How much worse would the attack fare?
I think the attack would be detected after war was declared. There will be air patrols from Dutch Harbor, Midway and Hawaii that will be covering the historical Japanese approach path to the islands.
Attacking the alerted base could be disastrous for the Japanese. There will be US Army Air Corps CAP in place, and if the attack is detected before hand they are likely to run into more fighters they the carriers possess. Splitting between two strikes makes it even worse.
Remember, one of the reasons the Japanese went after Kaneohe Bay was to prevent a counter attack on the carriers.
In addition, with war declared and ongoing, I would think the ships at Pearl Harbor would have improved AA, be much faster to General Quarters and have Condition Zebra for all watertight doors and hatches closed much faster than they did on December 7th.
In my opinion the historic attack was badly executed. Fuchida sent the signal flare the surprise had been achieve, but the fighter escort didn't see it. He fired a second flare for them, but the dive bombers saw that as well and thought surprise had been lost, so they attacked WITH the torpedo bombers when they were supposed to attack AFTER the torpedo bombers' runs. The historic over-concentration on
West Virginia (seven or nine torpedoes, depending on the source) and
Oklahoma (five) by the experienced air crews from
Akagi and
Kaga is another example. They were specifically assigned to get the battleships because of their experience. The less experience crews of
Soryu and
Hiryu got the other side of Ford Island where the carriers normally berthed and green crews from
Shokaku and
Zuikaku got the land targets. It shows as well how impactful the 'fog of war' can be. It's a cliché, but it's a cliché because it's true.
Assume that the degree of good (or bad) luck the Japanese experience is broadly consistent with what they had in OTL.
On the one hand, one would expect/hope for better awareness and preparedness on the part of the Americans.
On the other hand, in Dec 1941, the Americans were already expecting the Japanese to strike SOMEWHERE - it was hardly out of the blue. Also, Taranto (British strike on Italian naval base) shows that such a strike could be successful, even if it occurs in the middle of a war, rather than as the initial strike.
True on Taranto, but the Med was unique environment. The strategic offensive and defensive regularly switched between the British and the Italians. Seeing a Royal Navy task group in the central Med was no unexpected. Finding a Japanese task group in the eastern Pacific would cause a massive reaction, in my opinion. Plus the British carried out the attack at night, something the Japanese could not accomplish in going after Pearl Harbor and it surroundings.
Well, that kind of begs the question.
A war warning had been issued shortly before OTL Pearl attack. So why wasn't OTL Pearl at the level of readiness that a not-yet-raided ATL Pearl might be in mid January, 1942?
OK, humans are humans - the urgency of an ACTUAL war is higher than being under a war warning. Still...
The War Warning was issued in late November (the 27th, IIRC). Pearl Harbor was ordered to stand down from the War Warning on December 6th.
My thoughts,