Slim keeps command of XV corps in 1942

I have a decent amount of free time in the next couple of weeks and now that i am older and wiser- am considering rewriting this TL. Firstly so that the writing itself is better and lastly to tone down the Britwankery - not that i'm opposed to such things;).
I made it too easy for the British, for example i'm not sure any British capital ship's was sunk in TTL during the battles with Japanese areonaval forces.

And after capturing Singapore (too early?) the British did way too much, as Stevep commented, invading China!!:eek:.

And numerous other things.

Anyone got any suggestions or comments.
 
You did have them lose a capital ship, you had the Ramilles sunk in the big battle to stop Operation ZIPPER.

I will agree that the front along the Thai-Indochinese border was just too quiet while Malaya and then the N.E.I. were taken.

It will be interesting to see how you do once you revive this old posting. Good luck.
 
You did have them lose a capital ship, you had the Ramilles sunk in the big battle to stop Operation ZIPPER.



I will agree that the front along the Thai-Indochinese border was just too quiet while Malaya and then the N.E.I. were taken.

It will be interesting to see how you do once you revive this old posting. Good luck.

:eek::rolleyes: Suppose i should have took a bit longer to reread it, thanks for pointing it out.


Hmm so more action along the Thai-Indochinese border is needed, prehaps a Chindit operation to aid a potential French colonial resistance or something.

Thank you for the comments:)
 
:eek::rolleyes: Suppose i should have took a bit longer to reread it, thanks for pointing it out.


Hmm so more action along the Thai-Indochinese border is needed, prehaps a Chindit operation to aid a potential French colonial resistance or something.

Thank you for the comments:)

No problem. I wrote something not too dissimilar, but am trying to sell it as a novel. Probably without much luck, since I don't have triumphant Nazis :mad:
 
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