TLIAW: A Journey Upriver

I'd only managed to get a flight to Guyana after weeks of vetting by various British, and then American security agencies. It had been frustrating, but inevitable. When I'd mooted my idea to the editor, he'd laughed. For a little longer than entirely necessary. Once he was done chortling and saw that I wasn't smiling, he told me in no uncertain terms that even getting into Guyana would be difficult. The Americans were worried about the radicalisation of young Europeans, and they wouldn't like a journalist writing articles that would be avidly consumed by the various 'Student Friends of the International Brigades' movements. But as he swirled the whisky in his glass, I argued with him. I didn't really give a fig that the Americans wanted to keep everything under wraps. But part of the reason that so many young people were signing on to fight in South America was because the only news they heard was from sources that were ardently pro-Red. They heard the carefully censored BBC bulletins, but what did that do to dissuade them? They needed to hear the honest truth of what was happening in America, before any more of them died.

He'd agreed, and weeks later I was in the busy town of Port Kaituma. I was met at the airstrip by three CIA men. They had the same beige short sleeved shirts and slacks, the same side partings, and the same sense of humour. They were to make sure I got to my destination without going off-piste. But they told me in the car to the hotel that once they'd delivered me safely, I was on my own.

That wasn't quite accurate though. I'd made some calls before I'd heard back from the authorities, and had called in a couple of favours. I had the address of a man who ferried people up and down the rivers. He had agreed to be my guide, and his sons were apparently the kind of men who could handle themselves. It was impossible for any kind of service like his to operate without that kind of insurance.

We didn't stay long in Port Kaituma. My handlers seemed eager to be rid of me. A short stay in a slophouse in which they went over my plans in detail, and frowned at almost sentence I said, was followed by a few hours in a hot 4x4 to my destination. They barely exchanged a word with me on the way. I got the impression they didn't like dealing with 'tourists'.

They didn't actually enter Jonestown when we got there. 'Too dangerous' they said. They left me at the side of the road, and gave me one last chance to return to Port Kaituma and get the next flight home. I refused, politely and walked toward the town's perimeter.

Jonestown isn't what I expected. In the Free World, the city has something of a reputation as an ideological cesspool. I was told by my American handlers that Jonestown is little more than a huge slum. At any one time, over half of the town's population can best be described as temporary residents. Either they're veterans from the conflict in the interior, coming here to the Mecca of New World Socialism to relax and unwind, or they are fresh-faced Europeans, just off the boat from Georgetown, eager to pick up a gun and fight for the Revolution they've read about in journals at university. And of course, there is the crime. With people coming from all over the continent, from all over the world, there is a lot of corruption. Guyana's government turns a blind eye to Jonestown, the town's municipal government backs the socialists who are in power. My handlers told me that Jonestown's overseers exploited newcomers, and few of those young would-be Guevaras ever made it to the interior to fight. Jonestown ate up people who came and digested them into it's overcrowded slums, where the machinists manufacture guns and bullets for the front.

The reality was quite different. That transitory population does mean the city is filthy, and it could be charitably described as a slum. When over half the population isn't expecting to stay any longer than a month, they have little reason to keep it clean or ordered. In that respect, it is more like an armed camp than a town. Barely a day went by while I was there, without there being a parade of some sort. From the windows hung brilliant red banners, which fluttered in the breeze. There were stencilled paintings on many walls, whether they were brick, tarnished metal or woven reed, in stark black and blue. Most depicted the many revolutionary leaders of International Socialism. But most prominent of all, was Jim Jones himself.

I doubt Jones expected his little project to get quite so out of hand. While the Peoples' Temple is prominent in Jonestown, it is nowhere near as powerful as it once was, the loss of the central messianic figure of Jones meaning it has split and lost its dominating position. Perhaps it is this breakdown in such an absolutist authority which has prevented matters from getting quite as bad as the Langley men had told me.

Thats not to say there aren't problems. There aren't the beggars you see on the streets of slum-towns in many other places, including Port Kaituna. Thats because all available labour is hoovered up into the armaments factories and the collective farms. The authorities avoid using the term 'collective farm', it being a rather loaded Stalinist term. They prefer calling them kibbutzes, in line with the unique melting pot theory of New World Socialism. But they amount to the same thing. Surrounding Jonestown are wide fields tended to by men and women wearing wide brimmed hats. They live in collective tenements, and I understand that a close eye is kept on them to prevent 'hoarding' or 'reactionary evasion'. Jonestown is the doorway to the war in the interior and the town feels like it is under siege. Away from the parades is the hive of industry where the weapons and clothes of soldiers are forged and sewn. I never saw them directly, as they are heavily guarded and my attempts to get admittance was the one time I felt truly frightened in the town. The local law enforcement doesn't take kindly to snooty Westerners, and they aren't exactly susceptible to financial incentives.

I spent just over a week in Jonestown, organising the supplies I would need with the authorities and with my guides. Jonestown isn't an example of pure communism, and there is an entrepreneurial streak to the town's inhabitants. Between slanging matches with the kibbutzniks and negotiating how much space for supplies there would be on the longboat, I had time to talk to some people. One in particular was a young woman I met in one of Jonestown's many bars. She gave her name as Nikita Ferguson. I asked how she'd come to be there.

'I joined the Student Friends of the International Brigades while I was at Glasgow.' she replied. 'When I graduated, I thought about carrying on to do a Diploma. But I decided against it. Why bother fighting in the courts of the dying bourgeois democracies, when I could be here, fighting for a new kind of democracy. Through the old society, I knew a man who could get me to Cuba. From there, I was put through some basic training. A lot of those who had come with me from Glasgow washed out. I'm not sure what they expected. Anyway, after a month of that, we shipped out to Guyana. We were organised into brigades here in Jonestown before we went into the interior.' That can't have been that long ago. If she'd graduated in the autumn of 1992, and left for Cuba by the end of the year, she must only have been here for a few months.

'Yeah, it's only been since January, but it's June now and in those months the whole world has changed for me. I've fought in dozens of engagements, against every conceivable opponent of the Peoples' State. These last five months have felt so much longer. Glasgow seems so far away, so distant from what I've done here. I've met people from every corner of the world, tasted things which have been sweeter than any nectar, I've suffered in ways I couldn't have imagined last year.' Has it been worth it, I wonder. Has she been jaded by her experiences.

'Yes, and no. At the time, I thought of those who returned home from Cuba as cowards and class traitors. Now, I think differently. This battlefield is unforgiving. It's harder than anything Cuba prepared us for. They would not have survived here. I have an open mind and I have a willingness to hear what anyone has to say. International Revolution isn't for everyone.'

She smiled at me and ordered another drink. It was clear that she considered the interview over. I moved away from the blonde haired woman, her hair tied up with a red headscarf, her combat overalls smeared with mud and oil. She is exactly the type of person that I had got into the country saying I would deter. But she seemed to be totally sold on the cause. I would need to go deeper to reveal the truth of it all.
 

Sulemain

Banned
Ooooh, another Mumby story I wonder...

WAT.

I'm getting shades of Objectavist Katanga from this. I get the impression that the rest of the world is alot less mental then Jonesian Socialist Guyana, although the "Censored BBC" reports ain't a good sign. They might only be censored in the view of the far-left though.
 
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Nice little Nicola Sturgeon expy. Interesting. I will subscribe to this newsletter.

Btw, the Space Port in Azure is very close to Jonestown.
 

guinazacity

Banned
Hell yeah mumby this looks great.

and just like sulemain said, it really sounds like the world might be a bit more (or a lot more) mental than OTL. the girl talking about "a man that could take me to cuba" and the censored BBC, CIA handlers and specially the whole thing apparently being kicked off by the People's Temple of all things reeks of government crackdowns, or at least, an america that never woke up from the early reagan years.
 
Judging from the beginning

Good indeed!

Judging from the beginning, it will be something not very usual nor I've seen much
of that sort in AH... :)

The implications and insinuations regarding the situation in South America ...are very inauspicious. :(
 
I'm afraid this may have to be postponed for a while, as I'm starting a new job in which I have no training...
 
OTLs issues

I'm afraid this may have to be postponed for a while, as I'm starting a new job in which I have no training...

Regrettable announcement!...The OTLs issues understandably must take priority ... I hope you will be able to find the time and the will to develop properly at some point everything 'promised' the interesting beginning of your TL.
 
Before we left Jonestown, I met a representative of the Peoples Temple, a second-generation 'socialist pioneer'. He is certainly a very charismatic individual. Jones Y's name alone shows his pedigree as the inheritor of two of America's contributions to New World Socialism. He is named for Jim Jones, builder of Jonestown, gateway to the Peoples' State. His surname is a single letter, like Malcolm X, whose transition away from black supremacism in the mid-1960s drew groups like the Black Panthers into the emerging New World Socialist tradition. 'Comrade Y' controls the 'Peoples' Printing Presses' of Jonestown, and as such is considered the town's spokesperson to outsiders like myself. I meet him in one of the communal huts built of palm leaves in the town's 'Old District'. Ironically perhaps, these primitive buildings are the homes of Jonestown's elite, such as it is. Despite that, Y's home is full of creature comforts, though naturally it takes an ascetic, practical form.

While he seems relaxed, I get the impression he is at least a little nervous. I ask him if he comfortable with my presence in his town. He smooths the creases in his white Nehru jacket before he continues.

'I have my misgivings. It is always a risk allowing a Northerner who has no real interest in the success of the revolution into our community. Such openness almost brought Jonestown to ruin once before.' he smiles, white teeth glittering. 'But I know your articles. You are no McCarthyite stooge who will paint as blood-worshipping cultists. Believe me, Mr Anderson, you would never have reached Jonestown if we did not wish it.' That gives me some pause for thought. There is more than a hint of threat to his words.

'So, Mr Y, what is Jonestown's relationship with the government of Guyana exactly? Jonestown has never declared itself a sovereign state, but the central government's oversight is noticeably minimal.'

'At a national level, the Peoples' Agricultural Movement is an affiliate of the PNC. The PAM is if you like a Guyana-wide branch of Jonestown's local fusion of society, culture and government. Ever since Comrade Burnham's day, Jonestown has been allowed extraordinary independence as a social experiment in establishing a pan-racial cooperative socialism. The fact is that our movement strengthens socialism within Guyana as a whole as our Rainbow Family expands. The PAM has established 'Little Jonestowns' across the Guyanese frontier, and that encourages development of a wilderness that would otherwise be exploited and destroyed by capitalism.' He smiles, but I'm not satisfied.

'Isn't the relationship between the PNC and the PAM a little convenient? The PAM has been able to buy up land on the frontier at a very cheap price, and due to the low population of those regions and your movement's affiliation with the PNC, the PAM has bolstered otherwise fragile PNC majorities since the 1970s. The PNC has governed this country in one form or another for over thirty years, and the PAM has become a vital part of it's dominance. How democratic is that really?' Y's grin is fixed, but his eyes are glass, no warmth in those brown pools.

'What you mistake for dictatorship is the result of a revolution. Mao once said all power grows from the barrel of a gun, but we have proven that wrong by building a socialist state at the ballot box. A revolutionary state doesn't need the Northern bourgeois democratic fiction of a rotating door between multiple liberal capitalist parties.' He runs a hand across his shaven scalp. Maybe I was pushing my luck.

'Guyana's government has made no indication it supports the war in the interior, but Jonestown has made no secret of its support. How has Jonestown avoided repercussions for that?'

'The national government has international responsibilities that it has to uphold even in a bourgeois world system, lest it allow itself to be taken advantage of by capitalist powers. We have no such responsibilities, and it is in our movement's interests to aid the revolutionaries of the People's State.'

'With respect, that doesn't answer the question. Jonestown was a steadily growing frontier town before the violence broke out in the late 80s. Since then, the town has boomed, over doubling in size. There are rumours of organised crime and it's no secret that the PAM's budget has increased greatly, allowing those Little Jonestowns much greater financial security. Is their monetary aspect as to why the government turns a blind eye.'

'This is what I expected from Northern journalism. Always looking for the money motivator. We do not worship the dollar. The revolution is inevitable. It's success is a feedback loop, strengthening socialist societies. Like Jonestown, like Guyana as a whole. The government turns a blind eye, because they know this.' He wasn't smiling any more.

'One more question, Mr Y. What do you have to say to the families of the young people who have died in the Peoples' State, drawn here by the propaganda that you have printed.' His face was drawn and he was silent for a while. When he spoke again, his words were quiet and measured.

'Those deaths... are deeply, deeply tragic. It saddens me more than words can say that so many brave young souls have died so far from home. To their families are say that they should be proud of the fact they raised such courageous children, and that if they wish to blame someone, they should look to those who gunned them down. The revolution's success in inevitable and every bullet fired in anger against it is utterly futile. These deaths are nothing more than a sacrifice in blood on the altar of Mammon.' He looks away from me and gazes out of the window. I don't think this interview went how he expected.

'Thank you, Mr Y.'

'Thank you, Comrade Anderson.' he whispers.

I rush from the room and down to the canal. This canal connects Jonestown to the Cuyuni River, and in turn to the Mazarumi. It is one of Guyana's biggest civil engineering projects, and I notice a lot of the signage is in English and Mandarin. A little reminder of Guyana's most important ally and one of the most controversial players in the current conflict. I find the ferryman has already loaded his longboat and his sons are sitting on a nearby jetty, Kalashnikovs slung carelessly at their waists. I shake the man's hand as I step aboard.

'Thank you for doing this, Mr Prescott.'

'Please, stop doing that, call me John.' he smiled, his Yorkshire tones still surprising me even after a week. His sons clambered aboard, and the longboat's outboard motor began the quiet tuck-tuck-tuck as we moved away from Jonestown and into the channel that had been carved into the jungle.

My ferryman had an interesting story to tell himself. He had been an MP for a while, to my surprise. Yes, he said. For over ten years, he had served as MP for Hull. But the civil conflict of the early eighties and the Labour government's part in putting it down had repulsed him. He was a union man, and the ensuing crippling of trade unionism in Britain had shook his principles. He had resigned, and returned to a life at sea. It was there he heard of Jonestown. Jim Jones had passed away a few years before, and the Peoples Temple had introduced the municipal reforms that made the town more sustainable. Prescott had uprooted his family and planted it in Guyana, and they had built quite a profession from running narroboats along the canal to Port Kaituma. The new Chinese built canals had seen a real boom in business, helped by the sudden increase in traffic as would-be revolutionaries sought to make their way into the interior.

What did he make of the Peoples Temple? Well, they had managed to build socialism, he supposed. More successively he reckoned than when Britain had experimented with in after the Second World War. But there was a lot of power held in a few peoples' hands and while there was much talk of cooperatives and mutualism, the reality was that Jones' Rainbow Family was deeply nepotistic in a way that those think of relatives in blood terms just wouldn't understand. What reservations he has about Jonestown's leadership are silenced when we turn to the topic of revolution.

'It makes soldiers of all of us. And thats the difference. In Britain, the police squashed the picket lines like they weren't even there. We weren't ready to be soldiers in a revolution. Here, everything has to be fought for. The soil is poor and so the food is plain, but we make do because we are building something better. Socialism was never supposed to be easy.' he says brightly. Perhaps Prescott's view is more complimentary than the regurgitated ideological treatises of Comrade Y.
 
Accidents

I would stay far, far away from Comrade Y. He sounds like he would have no problems arraigning for an 'accident' for nosy reporters.
 
Maybe we can get a new XYZ affair :D

Excellent work, Mumby, with an underutilized subject (and one that us non-Brits can understand haha). Looking forward to more!
 
The journey upriver was largely uneventful. We encountered a few longboats heading back up to Jonestown, full of soldiers. Some were smiling, looking forward to their down time. Many more were quiet with distant eyes, not looking ahead to where they were going but still staring at the battlefields they'd left behind. It would have been interesting to speak to them, but we had schedules to keep. At this point, I could only guess as to what they'd seen.

My rendezvous was in the Pacaraima Mountains, the de facto border between Guyana and the Peoples' State. While Guyana obviously went on for many more miles after that, it was generally acknowledged that this far from Georgetown, the ongoing struggle of the People's State was a priority. As we neared the border, I began to worry. I'd heard the stories, of a chaotic 'nation' that was as much four governments-in-exile as it was one of it's own, of the many ideologies and arguments that took place within it's armies, of it's radicalisation of outsiders and it's ruthless treatment of bourgeois reactionaries. As I became nervous, so the atmosphere on the boat changed. We hadn't had any trouble, but the Prescotts clearly expected it. The jokes became thin on the ground and the arguments tenser and more fiery. The tension between us was taut and liable to snap at any moment.

As the mountains rose up around us, I noticed something else. The buzz and hum of the jungle seemed to dim. It wasn't silence, but it was a certain cautious quiet that made me uncomfortable. Soon however, we came to a halt. A great waterfall loomed ahead of us, blocking our path. I turned to John.

'Thank you for bringing me this far. I'm not sure where I'll find a guide from here onwards, but yeah.' I said awkwardly. He didn't look at me, but stared at the rocky ridges above the waterfall.

'You needn't worry about a welcoming committee, lad. There's no doubt a dozen eyeballs staring us down as we speak.' He pointed over my shoulder and I followed it's indication to the nearby bank. 'There is a dirt track that proceeds into the mountains. If you follow that, you are sure to meet a patrol. Likely sooner than later.' He put his hand on my shoulder and I turned to face him. 'It's a hard path you tread now, and I'm not referring to the hill track. Good luck.' With those quiet words, he bid me farewell. Taking my heavy pack, I hopped clumsily to the bank and waved goodbye as the Prescotts turned their boat about and made their way back northward to Jonestown.

John was far from wrong. I had only been walking for two hours when all of a sudden I found that the path was blocked by two soldiers, clad in black tunics and armed with AK-47s. Turning my head to look at the path behind, there was a similar contingent preventing any retreat. I smiled. It was going just as planned.

Of course I had to explain who I was, and the soldiers were more than a little suspiscious. I was a Northerner, I wasn't a volunteer, I'd come to right about the war. It all sounded terribly like cover for a spy. I tried to reassure them, but they insisted that I had to be processed at their HQ. I didn't like the sound of being 'processed'. The rest of the day was a long dry march through the mountain until we reached a fortress of sorts, carved out of the living rock. It was starkly beautiful, a place of war built out of nature. Red flags billowed from the windows, contrasting well with the green of the trees and shrubs that clung to everything, even in the highlands.

The entrance was an archway, at the top of which was stamped the distinctive hammer and sickle of the Shining Path. To someone unfamiliar with the Peoples' State, this would seem strange. But the Peruvian Maoists had been fighting a mountain war in the Andes for decades. It made some amount of common sense to put them in charge of the eastern mountain frontier. However, its odd to think that an organisation I recall being responsible for horrendous abuses in their native Peru is now probably the first thing that any of the volunteers meet when entering the Peoples' State.

They led me down into the mountain and put me in a 'waiting room' that looked and felt uncomfortably like a cell. As I waited, I wondered whether my South American adventure had come to a swift and ignominious end. Eventually though, a dark skinned man with a rough salt-and-pepper beard entered the room and sat opposite me.

'You say you are a reporter. They say you are a spy. But you have no weapon, none that my men can find. If you are a spy, you are very strange.' He didn't mince his words. I explained that I was a journalist. I didn't need a weapon, just a little protection, indicating my flak jacket. He looked at it and considered for a while. 'You are with the BBC?'

'No, I work for a newspaper.' I replied. He nodded but stayed silent for some time.

'You will write...about the Revolution?'

'Yes. All the news that people here is filtered through other sources. I want to find the truth.' His dark eyes brightened.

'Ah, the truth! But what is the truth? It is what each of us perceive ourselves. The truth you find here will be the truth for you, but it may not be the truth for me, for my men, for your readers, for the man in Whitehall.' He pulled out a cigar and lit it. He relaxed as he smoked. 'There are some in the Peoples' State who will say that whatever you write is lies. For me, it is immaterial. The Revolution changes a man, changes the way of thinking. You will not change anyone's mind, not truly, with mere words.' He blew a long stream of blue smoke into the air.

'So you'll let me go?'

'Yes,' he replied, looking at me, 'but you will go where I direct, at least at first. You will travel under guard to the nearest armed camp. I will radio ahead, and inform my superiors of your arrival. Any strange movements, and you will put in a holding cell until we can decide what to do with you.' I'd heard the stories of what the Shining Path did 'enemies'. Stonings, burnings, lynchings and decapitations had apparently all been popular in Peru. I preferred not to find out if they were accurate. I nodded vociferously. He blinked once and blew smoke through his nostrils. 'We will also confiscate anything we deem extraneous from your pack.' I frowned, but he raised an eyebrow so I stayed silent. 'It will keep you from doing anything foolish.' I grizzled internally, but kept schtum. I decided to change the subject.

'You have excellent English.' I proffered. He laughed by way of reply.

'We have had many volunteers in this fortress, many from England. It became easier to speak their language than let them struggle with whatever they'd picked up in Cuba.' He leaned in. 'I occasionally read some of the books we take as contraband. I'm rather enjoying The Moon Maid by Mr Burroughs-' he rather stumbled over the name, but I didn't say anything-'it is quite amusing what the North believed socialism would entail.'

Suddenly, he rose. 'I cannot sit talking all day. You may spend the night here. I will ensure you have provisions and a place to sleep. Good luck, Comrade Anderson.' He left the room, and I relaxed in my seat. Another day, a little deeper into the Peoples' State. I was still alive and I was learning and that was what mattered.
 

Sideways

Donor
Top stuff. I like the mountain base you described, and the whole concept of this. It's coming off as a good travelogue.
 
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