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GRAND COUNCIL
September 24, 1753
Onondaga, Onondaga Nation, Haudenosaunee Confederacy
It had taken several weeks for the 50 hoyenah [1] of the Confederacy to assemble. There had been heated debates amongst the chiefs and clanmothers of the events that had occurred in the previous spring. Now as they all assembled in the lands of the Firekeepers [2], they could proceed with the issues at hand. It was at this point that the Tadadaho [3] called for order within the longhouse.
“We are gathered here this day to discuss the events that have unfolded this year. Firstly we call upon the Elder Brother Chiefs of the Seneca and Mohawk Nations to draw the issue from the well.”[4] Tanacharison felt his heart fluttering as the council began its verdict. He had put so much effort into convincing his clanmothers, the villages of the west, his new allies, and the French to agree to his bold plan. He may not have liked all the sacrifices he made, but he was willing to uphold the continued freedom of his people. So as the debate began, he made a feeble prayer in the back of his head that the Peacemaker would be on his side today. The Elder brother chiefs of the aforementioned nations proceeded to stand, and pulled the issue out of the well.
“We the chiefs of the Seneca and Mohawk Nations bring to head, the issue of Tanacharison’s shift in alliance to France, and his alliance with other tribes of the Ohio Valley.” The discussion between the Seneca and Mohawk chiefs was brief, but heated. In the end, they both concluded one proposal-Tanacharison would have to explain to the council his choices of the past year. So, he rose, and walk slowly to the centre of the longhouse, beads of sweat forming on his brow. He took a deep breath, and began his defense.
“My fellow brothers, chiefs, clanmothers, and peoples gathered here this day. This day I stand before you all to give you reason as to my change of loyalties. We the Haudenosaunee are a great people, high above those who seek to destroy us. We come from a long tradition of Peace, and have always sought to find paths that would keep this peace. I stand before you today to say that I chose to give my allegiance to the French, in the name of Peace.” There was uproar among the chiefs, particularly those of the Oneida nation. The Tadadaho calmed the crowds and asked the chief to continue. Smoke from the fire filled the room, making the atmosphere tense for him, as he continued his speech.
“Yes, I say it was for peace because we have come to see the threat that the colonies of Britain pose. Do you not remember what happened a mere ten years ago, when the Virginian monsters nearly went to war against us? They only stopped when we gave them land, land that was rightfully OURS! Now they wish to repeat the same thing, to leave us in slavery and destruction.” At this point he called on the scribe who recorded Washington’s threat to read it aloud in front of the entire audience. Many of the Chiefs were shocked as the words came out of the mouth of the scribe. Faces of anger, frustration, and fear were peppered across the longhouse as the scribe finished the declaration.
“Do you know see how dangerous the English truly are? It was with the Dutch that we made the Two Row Wampum [5], but the English have not respected this pact we so graciously extended to them. WE ARE A FREE PEOPLE! WE WILL NEVER ALLOW OURSELVES TO SUBMIT TO SLAVERY, OPPRESSION, OR SUBSERVIENCE TO ANY OPPRESSOR!” At this one of the Seneca chiefs asked, “Then why align your people with France?”
“Because when the French came to my village seeking for a fort site, I asked them high concessions to benefit our people. To my surprise, the Capitaine agreed to the conditions, where we could learn from them, protect ourselves alongside them, trade as equals, and learn their ways of farming. A nation that does not innovate is doomed to wither away. Though it does go against our natural alliances, it does provide us a way out. To pave our own future, as a FREE Confederacy, without relying on one people as our masters. If they can offer us tools and techniques, arms and a future, I say that the Two Row Wampum must be broken with the British, and we must extend a new Wampum to the French. Freedom is not earned by sitting on a high and mighty throne, sitting and doing nothing. We must work actively to keep it, lest we fail our whole people!” These words left muttering scattered throughout the longhouse, but the message was clear. If freedom were to survive amongst the League, the British alliance was no longer an option. The Chiefs of the Mohawk stepped forward to declare their decision. “After hearing these words, all of us agree with the shift of alliance. The British have done us, the Kanien'kehá:ka [6] much harm and it would be an insult to our people to keep supporting them.” This declaration relieved some of Tanacharison’s worries, but he still held his breath. Following this announcement, his own Nation, the Seneca, rose and concluded to agree with the Mohawk and have faith in their Nation’s fellow chief. The Tadadaho proceeded to turn the matter over to the younger brother chiefs [7], which resulted in a small minority of Oneida chiefs voicing their dissent over such a statement. The Cayuga were cautious in their support, but it was the following statement by the clanmother that was present.
“We, the Seneca and Cayuga settlers of the west, as well as our allies the Miami, Lenape, Shawnee, Odawa, and Wendat, come together to support our chief’s alliance. We are all peoples of the Confederacy, and we come together, wishing that our collective future, as the EIGHT nations of the confederacy, may come together to make ourselves stronger. No people can survive without change and we hope that you the clanmothers and chiefs of our people may accept these ones as well.” There was nothing but silence. Seldom did a clanmother voice herself in council, but her voice was respected, even by other clanmothers. If she could agree and lay down further terms to the proposal, then the case would now move in favour of the alliance shift. The Cayuga supported the terms without any further protest. For the Oneida chiefs, it took much debate and compromise, but in the end, the majority favoured the motion, and those who did not agreed unwillingly. Tanacharison felt that these men might be dangerous in the future, but he did let his fears get the best of him. It was at this point that the clanmothers gave their approval of the motion, with nearly all of them agreeing to it. The Tadadaho proclaimed that that the proposal was now binding, [8] and that the Onondaga could vote anyway they chose. In the end, ten of the fourteen chiefs, including the Tadadaho himself, voted in favour of the motion. [9]
“Upon this day,” the Tadadaho announced, “we now make a step towards our future. We as a people do agree to break the Two Row Wampum with Britain, and turn our fortunes to those of France. To keep our freedom, we will do whatever it takes. The Elder brothers shall now address the remaining issues of the grand council.”
Saro [10] LaSalle, The Birth of Haudène (Onen'ta'on:we Publishers, 2001) [11]
“…The Grand Council of 1753 was a historically important moment in the history of the Haudenosaunee Nations. It was here were the council finally accepted the fateful decision of Tanacharison to change the traditional alliances in North America, by having the Iroquois confederacy rebuke the Covenant Chain [12], and normalize relations with New France. Furthermore it was at this conference where the league permitted expansion to include two newly formed nations. These were the Miami, a mix of Miami, Odawa, and mixed Haudenosaunee settler in around the Wabash and Maumee Rivers, and as far east as Central Ohio, and the Monongahela, predominantly Haudenosaunee, with Lenape and Wendat Settlers in the Allegheny plateau, and upper Ohio River Valley. The decision to make these new nations was simply due to the vast distances that these regions encompassed. There was significant opposition to these changes, but many of the Pro-French chiefs and clanmothers showed their true colours, and supported Tanacharison in earnest. While this is considered the birth of the modern Confédération d’Haudène, [13] it also marked the birth of a new movement, one which would shape Haudène, North American, and even world history to form the world we know today. That movement driven by freedom, flexibility, and equality created by Tanacharison and the clanmother that supported him would become what we know today as Charisonism.
[1] Chiefs of the Grand Council
[2] A term to describe the Onondaga
[3] The head chief of the Onondaga; treated as the chief of the Haudenosaunee Confederacy
[4]Elder Brothers refer to the Mohawk and Seneca chiefs, who address an issue in council first.
[5]Treaty made with the Dutch in the 17th century; extended to Britain after they conquered New Nederland
[6]Mohawk word for Mohawk nation
[7] Term to describe the Cayuga and Oneida chiefs, who discuss the issue and come to a decision before passing it on to the Onondaga for final decision. The Oneida also speak on behalf of the Tuscarora who have no say in council.
[8]75% of chiefs AND clanmothers had to agree to a treaty/proposal for it to be binding
[9]The Onondaga had the most chiefs of any nation in the League, 14 total
[10] The name ‘Charles’ in Mohawk
[11]Word for Hemlock in Mohawk
[12]Another name for the Two Row Wampum
[13] Possible future spoilers
Yes this is still alive, surprisingly. If there is ANYTHING I have written which is so blatantly wrong, please notify me. Otherwise, Enjoy!
September 24, 1753
Onondaga, Onondaga Nation, Haudenosaunee Confederacy
It had taken several weeks for the 50 hoyenah [1] of the Confederacy to assemble. There had been heated debates amongst the chiefs and clanmothers of the events that had occurred in the previous spring. Now as they all assembled in the lands of the Firekeepers [2], they could proceed with the issues at hand. It was at this point that the Tadadaho [3] called for order within the longhouse.
“We are gathered here this day to discuss the events that have unfolded this year. Firstly we call upon the Elder Brother Chiefs of the Seneca and Mohawk Nations to draw the issue from the well.”[4] Tanacharison felt his heart fluttering as the council began its verdict. He had put so much effort into convincing his clanmothers, the villages of the west, his new allies, and the French to agree to his bold plan. He may not have liked all the sacrifices he made, but he was willing to uphold the continued freedom of his people. So as the debate began, he made a feeble prayer in the back of his head that the Peacemaker would be on his side today. The Elder brother chiefs of the aforementioned nations proceeded to stand, and pulled the issue out of the well.
“We the chiefs of the Seneca and Mohawk Nations bring to head, the issue of Tanacharison’s shift in alliance to France, and his alliance with other tribes of the Ohio Valley.” The discussion between the Seneca and Mohawk chiefs was brief, but heated. In the end, they both concluded one proposal-Tanacharison would have to explain to the council his choices of the past year. So, he rose, and walk slowly to the centre of the longhouse, beads of sweat forming on his brow. He took a deep breath, and began his defense.
“My fellow brothers, chiefs, clanmothers, and peoples gathered here this day. This day I stand before you all to give you reason as to my change of loyalties. We the Haudenosaunee are a great people, high above those who seek to destroy us. We come from a long tradition of Peace, and have always sought to find paths that would keep this peace. I stand before you today to say that I chose to give my allegiance to the French, in the name of Peace.” There was uproar among the chiefs, particularly those of the Oneida nation. The Tadadaho calmed the crowds and asked the chief to continue. Smoke from the fire filled the room, making the atmosphere tense for him, as he continued his speech.
“Yes, I say it was for peace because we have come to see the threat that the colonies of Britain pose. Do you not remember what happened a mere ten years ago, when the Virginian monsters nearly went to war against us? They only stopped when we gave them land, land that was rightfully OURS! Now they wish to repeat the same thing, to leave us in slavery and destruction.” At this point he called on the scribe who recorded Washington’s threat to read it aloud in front of the entire audience. Many of the Chiefs were shocked as the words came out of the mouth of the scribe. Faces of anger, frustration, and fear were peppered across the longhouse as the scribe finished the declaration.
“Do you know see how dangerous the English truly are? It was with the Dutch that we made the Two Row Wampum [5], but the English have not respected this pact we so graciously extended to them. WE ARE A FREE PEOPLE! WE WILL NEVER ALLOW OURSELVES TO SUBMIT TO SLAVERY, OPPRESSION, OR SUBSERVIENCE TO ANY OPPRESSOR!” At this one of the Seneca chiefs asked, “Then why align your people with France?”
“Because when the French came to my village seeking for a fort site, I asked them high concessions to benefit our people. To my surprise, the Capitaine agreed to the conditions, where we could learn from them, protect ourselves alongside them, trade as equals, and learn their ways of farming. A nation that does not innovate is doomed to wither away. Though it does go against our natural alliances, it does provide us a way out. To pave our own future, as a FREE Confederacy, without relying on one people as our masters. If they can offer us tools and techniques, arms and a future, I say that the Two Row Wampum must be broken with the British, and we must extend a new Wampum to the French. Freedom is not earned by sitting on a high and mighty throne, sitting and doing nothing. We must work actively to keep it, lest we fail our whole people!” These words left muttering scattered throughout the longhouse, but the message was clear. If freedom were to survive amongst the League, the British alliance was no longer an option. The Chiefs of the Mohawk stepped forward to declare their decision. “After hearing these words, all of us agree with the shift of alliance. The British have done us, the Kanien'kehá:ka [6] much harm and it would be an insult to our people to keep supporting them.” This declaration relieved some of Tanacharison’s worries, but he still held his breath. Following this announcement, his own Nation, the Seneca, rose and concluded to agree with the Mohawk and have faith in their Nation’s fellow chief. The Tadadaho proceeded to turn the matter over to the younger brother chiefs [7], which resulted in a small minority of Oneida chiefs voicing their dissent over such a statement. The Cayuga were cautious in their support, but it was the following statement by the clanmother that was present.
“We, the Seneca and Cayuga settlers of the west, as well as our allies the Miami, Lenape, Shawnee, Odawa, and Wendat, come together to support our chief’s alliance. We are all peoples of the Confederacy, and we come together, wishing that our collective future, as the EIGHT nations of the confederacy, may come together to make ourselves stronger. No people can survive without change and we hope that you the clanmothers and chiefs of our people may accept these ones as well.” There was nothing but silence. Seldom did a clanmother voice herself in council, but her voice was respected, even by other clanmothers. If she could agree and lay down further terms to the proposal, then the case would now move in favour of the alliance shift. The Cayuga supported the terms without any further protest. For the Oneida chiefs, it took much debate and compromise, but in the end, the majority favoured the motion, and those who did not agreed unwillingly. Tanacharison felt that these men might be dangerous in the future, but he did let his fears get the best of him. It was at this point that the clanmothers gave their approval of the motion, with nearly all of them agreeing to it. The Tadadaho proclaimed that that the proposal was now binding, [8] and that the Onondaga could vote anyway they chose. In the end, ten of the fourteen chiefs, including the Tadadaho himself, voted in favour of the motion. [9]
“Upon this day,” the Tadadaho announced, “we now make a step towards our future. We as a people do agree to break the Two Row Wampum with Britain, and turn our fortunes to those of France. To keep our freedom, we will do whatever it takes. The Elder brothers shall now address the remaining issues of the grand council.”
Saro [10] LaSalle, The Birth of Haudène (Onen'ta'on:we Publishers, 2001) [11]
“…The Grand Council of 1753 was a historically important moment in the history of the Haudenosaunee Nations. It was here were the council finally accepted the fateful decision of Tanacharison to change the traditional alliances in North America, by having the Iroquois confederacy rebuke the Covenant Chain [12], and normalize relations with New France. Furthermore it was at this conference where the league permitted expansion to include two newly formed nations. These were the Miami, a mix of Miami, Odawa, and mixed Haudenosaunee settler in around the Wabash and Maumee Rivers, and as far east as Central Ohio, and the Monongahela, predominantly Haudenosaunee, with Lenape and Wendat Settlers in the Allegheny plateau, and upper Ohio River Valley. The decision to make these new nations was simply due to the vast distances that these regions encompassed. There was significant opposition to these changes, but many of the Pro-French chiefs and clanmothers showed their true colours, and supported Tanacharison in earnest. While this is considered the birth of the modern Confédération d’Haudène, [13] it also marked the birth of a new movement, one which would shape Haudène, North American, and even world history to form the world we know today. That movement driven by freedom, flexibility, and equality created by Tanacharison and the clanmother that supported him would become what we know today as Charisonism.
[1] Chiefs of the Grand Council
[2] A term to describe the Onondaga
[3] The head chief of the Onondaga; treated as the chief of the Haudenosaunee Confederacy
[4]Elder Brothers refer to the Mohawk and Seneca chiefs, who address an issue in council first.
[5]Treaty made with the Dutch in the 17th century; extended to Britain after they conquered New Nederland
[6]Mohawk word for Mohawk nation
[7] Term to describe the Cayuga and Oneida chiefs, who discuss the issue and come to a decision before passing it on to the Onondaga for final decision. The Oneida also speak on behalf of the Tuscarora who have no say in council.
[8]75% of chiefs AND clanmothers had to agree to a treaty/proposal for it to be binding
[9]The Onondaga had the most chiefs of any nation in the League, 14 total
[10] The name ‘Charles’ in Mohawk
[11]Word for Hemlock in Mohawk
[12]Another name for the Two Row Wampum
[13] Possible future spoilers
Yes this is still alive, surprisingly. If there is ANYTHING I have written which is so blatantly wrong, please notify me. Otherwise, Enjoy!
Wow , great this is still going. I know what its like to write something and not being bothered to update it.
So this is a compilation of what has happened so far in "The Half King" hopefully this will refresh memories so that I can continue the TL as soon as possible
enjoy
1)“THE HALF KING’S TREATY”
Early 1750’s
Logstown
Tanacharison eyed the French delegation suspiciously. He pondered why they were determined to build fortifications in his people’s lands. Nevertheless, he needed to inquire what they were proposing.
“Welcome to our people’s village, Capitaine de la Malgue,” said the chief, in fluent French. With that he offered the traditional wampum beads to the delegates.
“Yes, a fine village this is,” replied de la Malgue. “You seem to be blessed to be in such a fine location.” Tanacharison knew that these were stalling tactics to draw him in to whatever the French were selling.
“What goods do you want to trade this time?”
“Goods? My esteemed chief, it is not goods we wish to propose something a little more…beneficial for the both of us.”
“Tell me more.” At this, de la Malgue cracked a grin.
“We propose to fortify this area, as it is on the border of our sphere of influence. We wish to obtain your permission to build a fort on your lands.” With these words his heart hardened. He knew that this proposal would force him into submission and become a pawn in French hands. Though he liked the French goods and their wealth, he was not willing to give up his sovereignty to acquire them.
“No deal, our people will never be your pawns to sacrifice.”
“We do not wish for you to become subjects, but allies.” Tanacharison noted that the white man’s face was beginning to redden. The other delegates began to be somewhat nervous by their leader’s rising temper.
“Allies you say?” Tanacharison began to ponder. He could use this to his advantage, as they were allies, and he could bargain for stronger terms that favoured Logstown. He could make the French work for him, and benefit those belonging to the Six Nations in the Western Lands [1].
“I see. We may permit you to build a fort in these lands. That being said, we dictate where this site may be located, and shall provide some of our warriors to the site, so we know that we have some say in our ‘defense’. If you wish to bring some settlers to farm and provide food for yourselves, you may do so, however we dictate where they go, and they must provide 5 % of their surplus to us.” The chief thought this would be enough either for them to call off the deal, or for the Western Six Nations to benefit greatly from the proposal. If de la Malgue had been angry before, now he was ready to strangle the chief with his own hands.
“Why you insolent little i-”
“Um, sir?” asked one of the other soldiers.
“WHAT!?” The soldier brought a seething de la Malgue aside to discuss the current offer made. [2]
“Sir, if we accept this, we will have very loyal defenders on the border. Would you prefer they ally themselves with the British?”
“I will not stand to have an IROQUOIS [3] dictate the terms of the defense. We are French, and are above these sauvages.”
“Yet they provide us with men, allow us to bring settlers to give agriculture, and we can bolster the population of the border region. It will even benefit the trade routes.” de la Malgue could only sigh in defeat. He knew well that if they did not accept this treaty, they would side with the British, and this could cost them the vallée and they knew it.
“Fine we accept your terms, on the conditions that you cooperate with our Algonquin allies, even if facing fellow Six Nations peoples.” Tanacharison was surprised at the acceptance of his terms, but even more shocked at the counter-proposal. He knew that he was on thin ice with the first proposal, and if he pushed his luck any further, he could lose the potential gains for his people. He would accept, but he would get the last word.
“The council accepts your terms, so long as we get discount on any brandy traded through this region.”
“You’re joking right?” de la Malgue was about to give up, until the soldier who pressured him, gave him a gesture, suggesting to accept the one extra term.
“Yes, we accept your terms.” In his head the chief laughed. He had dictated terms to the French, and won. He would be able to gain advantage for his tribe, and his new ‘allies’. If they could achieve equal footing with les colons and coureurs de bois, then they would be able to be free of all the powers controlling their lands. However, that would take much time. What mattered most was to gain advantage for his people in the short-term, and if all worked well, the long term.
“Wonderful! We shall celebrate this treaty. You may return with your crews to begin construction, as soon as you can.”
“I shall return to Québec and notify the gouverneur-générale immediately. If that is the end of our business, good day to you, esteemed chief.” With that, the delegates left, leaving the chief thinking, this is the beginning of a new era for the Western Six Nations’ peoples.
[1]Mingos. I chose not to use this term because it is derived from Mingwe, meaning treacherous. Several treaties refer to them as settlers from the Haudenosaunee (or Six Nations) Confederacy. They were predominantly Seneca and Cayuga.
[2] Here is our POD. In OTL, Paul Marin de la Malgue lost his temper with Tanacharison and rejected the wampum beads, deeply offending the chief, only further promoting his anti-French views.
[3] Translates as “black snakes” into certain Algonquin tongues.
2.1) THE GOUVERNEUR-GÉNÉRALE
June 1753
Québec
Marquis Duquesne was in his study, meditating on the news that he had received. The Iroquois chief Tanacharison had dictated terms to defense in the Ohio valley. This act was considered unheard of among the Algonquin allies of the French in Canada and Louisiane. However he now had nominal allies that would be willing to comply with defense against the British. Securing the upper Ohio was extremely important in order to keep the trade flowing between Louisiane, the Caribbean Islands, and Canada in the north. This also gave him the opportunity to “fill in the gaps” in colonization between the north and south. Yet with all these benefits, he was still worried about the emboldened Natives.
“Something wrong gouverneur?” asked one of the servants.
“No, but I am concerned with the news Capitaine de la Malgue gave me when his messengers arrived in Québec last week. I do not know where we are going to get colons willing to make their way to the Great Lakes. Most Canadiens prefer the Saint-Laurent [1] and would not want to go beyond Cataraqui and Fort Frontenac [2].”
“Sir if I may, I heard that the political battle between the upper classes and the King over the taxes has continued to plague the King since he increased the taille [3]. I heard this from some of the incoming traders down in the basse ville [4].”
“Really? This is an interesting development.” Duquesne knew that his options were limited, but since King Louis [5] was at a low point, he could convince him to act quickly and in favour of the colony. Perhaps the use of propaganda to encourage the people opposed to the taille to move to Canada, Louisiane, and la vallée d’Ohio. In fact, if he sent the right people to the delegations, he could potential open French colonial trade into the Ottoman Empire [6]. “Get me Monsieur Le Moyne [7], I need him to lead a group of delegates to Versailles and request an audience before the King.”
You mean the gouverneur of Montréal?”
“No, I mean the gouverneur of Saint Louis de Ha-Ha [8]. OF COURSE I MEAN THE GOUVERNEUR DE MONTRÉAL!”
“Ay! D’accord, I will get him to Québec as quickly as I can.” With that the servant left the study. ‘Good,’ thought Duquesne. It seems as though this problem may provide a greater solution. Since war with Great Britain seemed to be ever looming on the horizon, he would need all the help he could get.
2.2) Fort LeBœuf
In the weeks following the incident with the chief of Logstown, the Miami chiefs [9] were coming to the fort to make similar offers with the French. Though de la Malgue hated to be bossed around by these…sauvages, he knew he needed to take away as many allies away from Britain as possible. So he would accept modified versions of the Miami chiefs’ terms, which he hoped could still save him face to the colonial administration.
2.3) Logstown
In the few weeks that had passed since the treaty, trade was already up, and though the British did not know it, their former ally Tanacharison had betrayed their potential fortress to the French, and they were now selling arms and knives to the enemy. According to some of the soldiers from de la Malgue’s party, the first crews and soldiers would be arriving in the next few days. Tanacharison knew that he was taking a big risk allying himself to the French, his sworn enemies. However, in order to make the Six Nations, Miami, and other ‘allies’ of the French powerful, he would need to keep his friends close, and his enemies closer.
[1] Saint Lawrence Valley
[2]Two different names for OTL Kingston, ON
[3] In 1751, King Louis had attempted to begin taxing the nobles. This failed miserable, and damaged his reputation to the aristocracy, concurrent to the previous damages to his rep among the lower classes.
[4] Lower Town, Quebec City
[5] Louis XV, if you weren't sure by now
[6] The treaty of Vienna in the late 1720's/ early 1730's guaranteed large amounts of trade between France and the Ottoman Empire
[7] Gouverneur Duquesne's interim predecessor as governor general of New France
[8] A real town in Quebec, south of the Gaspesie
[9] The Miami were allies of the British for similar reasons to the Six Nation 'Mingos"
3.1) LES RUMEURS
July 1753
Williamsburg, Virginia
Traders had been pouring in to Williamsburg telling outrageous stories about events occurring in the Upper Ohio. Some were saying the Iroquois had abandoned their alliance, while others claimed that the French had taken the valley by force. As the rumours continued to spread, Robert Dinwiddie [1] began to wonder, what was happening to his precious commercial assets in Ohio. He needed to investigate what had occurred in the past few weeks that was so alarming.
“Excuse me, you there!” The civil servant who heard the call came running.
“Yes, Sir?”
“Get me George Washington. Tell him I have some requests for him.”
3.2) Seneca Lands, Upstate New York
The village chief could not believe what he had heard. The Seneca and Cayuga settlers in Ohio had betrayed the British, and made an alliance with France. Even more shocking was the fact they had brought the Miami Confederacy against the British. These were too many shocking revelations for this chief. If Tanacharison, a respected chief of the Grand Council, had overstepped his boundaries in commiting this act, the Grand Council had to be be notified at once.
“Send messengers to the nearest major town. Ask them to send more messengers to the other Haudenosaunee tribes. We must convene the Grand Council.”
[1] Governor of Virginia; had interests in the Ohio valley
4.1) THE MATTERS OF KINGS
August 10, 1753
Versailles
The only thing one could hear coming from the apartments of the King was constant pacing. He had been pondering his diplomatic and political failures as well as the opportunity to fix them. ‘Oh how I wish Fleury [1] was still alive. He always knew what to do.’ Ever since the courtiers announced a delegation had been sent to the King from the colonies, the King had begun to reflect unceasingly how he could avoid another crisis. To add to these complications, last night, Fleury had appeared to him in a dream. In the dream he said, ‘Oh, Mon roi, you are wise and tactful, but you lack confidence in yourself [2]. There will come a time when an opportunity to act shall be given to you. When it comes, I hope you will take the opportunity, and move with boldness and precision.’ These words had made the King more worried, but had helped him come to the conclusion that the opportunity referred to in his dream was the colonial delegation [3]. He would need to be open to the proposals of the colonies, as they might be able to turn the tables at home in France.
“Excusez-moi, courtier.”
“Oui, my King?”
“Tell the colonial delegation to meet me in the Salon d’Hercule [4].”
“But of course, my King.” With that, the courtier had left to meet the delegation.
Elsewhere at Château de Versailles
Le Moyne felt as though he was in a dream. It had scarcely been a year since he had returned to Montréal to continue his position as gouverneur, when he had been once again summoned to Québec by the gouverneur-générale. There he received word from Duquesne that he was to lead a delegation to Versailles to ask the King to promote bringing more settlers to the colonies. Le Moyne wondered how he could complete such a task, and now his delegation had gained an audience before the King. ‘I must present a very convincing argument to win over his majesty,’ thought Le Moyne.
“Sa Majesté will now see you,” informed the Palace courtiers.
“Well, all I can hope for is good luck and good grace,” said Le Moyne. “Allons-y!”
Salon d’Hercule, Château de Versailles
As Le Moyne, entered the Salon, he was amazed by the opulence of the hall he entered. Murals and marble, gold and silver, and a vast assortment of small devices dotted the room. Yet he knew he was here to present the king his message from Marquis Duquesne. It was then the courtier announced to the king,
“Presenting the Baron of Longueuil, Charles III Le Moyne, Gouverneur of Montréal [5], and his delegation from the colonie of Canada in Nouvelle France.” At the sound of these words, the king summoned the delegation to proceed.
“What is the message you bring, Baron?” asked the king.
“Your majesty, it is an honor to be in thy presence. We send a message from Marquis Duquesne. He says that he has received an interesting proposal from the indiens [6].
“What terms do you speak of Baron?”
“It seems a chief defected from the Iroquois to us, and demanded we provide settlers to till some of the lands near the fort. Following this meeting, several other chiefs proposed similar treaties. Furthermore, we in Nouvelle France know that we have some exemption from the taille [7]…”
“Are you asking me to set up a company to promote settlers to immigrate?”
“No we are asking for a lowering of the tax in the colony, establishing seven villes-franches [8], and getting a number of colonists and soldiers to the colony by next spring.” The king was so shocked that a lowly COLONIAL baron had dictated such high terms. Yet it was also a wonderful opportunity to bolster the Colonies. If he had heard his sources right, there was about 1,2 million [9] people living in the English colonies, while there were perhaps no more than 70,000 [10] French in all of New France, along with no more than 1,5 million natives [11]. Though this looked very good on paper, Louis knew that the natives would be no more than cannon fodder. What he needed was a long term demographic solution in the colonies. Here there was an opportunity to remedy that situation starting now. He saw that he could ‘convince’ some of his tax opponents to go to the colonies using these proposed solutions.
“Your terms are very high, but I will accept them. By October 1st, I will have 8000 citoyens ready to leave, accompanied by 4000 soldiers. I will provide 1 years’ worth of rations, to establish themselves. The franche-villes that you propose will be located at Louisbourg, Québec, Montréal, Cahokia, Nouvelle-Orléans, Mobile, and the Fortress where the native chief had demanded terms [12].”[13] Le Moyne’s jaw hit the floor. He could not believe that the King had just simply accepted the terms with very little consideration. This could not be all that he had to say.
“Your majesty, may I ask why you accepted so willingly?”
“Do you want me to change my mind?”
“No, absolument non!”
“Since you asked, we all know that this is the calm before the storm between us and the Kingdom of Great Britain. We are going to need all the help we can get against the British, and that includes in the colonies. I am sending a shipment of arms alongside the rations, and you are to use them to train the natives to use against the British. The stealth tactics that they use, combined with modern weaponry would be lethal against the enemy. This all being said, I have one condition. All the colonists must be catholic. Soldiers are not required this standard. Split the group of colonists between Canada and Louisiane. You shall remain here to oversee the preparations for the entire company. ” Le Moyne now understood the true nature of the King’s intentions, and was very glad for the support.
“Merci your majesty. I will be honored to oversee such a command.”
“You are now free to go.” As Le Moyne left the Salon, he was giving a prayer of Thanksgiving for coming to Versailles on such a lucky day.
Meanwhile, Louis summoned the court scribe who had been present during the delegation.
“Is all of that on paper?”
“Yes your majesty.”
“Good. Send a copy of the terms to Le Moyne and make an official copy for the ministers and officials. Afterwards, spread the word to the entire kingdom of the new colonial venture. I would like to have all the preparations ready to sail from Nantes by September 20th. No later than October 1st.”
“Yes your Majesty.”
“Finally, write a letter to King Frederick of Prussia. I will need to renew our alliance, and to do that I will need to offer a few…gifts.”
“Do we need to summon a delegation to present the letter?”
“But of course! Summon won immediately. That is all”
4.2)Logstown
As the meeting with the Miami confederacy began, Tanacharison exchanged the wampum beads immediately. He knew that breaking off with the rest of the Six Nations would have some fallout. Even now, one tenth of the Seneca and Cayuga settlers had returned to the Haudenosaunee lands, bringing ridiculous stories along with them. Though the construction of Fort Duquesne was half finished and there were some soldiers moving in to the area, the British traders had seen the fallout. He would need new allies to keep the rest of the settlers from leaving. So as he met with the Miami, he hoped he would have great success.
[1] Fleury was Louis XV's trusted minister between the late 1720's until his death in 1742. This is considered the high part of Louis XV's reign
[2]It is said that Louis the XV lacked confidence in himself, though he was very intelligent
[3]This dream never happened OTL, but since Louis is at a low point, anything sould be seen as a saving grace
[4] Medium sized Banquet hall in the Chateau de Versailles
[5]Le Moyne's full name
[6]Natives (in this case the Iroquois)
[7]According the research I have done, the taille was for the Kingdom only. Nothing was specified about the colonies. If someone knows otherwise, feel free to correct me.
[8] Free cities. Exempt from the taille (e.g. Paris)
[9] An estimate of the population of the American Colonies, base of the preceeding and succeeding censi.
[10] Estimate including all of new france, courreurs de bois, etc.
[11]Again, another estimate
[12] Fort Duquesne. He doesn't know the name yet.
[13] Louis was known to act boldly and all at once when he actually did.
5) BATTLELINES ARE DRAWN: PART I
September 1, 1753
Ohio and Monongahela Rivers
If Major George Washington [1] had known what he would see when he reached Upper Ohio, he would have brought the entire Virginia Militia to deal with this betrayal. When the governor had instructed him to investigate what was occurring in Ohio, he thought there were simply minor skirmishes between the traders and the Indians. What he saw was far from that.
“This is UNACCEPTABLE! These red skinned devils promise us land and alliances against the French, and then they go and stab us in the back!”
“Sir, the French have a near-ready fort at the river junction, as well as a significant amount of defense.”
“Well if we cannot trust these Indians, then we will deal with them ourselves.”
Logstown
Tanacharison had been on edge for weeks. When the calls for a convening of the Grand Council of the Six Nations, he knew that he would need to have good reasons to explain his shift of alliances to convince the whole council. He had barely been able to convince the Clanmothers to not knock of his horns [2], and agree to the shift. To make matters worse, the vast territory occupied by the Miami Tribe and the Iroquois settlers made the alliance very shaky, but the recent alliance had been strengthened by the inclusion of the Wendat [3], Shawnee [4], Odawaa [5], and Lenape [6] who had settled in the regions of the Alliance. Even with all of these efforts, it was difficult to be able to show the Grand Council valid reasons to have abandoned the alliance with the British. Yet the progress made by the French had been evident. Fort Duquesne, as they called it, was nearly finished, as had the mild fortifications of Logstown. There were 150 French soldiers manning it, along with 50 Tribe warriors. The French had fortunately brought a few scribes and military engineers, who had resided there at Logstown. Even 2 Canadien families had come to clear some agricultural land. All of these things were proving to help the Seneca and Cayuga of the Valley, and the effects of similar treaties were being seen among the other tribes, but the council was loyal to their British allies, and this would be seen as an affront.
While Tanacharison had been pondering these things, a great commotion had erupted near the edge of the village. When he heard what was occurring, he could only assume the worst, British soldiers. Much to his dismay, it was a company of Virginian Militia, headed by a commander whose head looked redder than ripe berries.
“What is the meaning of all this!?” asked the soldier.
“Excuse me? I do not understand why you are infuriated.”
“Firstly, you dirty Indians tell us we can build a fort at this site, and then you go and sell the site to the French, without any guilt. You are all demon back stabbers!”
“You will not use that tone in my village.”
“I, Major George Washington, will use whatever tone I feel like to address you subhuman devils! We in Virginia hold much power in the British colonies, and after seeing this, I will make sure that every Indian in British, French, or unclaimed territory will be exterminated. Even if they seem ‘civilized’ like the Iroquois, they will all yield to Virginia, Britain, and their might!”
“If you will not leave, I will call the Soldiers guarding the fort and town to arrest you and charge you under both the Great Law of Peace [7], and French Code Civile.” The tensions continued to mount, but it was at this point that one of Washington’s soldiers spoke up.
“Sir, we do not have enough men to take on this village. We were told to gather information and return and that is what we should do.” Though he was angry, George Washington knew he would need to return to Virginia in order to gather enough troops to complete what he proposed to do.
“Very well. I have warned you, Indian. Next time we meet, your head will be on a pike!” The Virginian Soldier and his company left their presence seething, and wanting revenge. Tanacharison felt as if his problems were simply becoming far too great to handle. However as he entered the Longhouse to rest, one of the French scribes was waiting for him.
“I recorded all of it.”
“What? What are you talking about?”
“That Soldier’s entire conversation and threats upon your people.” This statement caught the Chief by surprise. He now had the proof to explain his shift of allegiances. He had proof to convince all the Six Nations to Fight against the British. As he contemplated his change in fortune, he began to laugh.
“Uh, Sieur Chef [8]? Are you alright?”
“I feel wonderful! Send a copy back to Québec. I will need French support for this war. Also, send this message to the allies of our alliance as quickly as possible. I will need some of their chiefs to accompany me to the Grand Council. I feel we have no time to lose if we are to be ready for when Britain attacks.”
Certainly Chef. I will notify the soldiers of the fort, and warriors of your tribe. This message will reach your allies by the end of the month and Québec by Early October.”
“Then as you French say, ALLONS-Y!”
[1] George Washington’s rank in 1753-4
[2] Means that the Clanmother strips him of his rank as Chief for failing to fulfill the wishes of the clanmothers for the village. They are required to remove the deer antlers from their headdress (a symbol of leadership), and retire to private life.
[3] Huron
[4] Only the Shawnee in Upper Ohio/Pennsylvania are brought into the alliance. Those in Virginia, Lower Ohio, and other regions remain independent but allied to France
[5] Ottawa
[6]Delaware
[7] The Legal Code of the Haudenosaunee Confederacy
[8] Lord Chief in French
6.1) BATTLELINES ARE DRAWN: PART II
September 2, 1753
Sanssouci Palace, Potsdam
Frederick was curious to know why French delegates had arrived at his Palace, very determined to see him. They had to have a very good proposition in order to disturb him from his military exercises. So as the delegates entered, he was surprised to see none other than one of the kings best ambassadors, Armand de Vignerot du Plessis, Duc de Richelieu [1], one of the kings best ambassadors.
“Good afternoon your highness, King Frederick, second of that name, in Prussia. Sa majesté Louis, Fifteenth of that name, of France wishes you good fortune, and proposes a deal and treaty with yourself.” This message was an interesting prospect, peaking his interest.
“Tell me more.”
“Son altesse Louis XV proposes an economic and military alliance.”
“I’ve heard this before. What can France provide Prussia to make me consider such an alliance?”
“Firstly, France proposes to cede Prussia the island of Dominica [2].” This was completely unexpected by Frederick. Dominica was a fairly rich island in the Caribbean, but Prussia would need a Navy to match its army to keep it.
“Is that all? France knows the Prussia lacks the Navy to keep such a possession.”
“Son Altesse also proposes lowering tariffs for all trade to Prussia, with special discounts on saltpetre, timber, and Spices. We will also provide naval support to Prussia so that it can build a Navy of its own” This proposed plan made Frederick very desirous to help France, but he needed to hear what terms France would ask.
“What does Louis want for these special ‘privileges’?”
“He wants some military experts to help train French troops, as well as agree to one extra condition.”
“What might that condition be?”
“In the case that Britain declares war on France or vice versa, that Prussia shall declare war on Britain as well. In response, if Prussia declares war on Britain, France will help its ally. Furthermore, if Prussia has interests in Hannover, France will support Prussia in obtaining them.” The first aspect of the condition was hardly a surprise, but the second definitely was. Hannover was a significant amount of territory, exerting influence over the free cities of Bremen AND Hamburg. To control these junctions of trade, as well as linking some minor territories to the Prussian heartland was a very tempting deal. If France will help Prussia meet ends and gain new heights of power, this could be very beneficial to the Prussia Frederick is creating.
“I will agree to these terms because I see that King Louis wants to benefit my nation as well as his own. As soon as we can formalize the accord on paper, then it will be official.”
“Wonderful! I hope this is the first of many good relations between our two kingdoms.” It was at this point that the Duc de Richelieu was escorted to a room where this treaty could be arranged. Frederick was very pleased with the offer. If France is offering Prussia some opportunities of glory, then Prussia could happily afford to help France in this time of need.
6.2)Chateau de Versailles
“Now I will need you to succeed in convincing the Dutch of entering into alliance with France. They have one of the strongest navies in the world, and it will be crucial to control naval affairs to win this upcoming war.”
“Oui, sa majesté. I will handle these neutral Dutch the same way I handled the neutral Swiss!” The Marquis d’Argenson was excused from Louis’ presence, and promptly left to go north to Amsterdam. In his mind Louis only hoped that the delegation to Prussia and this new delegation to the Netherlands would succeed. Though he was happy with his pré carré [3], but he had seen his subjects were not. He could not sit idly while he knew that the British were eying his colonies. Fleury had told him to be confident in himself, and he decided it was now time to do so.
[1] Friend and ally of Louis XV; served as ambassador to the HRE in the 1720’s
[2] Island in the Caribbean who’s economy at the time was based on Indigo and Sugar Cane
[3] Square field; Term used to describe France
7) BATTLELINES ARE DRAWN: PART III
September 3, 1753
Château de Versailles
From the first moment that she heard that Louis was planning to renew the Prussian alliance, Jeanne Antoinette Poisson [1] had been beside herself with rage. She despised Frederick, and would do anything in her power and influence to avoid this alliance. Yet in recent weeks she had noticed that the King had become more distant and all her attempts to entertain him, and even send him mistresses was not working. She knew she had to act quickly or she might lose her influence in the Court. If Louis would not reach out to her, she would have to reach out to him, and quickly.
Appartements du Roi, Château de Versailles
Louis knew that his withdrawal from la Marquise de Pompadour would create a very serious problem between them. Ever since the colonial delegation had arrived nearly a month ago, he knew he would have to face Britain as the British were always desirous to declare war on France. The only way he could alienate Britain was to ally his country to the strongest naval and land militaries in all of Europe: Prussia and the Dutch Republic. Now was the moment of truth. He would either get la Marquise to agree with him, or have to remove her from court, there was no other choice. So, he called his attendants to send her to his apartments, and waited.
It wasn’t long before la Marquise entered the chambers and the two were left alone. Eerie silence ensued. After several minutes she asked, “Why? What has bewitched you to consider an alliance with HIM?”
“He who you speak of has one of the most capable armies on the continent. No one since the Ottomans has defeated Austria that soundly and with his help, we have a chance against Britain.”
“Yet you knew that you would hurt me in doing so. Why are you wasting time on stupid war plans anyway? You were NEVER the type of man to be focused on military pursuits.”
“I do this because I see how ruthless Britain is. I need to defend what is rightfully French. If I cannot defend France from its enemies, then I have failed my duty as King.”
“BUT I KNOW WHAT IS BEST FOR YOU! YOU HAVE BEEN HAPPIEST BY MY SIDE! YOU WILL LEAD THIS COUNTRY INTO THE GROUND BY PERSUING SUCH A POINTLESS ALLIANCE!” All these words struck Louis very hard and made him realize that la Marquise would not accept his decision and though they were friends, he would have to send her away.
“If you cannot accept the choices I make to help my kingdom, then I must ask you to leave Versailles. You are my friend but if your hatred for Frederick won’t let you accept my choices as King, then you must leave.” Jeanne was surprised. She did not believe that she had become that hysterical in her hatred, but she felt that in trying to get her point across, her frustration had just cost her the influence over the King she held for so long.
“Fine. I see that my voice will not be heeded in this court. This is NOT the last you will see of me, your majesty.” She promptly left the apartment planning her next move. It took all his strength but as soon as she had left, he said, “Oh Fleury, if this is what is necessary for France, please help me find strength to live without her.” It was at this point that King Louis XV of France began to sob.
[1] The wonderfully famous Madame de Pompadour (also known as la Marquise de Pompadour
8.1) REFLECTIONS AND PLANS
September 4, 1753
St. Malo Harbour, Bretagne
Le Moyne was thoroughly impressed by the success of sa majesté’s decree. In less than one month, there were nearly 9000 people who signed up to go to the new world. The harvest was bountiful this year, and much of the excess was already packed, ready to cross the Atlantic. The 4000 soldiers that the king had granted were all assembled, with munitions, weapons, and rations imported from Spanish America, Poland, and Egypt. In command of this army was Baron Dieskau [1], with Francis de Gaston [2] as his second in command. There were 20 merchant vessels and 12 military vessels, all headed to Louisbourg, were they would break and would split between going to Québec and Nouvelle Orléans. He thought that being in charge of such a great project would be such a difficult task, and it often was. However, since there was high morale amongst the colonists willing to move, there was heightened morale amongst the majority of the armed forces as well. At the rate everything was unfolding, they would be ready to sail earlier than the 15th, and get to Louisbourg by early November. In his heart, Le Moyne thanked the treaty made in the backwoods of Ohio to bring all this good fortune to New France.
8.2) Québec
Le Marquis Duquesne had received news that the delegation at Versailles had gone very successfully. In fact, he realised that as a result of all the soldiers and colonists there would need to be certain aspects of the treaty with the Iroquois to be clarified so that the colonists could be accommodated on both Native and French Lands. He would also need to prepare enough provisions for the newcomers come springtime. While pondering this, he left his and looked for the nearest civil servant. When he found one he said, “I’d like to send out a proclamation to all the habitants [3] in the colony.”
“Certainly, what would this proclamation be?”
“I would like all the settlers to give 10 percent of their harvest to the granary stores at Montréal, Trois-Rivières, Québec, and Louisbourg.”
“Seigneur, do you think they’ll accept this?”
“It is a necessary ‘tax’ in order to provide for the new colons that are being sent by the Roi.”
“If it’s necessary, than I will get the word out.” The governor simply smiled and said, “Perfect.”
8.3) Château de Versailles
Jeanne Antoinette felt defeated and angry. Weeks of distance and one major diplomatic argument had cost her the influence she wielded in the court. The Prince of Kaunitz [4] had nearly convinced Louis of accepting an alliance with Austria. If only he had been recalled later, then maybe that colonial delegation would not have affected him that much. She might have still been in favour with Louis, but that had all changed in the blink of an eye. However she would make sure she had the last word. If Louis would not see an alliance with Prussia was a bad idea, then she’d make him see. As she prepared to leave, she snuck down to the servants’ quarters to see if anyone was there. Inside, there was a young man in a threadbare coat kneeling in prayer.
“Is this a bad time de vous interrompez?
“My goodness! Madame Pompadour! I-I-I’m so sorry that I-
“All is well. I need you to do me a favour, and I will pay you 4 Louis’ d’or [5] to complete the task.” His eyes widened upon hearing such a high price for the task.
“What does the Madame wish me to do for her?” She leaned in close and lowered her voice and whispered in his ear.
“I want you to kill the King.” He was initially horrified,but was able to calm himself within a few minutes. His faced showed thought and concern, and after some time of deliberating, he gave her a response.
“Comment voulez-vous que je le fasse ?" [6]
She gave a sigh of relief and began to explain her plan to the hired assassin,
[1] OTL leader of colonial French forces; captured in 1756 by British soldiers
[2] OTL second-in-command to Louis Montcalm
[3] Term used to describe the French colonists in Canada
[4] Diplomat who helped influence the OTL Franco-Austrian alliance. Served as ambassador to Versailles from 1750-53.
[5] 4 of the most expensive coins in Bourbon France. Worth 98 Livres (approx. 90 Francs c.1750)
[6] “How do you want me to do it?” If some notices the grammar is off, please notify me
9.1) PLANS IN ACTION
September 15, 1753
Williamsburg, Virginia
Major George Washington had deeply contemplated the recent turn of events. He regretted losing his temper against the traitors, as it was against his nature to use profanities [1]. However, he reasoned it was necessary to give them a warning of their impending destruction. Now as he stood before the governor, his thoughts were racing, and he wasn’t sure how he could tell him of what happened.
“So, what news do you have from the Ohio Valley, Major?”
“Well,” he began, “The locals have abandoned us, and have chosen to align themselves with the French.” He braced himself for the worst the governor could say.
“That…is…UNACCEPTABLE! We have warned the Iroquois before [2], and I feel Virginia needs to end that Black Snake [3] menace once and for ALL! I will send a letter to the government, requesting that two contingents of British Regulars be dispatched, and to threaten France with war if this nonsense continues. Oh, and Major?”
“Yes, governor?”
“Begin assembling Virginia’s militia. We will launch an advance attack next month, to weaken defenses. We need to begin eliminating those Frogs and their collaborator-allies immediately!”
“Yes sir, we will be ready to leave as soon as the logistics are finalized.”
“Perfect. You are now dismissed.” George felt a return of confidence, as he could now live up to his threat with the might of the greatest empire on earth to back him.
9.2) St. Malo Harbour, Bretagne
The day was warm, the sky was clear, and St. Malo was disappearing over the horizon. Charles could finally see the results of his project taking shape. Over two dozen merchant ships, ten military, and six cargo ships were leaving the harbour and setting sail for Louisbourg. The remaining ships would begin sailing in a week, and the harbour’s naval yards were abuzz with the construction of new ships. Six months ago, if someone were to have told Le Moyne that he would direct one of the most ambitious colonization projects of the century, he would have called that person crazy ...Absoluement fou! Nevertheless, the sight before him was awe-inspiring. He would now have enough settlers to fill parts of the lower St. Laurent Valley, tracts along the Mississippi, and have the communal farming villages the natives had asked for. Just as the day was bright, the future looked bright for the colony of Nouvelle France.
9.3) September 17
Amsterdam
When the Marquis D’Argenson arrived in Amsterdam, the Staten-Generaal was in shock at the sudden appearance of this ‘surprise’ French delegation. They agreed, reluctantly, to meet with the delegation, but were very cautious of the latter’s intentions. To make matters more complicated, the Princess dowager [4] insisted on being present at the conference with the delegation, on behalf of her son, the Stadtholder [5]. D’Argenson was beginning to think that this alliance would need a miracle to happen. In later years he would look to that day and see that a miracle did come, but not in the way he could ever have imagined.
[1] George Washington lived a life of general moderation, as he refrained from excessive drinking, gambling, smoking, or profanity (in this case, anger).
[2] Virginia nearly went to war with the Haudenosaunee Confederacy in the 1740’s. War was averted by a treaty that gave up claims in parts of the Ohio.
[3] Algonquin translation of Iroquois
[4] Anne, former Princess Royal of UKGB; Wife of William IV of Orange, Stadtholder of the Dutch Republic. Anglophile
[5]Current Stadtholder of the Dutch Republic, William V of Orange. He’s only 5 years old at the moment and under his mother’s regency
10.1) COUP-DE-GRÂCE
Appartements du Roi, Château de Versailles
21h00, le 18 Septembre 1753
As night descended over Versailles, most of the staff and even the king were going to bed. Yet, Damien [1] knew he had a task to accomplish. After stealing one of the maid’s uniforms from the laundry, concealing a knife inside the private chambers of the king, and practicing his posture, speech and facial expression, he now proceeded to execute the plan that Madame Pompadour had charged him with. As he held a tray with chocolat [2], he proceeded down the hallway at a brisk pace. The king needed to be sleeping in order for this plan to work. Approaching the king’s apartments, he noticed the guards were still there. He took a deep breath and proceeded to the doorway.
“What is your purpose?” asked the guard. In the best female voice he could muster, he replied, “I was sent to give the King a cup of chocolat, to calm his nerves.” For a second the guard looked a bit confused, but confusion was quickly replaced with a sudden realisation.
“OH! Yes, I believe the king did ask for a cup. He certainly seemed distressed following that meeting with the Austrian Ambassador. Just between you and me, that man seemed like he wanted to kill the King right then and there.” This last phrase made Damien’s eyebrow’s raise, but he stayed in character and feigned shock.
“Do not let the king hear you say that or he might well have you imprisoned. Or worse.”
“Ah, it’s only a joke. Either way, you may deliver him his chocolat.”
“Merci.” As Damien proceeded, he gave the guard a smug look, of which the guard took no notice. Now inside, he proceeded to the king’s bed chamber, where he had concealed a knife in a couch. The darkness of the room hung over him, and the only sound was the light breathing of the king, sleeping in his bed. Damien set down the tray and retrieved the knife, and with his heart pounding in his ears, approached the king’s bed. Even in his sleep, the king looked troubled, and perhaps even a little formidable, but defenceless nonetheless.
“Je m’excuse, mon roi,” he whispered, “mais c’est votre coup de grâce.”[3] As he spoke these words, he drew the knife, and slit the king’s throat. He grabbed a pillow to muffle the king’s struggles, and waited until the dying man’s body became limp. Damien then proceeded to arrange the bed as it was before, with a pillow along his throat to absorb the blood. So far, everything was going according to plan. He stepped out of the room carrying the tray without the chocolat, and bid the guard good night. From there, he quickly and stealthily made his way down to the stables, where there was a horse waiting for him, along with everything he needed to flee the country. The only thing he needed to do was to make a false trail.
10.2) Paris
00h30 le 19 Septembre 1753
The body he stole from the cemetery was cold, and had begun to smell, but now that it had his bloodstained clothes, he could leave it behind as a distraction, leaving the authorities to their own false assumptions and thereby throwing them off his trail. He pushed it into the river Seine, and began his harrowing journey north, towards the Austrian Netherlands.
10.3) 06h00
Geneva, Switzerland
Now safely out of France, Jeanne [4], felt very accomplished indeed. Since sa majésté was now out of the picture, there was need to improve the Austrian end of the relationship, and that was her next goal, reach the court of Vienna and find Wenzel Anton [5]
[1] The servant that Pompadour hired earlier to kill his royal majesty. Influenced partly by the real-life individual who attempted to assassinate Louis, Robert-François Damiens in January of 1757
[2] Hot Chocolate. Before the invention of the chocolate bar, chocolate was only taken as a drink, nothing else.
[3] “I’m sorry my king…but it is your saving grace.” If there is a better way to say it, please tell me
[4]Madame de Pompadour
[5]Austria's former ambassador to Versailles; recently appointed foreign affairs minister of Austria
11.1) Hector Cluny, Louis XVI, the Phoenix King (University of Paris Press, 1994)
…Following the assassination of his Father, Louis de France was notified by his servants that he was now King Louis XVI. Initially the blame had fallen to the newly appointed ambassador of Austria, as he and the king had been arguing very violently the night prior to the assassination. According to the records of one minister, he had been deeply affected by this event, and his foreign policy throughout his reign would reflect these beliefs as he was very anti-Austrian. Though he was in favour of the Dévot [1] ideas of governance as well as the influence that his Saxon wife had, he knew he needed to keep the treaties his father made with Prussia, and the treaty he was negotiating with the Dutch Republic. As such he did what no other person would have dreamed of doing…
11.2)September 20, 1753
Château de Versailles
“You are doing what!?!” The ministers all said in near unison.
“You heard me minister, I AM reinstating the Edict of Nantes. [2]” The room was so quiet that one could hear a pin drop. “As I see none of you, my ministers, is capable of fathoming why I have chosen this, allow me to explain. France has Protestants and Jews, even though they practice in secret. My goal is to uncover who is, and use that to my advantage. To my allies and potential allies, it would seem like I am being respectful towards their religions. However, the real reason is to give these men and women incentive to go to Canada, Louisiane, French India, and other possessions. No more are we going to let Britain have the upper hand in the colonies, and personally, if the Protestants are an ocean away, then France doesn’t have to deal with them. Giving them incentives such as telling them ‘if they serve in the army, they get free land elsewhere,’ means I have killed two birds with one stone. Any questions?” There was near silence again. “Very well, when we no longer need to defend ourselves from Britain and Austria, then I will calm down, but until then, expect more drastic action. This meeting is adjourned.” As the ministers got up to leave, the Compte d’Arnouville [3] remarked to another minister, “France is finally in competent hands, but I believe that we will no longer be doing the ‘running’ around here.”
[1]A 'political' faction in Bourbon France that favoured Catholicism and Decentralization as opposed to Absolutism; Yes Louis, dauphine of France was influenced by this group of people
[2]Edict issued by Henri IV of France that permitted religious tolerance in the Kingdom of France, repealed by Louis XIV with the 1689 treaty of Fontainbleau
[3] Controller-General of Finances. For continuity's sake, Louis 'XVI' hasn't changed his ministers yet, as he's only been king for less than two days
12.1) GRAND COUNCIL
September 24, 1753
Onondaga, Onondaga Nation, Haudenosaunee Confederacy
It had taken several weeks for the 50 hoyenah [1] of the Confederacy to assemble. There had been heated debates amongst the chiefs and clanmothers of the events that had occurred in the previous spring. Now as they all assembled in the lands of the Firekeepers [2], they could proceed with the issues at hand. It was at this point that the Tadadaho [3] called for order within the longhouse.
“We are gathered here this day to discuss the events that have unfolded this year. Firstly we call upon the Elder Brother Chiefs of the Seneca and Mohawk Nations to draw the issue from the well.”[4] Tanacharison felt his heart fluttering as the council began its verdict. He had put so much effort into convincing his clanmothers, the villages of the west, his new allies, and the French to agree to his bold plan. He may not have liked all the sacrifices he made, but he was willing to uphold the continued freedom of his people. So as the debate began, he made a feeble prayer in the back of his head that the Peacemaker would be on his side today. The Elder brother chiefs of the aforementioned nations proceeded to stand, and pulled the issue out of the well.
“We the chiefs of the Seneca and Mohawk Nations bring to head, the issue of Tanacharison’s shift in alliance to France, and his alliance with other tribes of the Ohio Valley.” The discussion between the Seneca and Mohawk chiefs was brief, but heated. In the end, they both concluded one proposal-Tanacharison would have to explain to the council his choices of the past year. So, he rose, and walk slowly to the centre of the longhouse, beads of sweat forming on his brow. He took a deep breath, and began his defense.
“My fellow brothers, chiefs, clanmothers, and peoples gathered here this day. This day I stand before you all to give you reason as to my change of loyalties. We the Haudenosaunee are a great people, high above those who seek to destroy us. We come from a long tradition of Peace, and have always sought to find paths that would keep this peace. I stand before you today to say that I chose to give my allegiance to the French, in the name of Peace.” There was uproar among the chiefs, particularly those of the Oneida nation. The Tadadaho calmed the crowds and asked the chief to continue. Smoke from the fire filled the room, making the atmosphere tense for him, as he continued his speech.
“Yes, I say it was for peace because we have come to see the threat that the colonies of Britain pose. Do you not remember what happened a mere ten years ago, when the Virginian monsters nearly went to war against us? They only stopped when we gave them land, land that was rightfully OURS! Now they wish to repeat the same thing, to leave us in slavery and destruction.” At this point he called on the scribe who recorded Washington’s threat to read it aloud in front of the entire audience. Many of the Chiefs were shocked as the words came out of the mouth of the scribe. Faces of anger, frustration, and fear were peppered across the longhouse as the scribe finished the declaration.
“Do you know see how dangerous the English truly are? It was with the Dutch that we made the Two Row Wampum [5], but the English have not respected this pact we so graciously extended to them. WE ARE A FREE PEOPLE! WE WILL NEVER ALLOW OURSELVES TO SUBMIT TO SLAVERY, OPPRESSION, OR SUBSERVIENCE TO ANY OPPRESSOR!” At this one of the Seneca chiefs asked, “Then why align your people with France?”
“Because when the French came to my village seeking for a fort site, I asked them high concessions to benefit our people. To my surprise, the Capitaine agreed to the conditions, where we could learn from them, protect ourselves alongside them, trade as equals, and learn their ways of farming. A nation that does not innovate is doomed to wither away. Though it does go against our natural alliances, it does provide us a way out. To pave our own future, as a FREE Confederacy, without relying on one people as our masters. If they can offer us tools and techniques, arms and a future, I say that the Two Row Wampum must be broken with the British, and we must extend a new Wampum to the French. Freedom is not earned by sitting on a high and mighty throne, sitting and doing nothing. We must work actively to keep it, lest we fail our whole people!” These words left muttering scattered throughout the longhouse, but the message was clear. If freedom were to survive amongst the League, the British alliance was no longer an option. The Chiefs of the Mohawk stepped forward to declare their decision. “After hearing these words, all of us agree with the shift of alliance. The British have done us, the Kanien'kehá:ka [6] much harm and it would be an insult to our people to keep supporting them.” This declaration relieved some of Tanacharison’s worries, but he still held his breath. Following this announcement, his own Nation, the Seneca, rose and concluded to agree with the Mohawk and have faith in their Nation’s fellow chief. TheTadadaho proceeded to turn the matter over to the younger brother chiefs [7], which resulted in a small minority of Oneida chiefs voicing their dissent over such a statement. The Cayuga were cautious in their support, but it was the following statement by the clanmother that was present.
“We, the Seneca and Cayuga settlers of the west, as well as our allies the Miami, Lenape, Shawnee, Odawa, and Wendat, come together to support our chief’s alliance. We are all peoples of the Confederacy, and we come together, wishing that our collective future, as the EIGHT nations of the confederacy, may come together to make ourselves stronger. No people can survive without change and we hope that you the clanmothers and chiefs of our people may accept these ones as well.” There was nothing but silence. Seldom did a clanmother voice herself in council, but her voice was respected, even by other clanmothers. If she could agree and lay down further terms to the proposal, then the case would now move in favour of the alliance shift. The Cayuga supported the terms without any further protest. For the Oneida chiefs, it took much debate and compromise, but in the end, the majority favoured the motion, and those who did not agreed unwillingly. Tanacharison felt that these men might be dangerous in the future, but he did let his fears get the best of him. It was at this point that the clanmothers gave their approval of the motion, with nearly all of them agreeing to it. The Tadadaho proclaimed that that the proposal was now binding, [8] and that the Onondaga could vote anyway they chose. In the end, ten of the fourteen chiefs, including the Tadadaho himself, voted in favour of the motion. [9]
“Upon this day,” the Tadadaho announced, “we now make a step towards our future. We as a people do agree to break the Two Row Wampum with Britain, and turn our fortunes to those of France. To keep our freedom, we will do whatever it takes. The Elder brothers shall now address the remaining issues of the grand council.”
12.2) Saro [10] LaSalle, The Birth of Haudène (Onen'ta'on:we Publishers, 2001) [11]
“…The Grand Council of 1753 was a historically important moment in the history of the Haudenosaunee Nations. It was here were the council finally accepted the fateful decision of Tanacharison to change the traditional alliances in North America, by having the Iroquois confederacy rebuke the Covenant Chain [12], and normalize relations with New France. Furthermore it was at this conference where the league permitted expansion to include two newly formed nations. These were the Miami, a mix of Miami, Odawa, and mixed Haudenosaunee settler in around the Wabash and Maumee Rivers, and as far east as Central Ohio, and the Monongahela, predominantly Haudenosaunee, with Lenape and Wendat Settlers in the Allegheny plateau, and upper Ohio River Valley. The decision to make these new nations was simply due to the vast distances that these regions encompassed. There was significant opposition to these changes, but many of the Pro-French chiefs and clanmothers showed their true colours, and supported Tanacharison in earnest. While this is considered the birth of the modern Confédération d’Haudène, [13] it also marked the birth of a new movement, one which would shape Haudène, North American, and even world history to form the world we know today. That movement driven by freedom, flexibility, and equality created by Tanacharison and the clanmother that supported him would become what we know today as Charisonism.
[1] Chiefs of the Grand Council
[2] A term to describe the Onondaga
[3] The head chief of the Onondaga; treated as the chief of the Haudenosaunee Confederacy
[4]Elder Brothers refer to the Mohawk and Seneca chiefs, who address an issue in council first.
[5]Treaty made with the Dutch in the 17th century; extended to Britain after they conquered New Nederland
[6]Mohawk word for Mohawk nation
[7] Term to describe the Cayuga and Oneida chiefs, who discuss the issue and come to a decision before passing it on to the Onondaga for final decision. The Oneida also speak on behalf of the Tuscarora who have no say in council.
[8]75% of chiefs AND clanmothers had to agree to a treaty/proposal for it to be binding
[9]The Onondaga had the most chiefs of any nation in the League, 14 total
[10] The name ‘Charles’ in Mohawk
[11]Word for Hemlock in Mohawk
[12]Another name for the Two Row Wampum
[13] Possible future spoilers
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1)“THE HALF KING’S TREATY”
Early 1750’s
Logstown
Tanacharison eyed the French delegation suspiciously. He pondered why they were determined to build fortifications in his people’s lands. Nevertheless, he needed to inquire what they were proposing.
“Welcome to our people’s village, Capitaine de la Malgue,” said the chief, in fluent French. With that he offered the traditional wampum beads to the delegates.
“Yes, a fine village this is,” replied de la Malgue. “You seem to be blessed to be in such a fine location.” Tanacharison knew that these were stalling tactics to draw him in to whatever the French were selling.
“What goods do you want to trade this time?”
“Goods? My esteemed chief, it is not goods we wish to propose something a little more…beneficial for the both of us.”
“Tell me more.” At this, de la Malgue cracked a grin.
“We propose to fortify this area, as it is on the border of our sphere of influence. We wish to obtain your permission to build a fort on your lands.” With these words his heart hardened. He knew that this proposal would force him into submission and become a pawn in French hands. Though he liked the French goods and their wealth, he was not willing to give up his sovereignty to acquire them.
“No deal, our people will never be your pawns to sacrifice.”
“We do not wish for you to become subjects, but allies.” Tanacharison noted that the white man’s face was beginning to redden. The other delegates began to be somewhat nervous by their leader’s rising temper.
“Allies you say?” Tanacharison began to ponder. He could use this to his advantage, as they were allies, and he could bargain for stronger terms that favoured Logstown. He could make the French work for him, and benefit those belonging to the Six Nations in the Western Lands [1].
“I see. We may permit you to build a fort in these lands. That being said, we dictate where this site may be located, and shall provide some of our warriors to the site, so we know that we have some say in our ‘defense’. If you wish to bring some settlers to farm and provide food for yourselves, you may do so, however we dictate where they go, and they must provide 5 % of their surplus to us.” The chief thought this would be enough either for them to call off the deal, or for the Western Six Nations to benefit greatly from the proposal. If de la Malgue had been angry before, now he was ready to strangle the chief with his own hands.
“Why you insolent little i-”
“Um, sir?” asked one of the other soldiers.
“WHAT!?” The soldier brought a seething de la Malgue aside to discuss the current offer made. [2]
“Sir, if we accept this, we will have very loyal defenders on the border. Would you prefer they ally themselves with the British?”
“I will not stand to have an IROQUOIS [3] dictate the terms of the defense. We are French, and are above these sauvages.”
“Yet they provide us with men, allow us to bring settlers to give agriculture, and we can bolster the population of the border region. It will even benefit the trade routes.” de la Malgue could only sigh in defeat. He knew well that if they did not accept this treaty, they would side with the British, and this could cost them the vallée and they knew it.
“Fine we accept your terms, on the conditions that you cooperate with our Algonquin allies, even if facing fellow Six Nations peoples.” Tanacharison was surprised at the acceptance of his terms, but even more shocked at the counter-proposal. He knew that he was on thin ice with the first proposal, and if he pushed his luck any further, he could lose the potential gains for his people. He would accept, but he would get the last word.
“The council accepts your terms, so long as we get discount on any brandy traded through this region.”
“You’re joking right?” de la Malgue was about to give up, until the soldier who pressured him, gave him a gesture, suggesting to accept the one extra term.
“Yes, we accept your terms.” In his head the chief laughed. He had dictated terms to the French, and won. He would be able to gain advantage for his tribe, and his new ‘allies’. If they could achieve equal footing with les colons and coureurs de bois, then they would be able to be free of all the powers controlling their lands. However, that would take much time. What mattered most was to gain advantage for his people in the short-term, and if all worked well, the long term.
“Wonderful! We shall celebrate this treaty. You may return with your crews to begin construction, as soon as you can.”
“I shall return to Québec and notify the gouverneur-générale immediately. If that is the end of our business, good day to you, esteemed chief.” With that, the delegates left, leaving the chief thinking, this is the beginning of a new era for the Western Six Nations’ peoples.
[1]Mingos. I chose not to use this term because it is derived from Mingwe, meaning treacherous. Several treaties refer to them as settlers from the Haudenosaunee (or Six Nations) Confederacy. They were predominantly Seneca and Cayuga.
[2] Here is our POD. In OTL, Paul Marin de la Malgue lost his temper with Tanacharison and rejected the wampum beads, deeply offending the chief, only further promoting his anti-French views.
[3] Translates as “black snakes” into certain Algonquin tongues.
2.1) THE GOUVERNEUR-GÉNÉRALE
June 1753
Québec
Marquis Duquesne was in his study, meditating on the news that he had received. The Iroquois chief Tanacharison had dictated terms to defense in the Ohio valley. This act was considered unheard of among the Algonquin allies of the French in Canada and Louisiane. However he now had nominal allies that would be willing to comply with defense against the British. Securing the upper Ohio was extremely important in order to keep the trade flowing between Louisiane, the Caribbean Islands, and Canada in the north. This also gave him the opportunity to “fill in the gaps” in colonization between the north and south. Yet with all these benefits, he was still worried about the emboldened Natives.
“Something wrong gouverneur?” asked one of the servants.
“No, but I am concerned with the news Capitaine de la Malgue gave me when his messengers arrived in Québec last week. I do not know where we are going to get colons willing to make their way to the Great Lakes. Most Canadiens prefer the Saint-Laurent [1] and would not want to go beyond Cataraqui and Fort Frontenac [2].”
“Sir if I may, I heard that the political battle between the upper classes and the King over the taxes has continued to plague the King since he increased the taille [3]. I heard this from some of the incoming traders down in the basse ville [4].”
“Really? This is an interesting development.” Duquesne knew that his options were limited, but since King Louis [5] was at a low point, he could convince him to act quickly and in favour of the colony. Perhaps the use of propaganda to encourage the people opposed to the taille to move to Canada, Louisiane, and la vallée d’Ohio. In fact, if he sent the right people to the delegations, he could potential open French colonial trade into the Ottoman Empire [6]. “Get me Monsieur Le Moyne [7], I need him to lead a group of delegates to Versailles and request an audience before the King.”
You mean the gouverneur of Montréal?”
“No, I mean the gouverneur of Saint Louis de Ha-Ha [8]. OF COURSE I MEAN THE GOUVERNEUR DE MONTRÉAL!”
“Ay! D’accord, I will get him to Québec as quickly as I can.” With that the servant left the study. ‘Good,’ thought Duquesne. It seems as though this problem may provide a greater solution. Since war with Great Britain seemed to be ever looming on the horizon, he would need all the help he could get.
2.2) Fort LeBœuf
In the weeks following the incident with the chief of Logstown, the Miami chiefs [9] were coming to the fort to make similar offers with the French. Though de la Malgue hated to be bossed around by these…sauvages, he knew he needed to take away as many allies away from Britain as possible. So he would accept modified versions of the Miami chiefs’ terms, which he hoped could still save him face to the colonial administration.
2.3) Logstown
In the few weeks that had passed since the treaty, trade was already up, and though the British did not know it, their former ally Tanacharison had betrayed their potential fortress to the French, and they were now selling arms and knives to the enemy. According to some of the soldiers from de la Malgue’s party, the first crews and soldiers would be arriving in the next few days. Tanacharison knew that he was taking a big risk allying himself to the French, his sworn enemies. However, in order to make the Six Nations, Miami, and other ‘allies’ of the French powerful, he would need to keep his friends close, and his enemies closer.
[1] Saint Lawrence Valley
[2]Two different names for OTL Kingston, ON
[3] In 1751, King Louis had attempted to begin taxing the nobles. This failed miserable, and damaged his reputation to the aristocracy, concurrent to the previous damages to his rep among the lower classes.
[4] Lower Town, Quebec City
[5] Louis XV, if you weren't sure by now
[6] The treaty of Vienna in the late 1720's/ early 1730's guaranteed large amounts of trade between France and the Ottoman Empire
[7] Gouverneur Duquesne's interim predecessor as governor general of New France
[8] A real town in Quebec, south of the Gaspesie
[9] The Miami were allies of the British for similar reasons to the Six Nation 'Mingos"
3.1) LES RUMEURS
July 1753
Williamsburg, Virginia
Traders had been pouring in to Williamsburg telling outrageous stories about events occurring in the Upper Ohio. Some were saying the Iroquois had abandoned their alliance, while others claimed that the French had taken the valley by force. As the rumours continued to spread, Robert Dinwiddie [1] began to wonder, what was happening to his precious commercial assets in Ohio. He needed to investigate what had occurred in the past few weeks that was so alarming.
“Excuse me, you there!” The civil servant who heard the call came running.
“Yes, Sir?”
“Get me George Washington. Tell him I have some requests for him.”
3.2) Seneca Lands, Upstate New York
The village chief could not believe what he had heard. The Seneca and Cayuga settlers in Ohio had betrayed the British, and made an alliance with France. Even more shocking was the fact they had brought the Miami Confederacy against the British. These were too many shocking revelations for this chief. If Tanacharison, a respected chief of the Grand Council, had overstepped his boundaries in commiting this act, the Grand Council had to be be notified at once.
“Send messengers to the nearest major town. Ask them to send more messengers to the other Haudenosaunee tribes. We must convene the Grand Council.”
[1] Governor of Virginia; had interests in the Ohio valley
4.1) THE MATTERS OF KINGS
August 10, 1753
Versailles
The only thing one could hear coming from the apartments of the King was constant pacing. He had been pondering his diplomatic and political failures as well as the opportunity to fix them. ‘Oh how I wish Fleury [1] was still alive. He always knew what to do.’ Ever since the courtiers announced a delegation had been sent to the King from the colonies, the King had begun to reflect unceasingly how he could avoid another crisis. To add to these complications, last night, Fleury had appeared to him in a dream. In the dream he said, ‘Oh, Mon roi, you are wise and tactful, but you lack confidence in yourself [2]. There will come a time when an opportunity to act shall be given to you. When it comes, I hope you will take the opportunity, and move with boldness and precision.’ These words had made the King more worried, but had helped him come to the conclusion that the opportunity referred to in his dream was the colonial delegation [3]. He would need to be open to the proposals of the colonies, as they might be able to turn the tables at home in France.
“Excusez-moi, courtier.”
“Oui, my King?”
“Tell the colonial delegation to meet me in the Salon d’Hercule [4].”
“But of course, my King.” With that, the courtier had left to meet the delegation.
Elsewhere at Château de Versailles
Le Moyne felt as though he was in a dream. It had scarcely been a year since he had returned to Montréal to continue his position as gouverneur, when he had been once again summoned to Québec by the gouverneur-générale. There he received word from Duquesne that he was to lead a delegation to Versailles to ask the King to promote bringing more settlers to the colonies. Le Moyne wondered how he could complete such a task, and now his delegation had gained an audience before the King. ‘I must present a very convincing argument to win over his majesty,’ thought Le Moyne.
“Sa Majesté will now see you,” informed the Palace courtiers.
“Well, all I can hope for is good luck and good grace,” said Le Moyne. “Allons-y!”
Salon d’Hercule, Château de Versailles
As Le Moyne, entered the Salon, he was amazed by the opulence of the hall he entered. Murals and marble, gold and silver, and a vast assortment of small devices dotted the room. Yet he knew he was here to present the king his message from Marquis Duquesne. It was then the courtier announced to the king,
“Presenting the Baron of Longueuil, Charles III Le Moyne, Gouverneur of Montréal [5], and his delegation from the colonie of Canada in Nouvelle France.” At the sound of these words, the king summoned the delegation to proceed.
“What is the message you bring, Baron?” asked the king.
“Your majesty, it is an honor to be in thy presence. We send a message from Marquis Duquesne. He says that he has received an interesting proposal from the indiens [6].
“What terms do you speak of Baron?”
“It seems a chief defected from the Iroquois to us, and demanded we provide settlers to till some of the lands near the fort. Following this meeting, several other chiefs proposed similar treaties. Furthermore, we in Nouvelle France know that we have some exemption from the taille [7]…”
“Are you asking me to set up a company to promote settlers to immigrate?”
“No we are asking for a lowering of the tax in the colony, establishing seven villes-franches [8], and getting a number of colonists and soldiers to the colony by next spring.” The king was so shocked that a lowly COLONIAL baron had dictated such high terms. Yet it was also a wonderful opportunity to bolster the Colonies. If he had heard his sources right, there was about 1,2 million [9] people living in the English colonies, while there were perhaps no more than 70,000 [10] French in all of New France, along with no more than 1,5 million natives [11]. Though this looked very good on paper, Louis knew that the natives would be no more than cannon fodder. What he needed was a long term demographic solution in the colonies. Here there was an opportunity to remedy that situation starting now. He saw that he could ‘convince’ some of his tax opponents to go to the colonies using these proposed solutions.
“Your terms are very high, but I will accept them. By October 1st, I will have 8000 citoyens ready to leave, accompanied by 4000 soldiers. I will provide 1 years’ worth of rations, to establish themselves. The franche-villes that you propose will be located at Louisbourg, Québec, Montréal, Cahokia, Nouvelle-Orléans, Mobile, and the Fortress where the native chief had demanded terms [12].”[13] Le Moyne’s jaw hit the floor. He could not believe that the King had just simply accepted the terms with very little consideration. This could not be all that he had to say.
“Your majesty, may I ask why you accepted so willingly?”
“Do you want me to change my mind?”
“No, absolument non!”
“Since you asked, we all know that this is the calm before the storm between us and the Kingdom of Great Britain. We are going to need all the help we can get against the British, and that includes in the colonies. I am sending a shipment of arms alongside the rations, and you are to use them to train the natives to use against the British. The stealth tactics that they use, combined with modern weaponry would be lethal against the enemy. This all being said, I have one condition. All the colonists must be catholic. Soldiers are not required this standard. Split the group of colonists between Canada and Louisiane. You shall remain here to oversee the preparations for the entire company. ” Le Moyne now understood the true nature of the King’s intentions, and was very glad for the support.
“Merci your majesty. I will be honored to oversee such a command.”
“You are now free to go.” As Le Moyne left the Salon, he was giving a prayer of Thanksgiving for coming to Versailles on such a lucky day.
Meanwhile, Louis summoned the court scribe who had been present during the delegation.
“Is all of that on paper?”
“Yes your majesty.”
“Good. Send a copy of the terms to Le Moyne and make an official copy for the ministers and officials. Afterwards, spread the word to the entire kingdom of the new colonial venture. I would like to have all the preparations ready to sail from Nantes by September 20th. No later than October 1st.”
“Yes your Majesty.”
“Finally, write a letter to King Frederick of Prussia. I will need to renew our alliance, and to do that I will need to offer a few…gifts.”
“Do we need to summon a delegation to present the letter?”
“But of course! Summon won immediately. That is all”
4.2)Logstown
As the meeting with the Miami confederacy began, Tanacharison exchanged the wampum beads immediately. He knew that breaking off with the rest of the Six Nations would have some fallout. Even now, one tenth of the Seneca and Cayuga settlers had returned to the Haudenosaunee lands, bringing ridiculous stories along with them. Though the construction of Fort Duquesne was half finished and there were some soldiers moving in to the area, the British traders had seen the fallout. He would need new allies to keep the rest of the settlers from leaving. So as he met with the Miami, he hoped he would have great success.
[1] Fleury was Louis XV's trusted minister between the late 1720's until his death in 1742. This is considered the high part of Louis XV's reign
[2]It is said that Louis the XV lacked confidence in himself, though he was very intelligent
[3]This dream never happened OTL, but since Louis is at a low point, anything sould be seen as a saving grace
[4] Medium sized Banquet hall in the Chateau de Versailles
[5]Le Moyne's full name
[6]Natives (in this case the Iroquois)
[7]According the research I have done, the taille was for the Kingdom only. Nothing was specified about the colonies. If someone knows otherwise, feel free to correct me.
[8] Free cities. Exempt from the taille (e.g. Paris)
[9] An estimate of the population of the American Colonies, base of the preceeding and succeeding censi.
[10] Estimate including all of new france, courreurs de bois, etc.
[11]Again, another estimate
[12] Fort Duquesne. He doesn't know the name yet.
[13] Louis was known to act boldly and all at once when he actually did.
5) BATTLELINES ARE DRAWN: PART I
September 1, 1753
Ohio and Monongahela Rivers
If Major George Washington [1] had known what he would see when he reached Upper Ohio, he would have brought the entire Virginia Militia to deal with this betrayal. When the governor had instructed him to investigate what was occurring in Ohio, he thought there were simply minor skirmishes between the traders and the Indians. What he saw was far from that.
“This is UNACCEPTABLE! These red skinned devils promise us land and alliances against the French, and then they go and stab us in the back!”
“Sir, the French have a near-ready fort at the river junction, as well as a significant amount of defense.”
“Well if we cannot trust these Indians, then we will deal with them ourselves.”
Logstown
Tanacharison had been on edge for weeks. When the calls for a convening of the Grand Council of the Six Nations, he knew that he would need to have good reasons to explain his shift of alliances to convince the whole council. He had barely been able to convince the Clanmothers to not knock of his horns [2], and agree to the shift. To make matters worse, the vast territory occupied by the Miami Tribe and the Iroquois settlers made the alliance very shaky, but the recent alliance had been strengthened by the inclusion of the Wendat [3], Shawnee [4], Odawaa [5], and Lenape [6] who had settled in the regions of the Alliance. Even with all of these efforts, it was difficult to be able to show the Grand Council valid reasons to have abandoned the alliance with the British. Yet the progress made by the French had been evident. Fort Duquesne, as they called it, was nearly finished, as had the mild fortifications of Logstown. There were 150 French soldiers manning it, along with 50 Tribe warriors. The French had fortunately brought a few scribes and military engineers, who had resided there at Logstown. Even 2 Canadien families had come to clear some agricultural land. All of these things were proving to help the Seneca and Cayuga of the Valley, and the effects of similar treaties were being seen among the other tribes, but the council was loyal to their British allies, and this would be seen as an affront.
While Tanacharison had been pondering these things, a great commotion had erupted near the edge of the village. When he heard what was occurring, he could only assume the worst, British soldiers. Much to his dismay, it was a company of Virginian Militia, headed by a commander whose head looked redder than ripe berries.
“What is the meaning of all this!?” asked the soldier.
“Excuse me? I do not understand why you are infuriated.”
“Firstly, you dirty Indians tell us we can build a fort at this site, and then you go and sell the site to the French, without any guilt. You are all demon back stabbers!”
“You will not use that tone in my village.”
“I, Major George Washington, will use whatever tone I feel like to address you subhuman devils! We in Virginia hold much power in the British colonies, and after seeing this, I will make sure that every Indian in British, French, or unclaimed territory will be exterminated. Even if they seem ‘civilized’ like the Iroquois, they will all yield to Virginia, Britain, and their might!”
“If you will not leave, I will call the Soldiers guarding the fort and town to arrest you and charge you under both the Great Law of Peace [7], and French Code Civile.” The tensions continued to mount, but it was at this point that one of Washington’s soldiers spoke up.
“Sir, we do not have enough men to take on this village. We were told to gather information and return and that is what we should do.” Though he was angry, George Washington knew he would need to return to Virginia in order to gather enough troops to complete what he proposed to do.
“Very well. I have warned you, Indian. Next time we meet, your head will be on a pike!” The Virginian Soldier and his company left their presence seething, and wanting revenge. Tanacharison felt as if his problems were simply becoming far too great to handle. However as he entered the Longhouse to rest, one of the French scribes was waiting for him.
“I recorded all of it.”
“What? What are you talking about?”
“That Soldier’s entire conversation and threats upon your people.” This statement caught the Chief by surprise. He now had the proof to explain his shift of allegiances. He had proof to convince all the Six Nations to Fight against the British. As he contemplated his change in fortune, he began to laugh.
“Uh, Sieur Chef [8]? Are you alright?”
“I feel wonderful! Send a copy back to Québec. I will need French support for this war. Also, send this message to the allies of our alliance as quickly as possible. I will need some of their chiefs to accompany me to the Grand Council. I feel we have no time to lose if we are to be ready for when Britain attacks.”
Certainly Chef. I will notify the soldiers of the fort, and warriors of your tribe. This message will reach your allies by the end of the month and Québec by Early October.”
“Then as you French say, ALLONS-Y!”
[1] George Washington’s rank in 1753-4
[2] Means that the Clanmother strips him of his rank as Chief for failing to fulfill the wishes of the clanmothers for the village. They are required to remove the deer antlers from their headdress (a symbol of leadership), and retire to private life.
[3] Huron
[4] Only the Shawnee in Upper Ohio/Pennsylvania are brought into the alliance. Those in Virginia, Lower Ohio, and other regions remain independent but allied to France
[5] Ottawa
[6]Delaware
[7] The Legal Code of the Haudenosaunee Confederacy
[8] Lord Chief in French
6.1) BATTLELINES ARE DRAWN: PART II
September 2, 1753
Sanssouci Palace, Potsdam
Frederick was curious to know why French delegates had arrived at his Palace, very determined to see him. They had to have a very good proposition in order to disturb him from his military exercises. So as the delegates entered, he was surprised to see none other than one of the kings best ambassadors, Armand de Vignerot du Plessis, Duc de Richelieu [1], one of the kings best ambassadors.
“Good afternoon your highness, King Frederick, second of that name, in Prussia. Sa majesté Louis, Fifteenth of that name, of France wishes you good fortune, and proposes a deal and treaty with yourself.” This message was an interesting prospect, peaking his interest.
“Tell me more.”
“Son altesse Louis XV proposes an economic and military alliance.”
“I’ve heard this before. What can France provide Prussia to make me consider such an alliance?”
“Firstly, France proposes to cede Prussia the island of Dominica [2].” This was completely unexpected by Frederick. Dominica was a fairly rich island in the Caribbean, but Prussia would need a Navy to match its army to keep it.
“Is that all? France knows the Prussia lacks the Navy to keep such a possession.”
“Son Altesse also proposes lowering tariffs for all trade to Prussia, with special discounts on saltpetre, timber, and Spices. We will also provide naval support to Prussia so that it can build a Navy of its own” This proposed plan made Frederick very desirous to help France, but he needed to hear what terms France would ask.
“What does Louis want for these special ‘privileges’?”
“He wants some military experts to help train French troops, as well as agree to one extra condition.”
“What might that condition be?”
“In the case that Britain declares war on France or vice versa, that Prussia shall declare war on Britain as well. In response, if Prussia declares war on Britain, France will help its ally. Furthermore, if Prussia has interests in Hannover, France will support Prussia in obtaining them.” The first aspect of the condition was hardly a surprise, but the second definitely was. Hannover was a significant amount of territory, exerting influence over the free cities of Bremen AND Hamburg. To control these junctions of trade, as well as linking some minor territories to the Prussian heartland was a very tempting deal. If France will help Prussia meet ends and gain new heights of power, this could be very beneficial to the Prussia Frederick is creating.
“I will agree to these terms because I see that King Louis wants to benefit my nation as well as his own. As soon as we can formalize the accord on paper, then it will be official.”
“Wonderful! I hope this is the first of many good relations between our two kingdoms.” It was at this point that the Duc de Richelieu was escorted to a room where this treaty could be arranged. Frederick was very pleased with the offer. If France is offering Prussia some opportunities of glory, then Prussia could happily afford to help France in this time of need.
6.2)Chateau de Versailles
“Now I will need you to succeed in convincing the Dutch of entering into alliance with France. They have one of the strongest navies in the world, and it will be crucial to control naval affairs to win this upcoming war.”
“Oui, sa majesté. I will handle these neutral Dutch the same way I handled the neutral Swiss!” The Marquis d’Argenson was excused from Louis’ presence, and promptly left to go north to Amsterdam. In his mind Louis only hoped that the delegation to Prussia and this new delegation to the Netherlands would succeed. Though he was happy with his pré carré [3], but he had seen his subjects were not. He could not sit idly while he knew that the British were eying his colonies. Fleury had told him to be confident in himself, and he decided it was now time to do so.
[1] Friend and ally of Louis XV; served as ambassador to the HRE in the 1720’s
[2] Island in the Caribbean who’s economy at the time was based on Indigo and Sugar Cane
[3] Square field; Term used to describe France
7) BATTLELINES ARE DRAWN: PART III
September 3, 1753
Château de Versailles
From the first moment that she heard that Louis was planning to renew the Prussian alliance, Jeanne Antoinette Poisson [1] had been beside herself with rage. She despised Frederick, and would do anything in her power and influence to avoid this alliance. Yet in recent weeks she had noticed that the King had become more distant and all her attempts to entertain him, and even send him mistresses was not working. She knew she had to act quickly or she might lose her influence in the Court. If Louis would not reach out to her, she would have to reach out to him, and quickly.
Appartements du Roi, Château de Versailles
Louis knew that his withdrawal from la Marquise de Pompadour would create a very serious problem between them. Ever since the colonial delegation had arrived nearly a month ago, he knew he would have to face Britain as the British were always desirous to declare war on France. The only way he could alienate Britain was to ally his country to the strongest naval and land militaries in all of Europe: Prussia and the Dutch Republic. Now was the moment of truth. He would either get la Marquise to agree with him, or have to remove her from court, there was no other choice. So, he called his attendants to send her to his apartments, and waited.
It wasn’t long before la Marquise entered the chambers and the two were left alone. Eerie silence ensued. After several minutes she asked, “Why? What has bewitched you to consider an alliance with HIM?”
“He who you speak of has one of the most capable armies on the continent. No one since the Ottomans has defeated Austria that soundly and with his help, we have a chance against Britain.”
“Yet you knew that you would hurt me in doing so. Why are you wasting time on stupid war plans anyway? You were NEVER the type of man to be focused on military pursuits.”
“I do this because I see how ruthless Britain is. I need to defend what is rightfully French. If I cannot defend France from its enemies, then I have failed my duty as King.”
“BUT I KNOW WHAT IS BEST FOR YOU! YOU HAVE BEEN HAPPIEST BY MY SIDE! YOU WILL LEAD THIS COUNTRY INTO THE GROUND BY PERSUING SUCH A POINTLESS ALLIANCE!” All these words struck Louis very hard and made him realize that la Marquise would not accept his decision and though they were friends, he would have to send her away.
“If you cannot accept the choices I make to help my kingdom, then I must ask you to leave Versailles. You are my friend but if your hatred for Frederick won’t let you accept my choices as King, then you must leave.” Jeanne was surprised. She did not believe that she had become that hysterical in her hatred, but she felt that in trying to get her point across, her frustration had just cost her the influence over the King she held for so long.
“Fine. I see that my voice will not be heeded in this court. This is NOT the last you will see of me, your majesty.” She promptly left the apartment planning her next move. It took all his strength but as soon as she had left, he said, “Oh Fleury, if this is what is necessary for France, please help me find strength to live without her.” It was at this point that King Louis XV of France began to sob.
[1] The wonderfully famous Madame de Pompadour (also known as la Marquise de Pompadour
8.1) REFLECTIONS AND PLANS
September 4, 1753
St. Malo Harbour, Bretagne
Le Moyne was thoroughly impressed by the success of sa majesté’s decree. In less than one month, there were nearly 9000 people who signed up to go to the new world. The harvest was bountiful this year, and much of the excess was already packed, ready to cross the Atlantic. The 4000 soldiers that the king had granted were all assembled, with munitions, weapons, and rations imported from Spanish America, Poland, and Egypt. In command of this army was Baron Dieskau [1], with Francis de Gaston [2] as his second in command. There were 20 merchant vessels and 12 military vessels, all headed to Louisbourg, were they would break and would split between going to Québec and Nouvelle Orléans. He thought that being in charge of such a great project would be such a difficult task, and it often was. However, since there was high morale amongst the colonists willing to move, there was heightened morale amongst the majority of the armed forces as well. At the rate everything was unfolding, they would be ready to sail earlier than the 15th, and get to Louisbourg by early November. In his heart, Le Moyne thanked the treaty made in the backwoods of Ohio to bring all this good fortune to New France.
8.2) Québec
Le Marquis Duquesne had received news that the delegation at Versailles had gone very successfully. In fact, he realised that as a result of all the soldiers and colonists there would need to be certain aspects of the treaty with the Iroquois to be clarified so that the colonists could be accommodated on both Native and French Lands. He would also need to prepare enough provisions for the newcomers come springtime. While pondering this, he left his and looked for the nearest civil servant. When he found one he said, “I’d like to send out a proclamation to all the habitants [3] in the colony.”
“Certainly, what would this proclamation be?”
“I would like all the settlers to give 10 percent of their harvest to the granary stores at Montréal, Trois-Rivières, Québec, and Louisbourg.”
“Seigneur, do you think they’ll accept this?”
“It is a necessary ‘tax’ in order to provide for the new colons that are being sent by the Roi.”
“If it’s necessary, than I will get the word out.” The governor simply smiled and said, “Perfect.”
8.3) Château de Versailles
Jeanne Antoinette felt defeated and angry. Weeks of distance and one major diplomatic argument had cost her the influence she wielded in the court. The Prince of Kaunitz [4] had nearly convinced Louis of accepting an alliance with Austria. If only he had been recalled later, then maybe that colonial delegation would not have affected him that much. She might have still been in favour with Louis, but that had all changed in the blink of an eye. However she would make sure she had the last word. If Louis would not see an alliance with Prussia was a bad idea, then she’d make him see. As she prepared to leave, she snuck down to the servants’ quarters to see if anyone was there. Inside, there was a young man in a threadbare coat kneeling in prayer.
“Is this a bad time de vous interrompez?
“My goodness! Madame Pompadour! I-I-I’m so sorry that I-
“All is well. I need you to do me a favour, and I will pay you 4 Louis’ d’or [5] to complete the task.” His eyes widened upon hearing such a high price for the task.
“What does the Madame wish me to do for her?” She leaned in close and lowered her voice and whispered in his ear.
“I want you to kill the King.” He was initially horrified,but was able to calm himself within a few minutes. His faced showed thought and concern, and after some time of deliberating, he gave her a response.
“Comment voulez-vous que je le fasse ?" [6]
She gave a sigh of relief and began to explain her plan to the hired assassin,
[1] OTL leader of colonial French forces; captured in 1756 by British soldiers
[2] OTL second-in-command to Louis Montcalm
[3] Term used to describe the French colonists in Canada
[4] Diplomat who helped influence the OTL Franco-Austrian alliance. Served as ambassador to Versailles from 1750-53.
[5] 4 of the most expensive coins in Bourbon France. Worth 98 Livres (approx. 90 Francs c.1750)
[6] “How do you want me to do it?” If some notices the grammar is off, please notify me
9.1) PLANS IN ACTION
September 15, 1753
Williamsburg, Virginia
Major George Washington had deeply contemplated the recent turn of events. He regretted losing his temper against the traitors, as it was against his nature to use profanities [1]. However, he reasoned it was necessary to give them a warning of their impending destruction. Now as he stood before the governor, his thoughts were racing, and he wasn’t sure how he could tell him of what happened.
“So, what news do you have from the Ohio Valley, Major?”
“Well,” he began, “The locals have abandoned us, and have chosen to align themselves with the French.” He braced himself for the worst the governor could say.
“That…is…UNACCEPTABLE! We have warned the Iroquois before [2], and I feel Virginia needs to end that Black Snake [3] menace once and for ALL! I will send a letter to the government, requesting that two contingents of British Regulars be dispatched, and to threaten France with war if this nonsense continues. Oh, and Major?”
“Yes, governor?”
“Begin assembling Virginia’s militia. We will launch an advance attack next month, to weaken defenses. We need to begin eliminating those Frogs and their collaborator-allies immediately!”
“Yes sir, we will be ready to leave as soon as the logistics are finalized.”
“Perfect. You are now dismissed.” George felt a return of confidence, as he could now live up to his threat with the might of the greatest empire on earth to back him.
9.2) St. Malo Harbour, Bretagne
The day was warm, the sky was clear, and St. Malo was disappearing over the horizon. Charles could finally see the results of his project taking shape. Over two dozen merchant ships, ten military, and six cargo ships were leaving the harbour and setting sail for Louisbourg. The remaining ships would begin sailing in a week, and the harbour’s naval yards were abuzz with the construction of new ships. Six months ago, if someone were to have told Le Moyne that he would direct one of the most ambitious colonization projects of the century, he would have called that person crazy ...Absoluement fou! Nevertheless, the sight before him was awe-inspiring. He would now have enough settlers to fill parts of the lower St. Laurent Valley, tracts along the Mississippi, and have the communal farming villages the natives had asked for. Just as the day was bright, the future looked bright for the colony of Nouvelle France.
9.3) September 17
Amsterdam
When the Marquis D’Argenson arrived in Amsterdam, the Staten-Generaal was in shock at the sudden appearance of this ‘surprise’ French delegation. They agreed, reluctantly, to meet with the delegation, but were very cautious of the latter’s intentions. To make matters more complicated, the Princess dowager [4] insisted on being present at the conference with the delegation, on behalf of her son, the Stadtholder [5]. D’Argenson was beginning to think that this alliance would need a miracle to happen. In later years he would look to that day and see that a miracle did come, but not in the way he could ever have imagined.
[1] George Washington lived a life of general moderation, as he refrained from excessive drinking, gambling, smoking, or profanity (in this case, anger).
[2] Virginia nearly went to war with the Haudenosaunee Confederacy in the 1740’s. War was averted by a treaty that gave up claims in parts of the Ohio.
[3] Algonquin translation of Iroquois
[4] Anne, former Princess Royal of UKGB; Wife of William IV of Orange, Stadtholder of the Dutch Republic. Anglophile
[5]Current Stadtholder of the Dutch Republic, William V of Orange. He’s only 5 years old at the moment and under his mother’s regency
10.1) COUP-DE-GRÂCE
Appartements du Roi, Château de Versailles
21h00, le 18 Septembre 1753
As night descended over Versailles, most of the staff and even the king were going to bed. Yet, Damien [1] knew he had a task to accomplish. After stealing one of the maid’s uniforms from the laundry, concealing a knife inside the private chambers of the king, and practicing his posture, speech and facial expression, he now proceeded to execute the plan that Madame Pompadour had charged him with. As he held a tray with chocolat [2], he proceeded down the hallway at a brisk pace. The king needed to be sleeping in order for this plan to work. Approaching the king’s apartments, he noticed the guards were still there. He took a deep breath and proceeded to the doorway.
“What is your purpose?” asked the guard. In the best female voice he could muster, he replied, “I was sent to give the King a cup of chocolat, to calm his nerves.” For a second the guard looked a bit confused, but confusion was quickly replaced with a sudden realisation.
“OH! Yes, I believe the king did ask for a cup. He certainly seemed distressed following that meeting with the Austrian Ambassador. Just between you and me, that man seemed like he wanted to kill the King right then and there.” This last phrase made Damien’s eyebrow’s raise, but he stayed in character and feigned shock.
“Do not let the king hear you say that or he might well have you imprisoned. Or worse.”
“Ah, it’s only a joke. Either way, you may deliver him his chocolat.”
“Merci.” As Damien proceeded, he gave the guard a smug look, of which the guard took no notice. Now inside, he proceeded to the king’s bed chamber, where he had concealed a knife in a couch. The darkness of the room hung over him, and the only sound was the light breathing of the king, sleeping in his bed. Damien set down the tray and retrieved the knife, and with his heart pounding in his ears, approached the king’s bed. Even in his sleep, the king looked troubled, and perhaps even a little formidable, but defenceless nonetheless.
“Je m’excuse, mon roi,” he whispered, “mais c’est votre coup de grâce.”[3] As he spoke these words, he drew the knife, and slit the king’s throat. He grabbed a pillow to muffle the king’s struggles, and waited until the dying man’s body became limp. Damien then proceeded to arrange the bed as it was before, with a pillow along his throat to absorb the blood. So far, everything was going according to plan. He stepped out of the room carrying the tray without the chocolat, and bid the guard good night. From there, he quickly and stealthily made his way down to the stables, where there was a horse waiting for him, along with everything he needed to flee the country. The only thing he needed to do was to make a false trail.
10.2) Paris
00h30 le 19 Septembre 1753
The body he stole from the cemetery was cold, and had begun to smell, but now that it had his bloodstained clothes, he could leave it behind as a distraction, leaving the authorities to their own false assumptions and thereby throwing them off his trail. He pushed it into the river Seine, and began his harrowing journey north, towards the Austrian Netherlands.
10.3) 06h00
Geneva, Switzerland
Now safely out of France, Jeanne [4], felt very accomplished indeed. Since sa majésté was now out of the picture, there was need to improve the Austrian end of the relationship, and that was her next goal, reach the court of Vienna and find Wenzel Anton [5]
[1] The servant that Pompadour hired earlier to kill his royal majesty. Influenced partly by the real-life individual who attempted to assassinate Louis, Robert-François Damiens in January of 1757
[2] Hot Chocolate. Before the invention of the chocolate bar, chocolate was only taken as a drink, nothing else.
[3] “I’m sorry my king…but it is your saving grace.” If there is a better way to say it, please tell me
[4]Madame de Pompadour
[5]Austria's former ambassador to Versailles; recently appointed foreign affairs minister of Austria
11.1) Hector Cluny, Louis XVI, the Phoenix King (University of Paris Press, 1994)
…Following the assassination of his Father, Louis de France was notified by his servants that he was now King Louis XVI. Initially the blame had fallen to the newly appointed ambassador of Austria, as he and the king had been arguing very violently the night prior to the assassination. According to the records of one minister, he had been deeply affected by this event, and his foreign policy throughout his reign would reflect these beliefs as he was very anti-Austrian. Though he was in favour of the Dévot [1] ideas of governance as well as the influence that his Saxon wife had, he knew he needed to keep the treaties his father made with Prussia, and the treaty he was negotiating with the Dutch Republic. As such he did what no other person would have dreamed of doing…
11.2)September 20, 1753
Château de Versailles
“You are doing what!?!” The ministers all said in near unison.
“You heard me minister, I AM reinstating the Edict of Nantes. [2]” The room was so quiet that one could hear a pin drop. “As I see none of you, my ministers, is capable of fathoming why I have chosen this, allow me to explain. France has Protestants and Jews, even though they practice in secret. My goal is to uncover who is, and use that to my advantage. To my allies and potential allies, it would seem like I am being respectful towards their religions. However, the real reason is to give these men and women incentive to go to Canada, Louisiane, French India, and other possessions. No more are we going to let Britain have the upper hand in the colonies, and personally, if the Protestants are an ocean away, then France doesn’t have to deal with them. Giving them incentives such as telling them ‘if they serve in the army, they get free land elsewhere,’ means I have killed two birds with one stone. Any questions?” There was near silence again. “Very well, when we no longer need to defend ourselves from Britain and Austria, then I will calm down, but until then, expect more drastic action. This meeting is adjourned.” As the ministers got up to leave, the Compte d’Arnouville [3] remarked to another minister, “France is finally in competent hands, but I believe that we will no longer be doing the ‘running’ around here.”
[1]A 'political' faction in Bourbon France that favoured Catholicism and Decentralization as opposed to Absolutism; Yes Louis, dauphine of France was influenced by this group of people
[2]Edict issued by Henri IV of France that permitted religious tolerance in the Kingdom of France, repealed by Louis XIV with the 1689 treaty of Fontainbleau
[3] Controller-General of Finances. For continuity's sake, Louis 'XVI' hasn't changed his ministers yet, as he's only been king for less than two days
12.1) GRAND COUNCIL
September 24, 1753
Onondaga, Onondaga Nation, Haudenosaunee Confederacy
It had taken several weeks for the 50 hoyenah [1] of the Confederacy to assemble. There had been heated debates amongst the chiefs and clanmothers of the events that had occurred in the previous spring. Now as they all assembled in the lands of the Firekeepers [2], they could proceed with the issues at hand. It was at this point that the Tadadaho [3] called for order within the longhouse.
“We are gathered here this day to discuss the events that have unfolded this year. Firstly we call upon the Elder Brother Chiefs of the Seneca and Mohawk Nations to draw the issue from the well.”[4] Tanacharison felt his heart fluttering as the council began its verdict. He had put so much effort into convincing his clanmothers, the villages of the west, his new allies, and the French to agree to his bold plan. He may not have liked all the sacrifices he made, but he was willing to uphold the continued freedom of his people. So as the debate began, he made a feeble prayer in the back of his head that the Peacemaker would be on his side today. The Elder brother chiefs of the aforementioned nations proceeded to stand, and pulled the issue out of the well.
“We the chiefs of the Seneca and Mohawk Nations bring to head, the issue of Tanacharison’s shift in alliance to France, and his alliance with other tribes of the Ohio Valley.” The discussion between the Seneca and Mohawk chiefs was brief, but heated. In the end, they both concluded one proposal-Tanacharison would have to explain to the council his choices of the past year. So, he rose, and walk slowly to the centre of the longhouse, beads of sweat forming on his brow. He took a deep breath, and began his defense.
“My fellow brothers, chiefs, clanmothers, and peoples gathered here this day. This day I stand before you all to give you reason as to my change of loyalties. We the Haudenosaunee are a great people, high above those who seek to destroy us. We come from a long tradition of Peace, and have always sought to find paths that would keep this peace. I stand before you today to say that I chose to give my allegiance to the French, in the name of Peace.” There was uproar among the chiefs, particularly those of the Oneida nation. The Tadadaho calmed the crowds and asked the chief to continue. Smoke from the fire filled the room, making the atmosphere tense for him, as he continued his speech.
“Yes, I say it was for peace because we have come to see the threat that the colonies of Britain pose. Do you not remember what happened a mere ten years ago, when the Virginian monsters nearly went to war against us? They only stopped when we gave them land, land that was rightfully OURS! Now they wish to repeat the same thing, to leave us in slavery and destruction.” At this point he called on the scribe who recorded Washington’s threat to read it aloud in front of the entire audience. Many of the Chiefs were shocked as the words came out of the mouth of the scribe. Faces of anger, frustration, and fear were peppered across the longhouse as the scribe finished the declaration.
“Do you know see how dangerous the English truly are? It was with the Dutch that we made the Two Row Wampum [5], but the English have not respected this pact we so graciously extended to them. WE ARE A FREE PEOPLE! WE WILL NEVER ALLOW OURSELVES TO SUBMIT TO SLAVERY, OPPRESSION, OR SUBSERVIENCE TO ANY OPPRESSOR!” At this one of the Seneca chiefs asked, “Then why align your people with France?”
“Because when the French came to my village seeking for a fort site, I asked them high concessions to benefit our people. To my surprise, the Capitaine agreed to the conditions, where we could learn from them, protect ourselves alongside them, trade as equals, and learn their ways of farming. A nation that does not innovate is doomed to wither away. Though it does go against our natural alliances, it does provide us a way out. To pave our own future, as a FREE Confederacy, without relying on one people as our masters. If they can offer us tools and techniques, arms and a future, I say that the Two Row Wampum must be broken with the British, and we must extend a new Wampum to the French. Freedom is not earned by sitting on a high and mighty throne, sitting and doing nothing. We must work actively to keep it, lest we fail our whole people!” These words left muttering scattered throughout the longhouse, but the message was clear. If freedom were to survive amongst the League, the British alliance was no longer an option. The Chiefs of the Mohawk stepped forward to declare their decision. “After hearing these words, all of us agree with the shift of alliance. The British have done us, the Kanien'kehá:ka [6] much harm and it would be an insult to our people to keep supporting them.” This declaration relieved some of Tanacharison’s worries, but he still held his breath. Following this announcement, his own Nation, the Seneca, rose and concluded to agree with the Mohawk and have faith in their Nation’s fellow chief. TheTadadaho proceeded to turn the matter over to the younger brother chiefs [7], which resulted in a small minority of Oneida chiefs voicing their dissent over such a statement. The Cayuga were cautious in their support, but it was the following statement by the clanmother that was present.
“We, the Seneca and Cayuga settlers of the west, as well as our allies the Miami, Lenape, Shawnee, Odawa, and Wendat, come together to support our chief’s alliance. We are all peoples of the Confederacy, and we come together, wishing that our collective future, as the EIGHT nations of the confederacy, may come together to make ourselves stronger. No people can survive without change and we hope that you the clanmothers and chiefs of our people may accept these ones as well.” There was nothing but silence. Seldom did a clanmother voice herself in council, but her voice was respected, even by other clanmothers. If she could agree and lay down further terms to the proposal, then the case would now move in favour of the alliance shift. The Cayuga supported the terms without any further protest. For the Oneida chiefs, it took much debate and compromise, but in the end, the majority favoured the motion, and those who did not agreed unwillingly. Tanacharison felt that these men might be dangerous in the future, but he did let his fears get the best of him. It was at this point that the clanmothers gave their approval of the motion, with nearly all of them agreeing to it. The Tadadaho proclaimed that that the proposal was now binding, [8] and that the Onondaga could vote anyway they chose. In the end, ten of the fourteen chiefs, including the Tadadaho himself, voted in favour of the motion. [9]
“Upon this day,” the Tadadaho announced, “we now make a step towards our future. We as a people do agree to break the Two Row Wampum with Britain, and turn our fortunes to those of France. To keep our freedom, we will do whatever it takes. The Elder brothers shall now address the remaining issues of the grand council.”
12.2) Saro [10] LaSalle, The Birth of Haudène (Onen'ta'on:we Publishers, 2001) [11]
“…The Grand Council of 1753 was a historically important moment in the history of the Haudenosaunee Nations. It was here were the council finally accepted the fateful decision of Tanacharison to change the traditional alliances in North America, by having the Iroquois confederacy rebuke the Covenant Chain [12], and normalize relations with New France. Furthermore it was at this conference where the league permitted expansion to include two newly formed nations. These were the Miami, a mix of Miami, Odawa, and mixed Haudenosaunee settler in around the Wabash and Maumee Rivers, and as far east as Central Ohio, and the Monongahela, predominantly Haudenosaunee, with Lenape and Wendat Settlers in the Allegheny plateau, and upper Ohio River Valley. The decision to make these new nations was simply due to the vast distances that these regions encompassed. There was significant opposition to these changes, but many of the Pro-French chiefs and clanmothers showed their true colours, and supported Tanacharison in earnest. While this is considered the birth of the modern Confédération d’Haudène, [13] it also marked the birth of a new movement, one which would shape Haudène, North American, and even world history to form the world we know today. That movement driven by freedom, flexibility, and equality created by Tanacharison and the clanmother that supported him would become what we know today as Charisonism.
[1] Chiefs of the Grand Council
[2] A term to describe the Onondaga
[3] The head chief of the Onondaga; treated as the chief of the Haudenosaunee Confederacy
[4]Elder Brothers refer to the Mohawk and Seneca chiefs, who address an issue in council first.
[5]Treaty made with the Dutch in the 17th century; extended to Britain after they conquered New Nederland
[6]Mohawk word for Mohawk nation
[7] Term to describe the Cayuga and Oneida chiefs, who discuss the issue and come to a decision before passing it on to the Onondaga for final decision. The Oneida also speak on behalf of the Tuscarora who have no say in council.
[8]75% of chiefs AND clanmothers had to agree to a treaty/proposal for it to be binding
[9]The Onondaga had the most chiefs of any nation in the League, 14 total
[10] The name ‘Charles’ in Mohawk
[11]Word for Hemlock in Mohawk
[12]Another name for the Two Row Wampum
[13] Possible future spoilers
13.1) THE LION PROVOKED
Andrea Macdonald, Rise and fall of the First British Empire (Manchester Imperial Press, 1984)
“… In the autumn of 1753, the gears of war were beginning to grind again as the British Parliament received news of mounting tensions between the British, French, and Natives in North America. This combined with the recent discovery of the French-Prussian Treaty of Sanssouci [1] affirming a new military alliance between the two nations had discredited the Patriot Whigs [2] in the House of Commons. Nevertheless, William Pitt continued to push for supporting the colonies against the French, due to the grave situation they were in. However the Pelham Ministry [3] was far too focused on the recent events in Europe to even care about colonies on the other side of the ocean. With Prussia allied to France, there was a very high risk of losing Hannover and other spheres of influence in Europe. Due to Pitt and the Patriot Whigs calls for rapprochement towards Prussia, the Austrian Alliance had begun to unravel. However, the Duke of Newcastle [4] still believed in the British-Austrian Alliance, and had full confidence in reopening the military possibilities. It was in late September, Newcastle and Pelham were petitioning the king to send delegates to Austria to open diplomacy with Austria. However, the attention of the King was caught by a more daring proposal. Spearheaded again by the Patriot Whigs, there were growing calls in the House of Commons and the House of Lords to form a military alliance with Russia, to counter Prussia from the east. Already a traditional ally of Austria, and occasionally of Britain, the Whigs argued that surrounding Prussia by enemies would be the best way to curb Franco-Prussian Expansion in Europe. So it was William Pitt, a member of the House of Commons, was appointed to oversee a delegation to Saint Petersburg, scheduled to arrive by late November. King George II had trusted that by amassing enough allies he could topple the enemy bloc forming against Britain, thus asserting its dominance in Europe.
It was at this point in time that focus shifted back towards colonial matters. Many critics argue that the British government was underestimating the danger of France colonially speaking, because even when the news of Iroquois defection reached Parliament, the only preparations were a token force of 1000 men to be transferred to Virginia. However, many point out that the British army and Royal Navy were preparing to strike France more directly in retaliation to its alliance with Prussia. Therefore Britain needed more forces at home to successfully land an invasion force, which was a surprising change from its usual colonially oriented policies. What was addressed by Britain was a direct threat of war to King Louis XIV [5], which demanded he stop aggression in New France lest he face the consequences of direct war with the United Kingdom of Great Britain. Thus began a crescendo of events that would lead to an end of the interlude, and a recommencement of hostilities in the First World War [6]…”
13.2) MINDGAMES
September 30, 1753
Near Sanssouci Palace, Potsdam, Prussia
“End Drill! At Ease! That will be all for today.” All of the soldiers relaxed and proceeded back towards the barracks. Frederick finally had some time to collect his thoughts. The British had been beside themselves when they found out of his “bold” move. He hoped that this panic would turn into an offer that might just outweigh the French one. For the moment, even the newly minted King France had a better offer than Britain. Improving relations among Protestants, on top of the current offer was very generous. That being said, Frederick would need to neutralize some fronts in order to deal with Britain or Austria separately. That left Saxony-Poland. Though he hated the Poles and wanted their territories, he needed to keep it neutral to deal with any Austrian, British, or Russian threat. This could not happen with the current king and his wife, but if the Crown Prince, a much more ‘enlightened’ person were on the throne, he could guarantee expanded sphere of influence and peaceful borders. It was then that he thought of his spy network in Dresden, and plans began to fly in his head.
[1] See 6.1
[2] Political group generally opposed to British Foreign Policy under early Georgian Britain
[3] Government of Henry Pelham, 3rd Prime Minister of the UK (1743-1754)
[4] Henry Pelham’s Brother and Secretary of State (in charge of Foreign Affairs); Became 4th Prime Minister of the UK (1754-1756; 1757-1762)
[5] Not OTL's Louis XIV, but his father
[6] TTL's term to describe the War of Austrian Sucession and Seven Years War
Andrea Macdonald, Rise and fall of the First British Empire (Manchester Imperial Press, 1984)
“… In the autumn of 1753, the gears of war were beginning to grind again as the British Parliament received news of mounting tensions between the British, French, and Natives in North America. This combined with the recent discovery of the French-Prussian Treaty of Sanssouci [1] affirming a new military alliance between the two nations had discredited the Patriot Whigs [2] in the House of Commons. Nevertheless, William Pitt continued to push for supporting the colonies against the French, due to the grave situation they were in. However the Pelham Ministry [3] was far too focused on the recent events in Europe to even care about colonies on the other side of the ocean. With Prussia allied to France, there was a very high risk of losing Hannover and other spheres of influence in Europe. Due to Pitt and the Patriot Whigs calls for rapprochement towards Prussia, the Austrian Alliance had begun to unravel. However, the Duke of Newcastle [4] still believed in the British-Austrian Alliance, and had full confidence in reopening the military possibilities. It was in late September, Newcastle and Pelham were petitioning the king to send delegates to Austria to open diplomacy with Austria. However, the attention of the King was caught by a more daring proposal. Spearheaded again by the Patriot Whigs, there were growing calls in the House of Commons and the House of Lords to form a military alliance with Russia, to counter Prussia from the east. Already a traditional ally of Austria, and occasionally of Britain, the Whigs argued that surrounding Prussia by enemies would be the best way to curb Franco-Prussian Expansion in Europe. So it was William Pitt, a member of the House of Commons, was appointed to oversee a delegation to Saint Petersburg, scheduled to arrive by late November. King George II had trusted that by amassing enough allies he could topple the enemy bloc forming against Britain, thus asserting its dominance in Europe.
It was at this point in time that focus shifted back towards colonial matters. Many critics argue that the British government was underestimating the danger of France colonially speaking, because even when the news of Iroquois defection reached Parliament, the only preparations were a token force of 1000 men to be transferred to Virginia. However, many point out that the British army and Royal Navy were preparing to strike France more directly in retaliation to its alliance with Prussia. Therefore Britain needed more forces at home to successfully land an invasion force, which was a surprising change from its usual colonially oriented policies. What was addressed by Britain was a direct threat of war to King Louis XIV [5], which demanded he stop aggression in New France lest he face the consequences of direct war with the United Kingdom of Great Britain. Thus began a crescendo of events that would lead to an end of the interlude, and a recommencement of hostilities in the First World War [6]…”
13.2) MINDGAMES
September 30, 1753
Near Sanssouci Palace, Potsdam, Prussia
“End Drill! At Ease! That will be all for today.” All of the soldiers relaxed and proceeded back towards the barracks. Frederick finally had some time to collect his thoughts. The British had been beside themselves when they found out of his “bold” move. He hoped that this panic would turn into an offer that might just outweigh the French one. For the moment, even the newly minted King France had a better offer than Britain. Improving relations among Protestants, on top of the current offer was very generous. That being said, Frederick would need to neutralize some fronts in order to deal with Britain or Austria separately. That left Saxony-Poland. Though he hated the Poles and wanted their territories, he needed to keep it neutral to deal with any Austrian, British, or Russian threat. This could not happen with the current king and his wife, but if the Crown Prince, a much more ‘enlightened’ person were on the throne, he could guarantee expanded sphere of influence and peaceful borders. It was then that he thought of his spy network in Dresden, and plans began to fly in his head.
[1] See 6.1
[2] Political group generally opposed to British Foreign Policy under early Georgian Britain
[3] Government of Henry Pelham, 3rd Prime Minister of the UK (1743-1754)
[4] Henry Pelham’s Brother and Secretary of State (in charge of Foreign Affairs); Became 4th Prime Minister of the UK (1754-1756; 1757-1762)
[5] Not OTL's Louis XIV, but his father
[6] TTL's term to describe the War of Austrian Sucession and Seven Years War
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Does anyone care if I continue this? It kinda seems like I'm just writing to air.
I mean even an insult or criticism would be nice.
I would like to continue, but if this is so unbearably amateur that no one will comment, then please notify me cause I don't want make this annoying spam on the board, but I need to get feedback to know that
Sorry bout ranting, just want to see if this is still worth while or not.
I mean even an insult or criticism would be nice.
I would like to continue, but if this is so unbearably amateur that no one will comment, then please notify me cause I don't want make this annoying spam on the board, but I need to get feedback to know that
Sorry bout ranting, just want to see if this is still worth while or not.
oh,
idk i just get frusterated cause i feel like it seems like im just yelling of the edge of a cliff in cyberspace (i also feel it seems a bit amateur/like its missing something)
idk i just get frusterated cause i feel like it seems like im just yelling of the edge of a cliff in cyberspace (i also feel it seems a bit amateur/like its missing something)
Sorry, this is far from my region of expertise, so I can't really discuss on local North American issues. Considering Europe, I do have some problems in what the French king does - he's much more bold and pro-active than IOTL, but given that the French king always could do that, go ahead!
I really like the idea of more successful Nouvelle France and especially the hope of a native nation in North America to survive and thrive. Please keep up the work!
Which king do you mean, Louis XV or his son (OTL's Louis Dauphin of France)
14) TRAITORS
« On ne jamais connaît si les hommes sont des gens, des couleuvres, ou des tétons. » - Louis XVI
September 30, 1753
Château de Versailles
The king had gone through a very rough day, the funeral of his father was a very emotional experience, and wished for peace at least for the afternoon. This would not be the case as the chamberlain of the Palace, entered the room with a few of the palace guards. Angered by such an audacious approach, Louis rose to address the ‘intruders.’
“Why do you dare enter when I explicitly asked to leave me be?!”
“We apologize son altesse, but we bring urgent news.”
“Speak, if it is of such importance.” The chamberlain beckoned the guards forward. The first one lowered his head and began to speak.
“Sa majésté, several weeks ago, I noticed Madame de Pompadour slipping into the servants quarters, and she did address a servant. I was not sure what she said but it seems clear to me that she must be behind the murder of the late king. Furthermore, a body was pulled out of the Seine in Normandie, with evidence that links it to the murder of the king.” Louis did not know what to say, he knew that Pompadour was a terrible person, but he never thought she could stoop that low. It was in that moment the second guard began to speak.
“There’s more sa majésté. When we searched the Marquise’s former quarters we found these.” He handed the king a package full of letters. “They were found in an obscure, forgotten corner of her rooms. It is correspondence between her and the former Austrian ambassador, the Prince von Kaunitz [1]. Due to the nature of the letters, it seems as though she was working for the Austrian government to secure a Hapsburg-Bourbon alliance. She must have forgotten them when she left, and since she fell from favour, it seems as this was her way of ending the operation.” The king felt nothing. Those words coming out of the guards mouths were no longer registering in his mind. Shock slowly evolved into anger, and anger became primeval rage. Louis, at the top of his lungs proclaimed, “IF I EVER SEE THAT WOMAN AGAIN, I WILL DESTROY HER WITH MY OWN HANDS. AS FOR THAT VILE COUNTRY WHICH HARBOURS HER, THERE WILL A LOUD CRY SHALL RISE UP IN VIENNA AND AUSTRIA WILL BE SHATTERED SO THAT NEVER AGAIN WILL IT RISE! THAT IS MY PROMISE!” In the middle of this violent declaration, the king of France, broke down in tears over the vain murder of the one he called Father.
[1] Wenzel Anton, mentioned before as Austria’s Foreign Affairs Minister
« On ne jamais connaît si les hommes sont des gens, des couleuvres, ou des tétons. » - Louis XVI
“We never know if men are people, snakes, or monsters”
Sorry bout all the rage earlier, just got a bit discouraged
Here is something to tie the story together a bit. Pompadour will be mentioned, I just need some time to write
any issues please point out,
otherwise, enjoy
« On ne jamais connaît si les hommes sont des gens, des couleuvres, ou des tétons. » - Louis XVI
September 30, 1753
Château de Versailles
The king had gone through a very rough day, the funeral of his father was a very emotional experience, and wished for peace at least for the afternoon. This would not be the case as the chamberlain of the Palace, entered the room with a few of the palace guards. Angered by such an audacious approach, Louis rose to address the ‘intruders.’
“Why do you dare enter when I explicitly asked to leave me be?!”
“We apologize son altesse, but we bring urgent news.”
“Speak, if it is of such importance.” The chamberlain beckoned the guards forward. The first one lowered his head and began to speak.
“Sa majésté, several weeks ago, I noticed Madame de Pompadour slipping into the servants quarters, and she did address a servant. I was not sure what she said but it seems clear to me that she must be behind the murder of the late king. Furthermore, a body was pulled out of the Seine in Normandie, with evidence that links it to the murder of the king.” Louis did not know what to say, he knew that Pompadour was a terrible person, but he never thought she could stoop that low. It was in that moment the second guard began to speak.
“There’s more sa majésté. When we searched the Marquise’s former quarters we found these.” He handed the king a package full of letters. “They were found in an obscure, forgotten corner of her rooms. It is correspondence between her and the former Austrian ambassador, the Prince von Kaunitz [1]. Due to the nature of the letters, it seems as though she was working for the Austrian government to secure a Hapsburg-Bourbon alliance. She must have forgotten them when she left, and since she fell from favour, it seems as this was her way of ending the operation.” The king felt nothing. Those words coming out of the guards mouths were no longer registering in his mind. Shock slowly evolved into anger, and anger became primeval rage. Louis, at the top of his lungs proclaimed, “IF I EVER SEE THAT WOMAN AGAIN, I WILL DESTROY HER WITH MY OWN HANDS. AS FOR THAT VILE COUNTRY WHICH HARBOURS HER, THERE WILL A LOUD CRY SHALL RISE UP IN VIENNA AND AUSTRIA WILL BE SHATTERED SO THAT NEVER AGAIN WILL IT RISE! THAT IS MY PROMISE!” In the middle of this violent declaration, the king of France, broke down in tears over the vain murder of the one he called Father.
[1] Wenzel Anton, mentioned before as Austria’s Foreign Affairs Minister
« On ne jamais connaît si les hommes sont des gens, des couleuvres, ou des tétons. » - Louis XVI
“We never know if men are people, snakes, or monsters”
Sorry bout all the rage earlier, just got a bit discouraged
Here is something to tie the story together a bit. Pompadour will be mentioned, I just need some time to write
any issues please point out,
otherwise, enjoy
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'twas the point of them finding the letters
in OTL she did help get the French and Hapsburgs to an alliance tho'
Just a little error : "on ne connait jamais ...." And not on jamais.
You are drawing a very good plot. It will be an interisting France : no marie-antoinette and france looks stronger.
How bigger are the french reinforcement in New France ?
Will you unleash the Royal secret service to hunt miss pompadour ?
Austria lost a possible ally for a very long time. If France wins the war, ausria will be the big loser of the war.
You are drawing a very good plot. It will be an interisting France : no marie-antoinette and france looks stronger.
How bigger are the french reinforcement in New France ?
Will you unleash the Royal secret service to hunt miss pompadour ?
Austria lost a possible ally for a very long time. If France wins the war, ausria will be the big loser of the war.
Thanks bout the error, 'tis a bad habit of mine to forget the negatives
The french reinforcement to new France for now is about 9000 troops; 4,5k to Canada/Acadia and 4,5k to Louisiana. Doesn't mean more help might be on the way if war gets serious.
to be honest, i completely forgot France had a secret service
I can use them to locate her and keep tabs on her, but I think that Louis has personal vendetta on Pompadour AND Austria, so be prepared for things going south pretty quickly in Europe.
Thanks bout the error, 'tis a bad habit of mine to forget the negatives
The french reinforcement to new France for now is about 9000 troops; 4,5k to Canada/Acadia and 4,5k to Louisiana. Doesn't mean more help might be on the way if war gets serious.
to be honest, i completely forgot France had a secret service
I can use them to locate her and keep tabs on her, but I think that Louis has personal vendetta on Pompadour AND Austria, so be prepared for things going south pretty quickly in Europe.
Did you count the 3k troupes de marine already in new france?
4.5k in Louisiana ? South or north louisiana ? OTL New orleans was never a target for the english high commnand. In the south, Florida is The prey for english forces.
And Montcalm is not arrived yet ? Will you reorganize the french high command in Canada ? I think they could make better use of quebec officers. Montcalm didn't really know how to use canadian militia. He could have win the abraham plain's by harassing the english forces two or three hours. He rushed and lost ! Canadian militianmen are quasi-professionnal raiders and perhaps the best marksmen in the french army.
counting the 3k already= 7,5k in Canada
They will land in the south, and will gradually head north (and support anti brit natives) as the war progresses
btw they're all still in transit since they left Bretagne back in Mid September, and shouldn't even get to Louisbourg until Novemeber
Montcalm....I have plans for him
Either way I've already sent his second in Command (Gaston) and the guy he replaced (Dieskau)
Both were fairly more competent but Dieskau was killed in 56' because native guides lead his army in Vermont down the wrong path straight into Brits and that can be butterflied
Yes the Canadians are indeed formidable, hence the reason that having compatent generals will help them in the long run