The Shattered Eagle

I appreciate the commentary Mr. Steve, I hope you stick around to see what it's all about.

I will!you have a tall order to fulfil since you started on a high lever of narrative well blended with dialogue,you certainly know how to breathe life to the text to avoid monotony.I hope you will continue in the same fashion...
 
I will!you have a tall order to fulfil since you started on a high lever of narrative well blended with dialogue,you certainly know how to breathe life to the text to avoid monotony.I hope you will continue in the same fashion...

Psh, I am a big fan of reader-based pressure. bring it on.
 
Aww... my writing make you sleep... that hurts...

:eek:nonononononononononononoooo..thats not what I meant XD XD

annyway: your writing style (including dreams and such) is something I rarely see. which is to bad, because I enjoy reading stuff like that:D

with Aetius having secured the south, will things go differently when Atilla gets his "lets invade the west" on?
 
:eek:nonononononononononononoooo..thats not what I meant XD XD

annyway: your writing style (including dreams and such) is something I rarely see. which is to bad, because I enjoy reading stuff like that:D

with Aetius having secured the south, will things go differently when Atilla gets his "lets invade the west" on?

Oh haha! Good! Well I was gonna put more Atilla-ness and Aetius' perspective in the TL, but I decided that I really want to focus from AD 500 on-wards. Aetius was assassinated by Valentian III while giving a financial report to the court in Ravenna, so that last post was seconds before his death. Aetius decision to remove Bonifacius and put down his Vandal allies has huge repercussions with the fall of the Western Empire, as the Rome-Carthage tax spine was essential to keeping the Empire afloat.

I will try and clarify things with the next post, but the first three posts I used to set the mood, setting, and POD, with the rest of the thread during the long fall of the Western Empire.
 
Oh haha! Good! Well I was gonna put more Atilla-ness and Aetius' perspective in the TL, but I decided that I really want to focus from AD 500 on-wards. Aetius was assassinated by Valentian III while giving a financial report to the court in Ravenna, so that last post was seconds before his death. Aetius decision to remove Bonifacius and put down his Vandal allies has huge repercussions with the fall of the Western Empire, as the Rome-Carthage tax spine was essential to keeping the Empire afloat.

I will try and clarify things with the next post, but the first three posts I used to set the mood, setting, and POD, with the rest of the thread during the long fall of the Western Empire.

damm...with Aetius in Hades.....who will stop Atilla from bleeding the roman gold supplies dry. now your just making me more curious. its weeks before I go on holliday, so I'll blame you iff I spend most of the time behind my laptop
 
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