they pay their taxes of course.

2. Anarta Kingdom - Almost an anachronism, Anarta is ruled by the same Vrishni-Yadav clan that OTL claimed descent from Krishna. Yet by swearing fealty to Alexander on his way down the Indus and later the Mauryas, followed by the Indo-Greeks they were able to escape the fate of the many other Janapadas (kingdoms). They do in this TL as well, but give it a couple of hundred years and the word Vasudeva and the umbrella of Hinduism ITTL will have gone in a radically different direction...

3. Gandhara and Kamboja Satraps - Menander has little interests in the valleys of Afghanistan since the fall of the Seleucids. His closest Greek and Hellenistic allies have dispersed at the mercies of the various tribes that roam the Steppe and he is no fan of the Parthians. So over 15 different small mountain Satrapies have been given some degree of autonomy, so as to conduct business as they like as well as form a buffer state to any oncoming hordes from the northwest.

3a. It's Heliocles baby! Recouping his strength and having just wedded his lovely new wife, preparations are being made for him to request an audience with the King of Indica and all Hellenes East of the Tigris (AKA. Menander. Wow, this guy isn't exactly humble is he?)

4. Hora's Saka - Unlike their increasingly Indianized northern brethren, the Saka of the south are growing very populous yet keeping to their time honoured methods of raiding. At the moment Parthia (Phraates II) tolerates them and actually encourages their raiding to the east on the Indo-Greeks. Unlike his father, Mithridates I, Phraates is no Philhellene and the Saka of Hora (old bugger's still alive!) supply Phraates with manpower and an auxiliary of horseback archers better than even their own, in exchange for not paying tax and being given a blind eye. This allows Phraates to devote his elite Parthian soldiers to being armed as Cataphracts and any infantry he has in Macedonian Hoplite armour.

5. Dahae tribes - While the Pahlava clans have set off and conquered Iran proper for their own, other Parni, Xanthi and Pissuri clans of the Dahae stock are still in their Caspian locale. Usually just in tribal warfare with their Sarmatian and Scythian neighbours, the coming of the Great Yeuzhi changes everything and many choose to flock to their banner rather than resist as the Yeuzhi muster an army of horsemen so large that the ground will tremble as they ride. Or as that trembling coming from further north, past the Jaxartes...

6. Mogha's Saka - With the help of Hidimba the Saka have managed to win the Battle of the Two Fingers and the Damara prepares to force other lords to bow to the new king in the north as he starts laying siege to the greatest resistance. Meanwhile the main Saka force prepares to march towards the golden prize of Srinagar and the throne of Kesava himself...

7. Kashmira-Darada Kingdom - The country is ravaged by war as their greatest army mustered is routed right at the cusp of victory by Hidimba's betrayal. Kesava bangs his head against the wall and starts preparing for the worst as reports come of Saka horsemen terrorizing the Vale and forcing Damara lords and their populations to retreat into forts for months on end, where they starve them out into submission. Also the semi-integrated Darada tribesmen who had been loyal subjects of the Raja are bought by gold the Saka have looted from the feudal strongholds of the Damara lords.

If Kashmira falls then Kalinga will be the last of the traditional great kingdoms remaining from the times of the Buddha, Mahavira and the Vedic scholars of yore. In this age of imperial ambition staying neutral is not a choice and Kalinga's king sits nervously as he is eyed by Samrat Agnimitra Sunga and Maharaja Simuka* Satavahana who are hungry for conquest of the small yet prestigious kingdom.

*Simuka may have lived in the 2nd or 3rd century BCE, as scholars argue about when the Satavahana Empire was first established. The coinage and sources I researched seem to give more credit to the 2nd century theory and thus I use that for this TL.

edit: I didn't realise how big the map was. Sorry if I crash someone's browser.:oops:
 
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