Hmmm, we could say that the IFE is equal parts dystopic and utopic?
It has its own dystopic parts. As I said, their pursuit of perfectionism will make the daily life super stressful. And in the future, when their allies wring out the Protestant, there would be ... interesting stuff. My goal is to make a much better Madness TL though so I can’t make the “dystopia“ part bigger than “utopia”; and note that the “utopia” here could be dystopic in other people’s dictionary.
So something like 65% nice and 35% ... “bad”. I probably need to do a daily life peeking in the IFE later.
 
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So will we see a stronger Green or Enviromental movement later on along with Transhumanism?
Yes, they are coming up, after the Second Great War. But I won’t talk about them until December, cause my quarter is coming up and I only try to write one chapter per week.
 
It has its own dystopic parts. As I said, their pursuit of perfectionism will make the daily life super stressful. And in the future, when their allies wring out the Protestant, there would be ... interesting stuff. My goal is to make a much better Madness TL though so I can’t make the “dystopia“ part bigger than “utopia”; and note that the “utopia” here is could be dystopic in other people’s dictionary.
I know. I was speaking of utopic from a neutral 21th century western modern perspective.
 
I take a little break from Madness and Ardor to flesh out some ideas on the Illuminist. What do guys think about this update :D? In my imagination, I envision the Loomies as the hyper-technocratic equivalent of USSR, and even more fanatical about erasing old society.

The Looming Juggernaut
Russia’s Plans to Modernize


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Illuminist Poster to galvanize workers into modernizing Russia, circa 1928
The Illuminist factions of Volkov had emerged victorious after the devastating Russian Civil War that lasted nearly six years and consumed over eight millions lives, and ravaged much of the country. However, the Illuminist Bear would be in better luck than OTL Soviet Union, for Poland and Prussia were firmly friends with Russia, and were more than welcome to help the Russians. And thus, Volkov would find a massive foreign help to boost the country back.

Beginning in 1921, when Russia had successfully quelled most of the rebellions and unrest, and the major infrastructures were back to operations, Protector Volkov issued with the Illuminati council a plan to modernize Russia. Being a factory worker himself, Volkov understood the importance of efficiency and lobbied for policies and plans that would industrialize the country the quickest. Eventually, he settled down for a plan which asked for a mixed-economy model. This plan would be known as “The First Three-Year Plan”, one that would have massive impacts on the livelihood of the impoverished Russians. The plan’s goals were the following:

  • Privatizing agriculture plots. The farmers knew the best ways to work on his plots.
  • Breaking down the megacorporations and creating multiple small companies. Competitions were necessary to produce the best results.
  • Encouraging small industries. Russia must be self-sufficient, and her people must be filled with adequate consumer products.
  • Nationalizing heavy industry. This is the fastest way to accelerate industrialization.
  • Maintaining a large military. The integration of the military with industry will give incentives to modernize the nation.

With these goals, Volkov set out to mobilize the whole nation to industrialization. Immediately, many old, wealthy industrialists and nobles found themselves at the face of guns if they could not relinquish parts of their companies for the workers. Those who agreed, however, were given monetary benefits to help opening more factories in underdeveloped locations. Those refused to agree - and sometimes if they agreed, the People’s Army would still take their properties for nationalization - found themselves on the way to Kartogas in Siberia and Inner Manchuria. Nevertheless, most of the people could begin working as soon as possible and Volkov found himself having an increasingly large base of support. The Russians were whirled into a frenzy to build their country back, and soon industrial productions and agricultural outputs increased dramatically by the end of 1924, at the deadline of the First Three-Year Plan.

Volkov was not someone tolerant of failures. Communities that failed to meet and follow the goals of the Three-Year Plan were rounded up and exiled into Inner Manchuria and Siberia, where they would end up busting rocks, logging, and building infrastructure all day, regardless of however harsh the conditions were. Tens of thousands more would die under the ruthless efficiency that Volkov set forth, or at the hand of the fanatical People’s Guard, a paramilitary organization that policed the progress of people. The extreme adherence to strict standards and efficiency would also slowly turn the Russians from a formerly emotional people into among the world’s coldest and most logical population. Essentially, Volkov had set precedences for Russia to become the Eastern Prussia, with the infamous Russian work ethics.

The success of the First Three-Year Plan motivated the Illuminati Council to push for the Second and Third Three-Year Plan, aimed at opening more dams and canals to provide energy, irrigation and water for industry. In these plans, Volkov piggybagged the Prussians, Polish and Ukrainians for expertise and workforces. The Council, on the other hand, had approved designs to build several projects - the Krasnoyarsk dam, the Bratsk dam, and the Baltic-White Sea canal. What that meant was that Russia wanted to have about two-hundred thousands more Katorga inmates to exploit. Prussia provided 20,000 inmates, mostly former Nobles and devout Protestants; Poland another 10,000 inmates; and Ukraine about 30,000. Russia itself bled out another 140,000 poor souls to work till death for these projects. The next six years (1925 - 1930) saw nearly 100,000 people give up their lives for constructing these grand projects. Albeit, those who survived would either settle down in Siberia and form new industrial, closed cities since the Illuminist government did not want the public to hear about the brutality of modernization for fear of backlashing and distraction from their march towards the Utopian future. Nevertheless, these constructions sped up the industrialization of Russia and saw millions more received adequate energy for warmth and production.

The Fourth Three-Year Plan was aimed at reforming education. The Illuminati Council, at the suggestion of Alexander Bogdanov, decided that scientific education was more important than classics and humanities, and set out to reduce budgets for non-STEM curriculum, while ramping up the difficulties for STEM subjects. Teachers of non-STEM were required to only teach books and materials that the Bureau of Education deemed “necessary”. For instance, classical music, reminders of the old regimes, were suppressed, and instead Illuminist Musics were taught to students (OTL Soviet musics); and sci-fi literatures were absolutely extolled to praise the progress of sciences and utopia . Much more books were confiscated and burned for “reactionary, anti-progress thoughts”, many of which were incredibly valuable to the Russian souls. But to the Illuminist, nothing was “out of hand” when it came to moving the whole society to the Second Enlightenment. Now, the humanist and non-STEM found themselves increasingly at dangers of being purged and removed from society and into Katorgas. The students, meanwhile, find themselves at increasingly steep learning curves designed to optimize their learning. Those that lagged behind faced harsh disciplines, and found their families being heavily fined for “sloth and anti-Progress activities”. The dedication to educate the whole population, however, was overall fairly positive, with literacy rate soon reaching 98% by 1935, the highest in the world. The massive and newly educated class, combined with the ridiculously industrious work ethic, would begin producing a vast amount of innovations that even the ultranationalist Yankees would fear.

The Fifth Three-Year Plan (1935 - 1938), which was also known as "Strength Through Numbers", was realized. At this point, Russia had become an industrial juggernaut with possibly the strongest land army in the world, and the third largest navy, behind Europa and RU, and an economy that was the second largest. But Protector Volkov wanted more. In the Fifth Plan, Volkov made it clear that he would like to see the birth rate increase to between 3.0 - 4.0, for “The Progress shall be stronger with more people”. To encourage families to have more children, policies that rewarded families with “Medal of Heroism” and financial aid for having at least four children were passed. Marriages at young ages (21 - 30) were deemed “vital for the nurturing of Illuminism”, while the government would give out gifts like better housings to newly wed couples. Those who failed to reach at least two children would have to adopt foster children, and need to get another baby within three years. And to provide foods for the growing populations, the Illuminati Council placed plans to improve agriculture. Privatization rate increased, while biotechnologies for improving crops’ abilities to tolerate cold climate or drought were given much fundings. Farmers were subsidized to help them grow more food and herd more cattles in the non-Chernozem belts, while in the better farming areas that suffered from dry climates, shelter barriers were erected to reduce soil erosions. Crop diversity was researched into as well, to help increase farmers’ incomes and properly provide nutritions for nearly two-hundred million Russians.

By 1940, Western and Northern Europe, especially the Yankee-friendly powers, knew that something even more dangerous and powerful than themselves was coming up. No, it was not the Supercatholics. It was the Illuminist bloc, with a huge pool of man powers and a production scale nearly unrivaled in the world. A bloc that combined Prussia’s love for precision, Polish’s desire for learning, Ukrainian and Russian vast agricultural wealth, all powered by Russian muscle and sweat, was looming again in the East. Well, one built at the cost of hundreds of thousands perished in the bitterly cold Katorga and at the hand of Russian ruthlessness.

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A Russian ship passing through the newly constructed White Sea - Baltic Canal, circa 1931

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The Krasnoyarsk Dam in operation, circa 1933

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Katorga inmates building roads in Magadan, circa 1932

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I liked the update. However i can see the russians hoarding classic books and records at home. Maybe they run underground libraries. They would still show warmth but to people they trust. I see them as major competition post Manifest Climax.
 
I liked the update. However i can see the russians hoarding classic books and records at home. Maybe they run underground libraries. They would still show warmth but to people they trust. I see them as major competition post Manifest Climax.
Ah yes, in general a few classic books - Crime and Punishment or something equivalent to Anna Karenina - will survive the Illuminist Cultural Revolution. Underground libraries are absolutely going to exist, so I consider them analogous to the black market of Soviet Union. But in general, the Cultural purges will result in irreversible losses of old Russian cultures. As much as TTL Russian Empire is a bigger asshole than Classic! Russia, it is still a terrible tragedy, even worse than OTL Mao's Great Leap Forward.

Minor spoiler for Madness and Ardor: The Systematist will have their own way of handling Eastern European cultures. In general, they are extremely elitist and will remove whatever they consider "low" cultures. So very likely, the image of Gopnik is not going to exist in M&A, lol! But their purges are much softer than either OTL USSR or the Loomies.
 
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Illuminist previews :D Still take breaks from Madness and Ardor sorry.
The Looming Enlightenment
The Illuminist Cultural Revolution
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IPRR's poster to call for total enlightenment of Russia, circa 1933
Edit: I found a more fitting poster. Please ignore the old poster.
 

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Okay here is some more Loomies stuffs, inspired by Mao's Cultural Revolution and Soviet purges. Enjoy!

The Looming Enlightenment
The Illuminist Cultural Revolution


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IPRR poster calling for total enlightenment of Russia, circa 1933
The Illuminists were a radical revolutionary group. In fact, so radical that it might be off-putting to the tradition-abiding Russians and potentially causing much unrest among the unconverted and religious masses. This was why Protector Volkov and the Illuminati Council, during the First, Second and Third Three-Year, did not do much to sway the traditional institutions of Russia. It was not until the Fourth Three-Year Plan that the Illuminist government started to uproot the old orders, in the name of leading Russia towards Second Enlightenment and Glorious Future. What followed next was a gradual cultural genocide of Old Russia, and paved much ways into creating a completely new image of Russia as a logic-abiding, ruthlessly efficient and forward-looking nation, one that would stop at nothing to bring the beautiful faraway into reality. And the end result would be … weird and devastating to the old cultures.

In 1933, Protector Volkov approved a plan, named The Enlightened Cultural Revolution, proposed and finished by Alexander Bogdanov, as a part of the Fourth Three-Year Plan and future reforms, which was mainly aimed at massively upgrading the Russian education. In the plan, Bogdanov suggested that it was time to wither away religious institutions, Tsarist non-STEM intellectuals and let the newly educated, Illuminist-indoctrinated scholar classes rise to prominence. It would call for much of the priests and professed Orthdoxs or other religious people to renounce their religion and embrace Illuminism as the only State doctrine. Anyone who tries to resist would be forced into re-education camps to accept Illuminism. And that was step one. The next phase would call for eradicating much of the traditional thinkings and pre-Illuminist era cultures, and was meant to be carried out on a longer time frame. Bogdanov estimated that within twenty years, much of pre-Illuminist Russian Empire would be eradicated, and then, the march towards the Glorious Future would be unobstructed.

The first phase was performed throughout 1934 to 1940. Priests, shamans, muslims, and Confucians found themselves at increasing dangers. The People’s Guard and People’s Army came in and forcefully closed down churches and mosques, and then to be replaced with public libraries or public gathering centers. Even more extreme were that they could raze down such religious institutions if resistances were too strong, and all such religious members were put on trains to be transferred into Katorgas or, on rarer instances, be executed. The Illuminists were careful though, and in most cases they did this indirectly, through clandestine arsons or using ultra flammable chemicals. The result was that nearly 90% of churches or religious buildings in IPRR were destroyed by 1945 . In other cases, the Illuminists utilized the radicalized crowds to make them turn against their neighbors or suspected religious people that needed brainwashing. And in such cases, usually one could see that the youngsters could try to snitch on their relatives and acquaintances to the People’s Guard, and then such “convicted” victims soon parted away from their dear houses.

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Anti-religion poster by IPRR, circa 1934

In camps, the convicts were then forced to perform many hard labors, in extreme conditions and sometimes even without adequate food. The Illuminists did not care about what kind of crimes or backgrounds they came from, and punished anyone into the same level of labors with varying sentencing times. In days that they did not have to do labors, the Illuminists conducted brainwashing sessions, using newly developed psychological theories of positive reinforcements and behavior-programming. While not as gruesome as many would expect, the psychological tortures nonetheless drove many into insanity or created a whole new group of fanatics who were so thoroughly brainwashed that they would then best be drafted into the People’s Guard afterwards, deemed too unstable for society. The Illuminist had to make sure that the convicts would learn their lessons and remembered that well into the future. ….

Phase Two was actually implemented in parallel with Phase One, but lasted longer and far more brutal and methodical. The Illuminists up their games with total cultural restructuring. From architectures, to books, to newspapers, music, everything had to be made to fit in the Illuminist ideals. First, the Illuminist began catering towards architectures that emphasized Avant-Garde, Constructivist or Modernist styles. No more buildings with designs based on the pre-Illuminist era could be approved for constructions. So, much of Russia's urban areas saw increasing numbers of new architectures being constructed, with designs created within Russia or imported from Prussia or Poland. The old imperial-era buildings were left alone, however. But within a few decades, much of the Illuminist Bloc’s cities would be unrecognizable, with avant-garde and geometric architectures dominating much of the neighborhood. These were what many historians called “visual propaganda”. The new buildings were grand as well, to make sure that the Illuminist themselves seemed much more “advanced and progressive” than the Tsarists came before them.

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Monument of Progress, an example of Avant-Garde Illuminist style, circa 1937

The Illuminist’s control on other art forms was staggering as well. Using the People’s Guard, the Illuminist went on the quest to stamp out leftover pro-Tsar materials. Books that somewhat romanticized the Tsarist age were confiscated and labelled “obsolete and reactionary”. While they would end up in some archives and left to be rotten, many were burned on site to make an example, which was what happened to most of the bibles and religious texts. In fact, so many texts were burned that they sometimes were used as fuel to warm up houses or to power factories. People who tried to avoid the book purges were then loaded on trains to go to Katorgas. Music was also targeted. The Illuminist considered much of pre-Illuminist music to be “reactionary reminders'' and worked to remove all of them from public life. The criteria to select such music would be based on the lyrics of concerned music, or timbre of the music. Let’s say if a song or piece of music sounds “depressing” (like most of Russian music), that one was targeted. Otherwise, music that was more upbeat and could give out grand, majestic feelings were kept, of course after being heavily edited. So, countless collections of classical music and folk music, many of which were invaluable to the Russian identities, were taken away to be archived or destroyed, or modified beyond recognition. To replace some of the music loss, the Illuminist commissioned musicians that agreed to help the government to compose a totally Illuminist-approved music. Songs that invoked heroic, revolutionary, forward-looking feelings were approved, and they quickly supplanted the old music among the newly educated and indoctrinated populace.

By 1940, Russian arts were radically changed. Instead of classic books of the Tsarist era, newer books, such as How the Enlightened Man was Tempered, The Fight against Backwardness or Hundred Years into the Future [1] were put into standard education. Books that reflected the daily struggles were slowly supplanted by science fiction books and Illuminist-Romantic books to instill and procure Illuminism and the Glorious Future. New poems, written by Illuminist-educated poets, were introduced and replaced much of the former poems. In music education, students would sing Smelo Tovarishchi v Nogu [2a], Prekrasnoe Dalyoko [2b] and the Illuminist anthem instead of Christian hymns or folk songs in schools and summer activities sessions. Much of visual art forms and expressions had become purely avant-garde, constructivist, or futurist, since artists were forbidden from making traditional arts to prevent “reactionary and conservative resurgence”. It was a trend for Illuminist Party members and newly rich class to collect the strangest, most abstract arts produced, and even middle class families would try to purchase those arts to show that they strived to become part of Russo-Illuminist culture.

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Paintings that typical Russian family would collect

Another part of the Cultural Revolution was a total social reform of Russia to become a highly efficient society. It was a difficult task, for Russians were famously emotional. The Illuminist decided that instead of persecuting some of the older generations to remove their emotional Russian souls, they would go with disciplining the populace. Borrowing from Prussian culture and, ironically, the harsh disciplines of the Tsarist Army that came before them, the Illuminist seeked to enforce these standards on their people. Fines and punishments for deviation from “expected standards and procedures” were increased, to the point that even going to work late by a few minutes, or accidentally threw trashes on street, or failure to meet qualitative quotas would mean doing push-ups, running several kilometers and receiving monetary fines at the same time. Speaking of qualitative quotas, the Illuminist government created a Bureau of Quality to check on manufacturers’ and producers’ final products. Using many complicated testing schemes, the Bureau of Quality wanted to make sure end products were made with the highest (and sometimes ridiculous) standards. It was a huge hassle, since sometimes the standards could be wacky like reaching a degree of shininess, or matching the same color. Manufacturers were much more likely to be targeted for apparent “standard deviation” by the Bureau, and then be fined with smaller loan packages or increased interest rates, but farmers were mostly left alone. Well, left alone until the Illuminist realized that they could figure out ways to test nutritional values on foods, and then the Bureau made farmers adopt the newest farming techniques to improve both quantitative and qualitative agricultural output.

The Illuminist were also avid believers in the concept of Ubermensch, or how men and women should be. To that end, physical fitness, new diets, behavior standards, and intellect standards were created. For physical fitness, everyone must be able to maintain their strength and stamina, and the government required them to do physical exercise daily, in their workplace break time. Students would need to run mini-marathon every week, and be able to complete basically a junior-adjusted military training every month. Diets that cut down the consumption of alcohols and tobacco were enforced and heavily promoted. Men and women would need to behave according to new norms, based on both gender and Illuminist expectations. So, less goofing around for partying and more learning/reading. Men had to be strong, resourceful, progressive and intellectual, women must be beautiful, sophisticated, tough and heroic. The government wanted nearly everyone to be like that, and those who tried to rebel against new standards were then, well, shipped to Katorgas or get fined. On a positive note, the Illuminist increased gender equality, and secured universal suffrages and 18-year-old suffrage rights for their citizens.

The societal effects of the Cultural Revolution were thorough. Over time, younger Russian generations became increasingly strict and disciplined. So strict and punctual, in fact, visitors thought that they were automatons rather than living humans. And they were famously workaholic, working long hours in tough conditions, even if they were sick. And so obsessed with high standards that Russians became notorious for being extremely picky with goods. Russian daily habits were heavily transformed, and it became the new norm to attend community gatherings for Illuminist propaganda sessions and reportings, a more evolved and sinister form of Obschina gatherings that had existed before. And every week, at 5PM on Friday, citizens had to stop whatever they were doing to sing the IPRR anthem. Do not try to break that, for the fines and punishment were heavy. Well, the consequences of such strict and rigid controls on Russian people were astounding. Behind the image of seemingly rigid, patriotic and perfect Russians, the society became far more stressful. Despite much greater comforts and living standards, the long working hours, tight militaristic lifestyle and perfectionistic outlooks had made Russians incredibly prone to suicides, alcohol abuses or even stimulant abuses. Russia had a really high suicide or drug overdose rate in the years following the final phase of Cultural Revolution, and they were the leading cause of death in IPRR, if one does not count hidden fatalities in Katorgas.

The resistances against the Cultural Revolution were rather common and strong. In Inner Manchuria, for instance, where many Chinese tried to resist the abrupt changes enforced on them, the Illuminist dealt with them extremely harsh. In the end, millions of Chinese would be exiled into Siberia, where about a quarter of them gave up their lives under strenuous labor. Those that were “lucky” were shot on site, especially elders who tried to maintain their ways of life. It was also part of the plan to de-Sinicize Manchuria for future Russifications. By 1950, Manchuria would become Russified-majority, thanks to the brutal People’s Guard who were put in charge to monitor the progress of the Cultural Revolution. The same thing happened in Central Asia, where the already smaller muslim population compared to OTL suffered severe demographic losses from the Revolution. Traditional cultures of Manchuria and Central Asia - and to a lesser extent, Russia - were forever lost to time, to the point that it was impossible to recover any pre-Illuminist writings. The survivors and new generation were then so integrated into Russo-Illuminist culture that they genuinely believed in whatever lies and exaggerations that the government told them.

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An enlightened Russian woman, circa 1940

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A Russian classroom, circa 1942. Russian students enjoyed one of the best, if not the harshest and toughest education known to man

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A very rare image of a massacred Chinese village by the People's Guard, circa 1938. Most victims were people of pre-Illuminist era, or people above 25 years old.

[1] - Allohistorical allusions to two famous Soviet books: How the Steel was Tempered and 100 years into Future

[2a] and [2b] - Translated as Let's Bravely March Comrades and Beautiful Faraway. Now I know that some of these songs were several decades ahead of OTL, but Soviet movie musics barely changed in timbre, themes and lyrics. And they have the right vibes for Illuminism.
 
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Men had to be strong, resourceful and intellectual, women must be beautiful and sophisticated
Sorry for the nitpick, but that "women must be beautiful and sophisticated" sounds too similar to what an Illuminist would call "reactionary thought".

Instead a more interesting and weirder idea would be not only to women be "beautiful and sophisticated" but also "heroic graceful warriors for peace and advance", to show that the female ubermench is above "old opresive structures". I think the perfect inspiration is Wonder Woman's original concept by her author William Marston:

Not even girls want to be girls so long as our feminine archetype lacks force, strength, and power. Not wanting to be girls, they don't want to be tender, submissive, peace-loving as good women are. Women's strong qualities have become despised because of their weakness. The obvious remedy is to create a feminine character with all the strength of Superman plus all the allure of a good and beautiful woman.
As lovely as Aphrodite- as wise as Athena- with the speed of Mercury and the strength of Hercules - She is known only as Wonder Woman

Same thing with Systematists.
 
Sorry for the nitpick, but that "women must be beautiful and sophisticated" sounds too similar to what an Illuminist would call "reactionary thought".

Instead a more interesting and weirder idea would be not only to women be "beautiful and sophisticated" but also "heroic graceful warriors for peace and advance", to show that the female ubermench is above "old opresive structures". I think the perfect inspiration is Wonder Woman's original concept by her author William Marston:

Not even girls want to be girls so long as our feminine archetype lacks force, strength, and power. Not wanting to be girls, they don't want to be tender, submissive, peace-loving as good women are. Women's strong qualities have become despised because of their weakness. The obvious remedy is to create a feminine character with all the strength of Superman plus all the allure of a good and beautiful woman.
As lovely as Aphrodite- as wise as Athena- with the speed of Mercury and the strength of Hercules - She is known only as Wonder Woman

Same thing with Systematists.
Ah okay, let me fix that. It is just that it is near impossible to remove the expectations of women in Eastern European countries. The Soviet still kept the image of women as feminine, beside strong, heroic and educated.
The Systematists are more conservative and cautious than the Illuminists. They will try to uphold that standard to show that Russian women are "emancipated and better" than other women.
 
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The Soviet still kept the image of women as feminine
Oh, I have no problem with people being feminine or masculine. I just thought that the original quote didn't have an Illuminist feeling and that Mourston's utopian martial pacifist 20th century feminism* was more similar to the russian Illuminist/maybe Systematist idea of liberated women.

I also was inspired by a conversation I once had about the ethical virtues of female sculpting which implied references to ancient greece, comics and survival of the fittest. That I'm a somewhat geeky young adult with particular tastes and I've had a penchant for Enlightenment philosophy, Nieztche and Ayn Rand in sometimes overlapped points in my life gets me into this whole thing.

*Well, some will say he wasn't feminist, others will say he was kinda feministic. He was one of those guys who have a very special worldview.
 
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Sorry for the nitpick, but that "women must be beautiful and sophisticated" sounds too similar to what an Illuminist would call "reactionary thought".

Instead a more interesting and weirder idea would be not only to women be "beautiful and sophisticated" but also "heroic graceful warriors for peace and advance", to show that the female ubermench is above "old opresive structures". I think the perfect inspiration is Wonder Woman's original concept by her author William Marston:

Not even girls want to be girls so long as our feminine archetype lacks force, strength, and power. Not wanting to be girls, they don't want to be tender, submissive, peace-loving as good women are. Women's strong qualities have become despised because of their weakness. The obvious remedy is to create a feminine character with all the strength of Superman plus all the allure of a good and beautiful woman.
As lovely as Aphrodite- as wise as Athena- with the speed of Mercury and the strength of Hercules - She is known only as Wonder Woman

Same thing with Systematists.
I had a thought a while ago that Marston could lay the foundations for Sexual Marxism in the same way that Darwin layed the foundation for Scientific Marxism. In that lense BDSM wouldn't really exist as a separate, "other" outlet of sexual expression but rather as an accepted application of TTL's DISC theory.
 
@Kienle, if you plan on writing a chapter about Illuminist East Germania, this song would be perfect for them. It’s literally about an army of peasants going around killing nobles and burning down churches.

 
@Kienle, if you plan on writing a chapter about Illuminist East Germania, this song would be perfect for them. It’s literally about an army of peasants going around killing nobles and burning down churches.

Haha I love this song! I prefer to defer East Germania to different writer though, since I have more knowledge about Russia than Germany. Though, I could see some kind of alternate Kristallnacht in East Germania aimed against Nobles and devout Protestants.
 
So is this program being done in the other Illuminist states?
Very likely they will follow the footstep of Russia, just like how the Eastern Bloc copied much of Soviet programs and added with their own things to fit for their respective country. Protestant gets ousted in Prussia, Poland rabidly becomes anti-religion and Ukraine persecutes people who can’t become Illuminist.
 
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