Cool map, Emperor of Iowa. Any chance you could share the blank version?
As regards the map, it's pretty good. The borders in Sicily and Southern Italy suggest continued Syracusan independence (Syracuse is on the southeastern tip of Sicily), but an Athenian alliance with cities around modern day Catania, which is fairly solid since that was the Athenians' base in the OTL Sicilian Expedition. Syracuse may be kept in check by the Carthaginians on the western part of the island.
The borders in the Peloponnese suggest an interesting development: the amalgamation of Corinth into the Athenian system. Given the history of Corinth-Argos, perhaps a similar development occurs with a union of Athens and Corinth, with a democratic revolution in the later. IMHO, Corinth would eventually come to like the arrangement since they would benefit from access to the western Med. Corinth becomes the Piraeus of the West to a certain extent. The diokolos (partial canal way on the isthmus) affords Athenian naval and merchant ships access, but they will probably stop at Corinth's harbor before heading out. Interestingly, Argos is not included, perhaps Sparta has been mollified by conquering it.
Athenian control of Boeotia would probably entail keeping down the power of Thebes for the benefit (and perhaps at the request of) other Boeotian states like Thespiae and Orchomenos. The allegiance of far Northwest Greece may be somewhat spotty, but the Acarnanians and Aetolians are hemmed in by Athenian allies on Corcyra (island in Adriatic) and Thessaly.
Athenian conquest of Asia minor will be difficult, but with Thessaly they will have skilled cavalry men. With Boeotia they will have access to more hoplites. With the northern Aegean coast, they have greater financial resources. The line may be somewhat arbitrary put it would be continuation of the naval line drawn in the Peace of Callias (which may have ended the Persian Wars in the 450s if it existed). The strongest Athenian presence will be along the coast, leading to the colonization/subjugation of Bythinia and the Crimea to protect trade routes. Cities on the Nile delta for the same reason. Wankish would be complete Athenian domination of all the eastern med within less than a century of 400. It may come later however.
The TL will come soon. I have the first few episodes mapped out, though I still need to do a bit more planning and decide what style to write in.
Thanks Nicomacheus but to be truthful I didn't plan out anything I just made it because I was bored and I love making my empires relly BIG. But I've been thinking about it on my back home and this my sound impossable but I was thinking of an egyptian revolt from persia and Athens helped them out so persia would get weaker, the egyptians greatful for the aid allowed the athenians to set up a colony in the delta?
(P.S. sorry for not posting sooner. I had a gig in another town.)
(P.P.S. I found the blank version on the waki site)