TLIAW: The Twenty-Fourth

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I like it, especially the different promotion for Madame Pelosi.

I wish you luck on your next project, and I eagerly anticipate it.

Thank you! And thank you to everyone who read it - I feel it's probably one of my strongest pieces, and would have been far stronger had it not been so rushed. I'm glad it sparked so much interest, and I hope it has reminded some of you that I can finish a project!
 
I plan on continuing my development of a Henry Wallace timeline, but this may be something I go back to and make into a full timeline - strengthening it and bettering the story.
I think it's good the way you left it. You could try a third term for another President and turn The Twenty-Fourth into a series, but as for this particular story, I think you ended it a natural and satisfying point.

Will be excited to see your Henry Wallace timeline. Secretary of State Alger Hiss, oh my!
 

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Well that 1992 went in no way the way I wanted it to. :p

A 27th Amendment barring third term presidents, and Cuomo? Ergh. ;_;
 
Nice epilogue, though I would change the *9/11 analogue attacks since there's almost no way you could bring down the Empire State Building with an airplane.
 
Yeah, Reagan's Alzheimer's would be just starting to present itself right about now, so that's going to be a problem for his re-election.
I bet it there will be subtle hints to it on the campaign. A few gaffes that while raising a few eyebrows, don't damage his image.
 
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