Glen
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About time!
Now for my detailed analysis....

Deep Groan! That was bad, really really bad.... The titles are pretty fun, though!
A reasonable surmise.
Again, a reasonably plausible choice, and it really does change the pop culture history of several shows I suspect!
That's fine - Jo Grant was a pretty generic name as well - and certainly better than Roberta Lincoln!
That is actually a VERY GOOD team of people. Both shows are bringing their 'A' teams to the party.
Nice detail, Brainbin!
Okay - this seems like a superfluous point, unless you are trying to intimate something by it that I am missing?
Again, a reasonable approach, though I am slightly saddened by the fact that this approach will limit the amount of interaction between UNIT and Starfleet.
And Roger Delgado arrives to create the timeless villian, the Master! Absolutely agree that this is how they would have gone.
No offense, but I find Kor and the Master to be very different in character and style - only real similarity is they both have beards in my mind! But hey, maybe that's just me, and it is certainly nothing to worry about.
What, couldn't they find a quarry in California?
Fun - but did they get to do any scenes with the Brigadier or other UNIT members while they were there? Remember, too, that the TARDIS at this point is pretty much grounded unless the Time Lords fiddle with it, so if Spock and Scotty are in the TARDIS, that also likely means they are in London for a time. Of course, with the Enterprise, it would be easy for them to transport to London for some purpose, meet UNIT and explore the TARDIS, then be beamed back to America for the rest of the story.
Was this spreading of credit typical for Doctor Who episodes of the time? Seems a bit odd that they wouldn't just credit the episodes he directed in.
Right, pretty much as already planned.
So, not just the opening and closing sequences, but the whole of the episodes were scored differently? That really would change the mood of the two versions! Do you have any examples of this from OTL for any two series?
This is a clever way to get it started, full marks!
Why have the date referred to at all? Note that if you indeed have them say this, you are probably putting the kibosh on the UNIT dating controversy, for while you are being deliberately ambiguous, it is still diverging from OTL's UNIT episodes of the Third Doctor which made NO direct reference to the year.
Hmmm, and how is it that the Doctor is in America? Sorry, but this actually needs to be explicit, given the state of the Doctor's TARDIS in this era, as previously referred to. On the other hand, about the only think likely to see the Doctor so far from his grounded TARDIS would be word of the Master mucking about.
Noted - though 'far more malevolent than he'? That seems to imply a certain level of malevolence for the Doctor!
Duly noted - I wonder if these scenes will be more 'actiony' rather than 'horrorific' to mesh more with the Star Trek style - and thus would not be as controversial as the scenes in OTL's Terror of the Autons in terms of being deemed unsuitable for children.
This part needs work or expansion, Brainbin - this would work for a one off character, but as I mentioned, the Doctor isn't traipsing around in the TARDIS at this time in his story due to his exile. You need to have her somehow:
1) Get invited by the Doctor to be his new assistant (have Liz Shaw pulled but no replacement being proffered at the beginning of these episodes, with the Doctor vowing, "Fine, Brigadier, I shall find my own assistant, then!" And he decides on Johnson after seeing her resolution, courage, curiosity, cuteness, whatever. Or...
2) The Enterprise graciously offers to beam back to UNIT HQ, which he accepts, and at the last second Linda jumps onto him and is beamed with him to UNIT - much hilarity ensues in the next episode of Doctor Who getting her visa status squared away.
. Or...
3) The mysterious Time Lord from Terror of the Autons of OTL appears to the Doctor to not only warn him that an old nemesis of his is on Earth (and mucking around with spaceships from the future at that!), but stating that the Time Lords will allow him limited use of his TARDIS only to transport from one site to another on earth, not to break his exile and allow him to fully travel through time and space (this would almost inevitably fall into some exposition explaining that the Doctor was trapped on Earth by the Time Lords for the American viewers).
Your choice, but I think it has to be one of these three.
I would elaborate this in having Kirk shoot who he believes to be the Master, only to find that it is a dupe of the Master's in a mask ala his escape in Terror of the Autons - also still have the Doctor nab his dematerialization circuit in the course of the story!
Fair enough.
Yes, they would - they are coming at this from very different places in terms of knowledge of the two shows, as you rightly note.
I wouldn't see the Linda character being used as an audience surrogate in this episode, but rather the episode to introduce the audience to her - it will be in the next episode after the crossover ones where she will take on this role, doing dual duty for both Britain and America (though our UNIT chappies will be able to help with this for the Brits) - I can just imagine her being used as an English to American translator.
"He stuffed the poor man into the boot of this car."
"What, Doctor, you mean he was trapped in the trunk?"
"Precisely, Linda."
I agree. And I would hope the crossover would have had a scene where Spock and the Master square off in a confrontation - the Master tries to hypnotize Spock -
"Vulcanians are resistant to such mental manipulations."
Then Spock tries the old nerve pinch which fails -
"And Time Lords are immune to such primitive attacks!"
So really it takes a bit of time to get used to the shift in perspective, but then they are swept away by the pure coolness factor!
And this all is very, very good, very cool!
So....while they evade the issues the way you've portrayed it, there is a pretty heavy implication that the Star Trek and Doctor Who universes are one and the same in this crossover. While you seem to have Star Trek going into movies after the original series wraps, and not to come back in some form of television series (so far), it is unlikely that Star Trek will make any further reference to Doctor Who material. However, it is likely that we will see the odd tiny reference from time to time to Star Trek materials in the Doctor Who series, I believe.
Which all now means that we will have to see how her career develops - however, she's married to Cleese so she still probably will end up in TTL's Fawlty Towers.
A fine point.
Fun! Someone should do a photoshop of that for you!
Noted.
Makes sense.
This would seem to imply that Star Trek isn't as ubiquitous in reruns as in OTL? Or are you just saying for the period between Doctor Who reruns being distributed by Desilu and the end of the original run of Star Trek?
Actually, given the talents working on this crossover, I believe it will be a damned sight better than Assignment: Earth, though perhaps a bit more uneven than Terror of the Autons. Also, this is going to be the highest production value Doctor Who made up until that time, which I also think will wow British audiences. I actually think this episode will be a lot better than you suggest, both in writing and in appearance. I agree it will not be the 'best' episode of either program, but I actually think it might be well regarded, not just 'important'.
Projecting into the future - as American audiences start watching the Third Doctor and UNIT, I can see in several years a joint UK-US spin off series for UNIT, especially after the Doctor gets his exile revoked - that way the Doctor can gallavant about and be the Doctor, but we still get our UNIT fix, with a crossover between the two shows every year or so.
"Any suggestions, Bones?"
"Me? I’m a doctor, not… not the Doctor."
- Captain James T. Kirk and Dr. Leonard "Bones" McCoy, "Lords of Time and Space, Part II" / "Starship from the Future", Episode 3
Deep Groan! That was bad, really really bad.... The titles are pretty fun, though!
In initial preparation for the crossover, it was agreed on all sides that, in hopes of appealing to the American audience, the Doctor's new companion (an audience surrogate character) would also be American. However, there would be no additional time for the BBC or the producers of Doctor Who to conduct a casting call in the USA, and they did not want to entrust that responsibility to NBC or Desilu. Therefore, the natural solution was to hire an American expatriate living in London. In a stroke of good fortune, they hit upon a promising candidate very early on, after having started their search by looking at young women connected to the BBC.
A reasonable surmise.
Connie Booth [1] was married to John Cleese, a member of the Monty Python troupe, who starred in "Monty Python's Flying Circus" on the BBC. Booth had appeared on the program, but had relatively little television experience otherwise. Cleese personally vouched for her abilities, and she did have the advantage of being fresh-faced - ideal for an audience surrogate. Booth agreed to commit to the program for at least two seasons of episodes, and to return to her native land for filming.
Again, a reasonably plausible choice, and it really does change the pop culture history of several shows I suspect!
Her character was given the name Linda Johnson [2] - initially "Jackson", but it was changed at the last minute because of the similarity to British actress Glenda Jackson.
That's fine - Jo Grant was a pretty generic name as well - and certainly better than Roberta Lincoln!
The final script was credited to four people: Gene Coon; D.C. Fontana; Doctor Who Story Editor Terrance Dicks; and frequent writer Robert Holmes.
That is actually a VERY GOOD team of people. Both shows are bringing their 'A' teams to the party.
Clearances with the Writer's Guild of America were extremely cumbersome to arrange, though fortunately it was one of the few tasks that could be tackled well in advance of all the others.
Nice detail, Brainbin!
Many of the other Star Trek writers had a hand in the script, particularly the scenes dealing exclusively with the crew of the Enterprise.
Okay - this seems like a superfluous point, unless you are trying to intimate something by it that I am missing?
The shooting schedule was another logistical nightmare, but eventually it was settled that those scenes with only the Star Trek characters would be shot first, followed by the location scenes with both sets of characters, followed by the on-set scenes, and finally, pickup shots in London (mainly those set within the Doctor's peculiar vehicle, the TARDIS).
Those scenes not featuring any characters from Doctor Whowere shot in May, three weeks in advance of the arrival of the principals from London. In the closing days of that month, six - and only six - people arrived in Hollywood: Dicks; Holmes; director-producer Barry Letts; Jon Pertwee, who played the Doctor; Booth; and Roger Delgado, chosen to portray the main villain.
Again, a reasonable approach, though I am slightly saddened by the fact that this approach will limit the amount of interaction between UNIT and Starfleet.
Actually, the situation was somewhat more complicated than that. The writers had planned for an over-arcing villain who would serve as the antagonist of each serial for the entire eighth season: a fellow Time Lord, like the Doctor, who was created as his equal and opposite. They were willing to compromise on the casting of the Doctor's new companion - obviously, they would have preferred a British woman - but they were resolute on Delgado for the part of the Master.
And Roger Delgado arrives to create the timeless villian, the Master! Absolutely agree that this is how they would have gone.
It was later noted by several members of the Star Trek crew that the Master somewhat resembled the nefarious Klingon Captain Kor, the primary antagonist of their own program.
No offense, but I find Kor and the Master to be very different in character and style - only real similarity is they both have beards in my mind! But hey, maybe that's just me, and it is certainly nothing to worry about.
After the filming in Hollywood at the Desilu studios and in the backlot,
What, couldn't they find a quarry in California?
the cast and crew of Doctor Who returned to London to film the TARDIS scenes. The plot called for Spock and Scotty to investigate the mysterious craft, so Leonard Nimoy and James Doohan were able to take an all-expenses paid trip to England for a few days. [3]
Fun - but did they get to do any scenes with the Brigadier or other UNIT members while they were there? Remember, too, that the TARDIS at this point is pretty much grounded unless the Time Lords fiddle with it, so if Spock and Scotty are in the TARDIS, that also likely means they are in London for a time. Of course, with the Enterprise, it would be easy for them to transport to London for some purpose, meet UNIT and explore the TARDIS, then be beamed back to America for the rest of the story.
Those scenes were directed by Letts, who was credited (in the United States) for the second part of the two-parter; Marc Daniels, who directed the American footage, was credited for the first part. In the UK, both directors were jointly credited for all four episodes of the arc, even though no footage by Letts appeared in either of the first two episodes.
Was this spreading of credit typical for Doctor Who episodes of the time? Seems a bit odd that they wouldn't just credit the episodes he directed in.
Altogether, the shooting schedule was 16 days, completed (with the footage flown back to Hollywood, along with Nimoy and Doohan) by mid-June. The first part of the two-parter was due to air on September 14, 1970, in the United States; and the first of the four-episode arc on January 2, 1971, in the United Kingdom. [4]
Right, pretty much as already planned.
As per the agreement between Desilu and the BBC, the American studio handled all aspects of post-production (with the help of the necessary sound effects from the BBC library), with the exception of the music; as the soundtrack styles for the two programs were distinctly different, they would have to continue to be scored separately.
So, not just the opening and closing sequences, but the whole of the episodes were scored differently? That really would change the mood of the two versions! Do you have any examples of this from OTL for any two series?
With regards to the plot,
the Enterprise encounters a mysterious source of unusual waves of temporal distortions. To Mr. Spock's surprise, the source appears to be moving at warp speed. Kirk orders Scotty to fire up the engines in pursuit, and the ship does indeed catch up with the mysterious vessel (said to be "smaller than one of our shuttles"). In following the peculiar entity, Sulu notes that the chronometer is moving backward; they are travelling through time. It eventually becomes clear that they have followed the machine to Earth,
This is a clever way to get it started, full marks!
in the "early 1970s" (the year is deliberately left ambiguous).
Why have the date referred to at all? Note that if you indeed have them say this, you are probably putting the kibosh on the UNIT dating controversy, for while you are being deliberately ambiguous, it is still diverging from OTL's UNIT episodes of the Third Doctor which made NO direct reference to the year.
Arriving in the United States, several crew members beam down, in an attempt to determine the source of these waves. While conducting their investigation, they encounter an enigmatic individual who claims that he can be of some assistance; he calls himself "the Doctor", working on behalf of the United Nations Intelligence Taskforce.
Hmmm, and how is it that the Doctor is in America? Sorry, but this actually needs to be explicit, given the state of the Doctor's TARDIS in this era, as previously referred to. On the other hand, about the only think likely to see the Doctor so far from his grounded TARDIS would be word of the Master mucking about.
Though the library computer aboard the Enterprise provides the history of UNIT, it does not discuss the "Doctor", who refuses to provide his real name; and tricorder scans reveal him to be non-human.
Kirk becomes increasingly frustrated with their so-called ally, until he finally reveals the truth about himself: he is a Time Lord, and he believes that their quarry is another Time Lord; far more malevolent than he.
Noted - though 'far more malevolent than he'? That seems to imply a certain level of malevolence for the Doctor!
The Master is not content to spend time in hiding; he begins launching attacks against the good people of the United States, with the help of recurring adversaries, the Autons. [5]
Duly noted - I wonder if these scenes will be more 'actiony' rather than 'horrorific' to mesh more with the Star Trek style - and thus would not be as controversial as the scenes in OTL's Terror of the Autons in terms of being deemed unsuitable for children.
During the course of the adventure, a young female bystander named Linda Johnson finds herself embroiled in the crossfire. With continued tensions between the Doctor and the crew of the Enterprise, both sides part company, attempting to seek out the Master on their own terms. The Doctor is able to find the Master first; but in tracking him down, little does he know that he too is being followed, by Johnson. It's all for naught, however, as the two of them find themselves caught in a trap.
This part needs work or expansion, Brainbin - this would work for a one off character, but as I mentioned, the Doctor isn't traipsing around in the TARDIS at this time in his story due to his exile. You need to have her somehow:
1) Get invited by the Doctor to be his new assistant (have Liz Shaw pulled but no replacement being proffered at the beginning of these episodes, with the Doctor vowing, "Fine, Brigadier, I shall find my own assistant, then!" And he decides on Johnson after seeing her resolution, courage, curiosity, cuteness, whatever. Or...
2) The Enterprise graciously offers to beam back to UNIT HQ, which he accepts, and at the last second Linda jumps onto him and is beamed with him to UNIT - much hilarity ensues in the next episode of Doctor Who getting her visa status squared away.
3) The mysterious Time Lord from Terror of the Autons of OTL appears to the Doctor to not only warn him that an old nemesis of his is on Earth (and mucking around with spaceships from the future at that!), but stating that the Time Lords will allow him limited use of his TARDIS only to transport from one site to another on earth, not to break his exile and allow him to fully travel through time and space (this would almost inevitably fall into some exposition explaining that the Doctor was trapped on Earth by the Time Lords for the American viewers).
Your choice, but I think it has to be one of these three.
Their rescue comes from an unlikely, but at the same time, entirely expected source: the Enterprise. The crew beams down, rescuing the Doctor and his companion, but allowing the Master to escape.
I would elaborate this in having Kirk shoot who he believes to be the Master, only to find that it is a dupe of the Master's in a mask ala his escape in Terror of the Autons - also still have the Doctor nab his dematerialization circuit in the course of the story!
Captain Kirk and the Doctor finally put their differences behind them, with the Enterprise bidding the Doctor and his new companion farewell, departing Earth to take a slingshot back to their own native time.
Fair enough.
American and British audiences naturally had different responses to the crossover.
Yes, they would - they are coming at this from very different places in terms of knowledge of the two shows, as you rightly note.
American audiences, being unfamiliar with the Doctor, weren't entirely sure what to make of him. The character of Linda, though intended as an audience surrogate, did not prove entirely successful in this role, given that the viewers already identified with the crew of the Enterprise. However, audiences were intrigued not only by certain aspects of the Doctor, but also by the character of the Master.
I wouldn't see the Linda character being used as an audience surrogate in this episode, but rather the episode to introduce the audience to her - it will be in the next episode after the crossover ones where she will take on this role, doing dual duty for both Britain and America (though our UNIT chappies will be able to help with this for the Brits) - I can just imagine her being used as an English to American translator.
"He stuffed the poor man into the boot of this car."
"What, Doctor, you mean he was trapped in the trunk?"
"Precisely, Linda."
They noted his resemblance to Kor, and that he seemed a good deal more clever and devious. The promise of continued clashes between the Doctor and the Master in the future provided the narrative hook that made further adventures an appealing prospect.
I agree. And I would hope the crossover would have had a scene where Spock and the Master square off in a confrontation - the Master tries to hypnotize Spock -
"Vulcanians are resistant to such mental manipulations."
Then Spock tries the old nerve pinch which fails -
"And Time Lords are immune to such primitive attacks!"
British audiences also had mixed reactions, though for different reasons. By early 1971, the third season of Star Trek was being broadcast on the BBC, and viewers were therefore familiar with the crew of the Enterprise. However, they were even more familiar with the Doctor, and seeing the adventure being told from their perspective, rather than his, made little sense to them. Despite this, fan reception was very positive, as they were aware that they were watching history in the making. Seeing Captain Kirk, Spock, Bones, and Scotty all interacting with the Doctor was a thrill to them.
So really it takes a bit of time to get used to the shift in perspective, but then they are swept away by the pure coolness factor!
Starting in the summer of 1970, Desilu sold the earlier seasons of Doctor Who into syndication [6], in anticipation of the crossover that fall. Surprisingly, the show became a sleeper success; that, plus mostly good reaction to the actual two-part episode, convinced NBC to buy the rest of the eighth season from the BBC. Doctor Who would begin airing in a weekly timeslot in September of 1971, Mondays at 8:00 PM.
And this all is very, very good, very cool!
So....while they evade the issues the way you've portrayed it, there is a pretty heavy implication that the Star Trek and Doctor Who universes are one and the same in this crossover. While you seem to have Star Trek going into movies after the original series wraps, and not to come back in some form of television series (so far), it is unlikely that Star Trek will make any further reference to Doctor Who material. However, it is likely that we will see the odd tiny reference from time to time to Star Trek materials in the Doctor Who series, I believe.
[1] Yes, I've just cast Polly Sherman as a Doctor Who companion.
Which all now means that we will have to see how her career develops - however, she's married to Cleese so she still probably will end up in TTL's Fawlty Towers.
[2] Linda was the second-most common name for baby girls in the US in the 1940s and 1950s; Johnson is the second most common surname in the United States (it ranks seventh in the UK). The most common names, Mary and Smith, were deemed too generic. At least, when used in combination. Perhaps one or the other, when combined with a slightly more interesting name, could be useful.
A fine point.
One publicity photo was taken by Letts, and features the two of them in the TARDIS along with Pertwee and Booth.
Fun! Someone should do a photoshop of that for you!
[4] In both cases, the first of these episodes functions as the season premiere.
Noted.
[5] The Autons, automated mannequin creatures, were the featured adversaries in the OTL serial that this crossover replaced: "Terror of the Autons". They were added here to raise the stakes, and because they were easy for Desilu costumers and prop masters to fabricate.
Makes sense.
[6] Many of these off-the-dial UHF stations that carried Doctor Who at the oddest hours are the same ones that, IOTL, decided to make room for that little show about boldly going where no man has gone before.
This would seem to imply that Star Trek isn't as ubiquitous in reruns as in OTL? Or are you just saying for the period between Doctor Who reruns being distributed by Desilu and the end of the original run of Star Trek?
So there you have it! Doctor Who is coming to America - on one of the Big Three networks, in a weekly timeslot! And as far as the tone of the crossover, think "Terror of the Autons" meets "Assignment: Earth". Far from the best for either show, given the inevitable clash of characteristics, but considered an important piece of television history even in the present day of TTL. As it should be...
Actually, given the talents working on this crossover, I believe it will be a damned sight better than Assignment: Earth, though perhaps a bit more uneven than Terror of the Autons. Also, this is going to be the highest production value Doctor Who made up until that time, which I also think will wow British audiences. I actually think this episode will be a lot better than you suggest, both in writing and in appearance. I agree it will not be the 'best' episode of either program, but I actually think it might be well regarded, not just 'important'.
Projecting into the future - as American audiences start watching the Third Doctor and UNIT, I can see in several years a joint UK-US spin off series for UNIT, especially after the Doctor gets his exile revoked - that way the Doctor can gallavant about and be the Doctor, but we still get our UNIT fix, with a crossover between the two shows every year or so.