Nice installment Jim!
Just a question, I was reading again the first chapter and got a doubt: when both Lorraine brothers die, what happens with Lorraine itself? Who gets it?
Thanks. Frederick already being the supposed head of the family, it is only natural that they would move to a neutral location.Very interesting, but I think the bit about couple moving away from Vienna is a bit over the line.
Maybe I will, after the wars are done.Jimbrock, I hope you write scenes of the interactions between Frederick and Maria on a personal level. Like mailinutile2 said, it would be very interesting to see how those two get along.
Wow. This sounds fascinating.
Thanks!I'll be watching this one Jim. Stick to it, it looks good so far!
Nice installment Jim!
Just a question, I was reading again the first chapter and got a doubt: when both Lorraine brothers die, what happens with Lorraine itself? Who gets it?
Um... guys?http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Elisabeth_Theresa_of_Lorraine
The two brothers had two sisters, and that is the older one. In 1723 she isnt married yet, so prospects are open. Wiki says the Duke of Orleans rejected her, maybe ITTL he wont as hed get the Duchy of Lorraine... of course, if she also gets the smallpox... then, the Lorraine-Guise line of Vaudemont, but it dies out in 1723, too... following that the Duke of Melun, husband of the lady in the link, through which inheritance would go. Of course, he only has one surviving child at that time, a daughter, so afterwards the Duchy would again change houses
So, yes, depends on wether Elisabeth Theresa dies of the small pox, too, or not. If not then probably the Duke of Orleans, if yes, the Duke of Melun. Alternatively, the head of whoever was the most senior Guise line at that time could try to claim the Duchy under the French variant of the Salic Law... that would be the Dukes of Elbeuf, hence at that time this guy... actually, that has potential for a war of succession.
Um... guys?
Charles Alexander says hi.
Um... guys?
Charles Alexander says hi.
If you assume, you make an ass of...Well, we assumed he had died as well! Because elsewise he would get engaged with Maria Theresa instead of his brother.
If you assume, you make an ass of...
The fact that Charles Alexander was 11 at the time was probably the reason for that. And Frederick. Frederick marrying Maria Theresa is the main PoD, moreso than the smallpox striking Lorraine.
How so? Anyway, its just a story meant to introduce the TL, notice that its actually before the title.Which probably invalidates the fluff text of the intro
Leopold Clement of Lorraine, a suitably controllable man from the borders of the Empire.
in Breslau, a city in between Prussia and Austria
Frederick was not at all interested in his wife and sent her off into a palace somewhere all her life
August II, King of Poland and Saxony
on the pretext that Austria had been the aggressor against Poland
abolish the cherished Liberum Veto
stevep said:what is already the most powerful other German state
Susano said:Rulers converted all the time in the HRE without much fuss.
Because, if there is first much discussion and profile searching in Prussia, then Maria T. will already have been engaged to Charles Alexander. As said, it would have to go quickly.How so? Anyway, its just a story meant to introduce the TL, notice that its actually before the title.
No other comments about part 2?
Err, I thought he simply was flaming gay?Didn't he even have some ... organic abnormality which made him avoid the whole subject out of shame?
Prince-ElectorRather King of Poland and Duke-Elector of Saxony
Uh, didnt Saxony ally with Austria IOTL? Of course, seeing how Saxony was the primary objective of Frederick IIs expansions plans IOTL, if he does act on his own without authorisation from Berlin or Vienna he might attack Saxony instead of helping it. Though thats far from given, of course - as future Prince Consort of Austria he might instead adopt the Austrian position of countering France at every turn. Certainly, Brandenburg had much tradition in that as well, heh.A general and rather fuzzy concern: Is is realistic that the Saxon heir allies with the great power surrounding him on three sides? (Poland doesn't really count as he hardly had much direct control). Aiming lower and lurking for an opportunity would seem the most likely reaction; though I don't find much unrealistic with him seeking support, as you designed it.
Seeing that neither Prussia nor Austria is ruled by the newly wed couple yet, there wont be any joining of institutions like the army for quite some time still, I assume! So there will be two different commands most likely, under the supreme command of whoever has the bigger army - which despite Frederick Williams buildup would I think still be Austria.Little note: Did you spend some thoughts on who would lead the Prussian and Austrian armies?
The two countries have little in common but their ruler; so there might by problems with coordination and tactics; big superiority can be debased in that way. Again, I don't see any problems with your course of events
Contempoeraries would write whatever their biases tell them Id sayAggressor? Contemporaries would perhaps put it like that: "Friedrich August's claim on the Polish throne was illegitimate (after the Sejm decision)".
Bavaria is out since the War of the Spanish Succession, and Hannover itself is no powerful state, its only important due to the connection with the UK. Saxony had the potential to become a great power, a greater potential than Prussia, but didnt use it. No, I think its quite right to say that Prussia was the second most powerful German state at that time already, and Frederick finally led it to Great Power status IOTL, confirming that.I'm not sure that's so clear by then. Hannover and Bavaria are still in the running I'd say (and Saxony as long as prestige alone is concerned).
At least Prussia may not be seen as such a powerful state: Note that the actual signal of Prussian fierceness to the world was the attack on Austria in the First Silesian War, which is prevented in this TL. I suppose.
Yes, but that was because he was an idiot about it. He force converted his country and usurped the university of Marburg, which was supposed to be an all-Hessian university. Also, it was primarily an issue not of religion but inheritance: Hesse-Marburg fell by testament to Hesse-Kassel, but the testament also required the heir to be Lutheran, so Hesse-Darmstadt after the conversion had cause to contest Kassel ownership of the territory...Frederich II. of Hesse-Cassel come to my mind, who caused a whole lot of a fuss even roughly generation later.
Hm? Inheritance is independent of religion.
Hesse-Marburg fell by testament to Hesse-Kassel, but the testament also required the heir to be Lutheran
Firstly, thanks for the compliments throughout. Its great to have another commentor, your nitpicks are appreciated.This is a really interesting timeline. I am so fascinated that I took the time to do some nitpicking.
First of all: The Austro-Prussian marriage as an "anchor" for the TL is a great idea.
Good job that you didn't shrink away out of our hindsight expectation of their hostility!
But I do have issues with the opening scene.
Such an open conversation between this father and this son seems rather unlikely to me, given their personalities and their relationship.
Moreover, I doubt Maria T. would be among that pile ...
I said borders, not marginal or anything. Lorraine was still important.This is of course true in a geographical sense. But how are Prussia and Austria less marginal?
(With respect to position, that is.) Lorraine was one relatively significant territories of the Empire; and most of them lay at its fringes ...
No, my friend. It was a Bohemian city in between Austria and Brandenburg, to be pedantic.Technically, that would be an Austrian city not too far from Prussia ...
This was a rumour, that FII had some horrible mutilation to his... Lower Countries... and he tolerated the homosexuality myth to hide this. Of course it was just a rumour, so I disregard it and assume that since Frederick was romantically interested in his TTL wife, he did not avoid 'the subject'.Didn't he even have some ... organic abnormality which made him avoid the whole subject out of shame?
You are indeed right. I will correct it according to Susanos more accurate description.Rather King of Poland and Duke-Elector of Saxony
A general and rather fuzzy concern: Is is realistic that the Saxon heir allies with the great power surrounding him on three sides? (Poland doesn't really count as he hardly had much direct control). Aiming lower and lurking for an opportunity would seem the most likely reaction; though I don't find much unrealistic with him seeking support, as you designed it.
The two countries are still very seperate, with their own seperate systems. This is focused on more after the war, as I have already written till Part 7 or so.Little note: Did you spend some thoughts on who would lead the Prussian and Austrian armies?
The two countries have little in common but their ruler; so there might by problems with coordination and tactics; big superiority can be debased in that way. Again, I don't see any problems with your course of events
Yes, yes I do. This is sensible, isnt it?So you assume that Spain keeps to France's side; this is the most likely (though not only) alternative.
They can say whatever they want, we're not contemporaries.Aggressor? Contemporaries would perhaps put it like that: "Friedrich August's claim on the Polish throne was illegitimate (after the Sejm decision)".
See OTL, there was a small garrisson that fell similarly.Why do you think Milan can be taken after a short siege? (Open question)
Oh, you should see what comes up next war...Ha, it's hard not to do that in a TL where you still need Poland, right? Eager to hear what will come to pass
Do you mean the small princes? They dont have much influence.Two comments by me now:
1) France sure as hell wont be the only one to take issues with the Austro-Prussian marriage. Here he we have yet ANOTHER Protestant Prince-Elector converting to Catholicism, the SECOND already after Saxony. With that, Hannover is the LAST Protestant Prince-Electorate left. This will absolutely create an uproar in Germany, and yet it isnt even slightly mentioned.
I hadnt thought of this, thank you for bringing it up. What are your suggestions to the matter?2) Tuscany. Who gets it after the Medici die out? IOTL that was also settled in the War of the Polish Succession - Lorraine got it by fiat despite no family ties existing, in compensation for losing its core land. I dont think they will lose its coreland here, and at the same time theyre also obviously not as closely related to Austria as IOTL, so they wont even be in the running. Dynastically, together with the Farnese inheritance (Parma), it would fall to this guy, at the time of the marriage third son of the Spanish King. Somehow I think Parma and Tuscany might, lets say, get mentioned in the peace treaty...
Ah, gah, nitpicker! Generally religion was independent of religion, just as generally inheritance wasnt done by testament anyways. Of course IF it was done by testament and the testament named religion, then of course its a different case!Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm ...
That is... way to simplifying Whereas Germany took a century and a devastating war to reach a confessional balance, after two prince-electorly conversions its now all up in the air again and in imbalance. This will lead to great unrest among the protestant estates of the Empire, and may make imperial politics (such as they still existed...) difficult. Also, define "small" - the medium states certainly were able to tip balances in war one way or another.Do you mean the small princes? They dont have much influence.
Well, I like the Palatinate-Tuscany union, but the PoD is too late for that - the last Medici daughter still lives in 1723, but is already 56 ears old, so not able anymore to give birth. So yes, dynastically it would fall to a son of the Bourbon King of Spain. I think it would really depend on how harsh the peace on the Bourbon Powers is. Normally peace treaties did not deprive people entirely of their rights. Though of course its possible that the guy gets Parma but not Tuscany... or the other way round.I hadnt thought of this, thank you for bringing it up. What are your suggestions to the matter?
Sure, no problem.Also, thanks both of you for your constructive critisicm, and I want to ask you if I could pass my German translations by you since I think Boto pointed out an error in my trusty online translator last time.
Also, thanks both of you for your constructive critisicm, and I want to ask you if I could pass my German translations by you since I think Boto pointed out an error in my trusty online translator last time.
Frederick of Prussia jumped in and offered Prussia assistance even before notifying his father.
would maria theresa share that opinion?Frederick already being the supposed head of the family...