Tidewater: An Alternative Historical Tale

Tidewater
By Errnge



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Chapter One:
The Lone Ship


The Sun rose upon a cold morning on the bay. Ice fringed the banks of the Patawomeke River as it flowed out into the ocean. Frost laced the changing leaves, as if the fairies of coming winter had made their first dance upon them. Serenity and indifference, hand-in-hand, marched across the bay and onto land as the sunrise revealed the terrible events of the night before.

Richard’s hands shook nervously as he lit his tobacco cigar, but the blood upon them counteracted anything the soothing smoke could do. Still,
the cigar wrapped in leaves was some small comfort.

“The Queen will be pleased when she hears of our deeds here,” Captain Hawkins said loudly some yards away. “This was a great victory, not only for our people and our Queen, but for God and Jesus Christ.”

“God is vengeance,” one man said in response.

“God is English,” Richard muttered to himself.

All around them, lying on the soft ground, were corpses. Men from a galley that now floated vacantly in the Chesepiook Bay: Spaniards, who had come with murderous intent. At least a hundred of them were dead in their own blood, else floating idly on the shore. At Richard’s feet was one Spaniard with an arrow through his neck. The cadaver was frozen in its violent death throws, legs sprawled out, hands clasping at its throat, and a look of panic and fear carved upon the face as if by a sculptor.

“Mister Ryder,” Captain Hawkins called to Richard, “I’d very much like to see what is stored upon yonder ship.”

“Methinks at least one of these dinghies is still floatable,” Richard responded. “What happens if there be more Spaniards on board?”

Hawkins smiled at that, revealing an incomplete set of teeth, and a remainder left in poor condition. Through his yellow, incomplete smile, the Captain said simply: “Show them the mercy they showed Plymouth.”

Richard immediately understood. Flicking some blood and mud from his boots, he walked to the shoreline, where the low-hanging trees opened up and several small dinghies were pulled up to the coast. Arrows punctured several of them, and most of them looked to be somehow damaged in the fray, whether by accident or malicious purpose. Richard found one boat that looked like its hull had been kicked in by a horse. He looked over, and saw just one such beast lying propped up against the trunk of a sapling birch. He looked back to the dinghies, puffing smoke as he did so. Around him, Englishmen set to looting the bodies and collecting anything of value. Anything unusable was thrown into the bay; better in the belly of the sea than in the hands of the Powhatan.

Finally, Richard found what he was looking for: a small dinghy that he could row by himself to the galley anchored offshore alone. Though the boat could certainly hold as many as ten men, the Englishmen could ill-afford to send too many men onto a ship without certainty of its worth, especially when Indians might be lurking nearby. With the help of a couple of men, Richard pushed off from the coast, and began rowing slowly toward the galley.

They had seen its floating up the Chesepiook the night before, lanterns lit. By the flag raised upon its mast, they knew the ship to be Spanish, undoubtedly an excursion to destroy the English outposts in the Tidewater. Captain Hawkins was the one who organized the ambush, knowing that if the bastards came ashore, they had best be ready for them. The Spanish must have thought they were under attack by Indians at first. Arrows whizzed by them silently in the night. Their lanterns and torches made easy targets. The Spaniards fired their muskets blindly into the night, not knowing from where their assailants came. Some of them hunkered down into a defensive formation around their dinghies, but found they couldn’t escape back to their ship as more Englishmen came by canoe at their back. Many Spanish were captured, but more were executed. Those left alive would be sold as slaves in Elizabeth Town. The last of the Spanish assault had been cornered by the mouth of the river. Long since out of shot, the ensuing battle would be fought hand-to-hand. Englishmen emerged from the brush with pikes and swords, and quickly overwhelmed the enemy just in time for the sun to rise in the East.

When Richard made it to the ship, he heard Englishman already on board, most likely a few of the men on canoes from the earlier blockade. He grappled his way up to the deck to find he was right. Standing around a number of tied up Spanish were five Englishmen, two of them good friends of Richard’s.

“Harry, George, give me a hand,” He said as he tried to lift his legs onto the deck.

“Richard Ryder!” George exclaimed as he came.

Harry was close behind, saying: “You should see the things the Spanish have on board. Gold, silver, pearls…”

George and Harry hefted Richard on deck. Also aboard the ship, attending to the captured crew, was an older Welshman named Richard Hakluyt, and two Englishmen named Charles Howard, the son of the Earl, and Daniel Gilmore, a blacksmith in the town nearby. “Damn good morning, wouldn’t you say?” Richard made a week smile.

“Depends on your definition of the word ‘good’ I suppose,” Hakluyt said.

“What do you mean, of course it’s a good day,” Harry threw a hefty arm over the old Welshman. “We captured a Spanish ship and defeated the men inside it. Providence has smiled on us this day.”

“Indeed, I don’t know how it could have gone any better,” George concurred.

George and Harry Brown were cousins, though they looked like brothers. Standing next to each other, one could see they were both of strong build and of a fierce disposition. Long sandy hair and chilling green eyes, both were quite admired by the ladies of Elizabeth Town. Richard Ryder certainly envied their looks.

“Mister Hakluyt is just a grim old man,” Charles Howard said. “But what to do with the captives? Has Captain Hawkins given orders?”

“Yea,” Richard said, noticing that his cigar had gone out. “Where are those lanterns? My tobacco’s gone out.”

“Focus, man!” Howard growled. “What orders did the captain give?”

Sighing, Richard said: “Captain Hawkins had requested that we give any captives on this ship the same mercy the Spanish showed Plymouth.”

Harry and George, men who grew up in Devonshire, smiled cruelly. Even Hakluyt gave a smirk.

“Well,” Howard said, drawing his blade, “So be it.”

Gagged, the Spanish muffled screams of protest were quickly cut off by the slashing of blades. After the prisoners were all swiftly dispatched, they were thrown overboard into the bay.

After he shoved the final body over the edge, Hakluyt wiped the blood from his hands with a handkerchief and tisked: “This does not bode well.”

“Prophetic as usual,” Richard smirked, sitting down on a barrel and kicking some of the sand from his boots as he spoke. “What’s the danger Welshman?”

“Spanish ships haven’t been seen this far up the Bay in almost a decade,” Hakluyt said, staring out onto the water, as the bloodied shore where the ship’s former crew no lay rotting. “Not since we first arrived in this God forsaken land. If a ship sailed this far north without Raleigh or any of the other lords to the south taking notice…”

“It does ring a bit unlikely,” Daniel Gilmore, the blacksmith, piped in.

“They could have sailed along the Eastern Shore,” Howard debated. “Maybe their plan was to catch us by surprise.”

“Now that would be ironic,” Harry laughed grimly.

“This conversation is useless,” Howard continued. “Now, let’s bring this ship ashore, load some of our boys on here, and sail this vessel to Queens harbour. If the Captain wishes it.”

Howard’s final words came as an afterthought. A noble, he was quite unused to following the orders of the likes of Captain John Hawkins, one of the many great men who fell from grace after the Great Spanish Invasion of 1588.

After the Virgin Queen was forced to flee for her life in the wake of the Duke of Parma and his Imperial dogs.

After burnings and hangings and all kinds of evils befell the English people.

After they escaped to the land across the sea on sturdy ships and carved out a new home for God-fearing Englishmen who still pledged allegiance to Queen Elizabeth and a Protestant faith.

This was Virginia in the Lord’s Year of 1599.

“God save us,” Richard whispered, looking at the blood on his hands. “And God save the Queen.”
 
Hello, and welcome to the world of Tidewater!

This is my newest timeline, and I intend to stick with this one :p. I truly appreciate comments, support, questions, contributions, anything to the worthy cause of this timeline, which is to explore a world that, admittedly, isn't the most likely to exist, but is, I think you will find, a compelling and plausible world.

And as you read and (hopefully) comment, remember two things:

"God is Vengeance!"

"God is English!"
 
Oho! You are actually doing it! I'm a little skeptical but your prose is always entertaining!
 
Oho! You are actually doing it! I'm a little skeptical but your prose is always entertaining!

Skeptical of what? The premise?

I guess, like everything, the devil's in the details. Under the right circumstances, you just gotta make it work, right?
 
Hmm, so let me get this premise straight;

-A successful Spanish invasion of England in 1588,

-An England-over-the-seas state to carry on the nation's name, and most importantly to me,

-An alternate history of Virginia, especially one set in my beloved Tidewater?

Subscribed :D.
 
Hmm, so let me get this premise straight;

-A successful Spanish invasion of England in 1588,

-An England-over-the-seas state to carry on the nation's name, and most importantly to me,

-An alternate history of Virginia, especially one set in my beloved Tidewater?

Subscribed :D.

Ohohohoho, it get's better :cool:

Good start.

How far are you going with this?

I'm not immediately sure. I have plans as far as the next ten years or so, but beyond that, I guess we'll just have to see.

Looks Epic, I hope to see more!

Thanks! :)
 
GOOD MORNING VIR-GIN-IA!

With day two of Tidewater's existence, I hope to have an update by the end of the day, maybe tomorrow if I'm unlucky
 
Chapter Two:
The Maiden of London Town


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The grim halls of the Tower always left Isabella with a feeling of foreboding. The cold grey stones echoed her every step as she ascended, like the whispers of bygone kings. They spoke about her, she knew, ghosts and men. But her father had warned her about this and so much more when he instilled her on the English throne. She was Queen Isabella I of England, the first Hapsburg to rule from London, and the Catholic redeemer of the British Isles.

“This is an age of turmoil, Your Majesty” Charles Neville, Sixth Earl of Westmorland, reminded her. Isabella jumped; she’d almost forgotten he was there. “You are a kind and goodly Queen, but these sorts of men… They are less than dogs, and deserve nothing more than a heretic’s death.”

“If he repents and sees the light of God,” Isabella reminded him in turn, “Then there shall be no such need for the pyre.”

Neville nodded respectfully.

“Many English kings have walked these halls, no?” Isabella placed a hand gingerly upon the wall.

“Many, indeed, Your Majesty,” Neville huffed. He was old, in his late fifties, and the years as well as a hard life certainly had worn him down. “Kings who spoke French, Latin, and many tongues besides English, my Queen.”

She smiled at that. “It has taken me some time to learn your language. Thou art thanked for reminding me I am not the first to face such a challenge.”

They continued to ascend, higher and higher. Isabella’s mind began to wonder. After this unpleasantness, she looked forward to going to the theatre. She much enjoyed seeing these exciting new English plays across the Thames. Word around the city was that the new Marlowe play was most exhilarating, and the actor Richard Burbage gave an excellent performance. She blushed a little. To be honest, she was quite fond of the way the leading man looked. There was something about a man with great presence that she found—

She tripped on a hard stone stair, and the thought flew away like a bird for winter. A few steps more and the hard oaken door came into sight. By its side were two heavily armored guards with spears. Draped over their chest-plates were golden tunics with a red lion emblazoned upon them.

Bowing their heads, the guards opened the door. Inside the cell, waiting for her, was the Earl Marshall Henry Howard, the first Earl of Northampton.

“Your Majesty, this truly is not necessary,” Howard said. “We can dispose of the traitor just like the others.”

“He deserves a chance to repent,” Isabella said softly. “The others were tried and dispatched without my knowledge. I want to talk with this one.”

“As you wish, Your Majesty,” Howard nodded.

John Dee was a shell of a man. Dried blood was caked onto his skin and matted his grey beard. He looked half-starved and beaten within an inch of his life.

“You have been found a heretic, Mister Dee,” Isabella said. “A witch who consorts with Lutherans, pagans, and devil-worshippers. I have come in hopes that you will see the light of God and His Holy Father, the Pope. Do this, and you may be spared.”

John Dee looked up, his eyes red.

“You are a cursed woman, Infanta,” Dee sneered. “You as much a Queen as I am a King.”

Howard hit him for that. Isabella thought she saw a tooth fly to the corner of the cell. That was when the old man began to laugh:

“Across the ocean, the true queen abides. But on the river, the usurper chides.”

“He’s a madman,” Neville gasped.

“Thou shalt receive what thine is due,” Dee giggled. “Long live Virginia! Long live the Queen Elizabeth Tudor, the one true Queen of England!”

Howard struck him again. “The old man will not learn.”

“A Spanish asp has infested thine country,” Dee continued, unabated. “The Pope’s harlot, come to poison us all with its venom.”

“Though I am sure of his guilt,” Neville said, “I cannot help but wonder if he is at all capable of leading the attempted uprising. The villain’s absolutely mad.”

Dee suddenly stopped laughing. He looked Isabella in the eye and spoke calmly. “I will never recant. I bow neither to thee nor to thy Pope. It is the Usurper Queen who must be mad. If not she will certainly become mad, for she is alone in a land that hates her, solitary amongst a populace that wants her pretty head. God is vengeance. God is English.”

The cell was silent after that.

“I only came to beg your repentance,” Isabella said, heading back toward the door. She was embarrassed. Small little tears were welling up in the corners of her eyes, and the last thing she wanted was for the old Welshman to see her cry. She felt week, and maybe she was. “I’m sorry, but there is nothing I can do for you. Tomorrow thou shalt burn at the stake as a heretic and a traitor not only to the Crown, but to the Divine as well.”


Some said that Edward Alleyn was the best actor in England. And while he was certainly a powerful and imposing figure, Isabella still much preferred Richard Burbage. Both graced the stage today as The Duke’s Men (formerly known as the Admiral’s Men) took to the stage to perform Christopher Marlowe’s latest drama. Set in the exotic lands across the sea, the play entitled Montezuma recounts how Hernan Cortes and his dashing, though mischievous men defeated the savage heathens and conquered their city of jewels. Edward Alleyn played the title role brilliantly, and Richard Burbage depicted the Spanish conquistador with tact and great skill.

Naturally, Isabella loved it.

She laughed with the crowd when that quirky and strange Alvarado retold his story of how he leapt over a canal and his enemies to escape the City of Mexico, and she cried at the climax when Montezuma was murdered. When the drama was through, Isabella stood up in applause. The company bowed to her, and there was great cheering:
Isabella loved this country’s people, and at the theatre she felt like they loved her too.


The next morning, a cold northerly wind chilled London. Isabella stayed huddled up inside her chambers, and looked out the window. In the distance, she could see smoke rising. Burnings of heretics and traitors, she knew. Amongst them would be Dee. With a heavy sigh, Isabella turned to her desk, where countess papers had amassed.

Her father used to have her assist him in the day-to-day affairs of his empire. One of her priorities included translating letters and documents from Italian to Spanish for him. He would smile, gingerly stroke her red hair, and return to his work. Meticulous as her father was, Philip II of Spain was a very patient man. Isabella missed him greatly since his parting.

One of the letters on the desk came from the new King of Spain, her brother Philip III. She received it two days ago, but had kept it unattended because she did not know exactly how to answer it. Her brother wanted to know why she had yet to marry—She was thirty-three after all, and was not getting any younger—and had a few men in mind who might fit the bill. Sighing, Isabella said aloud:

“No wonder Elizabeth stayed unmarried all these years.”

After the Duke of Parma died in battle with the French two years ago, there has been great concern as to who should succeed the Queen. It mattered greatly, especially after plot after plot to murder her, that she should marry and have children. Many laughed that the Spain had replaced one virgin redhead with another. Indeed, there were quite a lot of similarities between Isabella and her predecessor. It made Isabella feel uneasy. Shaking her head, she returned to the letter’s contents.

A count from the Low Countries, several Spanish dukes and dons, even some Italian nobles graced the list. None were all that impressive, and none would do her realm any good anyway. England already had an alliance with Spain that was very healthy. There was no need to continue bringing in Spanish lords to England. If anything, that would make things worse for Isabella. No, none of these men would do. But how to tell her brother that?

With another heavy sigh, Isabella got up from the desk. She looked around nervously, as she did whenever the thought ran through her head. A thought that was odd to be sure. She’d only begun having it after her coronation, and sometimes she indulged. But was anyone around? She closed the curtains by her window and locked the door. Then she walked over to the middle of her room, and slowly took off her gowns. Once stripped down to nothing but her milky white skin and red hair, she laughed, and began to dance.

For she is alone in a land that hates her,
Solitary amongst a populace that wants her pretty head.
God is vengeance. God is English.
 
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Nice update, looks like interesting times to be sure. I wonder how well settled the English monarch and Company are on the Potomac/Tidewater area, especially considering the conditions of the time. And Isabella seems...eccentric?

One minor language nitpick: The phrase "I will never recant. I bow neither to thine nor to thine Pope" has a couple grammatical issues. It should read "neither to thee" (the objective form/referring to the subject) and "thy Pope" (use of "thy" and "thine" depended largely on whether the following word started with a consonant or a vowel for the sake of flow).
 
Nice update, looks like interesting times to be sure. I wonder how well settled the English monarch and Company are on the Potomac/Tidewater area, especially considering the conditions of the time. And Isabella seems...eccentric?

One minor language nitpick: The phrase "I will never recant. I bow neither to thine nor to thine Pope" has a couple grammatical issues. It should read "neither to thee" (the objective form/referring to the subject) and "thy Pope" (use of "thy" and "thine" depended largely on whether the following word started with a consonant or a vowel for the sake of flow).

I'll make those changes. Thanks
 
Just found this - it's a reboot of your prior Elizabeth-in-exile timeline? Good stuff.

It's more like a mix of that and Flintlock and Rapier. I'm trying some different stuff, and decided it would be best just to focus on the stuff I wanted to instead of getting bogged down in the earlier stuff that can be perfectly inferred through narrative.

Glad to have you on board, your opinions are always helpful
 
By the way, to readers:

If there are any historical figures from this time period who you would particularly like to see make an appearance, be sure to let me know :)
 
Now that polls are closed, I thought I'd bump this thread, get it some attention. I hope to update this weekend!
 
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