Great finish. I love the line on which it finishes. And I'm surprised at how close I ended up being. Can I get half a coke as a runners up?
And I look forward to anything else you come up with next.
Congratulations from me as well - an excellent read and a nice finish leaving later instalments with plenty to offer.
The Conservatives post-election will be interesting as will the Orange Bookers having to support Brown.
Hope you were able to catch the end of FWoAD (as it is now known). I'm going to put it in the finished TL section of the forum when I get the chance and you should do the same with this as it fully deserves a place.
Liked the ending.
Have you been reading a certain book by Larry Nicen & Jerry Pournelle?
Possibly - back in University I went through most of their stuff (Footfall, Mote in God's Eye, Lucifer's Hammer, Dream Park ... there was one about an arcology but I can't remember the name), but that was nearly twenty years ago now. (Aaargh!)
Is that where the horse can learn to talk story comes from, then? I've known it for a long time and could never remember where I first heard or read it. I rather assumed it must have been an old aphorism.
Is that where the horse can learn to talk story comes from, then? I've known it for a long time and could never remember where I first heard or read it. I rather assumed it must have been an old aphorism.
Of course, there is now a problem with this otherwise fine TL: all the quotes from the book by Andy Coulson. Maybe he wrote it while in prison?
Any planned sequel?
I suggest "Can a horse learn how to sing?"
Didn't this happen once already until CalBear moved it back to After 1900?
POD I believe falls well within what qualifies this timeline for the Future History section.
Chaotic isn't the word for it, this is the FPTP Twilight Zone.
10 Downing Street. The Study.
“Right, if he won’t have Leader of the House, we don’t have to move Harriet. We can slot Yvette into BIS and move Liam to Education. Has Ed said who he’d prefer as Chief Secretary?” Gordon Brown was looking more relaxed than he had been for months.
“Should we throw a bone to the left of the Party?”, asked Ed Milliband. “Maybe we could tempt Cruddas in out of the cold”
“I doubt it, but it’s worth a try, I guess. Give him a call and see if he’d like Work & Pensions”, suggested Brown.
Milliband paused. “Gordon …” he said.
Brown looked up from the A3 sheet of paper on the desk that he was busily marking with his black felt marker. “Yes, Ed?”
“What’s the long-term plan?”, asked Milliband.
Brown grimaced. “Have you ever heard the phrase ‘Events, dear boy?’ It might have been a Tory toff who said it, but he was spot on. We keep running until we can’t run any further. Then we walk until we can’t walk any further. Then we crawl until we can’t crawl any further. I’m not stupid, Ed – I know that it’s going to come to a battle between Ed and David for the Party, but with any luck, we can run, walk or crawl until whichever it is has a decent shot at the next election”
“Can we do it? Seriously, I mean. Can we get through and get enough popularity back?”, asked Milliband, unconvinced.
Wait, did Gordon just say to Ed directly that its going to come down to a battle between "Ed and David" instead of "you and David"?