Where did you get the South Egyptian flag from considering I imagine they fly the flag of the monarchy?
What is the situation of supersonic airliners?
My guess:
-Concorde went more or less as IOTL;
-Boeing 2707 reached production and started flying;
-Tu-144 was at most in an underfunded development phase when the USSR collapsed. Obviously it then got cancelled;
-I guess Italy developed its own version too. It could have been flying routes like Rome-Israel-Asmara, or maybe to China;
-At this point SSTs should be more popular, so I imagine that also ROC developed one, with first flight in the 90's
So is the former ISA recovered or is it still a ghosttown inhabited only by nomads and criminals? Also does Italy still have the OVRA as a secret police/intelligence agency or did they get a new name?
What was the organization which replaced the OVRA when Berlinguer took power?The OVRA was replaced when Berlinguer stepped in.
What was the organization which replaced the OVRA when Berlinguer took power?
That you kept the style simple and fluid, not overwhelming and bored like other TL’s that are good but waaaay to extended and boring to read.Hey all, since I'm always obsessed with making sure I learn something from my efforts, I hope it would be okay to ask the following questions:
1) What did you particularly like about the TL? Did any characters stand out?
1) What did you particularly like about the TL? Did any characters stand out?
2) How was the writing style/flow? How did dialogue and description feel
3) If you could suggest an improvement point, what would it be?
The battle of Trieste was probably my favorite part of this TL. It was well written and seeing the nazis being defeated by jewish refugees put a smile on my face.1) What did you particularly like about the TL? Did any characters stand out?
I honestly think your writing style got better with each update. Don't get me wrong it was already pretty good, but it got even better after the fisrt few postsHow was the writing style/flow? How did dialogue and description feel?
Eh, i kinda wish we had seen more of India, but i realise it wasn't the main point of the TL so yeah, it is kinda a stupid complain.If you could suggest an improvement point, what would it be?
I absolutely loved both the fact that there are more monarchies but the the Commonwealth is stronger ITTL. I particularly loved Otto Von Habsuburg.1) What did you particularly like about the TL? Did any characters stand out?
I loved the writing style but I do prefer historical texts as a way of writing Alternate Histories compared to first person so there is bias there the dialogue was always good.2) How was the writing style/flow? How did dialogue and description feel?
I personally would of liked to see more of Australia but that's fine I am very used to that.3) If you could suggest an improvement point, what would it be?
Go ahead.@Sorairo can I make some wikiboxes and maps for your TL?
1) What did you particularly like about the TL? Did any characters stand out?
2) How was the writing style/flow? How did dialogue and description feel?
3) If you could suggest an improvement point, what would it be?
Which wikiboxes would you like?
Hey all, since I'm always obsessed with making sure I learn something from my efforts, I hope it would be okay to ask the following questions:
1) What did you particularly like about the TL? Did any characters stand out?
2) How was the writing style/flow? How did dialogue and description feel?
3) If you could suggest an improvement point, what would it be?
1. This isn't to say that this timeline peaked early, because it's good throughout, but the bits about the Battle of Trieste gave me chills, which only one other AH timeline (An Age of Miracles) has done.Hey all, since I'm always obsessed with making sure I learn something from my efforts, I hope it would be okay to ask the following questions:
1) What did you particularly like about the TL? Did any characters stand out?
2) How was the writing style/flow? How did dialogue and description feel?
3) If you could suggest an improvement point, what would it be?
Hey all, since I'm always obsessed with making sure I learn something from my efforts, I hope it would be okay to ask the following questions:
1) What did you particularly like about the TL? Did any characters stand out?
2) How was the writing style/flow? How did dialogue and description feel?
3) If you could suggest an improvement point, what would it be?
1. This isn't to say that this timeline peaked early, because it's good throughout, but the bits about the Battle of Trieste gave me chills, which only one other AH timeline (An Age of Miracles) has done.
2. The writing style itself was fine, but often the writing was concentrated into blocks of text that were hard to read on a technical level.
3. Aside from the negation of the above, I did think that the incompetence of the Soviet Union got a bit cartoonish.