Vae Victis

commandant spangler

Interesting timeline. Don't know enough to comment in detail but one question on one of the comments. Unless that is supposed to come from some time well after OT I presume there's a typo. "exaggerated take on a King that lived over four thousand years ago"

Steve
Whoops! Nice catch... I for some reason must have been thinking 2000 BC instead of 200 BC. Thanks; I've made a lot of small mistakes it seems - most of which I caught later, but some obviously not. Should've proofread (sp?) a lot more; will have to do later. Just the updates seem so short... I guess I just assume they're good without reading too closely sometimes. I'm tempted to make a new version with all the corrections, but maybe I'll wait a while...
 
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this is a great tl! i think Pyrrhus is a commonly overlooked man in history, so i love the irony of him becoming the new hannibal or julius caesar of TTL
 
this is a great tl! i think Pyrrhus is a commonly overlooked man in history, so i love the irony of him becoming the new hannibal or julius caesar of TTL
Thanks - and I'd have to agree that Pyrrhus is pretty overlooked when you talk about famous ancient figures. I've pretty much decided that I'm making a version 2, likely under a different name, and hopefully whenever I get around to doing that and finishing it, you'll enjoy a much more complete version of this.
 
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