Plausibility Check #2: A Deadlier Black Death (with a twist)

I meant the Islamic invasions. Collapse of European society is not a necessary precursor to Islamic conquest. In fact the Muslims had shown themselves to have the potential to conquer Europe before, without anything like this to tie Europe's hands behind its back first. Ravaging Europe brutally makes for interesting TLs, but isn't necessarily needed to produce your end result. It just makes it all the easier, is all. But yes, Europe will recover, and if we're spreading the deaths out evenly, Europe/Asia, then you probably will need some destabilisation, but the collapse of government isn't necessary to secure your Islamist victory. Collapse of centralised Catholicism would be useful, though.

It should be. And Christendom will become assimilated over time. The Balkans and southern Spain show this very well. Islam, or rather Islamic countries, tended to be tolerant of Christianity far more than Christians were tolerant of Islam. They forced Christians to pay high taxes to keep their religion, banned them from high office and largely used them as serf labour, but there was no Inquisition, no heresy charges, no incentive to convert except through volunteering to do so, and over time, especially with access to the Pope and Archbishops etc cut off, Christians there did convert in droves. I suspect the same would be said of any contemporary Islamic country which gained a tolerant Christian ruling party. Over time, resistance is chipped away, much of the accusations of Islam being inherently evil will be disproved (though of course the root of those accusations will likely be very real events happening somewhere else, Islam isn't all happy happy fun times, as Christianity wasn't either) and cultural conversion would follow. The Balkans showed that centuries of Islamic rule could turn Catholic areas into 80% Islamic areas and higher without introducing more than 10-15% Arabic population. Take nowadays Bosnia for example.

Incidentally, I'd put question marks on Britain and/or Scandinavia surviving the conquest. With no support for continental Europe, they're going to succumb to an invasion soon. The only reason they would go unconquered is if the Islamic states directly south of them collectively shrugged their shoulders and refused to do anything about them, but there's no reason for such apathy when those lands are ripe for the plucking.

If there is genuine belief that sending cardinals will result in them just dying of plague somewhere along the line, then I see no reason why Europe wouldn't fail to appoint a new Pope. This could be made considerably more plausible by Europe trying to appoint a new Pope, and being proved right. For instance, each major country agrees to send one Bishop to be a new Cardinal to elect a new Pope (I'm still going on the idea of the Cardinals' College being ravaged too), and en route a number of them die of exposure, which is quite possible, and then only weeks after the election of a new Pope, the new Pope is himself killed from exposure to the plague. On the way home, even more Cardinals die. Europe tries to cooperate to elect a new Pope but the fear of death is so great that many Kings elect to do nothing until the plague is gone. With a lack of spiritual leadership, there are sporadic attempts to produce a new Pope in Italy which fail to get anywhere when key personnel die or get scared back into hiding, at which point certain Kings try electing their own national Pope, hoping to solve the theological dilemma after the plague. This, however, provokes other rulers to produce their own Popes, and the situation spirals out of control, effectively eliminating the chance of a resolution any time soon. It did, after all, take 100 years just to solve the issue of one Anti-Pope in RL, and that crisis is still on-going at this point. It could take 2-300 years to solve all of these, and that's going to be really divisive to Europe.

Hey, you make a lot of sense. So if one or more of the surrounding Muslim peoples (Turks, Mamluks, Marinids, Golden Horde) at the time of the Black Death were to (somehow) conquer Europe, it wouldn't be so problematic to have Islam substantially supplant Christianity as the dominant religion. As for the POD, I'm liking the death of Pope Clement VI to the plague. Killing off cardinals left and right doesn't seem quite so realistic, although I did have an idea not long ago wherein the Pope died of the plague and several cardinals were infected by fleas from the corpse while paying their respect at the funeral. (I don't know what rituals surround a Papal funeral, so this may not be realistic.)

Having the new Pope also die of the plague shortly after being elected holds my appeal. He might even die the same way, by exposing himself while attempting to comfort the infected. If one Pope dying of the plague isn't catastrophic enough to the faithful, would two Popes dying of the plague within quick succession of one another serve to destabilize the Catholic Church in the way you describe? Even if I don't kill off a bunch of cardinals, would the governments of the various states of Europe look poorly on the cardinals' choice of Pope? I mean, the guy would have died right after his appointment, of the same disease, and that doesn't look good. Maybe then, like you said, the kings and cardinals wait out the plague but the lack of leadership in the interim results in the fragmentation of the Catholic Church. Would the kings of Europe seek to war with one another over whose Pope was the real one? "The Papal Wars" has a nice ring to it.

What impact would the collapse of Catholicism have on Orthodox Christianity? The Byzantine remnant wouldn't be worried about Popes. I'm not certain how prevalent Orthodox Christians were (and where) at the time of the Black Death.

Possibly, though I would question the historical likelihood of large portions of Scandinavian (and let's face it, British) society migrating to foreign countries. The usual result of migration was that the Kings of the lands they attempted to enter refused to allow anyone in, consigning them to their deaths if necessary in order to preserve his own state. I mean, yeah, failed crops are still a quite plausible result of the Black Winter, but the migrations aren't likely. You might get intra-national migration, with people in the north flooding into the south of their own country, but cross-border migration isn't likely to occur. More likely the result is that the northern countries are half-wiped out by the extreme cold, and the more southern countries just have to cope with failed crops. Of course, in a situation where half of Europe is dead from plague, any result of failed harvests will be 100% easier to cope with anyway, since there are 50% less mouths to feed...

I was picturing desperate refugees overrunning political borders and such, but I see now how this is unrealistic. The Black Winter may be unnecessary if the Papal Wars can do the job of weakening Europe. And you're right about the lack of people making crop death less significant; I could kick myself for not seeing that before.

Well it's your choice here. I dislike the Vinland idea but others worship it. If it works for you, try to find a way to make it work. I like the idea of the Marinids doing a Columbus, though. Seems quite possible, I really wasn't considering the fracturing of the universal Caliphate when I said Islam was focused on land-trade with the East.

I'm shying away from the early post-plague Vinland idea for now, given the improbability of it succeeding even in good weather. If you like the idea of a Marinid Columbus, when do you think would be the earliest realistic point to have them contact the Americas? I understand ship technology in the mid-1300s wasn't good enough to produce a reliable trans-oceanic design. In OTL the carrack was invented in the 1400s -- perhaps a similar design could be developed by the Marinids and their Iberian vassals?

My goal is to establish a trade route with very limited colonization between the Old World and the Americas. Having Marinid traders frequent the Caribbean might accomplish this. But what could stop them from attempting to forcibly colonize the Americas and becoming an alternate version of Spain and Portugal? Maybe having the Ottomans and Mamluks sitting on the Marinids? After a couple centuries of limited contact with the New World, the Turks could take Iberia and the Mamluks could take Morocco, and then the two remaining powers could be worried more about fighting each other than immediately taking up the old American trade routes.

Why are the Mamluks involved, you might ask? I figured if the Ottomans are more preoccupied in Europe than in OTL, they won't be able to focus on defeating the Mamluks. There will be a lot of back and forth, though, and Cairo will get wrecked in the process as it repeatedly changes hands. Although in OTL, the Mamluks were conquered by the Ottomans, I'm trying to keep them alive for a couple reasons. Most importantly, they are an effective counterbalance to the Ottomans in the Mediterranean and Middle East, and constant conflict between them foments innovation and technological advancements.

Secondly, I'd like for the Mamluks to conquer North Africa and serve as a shield for the civilizations of sub-Sarahan Africa. I'm not sure exactly how this could occur, but my working plan is to have the Mamluks focused more on their battles with the Turks, so that they aren't focused on conquering the empires to the south. Africa becomes the Mamluks' "domain" (akin to how the Americas became the US's domain via the Monroe Doctrine). Ultimately, I'd like to see a modern (~21st century) sub-Saharan Africa which is about as peaceful, stable, and prosperous as Europe is today in OTL. Conversely, I'd like to see Europe become the shithole that much of Africa is today in OTL. Is this possible? Unfortunately, though sub-Saharan Africa has a head start on the Americas due to its disease resistance, I know it will be very difficult to keep it more or less sovereign from the big powers to the present.

That's quite possible, but remember that it's one thing having Americans acquire gun tech, and another thing having them acquire the ability to reverse engineer it. For a start, barrels of gunpowder are going to baffle them - they won't know how to make it. Even if a tortured/shipwrecked European tells them the ingredients those words aren't going to work in Aztec, so they'll probably work out charcoal from burning trees, but potassium nitrate and sulphur...much harder. I don't actually know if Mexico has the right ingredients. But it could probably acquire them in time, so let's move on. The other problem here is that the Inca Empire was Pacific-based. It had no Atlantic or Caribbean coastline. The Spanish found and conquered them by marching through the Aztec lands. Makes the proxy war thing a little harder to engineer. Your best bet may be to have the Aztecs conquer the Incas and then pose a single united front against colonists. That, or Central American civilisations were known for disappearing and being replaced. Perhaps Aztec civilisation could be rocked by contact with the Marinids, some generic event sets them on a path to destruction, and two rival (and better-placed) empires arise in their place? There's several things you could probably get away with here, but you might want to consult a native America specialist on this forum, I'm not so good at the specifics of their cultures.

I expect the Incas, without being conquered by the Spanish, would eventually expand their empire northward to reach the Caribbean, perhaps some time in the late 1500s or early 1600s. That way they have a direct connection to the Atlantic too, whereby they can engage in overseas trade with Europe and Africa. Trade in the Caribbean might compel both the Aztecs and Incas to develop a good navy.

I'm aiming for a lengthy mingling of Marinid, Aztec, and Inca traders in the Caribbean which would allow some forward-thinking Americans to learn about this new technology, how it works, and how they can make it themselves. As for Aztec and Inca access to gunpowder, I'm hoping they would acquire enough over time (either through trade or local production, if possible) to supply their armies before any big Old World powers come colonizing in force. By the time the Marinids are conquered by the Turks and Mamluks, the Aztecs and Incas will already be on the way to advancing their militaries and tactics, carving themselves grand empires, and gearing up for potential conflict from overseas.

I'm also looking to have the Chinese become a great naval power in the Pacific and establish trading colonies on the Pacific coast of the Americas. The much longer distances involved in traveling across the Pacific initially limits Chinese territorial expansion in the Americas, which benefits the Aztecs and Incas by giving them time to consolidate their hold on their own territories. Chinese traders also serve as additional sources of Old World technology and agriculture for the Americas (not necessarily in an altruistic fashion, it's just that what the traders and colonists bring with them eventually make their way into the hands of the indigenous people).

A couple more questions: What did you think of the proxy war idea? And how long do you think extensive American colonization attempts by the big Old World powers (Turks, Mamluks, Chinese) can reasonably be delayed?

Close but no cigar. They invented gunpowder, but not firearms. They used gunpowder in ceramic jars as catapulted bombs. I don't think they ever figured out that gunpowder could be used to propel projectiles at colossal speed, though they might have had crude siege cannon, I can't remember exactly. They certainly didn't have hand-held gunpowder weapons. The Chinese never worked out how to produce European-style weaponry until it was given to them, and the European style proved far more efficient.

The general perception of China which I've picked up from various discussions on this site and elsewhere is that it has been a potential economic and military beast for centuries and would have been much more dominant in OTL history had it not been for a few key factors such as isolationist emperors, disdain for foreign technology, and untimely European intervention. If in the ATL China domestic matters proceed roughly as in OTL, and well-armed Muslim colonists come in place of Europeans, won't China still get stomped on as it did in OTL 19th century? I guess butterflies might be able to produce a progressive Chinese emperor who is welcoming of new technology, allowing China to grow in terms of global power faster than in OTL. I don't want my TL to turn into a Muslim-wank; I'd like the Chinese to serve as counterweights so that neither culture dominates the world as much as Christian European culture has in OTL. Is it plausible to have the Chinese be able to keep pace technologically and militarily with the Muslims of the western Old World?

Possibly, but do consider how long it takes to transport horses. You can probably only get up to 10 horses on any one ship, especially the smaller early ships being used. Oftentimes less than 10, and some of those are going to die on the crossing. It's going to take a while before America has enough horses to be seating armies.

Presumably, the Americans will establish their own breeding populations of horses from the first ones which are shipped over and soon won't be so reliant on imports, except for reducing the chance of inbreeding.

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As a backup POD should the Pope's death by plague idea fall through, what if the Mongols were to sack Italy but spare Baghdad? The details are fuzzy for me, and the POD is pushed back about a century, but in theory it could result in the Middle East remaining far more scientifically advanced than Europe. What do you think?
 
Killing off cardinals left and right doesn't seem quite so realistic, although I did have an idea not long ago wherein the Pope died of the plague and several cardinals were infected by fleas from the corpse while paying their respect at the funeral. (I don't know what rituals surround a Papal funeral, so this may not be realistic.)

Well I didn't exactly mean to kill off Cardinals left and right - you'd only need, say 10-20 of a cardinals college of 50ish to die to cause problems, and then only about 5 or 6 cardinals and an elected Pope to scare more candidates into hiding. Bearing in mind most Cardinals were expected to travel quite extensively anyway, and were often fairly old (though not all the octogenarians they are today) their immune systems will be weaker than the 20-30 year olds with the best chance of survival anyway, and 10-20 out of 50 is lower than the average death rate in Europe so there's every reason to jack it up another notch. But anyway, entirely your decision.

Circa the fleas on the corpse idea - I don't believe dead bodies were left exposed in these times, though I don't really know either. Embalming techniques (not equivalent to mummification if you were going to ask) weren't great in those days and a body could start to decompose in a matter of days or even hours at the wrong time of year. However, a more fundamental flaw is that fleas will leave a dead body as soon as it dies - they can't draw any blood from a corpse, so it's of no use to them. They'd be gone by the time of the funeral, and all the virus cells in the Pope's body would have died, too.

If one Pope dying of the plague isn't catastrophic enough to the faithful, would two Popes dying of the plague within quick succession of one another serve to destabilize the Catholic Church in the way you describe? Would the kings of Europe seek to war with one another over whose Pope was the real one? "The Papal Wars" has a nice ring to it.

The rulers of Europe would largely go with whoever the Papal Conclave elected. Note also my previous comment saying you wouldn't exactly need to murder them all (figuratively) to throw this off balance, just a proportional number of deaths would create a problem which the Cardinals College would most likely seek to alleviate by asking for more Cardinals, and then the death of the second Pope would probably be ample enough excuse for the Papal Conclave to be postponed which the Cardinals College tried to find a resolution to the crisis, which gives you your opportunity. After all, the journey of a clergyman to Rome gives him a far higher chance of dying of exposure anyway, but back on topic.

As for the war, it goes for many situations which historically both caused and didn't cause wars. The existence of numerous Popes by itself is not enough to cause some set of clashes which you're calling "Papal Wars" (quite like the name myself actually). However, it does give you a fuse to set off the explosion. You just need a spark, and that means a somewhat religion-related event which brings two or more rulers to blows. There's any number of ways you could make this happen - have two Kings try argue over who's Pope should be seated in Rome where they fail to be diplomatic and feel like war is the only way to satisfy their honour. Have a situation where a monastic order in country A appeals to a foreign Pope in country B for assistance because Pope B is trying to take control of their assets or the order itself. Have a university or clerical institution (a monastery or school of somesort or whatnot) argue with a foreign Pope on theology and have the argument blow out of proportion to the point where the debate turns to who is an Anti-Pope. There's a load of ways you could play it really. The existence of numerous Popes won't cause the war by itself but it will give you an arsenal of ways to engineer a war and keep it going.

What impact would the collapse of Catholicism have on Orthodox Christianity? The Byzantine remnant wouldn't be worried about Popes. I'm not certain how prevalent Orthodox Christians were (and where) at the time of the Black Death.

Now that is a very interesting thought. I guess it depends somewhat on the fortunes of the Patriarch of Constantinople. If the Patriarch lives while the Popes die they could use it as "proof" that Orthodoxy is the true path which could galvanise an unity (or at least, a "we're in this together and we'll survive" feeling), whereas the death of the Patriarch would likely at least in the short term turn Orthodox Christianity into a decentralised system where local Bishops are their own religious mini-Kings - at least in an "until the Plague is gone" way. Either way, while it makes good filler, Orthodox Christianity is not strong enough to resist the Muslims when they come anyway. The Byzantines are virtually dead already and Muscovy is still struggling with Novgorod and several other minor Russian merchant republics for dominance - collectively they are all paying homage to the Golden Horde, who pre-plague was strong enough to walk over them all by itself. You shouldn't be concerned about Orthodox Christianity unwittingly shielding Europe from invasion because it won't.

I was picturing desperate refugees overrunning political borders and such, but I see now how this is unrealistic. The Black Winter may be unnecessary if the Papal Wars can do the job of weakening Europe. And you're right about the lack of people making crop death less significant; I could kick myself for not seeing that before.

You could always have a far milder Black Winter (it can still have the dramatic name, goodness knows contemporaries are going to think it's Hell On Earth) just to make sure things go smoothly vis a vis the fall of Europe, but it's your call. Ultimately your aim should probably be just making the sequence of events plausible as well as logical. If you think it works without the Black Winter, considering everything we've discussed, then by all means can the drought effects. Also bear in mind that while I was of course true about the plague making a crop shortage far less of a problem, crop shortages can far exceed 50% production (to meet our nominal 50% death rate), which still equals nourishment problems and can still cause starvation.

I'm shying away from the early post-plague Vinland idea for now, given the improbability of it succeeding even in good weather. If you like the idea of a Marinid Columbus, when do you think would be the earliest realistic point to have them contact the Americas? I understand ship technology in the mid-1300s wasn't good enough to produce a reliable trans-oceanic design. In OTL the carrack was invented in the 1400s -- perhaps a similar design could be developed by the Marinids and their Iberian vassals?

The Islamic countries were very good at nautical affairs, just as parts of Europe were. There'd be no reason to delay the development of shipping far past RL dates). That said, the carrack was more designed for sailing the Atlantic waters on the Mediterranean to Germany style trade routes, the Med being that much calmer, and it's unlikely the Muslims will have conquered western Europe and need such vessels before it's already been invented by Christians - after all, trade is still a vital function of society, there's no reason in this TL that Christendom would reject advancing naval tech. You could easily just have the Muslim nations (the Marinids, say) appropriate the carrack design from the Europeans they conquer. As for discovering America, it's your call again but I wouldn't advise any attempt at cross-Atlantic journeys until probably the early 16th century. I'm giving a bit of extra time for the recovery of Europe, and also because Columbus probably did make his journey within a decade or two of when the idea was even feasible. The fact that Spain expanded across the sea so fast was incredible. Of course, Portugal had sent sporadic traders around the coast of Africa before even Columbus, so trade with India should be on the cards, but crossing the Atlantic was a big thing, and even the idea of trying it was considered dubious - many didn't think it was possible or feasible, hence why Columbus had to try three times to get someone to sponsor his journey in the first place - including being rejected by the same Queen of Castile who eventually actually did sponsor him. Given that we're somewhat snuffing out the beacon of European enlightenment at the source (albeit replacing it with Islamic empirical scientific though) I would suggest you don't try to make this TL fit reality - that is, don't feel like there's a rush to make this world match RL advancement by the year 2009. If anything, it would likely take this world an extra 2-300 years to match our technological advancements, if allowing for the fact that Islamic science will produce some advanced things early and many things we probably haven't even thought of (it's a bit like imagining alien tech I guess, only without the futuristic lasers and stuff), so by all means I'd say allow the Marinids to take 50 years or whatnot longer than Columbus to reach the Americas, and then by all means delay an actual proper invasion/colonisation until, say, the year 1750. Slowing down American colonisation does, of course, have the desirable effect of allowing your Aztecs and Incas plentiful time to acquire weapons technology and advance themselves to match Europe, remember.

But what could stop them from attempting to forcibly colonize the Americas and becoming an alternate version of Spain and Portugal?

Oh, any number of reasons. Conservative resistance to focusing on non-European affairs - after all, as I mentioned, Columbus didn't exactly find support plentiful, and most rulers would have preferred to spend the cash on European issues. If an undesirable location or a disease presents itself on the initial exploration, there could also be resistance to repeated attempts to go back to America - in fact if the Marinids don't think they're coming back then that would give them the incentive to just liberally distribute their weapons to the natives as presents/trade items - though of course you have to watch out here that you don't shoot American colonisation through the heart and make it unlikely that anyone wants to go back at all. Or you could go for probably the best reason - that Spain's conquest of the Americas was ludicrous. If it hadn't happened, and I wrote on this forum a TL talking about a fictional "Pizarro" who actually conquered the entire Aztec Empire with 500 men then not a single person here would defend me - they would all call ASB and tell me that I used handwavium of the highest order to force through the result that I wanted. Say the Marinids send a force to try to subdue part of the area, but they are neither as ambitious nor as lucky as RL Pizarro. The group gets slaughtered, save for a few who make it to the coast to sail home on the ships and tell of a great empire with a population greater than that of the Marinids' own country, which can muster 100,000 soldiers to the Emperor's bidding (not far off what the Aztec Emperor would have claimed, I do believe, and possibly even not far off realistic). They aren't going to try to take down that Empire again, not for centuries. It would require an invasion force of at least a good 25,000 and probably better weapons (at least some development of early musket tactics, rather than the skirmishing in the jungle that the RL Spanish employed) and that's not feasible until there's a colonial empire to base yourself from - consider how long the native American nations survived in North America, too. Yes, they tended to take sides with European colonisers for their own survival, but they proved themselves worthy of their allegiance, and defeated a number of early excursions before they were given muskets of their own. A large, powerful Aztec state is going to have a good chance of lasting for several centuries, especially if it can play sides, and certainly if it can barter for musket tech at any point in its existence (the longer they wait and survive the more likely they eventually get them). At any rate, this reduces the Marinids to merely looking to plant colonies away from the big states, and if they then have some bad run-ins with locals, they make become very cautious in their colonisations. England colonised very slowly, after all, because even only faced with small tribes which could barely project power over 50 miles it kept having colonies burned to the ground or massacred. It took them 50 years to really establish themselves and 170 years to get a strong control of the coastline, and that was at a point when they were far more economically powerful than Spain and Portugal ever were. If anything, Spain and Portugal's successes were unbelievably good, and you shouldn't worry about having to prove that it wouldn't happen again.

...Mamluks...

Perfectly reasonable, I'll go for that. Vis a vis sub-Saharan Africa, don't worry too much - the Sahara itself is a perfectly good shield against southwards expansion. The only place that inland southwards expansion was ever successful until the age of penicillin was Egypt, and the reason for that was that the river Nile facilitated it. While there is some basic trade and a spread of Islam going on in that direction, invasions and so on are just a little too unlikely. Again, RL events showed us that a southwards expansion isn't necessarily something you have to prove won't happen, it's not a certainty.

I expect the Incas, without being conquered by the Spanish, would eventually expand their empire northward to reach the Caribbean, perhaps some time in the late 1500s or early 1600s.

Quite possibly, yes. Again, though, the only thing I'd warn against is that you don't end up with the Incas becoming too much of a rival for the Aztecs and provoking a war between the two which reduces one of the two (probably the Incas) to being insignificant, especially if the Aztecs get gunpowder weapons first. However, simply being careful with your TL should suffice here - don't rush to make the Incas expand and the Aztecs adopt European weaponry as soon as possible and you can make it work.

I'm aiming for a lengthy mingling of Marinid, Aztec, and Inca traders in the Caribbean which would allow some forward-thinking Americans to learn about this new technology, how it works, and how they can make it themselves. As for Aztec and Inca access to gunpowder, I'm hoping they would acquire enough over time (either through trade or local production, if possible) to supply their armies before any big Old World powers come colonizing in force. By the time the Marinids are conquered by the Turks and Mamluks, the Aztecs and Incas will already be on the way to advancing their militaries and tactics, carving themselves grand empires, and gearing up for potential conflict from overseas.

Sounds about right.

...China...

Sounds decent.

A couple more questions: What did you think of the proxy war idea? And how long do you think extensive American colonization attempts by the big Old World powers (Turks, Mamluks, Chinese) can reasonably be delayed?

I like the proxy war idea in principle but I wasn't sold on the idea for a good while. Now I feel like we've got a better basis for making the Incas equal to the Aztecs (my greatest fear was that logic dictated that the Aztecs would acquire guns and conquer the Incas long before the Incas would have a serious chance of establishing themselves) I'm feeling better about it, though. Normally I shy away from the idea of proxy wars because in OTL proxy wars generally are a modern thing and all wars pre-1950 which seemed to be proxy wars were actually something different, but this TL is so dramatically altering the TL (and I know you've got pre-established ideas of what you want it to achieve) that I'm willing to go with it. If you want proper proxy wars you probably want to save them for at least a fair while (a couple of centuries or so, maybe more) after full on Marinid/Eurasian contact because it took a long time for the concept of backing a proxy to fight a war that you would only gain from indirectly became an acceptable ideal - before that, if the country backing the proxy didn't gain directly from the war they weren't interested, and if they did gain directly they'd probably send their own troops rather than money/arms. However, you *can* just have the Aztecs and the Incas allying with rival Islamic colonising powers early on in the style of the native Americans siding with the French and English against each other, and have them battle it out for dominance over the course of time instead. It wouldn't really be a proxy war as the Islamics would likely want to involve their own troops and the fight would probably spill over a bit to their own colonies, but it does give you the potential for the two Central American Empires to be paid to constantly fight each other with musket weaponry. You can even make it more interesting by having the two Empires collapse at one point or another to be replaced by one or more successor Empires. After all, both of the two Empires, while they had elements of quite an advanced administration, also relied almost unbearably on a pitifully small group of individuals to administer land, with the Emperors controlling virtually all of the decision making and large portions of the Empire having nothing to enforce the Imperial sovereignty except for blind loyalty to a government hundreds of a miles away. The Central American empires before the Aztecs and Incas did spontaneously collapse, either to receive a new Emperor with a different style of rule, or to break up into several smaller empires. If that happens, you can even let several Islamic colonisers in on the game, and you also get a good way to stop one or the other of the Aztec-Inca rivals from growing unchallengably dominant, too.

I covered the second point earlier, but I'll summise here: quite a long time, though obviously not forever. You could plausibly hold off on serious colonisation until the 18th century if you play up on Europe/the Marinids taking a while to recover from both the Plague and the conquest of Europe shaking things up hugely, and if you also play up the initial hesitance to turn to the New World. After all, the Marinids are Muslim, and though far from the only way it will work out, the traditional Muslim approach to discovering a new civilisation or land wasn't so much to gobble it up instantly as to convert the influential rulers to Islam (given the Aztec God-Emperor worship and the lack of powerful tribes elsewhere, this may utterly fail) and then to plant token trading posts before expanding control later on. Given the huge distances the Chinese have to conquer, and the fact that Indonesia and a ton of tiny Pacific islands are far closer to them, you can also hold off their serious colonisation for as long as you want to - unlike the Marinids, once you start them you probably can also plausibly turn off the tap and stop the flood at any point, too, since for the Chinese, colonisation of the Americas was not the first step to trading in the Holy Grail of merchanting, and since the sheer cost and logistics of colonising America are somewhat exorbitant - and also given the Chinese propensity for suddenly declaring a policy of isolation. In fact, the more I think about it the more I find myself questioning how involved China would get, but I'd still say you could play the Zheng He card, and I wouldn't rule out Chinese colonisation altogether, so don't let it ruin your plans.

If in the ATL China domestic matters proceed roughly as in OTL, and well-armed Muslim colonists come in place of Europeans, won't China still get stomped on as it did in OTL 19th century? Is it plausible to have the Chinese be able to keep pace technologically and militarily with the Muslims of the western Old World?

That's a fair point, and well worth concern. I'd personally suggest that an "enlightened" Emperor who opens up trade and embraces foreign technology would make a more resilient China, which wouldn't automatically get "stomped on", but it's well worth considering. I personally wouldn't call it out of the realms of possibility to suggest that an open China could have contact perhaps as far away as Persia, could glean either information or even a working model of a gunpowder weapon, and from there could prompt a simultaneous Chinese development of musket tech. I think their tactics would be lacking as some elements of military doctrine go out of the window when you have a monolithic state with no natural rivals and an ability to simply through hundreds of thousands of soldiers at a problem, but I'd suggest that the hurdle you need to overcome is getting them the weaponry. Muskets in the first place is the biggest hurdle, and if they have those they shouldn't be a walk-over. It may still lose, but its losses will be recoverable. Any military encounters China has with Eurasians should then allow it to adapt its tactics and essentially learn the Islamic tactics, plus its manpower advantage should bode well. If China is open to foreign influence it should also benefit greatly from the enlightened thinking which often came out of Chinese philosophy, so you might even be able to see an interesting cross of western hemisphere military strength but conservative, rigid religious and political thought against eastern hemisphere military weakness coupled with an adapting administrative approach (it was after all the Chinese who invented the idea of a tiered Civil Service with entry exams) and liberal, evolving religious practice and government philosophy. While democracy itself might still take an unexpected event rather than being an "ultimate evolution" you might well see China having a society with quite free movement between the upper and lower classes plus perhaps even crude social welfare developing over time.

As a backup POD should the Pope's death by plague idea fall through, what if the Mongols were to sack Italy but spare Baghdad? The details are fuzzy for me, and the POD is pushed back about a century, but in theory it could result in the Middle East remaining far more scientifically advanced than Europe. What do you think?

Well it certainly can give you a more scientifically advanced Middle East, if that's what you're going for, sure. It will make European politics a mess, though, as the Horde inevitably breaks down into warring states, which will probably resolve into a Dark Ages style of affairs, with all-powerful Kings drinking themselves silly, surrounded only by lackey nobles, riding into battle for profit rather than honour/glory, etc. Religiously it will also be hard to say what happens, as the Mongols tended to "convert" to whatever religion they thought would make it easiest to control their subjects, and the Mongol controlling classes aren't going to last long before they are either replaced by European nobles or integrated into European society, though. You might be able to engineer Islam taking root but it isn't likely to be uniform across Europe, it's not likely to look like the Middle East form of Islam in religion or in government/society, and it will likely depend on slightly tenuous mini-PODs (i.e. conjuring up a Mongol noble who becomes an Islamic fanatic to advance the cause later on). It's possible, but I don't think it's as ideal as your first idea.
 
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Well I didn't exactly mean to kill off Cardinals left and right - you'd only need, say 10-20 of a cardinals college of 50ish to die to cause problems, and then only about 5 or 6 cardinals and an elected Pope to scare more candidates into hiding. Bearing in mind most Cardinals were expected to travel quite extensively anyway, and were often fairly old (though not all the octogenarians they are today) their immune systems will be weaker than the 20-30 year olds with the best chance of survival anyway, and 10-20 out of 50 is lower than the average death rate in Europe so there's every reason to jack it up another notch. But anyway, entirely your decision.

Circa the fleas on the corpse idea - I don't believe dead bodies were left exposed in these times, though I don't really know either. Embalming techniques (not equivalent to mummification if you were going to ask) weren't great in those days and a body could start to decompose in a matter of days or even hours at the wrong time of year. However, a more fundamental flaw is that fleas will leave a dead body as soon as it dies - they can't draw any blood from a corpse, so it's of no use to them. They'd be gone by the time of the funeral, and all the virus cells in the Pope's body would have died, too.
I'm liking this more and more. Having the Pope die in 1348 forces the cardinals to travel while the plague is still in full force, and since they have to head to Avignon, the ones from northern Europe actually would be heading into the direction the plague is spreading from. That's a good point about the death rate; if a third of the European population dies out, why not a third of the cardinals? I may be getting too precise here, but when you refer to the "5 or 6 cardinals and an elected Pope" do you mean in addition to the 10-20 cardinals or instead of them? And by candidates, do you mean candidates for new Pope or to replace the cardinals? In OTL, Clement died in 1352, presumably of natural causes and not the plague, by which point the plague had mostly run its course through Europe. Thus the cardinals' travel to Avignon was far less perilous in OTL. And you're right about the corpse idea -- I didn't consider that the fleas wouldn't stick around. It was a long shot anyway.

The rulers of Europe would largely go with whoever the Papal Conclave elected. Note also my previous comment saying you wouldn't exactly need to murder them all (figuratively) to throw this off balance, just a proportional number of deaths would create a problem which the Cardinals College would most likely seek to alleviate by asking for more Cardinals, and then the death of the second Pope would probably be ample enough excuse for the Papal Conclave to be postponed which the Cardinals College tried to find a resolution to the crisis, which gives you your opportunity. After all, the journey of a clergyman to Rome gives him a far higher chance of dying of exposure anyway, but back on topic.
I see. So having kings doubt the cardinals is unlikely and unnecessary. Simply the decision of the cardinals to put off another conclave until the plague passes leaves Catholics with no spiritual leader for a few years. Consequently, some kings decide to appoint or elect their own popes. Makes sense to me. Do you suppose the replacement pope could be Innocent VI, who in OTL succeeded Clement VI (albeit later, in 1352)? I guess it doesn't matter much who he is, since he dies shortly thereafter. Also, do you mean Avignon instead of Rome as for where the conclave meets? Otherwise, I'm a little confused.

As for the war, it goes for many situations which historically both caused and didn't cause wars. The existence of numerous Popes by itself is not enough to cause some set of clashes which you're calling "Papal Wars" (quite like the name myself actually). However, it does give you a fuse to set off the explosion. You just need a spark, and that means a somewhat religion-related event which brings two or more rulers to blows. There's any number of ways you could make this happen - have two Kings try argue over who's Pope should be seated in Rome where they fail to be diplomatic and feel like war is the only way to satisfy their honour. Have a situation where a monastic order in country A appeals to a foreign Pope in country B for assistance because Pope B is trying to take control of their assets or the order itself. Have a university or clerical institution (a monastery or school of somesort or whatnot) argue with a foreign Pope on theology and have the argument blow out of proportion to the point where the debate turns to who is an Anti-Pope. There's a load of ways you could play it really. The existence of numerous Popes won't cause the war by itself but it will give you an arsenal of ways to engineer a war and keep it going.
There's already a lot of tension over the Avignon-Rome split, which works in my favor, right? It makes it even easier to trigger the Papal Wars. With no Avignon pope, Rome may assert itself again and appoint its own pope. France gets pissed at Italy for this preemption, diplomacy fails as Rome refuses to back down, and war breaks out. Other nations join in the fray, with some siding with France, some with Italy, and some going rogue and declaring their own popes. The Holy Roman Empire fragments as the various little states within bicker and brawl. All this fighting compounded by the ongoing plague serves to tear Europe apart. Granted, it's simplistic and not well fleshed-out, but what do you think?

Now that is a very interesting thought. I guess it depends somewhat on the fortunes of the Patriarch of Constantinople. If the Patriarch lives while the Popes die they could use it as "proof" that Orthodoxy is the true path which could galvanise an unity (or at least, a "we're in this together and we'll survive" feeling), whereas the death of the Patriarch would likely at least in the short term turn Orthodox Christianity into a decentralised system where local Bishops are their own religious mini-Kings - at least in an "until the Plague is gone" way. Either way, while it makes good filler, Orthodox Christianity is not strong enough to resist the Muslims when they come anyway. The Byzantines are virtually dead already and Muscovy is still struggling with Novgorod and several other minor Russian merchant republics for dominance - collectively they are all paying homage to the Golden Horde, who pre-plague was strong enough to walk over them all by itself. You shouldn't be concerned about Orthodox Christianity unwittingly shielding Europe from invasion because it won't.
Ah, well that's good to hear. As for the Golden Horde, I believe that in OTL the Black Death gutted them, and they were never able to recover from it. There was civil war, and then Timur came in and finished them off. True? I imagine Timur will play a part in the TL; since he was born in 1336, he's not butterflied away. Assuming he's roughly as ambitious and successful in the ATL as in OTL, the Timurid Empire will still come into being. Also as in OTL, the Ottomans and Timurids would run into each other. I was thinking that a Battle of Ankara analogue could happen, but go in favor of the Ottomans instead. After that, the two empires eventually reach a stalemate, and the Ottomans focus on conquering Europe while the Timurids focus on conquering India. Though after Timur's death, his empire soon fragments, a Delhi-based Mughal Empire analogue survives. Islamic Delhi isn't so friendly to the Hindus of India, and seeks to kill or convert as many as possible. The Vijayanagara Empire remains a Hindu refuge, but is long besieged by Delhi. There is a Hindu diaspora as they spread into China and Turkish Europe in search of tolerance, but many are forced down into south India. Delhi eventually conquers all of India, though a Vijayanagara remnant stubbornly persists on Sri Lanka. Over time, Delhi's power wanes and the Hindus reclaim much of south India, though their numbers are much smaller than in OTL. This more intense persecution of Hindus will become more important later in the TL. I'm aware that I digressed a bit from the discussion on Orthodox Christianity, but does all this sound like a reasonable series of events?

The Islamic countries were very good at nautical affairs, just as parts of Europe were. There'd be no reason to delay the development of shipping far past RL dates). That said, the carrack was more designed for sailing the Atlantic waters on the Mediterranean to Germany style trade routes, the Med being that much calmer, and it's unlikely the Muslims will have conquered western Europe and need such vessels before it's already been invented by Christians - after all, trade is still a vital function of society, there's no reason in this TL that Christendom would reject advancing naval tech. You could easily just have the Muslim nations (the Marinids, say) appropriate the carrack design from the Europeans they conquer. As for discovering America, it's your call again but I wouldn't advise any attempt at cross-Atlantic journeys until probably the early 16th century. I'm giving a bit of extra time for the recovery of Europe, and also because Columbus probably did make his journey within a decade or two of when the idea was even feasible. The fact that Spain expanded across the sea so fast was incredible. Of course, Portugal had sent sporadic traders around the coast of Africa before even Columbus, so trade with India should be on the cards, but crossing the Atlantic was a big thing, and even the idea of trying it was considered dubious - many didn't think it was possible or feasible, hence why Columbus had to try three times to get someone to sponsor his journey in the first place - including being rejected by the same Queen of Castile who eventually actually did sponsor him. Given that we're somewhat snuffing out the beacon of European enlightenment at the source (albeit replacing it with Islamic empirical scientific though) I would suggest you don't try to make this TL fit reality - that is, don't feel like there's a rush to make this world match RL advancement by the year 2009. If anything, it would likely take this world an extra 2-300 years to match our technological advancements, if allowing for the fact that Islamic science will produce some advanced things early and many things we probably haven't even thought of (it's a bit like imagining alien tech I guess, only without the futuristic lasers and stuff), so by all means I'd say allow the Marinids to take 50 years or whatnot longer than Columbus to reach the Americas, and then by all means delay an actual proper invasion/colonisation until, say, the year 1750. Slowing down American colonisation does, of course, have the desirable effect of allowing your Aztecs and Incas plentiful time to acquire weapons technology and advance themselves to match Europe, remember.
I have felt a lot of pressure to get the Aztecs and Incas up to speed as early as possible because of how relatively easily they were conquered in OTL. I was trying to establish a limited level of contact with the Old World and the Americas (via the Marinids) in order for disease and technology exchange earlier than in OTL while simultaneously delaying extensive colonization attempts (by the Turks, Mamluks, and Chinese) for as long as possible to give the Americas a fighting chance. But I see your point about not rushing things, especially given how daunting Columbus found it in OTL to gain support even for the idea of a journey across the Atlantic. So if you think a mid-16th century contact will provide enough time for the Aztecs and Incas to sufficiently gear themselves up for a mid-18th century conflict with the Old World, I'm willing to go with a time scale similar to that.

The "present day" in the TL is around the time of a long world war which begins with WWI-style weaponry. I intend for the war to take up a good portion of the story. So I think maybe the war could begin sometime in the 2100s, at least 200 years after WWI in OTL. As you say, it's like imagining alien tech, so I intend to have similar developments from OTL occur at various different times, with some appearing much earlier and some much later (or not at all) than in OTL. You're right that there might even be some technologies appearing which we have yet to develop, or never thought to.

Speaking of technology, some prior discussions on this TL have indicated the unlikelihood that an Industrial Revolution would come about in the TL, even a delayed one, without Europeans digging for coal and iron in northwest Europe as they did in OTL. I think this gives the Islamic and Chinese civilizations too little credit, though. The Turks who conquer the same area in Europe could initiate an Industrial Revolution analogue, even if it's later than in OTL. It was also suggested that north China is potentially suitable area for an Industrial Revolution to begin due to the coal and iron deposits there. While I'm not exactly sure of the detatils, I was thinking of having two largely independent Industrial Revolutions occur which would eventually merge as one. They would not proceed in exactly the same fashion or pace as in OTL, as that's unrealistic, and they'd start later, too. I'm hoping for an enterprising Chinese emperor to make China more open to outside trade and foreign technology than in OTL so that China isn't outpaced by the Muslim world.

Oh, any number of reasons. Conservative resistance to focusing on non-European affairs - after all, as I mentioned, Columbus didn't exactly find support plentiful, and most rulers would have preferred to spend the cash on European issues. If an undesirable location or a disease presents itself on the initial exploration, there could also be resistance to repeated attempts to go back to America - in fact if the Marinids don't think they're coming back then that would give them the incentive to just liberally distribute their weapons to the natives as presents/trade items - though of course you have to watch out here that you don't shoot American colonisation through the heart and make it unlikely that anyone wants to go back at all. Or you could go for probably the best reason - that Spain's conquest of the Americas was ludicrous. If it hadn't happened, and I wrote on this forum a TL talking about a fictional "Pizarro" who actually conquered the entire Aztec Empire with 500 men then not a single person here would defend me - they would all call ASB and tell me that I used handwavium of the highest order to force through the result that I wanted. Say the Marinids send a force to try to subdue part of the area, but they are neither as ambitious nor as lucky as RL Pizarro. The group gets slaughtered, save for a few who make it to the coast to sail home on the ships and tell of a great empire with a population greater than that of the Marinids' own country, which can muster 100,000 soldiers to the Emperor's bidding (not far off what the Aztec Emperor would have claimed, I do believe, and possibly even not far off realistic). They aren't going to try to take down that Empire again, not for centuries. It would require an invasion force of at least a good 25,000 and probably better weapons (at least some development of early musket tactics, rather than the skirmishing in the jungle that the RL Spanish employed) and that's not feasible until there's a colonial empire to base yourself from - consider how long the native American nations survived in North America, too. Yes, they tended to take sides with European colonisers for their own survival, but they proved themselves worthy of their allegiance, and defeated a number of early excursions before they were given muskets of their own. A large, powerful Aztec state is going to have a good chance of lasting for several centuries, especially if it can play sides, and certainly if it can barter for musket tech at any point in its existence (the longer they wait and survive the more likely they eventually get them). At any rate, this reduces the Marinids to merely looking to plant colonies away from the big states, and if they then have some bad run-ins with locals, they make become very cautious in their colonisations. England colonised very slowly, after all, because even only faced with small tribes which could barely project power over 50 miles it kept having colonies burned to the ground or massacred. It took them 50 years to really establish themselves and 170 years to get a strong control of the coastline, and that was at a point when they were far more economically powerful than Spain and Portugal ever were. If anything, Spain and Portugal's successes were unbelievably good, and you shouldn't worry about having to prove that it wouldn't happen again.
No, no handwavium for me either, thanks. So I need a light touch. Can't have the Old World either get too colony-happy or avoid the Americas altogether. I can work with that. If you don't mind, I may incorporate some of your ideas or variants thereof into the TL.

Perfectly reasonable, I'll go for that. Vis a vis sub-Saharan Africa, don't worry too much - the Sahara itself is a perfectly good shield against southwards expansion. The only place that inland southwards expansion was ever successful until the age of penicillin was Egypt, and the reason for that was that the river Nile facilitated it. While there is some basic trade and a spread of Islam going on in that direction, invasions and so on are just a little too unlikely. Again, RL events showed us that a southwards expansion isn't necessarily something you have to prove won't happen, it's not a certainty.
Ah, so what prevented penetration inland from the coastal European colonies in sub-Saharan Africa was mainly the lack of penicillin? I had envisioned a Scramble for Africa by more powerful foreign nations, but if I delay the discovery of penicillin or something similar so that the indigenous peoples of Africa (and the Americas) can grow in power enough to develop better tech on their own and/or acquire it from elsewhere. However, I do fear that the low population of the native people of Australia and Oceanic won't prevent the Chinese from incorporating them into its Pacific empire, but that is probably unavoidable.

Quite possibly, yes. Again, though, the only thing I'd warn against is that you don't end up with the Incas becoming too much of a rival for the Aztecs and provoking a war between the two which reduces one of the two (probably the Incas) to being insignificant, especially if the Aztecs get gunpowder weapons first. However, simply being careful with your TL should suffice here - don't rush to make the Incas expand and the Aztecs adopt European weaponry as soon as possible and you can make it work.
As I understand it, the Incas had better technology than the Aztecs, with some knowledge of bronze-working. Also, the other tribes under their dominion didn't have the same animosity toward the Incas that the human-sacrificing Aztecs' subjects did. I think this would give the Incas an initial edge which would keep them even with the Aztecs if the Aztecs acquired Old World tech a few decades ahead of the Incas. I also intend to have the Aztecs go through some social upheaval at some point as human sacrifice becomes increasingly unpopular among a better educated citizenry.

I like the proxy war idea in principle but I wasn't sold on the idea for a good while. Now I feel like we've got a better basis for making the Incas equal to the Aztecs (my greatest fear was that logic dictated that the Aztecs would acquire guns and conquer the Incas long before the Incas would have a serious chance of establishing themselves) I'm feeling better about it, though. Normally I shy away from the idea of proxy wars because in OTL proxy wars generally are a modern thing and all wars pre-1950 which seemed to be proxy wars were actually something different, but this TL is so dramatically altering the TL (and I know you've got pre-established ideas of what you want it to achieve) that I'm willing to go with it. If you want proper proxy wars you probably want to save them for at least a fair while (a couple of centuries or so, maybe more) after full on Marinid/Eurasian contact because it took a long time for the concept of backing a proxy to fight a war that you would only gain from indirectly became an acceptable ideal - before that, if the country backing the proxy didn't gain directly from the war they weren't interested, and if they did gain directly they'd probably send their own troops rather than money/arms. However, you *can* just have the Aztecs and the Incas allying with rival Islamic colonising powers early on in the style of the native Americans siding with the French and English against each other, and have them battle it out for dominance over the course of time instead. It wouldn't really be a proxy war as the Islamics would likely want to involve their own troops and the fight would probably spill over a bit to their own colonies, but it does give you the potential for the two Central American Empires to be paid to constantly fight each other with musket weaponry. You can even make it more interesting by having the two Empires collapse at one point or another to be replaced by one or more successor Empires. After all, both of the two Empires, while they had elements of quite an advanced administration, also relied almost unbearably on a pitifully small group of individuals to administer land, with the Emperors controlling virtually all of the decision making and large portions of the Empire having nothing to enforce the Imperial sovereignty except for blind loyalty to a government hundreds of a miles away. The Central American empires before the Aztecs and Incas did spontaneously collapse, either to receive a new Emperor with a different style of rule, or to break up into several smaller empires. If that happens, you can even let several Islamic colonisers in on the game, and you also get a good way to stop one or the other of the Aztec-Inca rivals from growing unchallengably dominant, too.
I like your idea of having the native American civilizations form loose alliances with competing Old World colonial powers better than my full-on proxy war idea. Maybe the Aztecs and Incas could hire private advisors from the Old World (or they could ask for advice in exchange for military assistance) to help them govern their vast empires and avoid collapse. Ultimately, I envision the Turks to have control over eastern North America, the Chinese over western North America, and the Mamluks over eastern South America. A pro-Aztec alliance of native American chiefdoms retains control over a large swath of central North America. While the Chinese generally try to stay out of the Turko-Mamluk wars, the Aztecs side with the Turks and the Incas side with the Mamluks in various territorial skirmishes in the Caribbean, Central America, and northern South America. These are not strong alliances, though, as the Aztecs and Incas remain suspicious of the foreigners. The powerful Aztecs and Incas are also less subject to the whims of their Old World allies than the native Americans of our TL (meaning they won't be so easily pushed around). How's about that?

I covered the second point earlier, but I'll summise here: quite a long time, though obviously not forever. You could plausibly hold off on serious colonisation until the 18th century if you play up on Europe/the Marinids taking a while to recover from both the Plague and the conquest of Europe shaking things up hugely, and if you also play up the initial hesitance to turn to the New World. After all, the Marinids are Muslim, and though far from the only way it will work out, the traditional Muslim approach to discovering a new civilisation or land wasn't so much to gobble it up instantly as to convert the influential rulers to Islam (given the Aztec God-Emperor worship and the lack of powerful tribes elsewhere, this may utterly fail) and then to plant token trading posts before expanding control later on. Given the huge distances the Chinese have to conquer, and the fact that Indonesia and a ton of tiny Pacific islands are far closer to them, you can also hold off their serious colonisation for as long as you want to - unlike the Marinids, once you start them you probably can also plausibly turn off the tap and stop the flood at any point, too, since for the Chinese, colonisation of the Americas was not the first step to trading in the Holy Grail of merchanting, and since the sheer cost and logistics of colonising America are somewhat exorbitant - and also given the Chinese propensity for suddenly declaring a policy of isolation. In fact, the more I think about it the more I find myself questioning how involved China would get, but I'd still say you could play the Zheng He card, and I wouldn't rule out Chinese colonisation altogether, so don't let it ruin your plans.
That's very interesting. I didn't know about the Muslim style of colonization. Subtle and devious -- I like it. I'm betting that there would be quite a few converts to Islam (whether voluntarily or imposed upon them by converted local rulers) among the less powerful American tribes/chiefdoms, including those under the thumb of the Aztecs or Incas. But like you say, I don't think the Aztec and Inca religions, what with their god-emperor worship, will be even close to totally being supplanted by Islam. At this point, I don't think I need a Zheng He analogue to cross the Pacific in the 1400s, but I do intend to eventually have the Chinese spread their influence into western North America, albeit later than the Turks and Mamluks on the Atlantic side. The Chinese will have to deal with Siberia, southeast Asia, and Oceania first anyway.

That's a fair point, and well worth concern. I'd personally suggest that an "enlightened" Emperor who opens up trade and embraces foreign technology would make a more resilient China, which wouldn't automatically get "stomped on", but it's well worth considering. I personally wouldn't call it out of the realms of possibility to suggest that an open China could have contact perhaps as far away as Persia, could glean either information or even a working model of a gunpowder weapon, and from there could prompt a simultaneous Chinese development of musket tech. I think their tactics would be lacking as some elements of military doctrine go out of the window when you have a monolithic state with no natural rivals and an ability to simply through hundreds of thousands of soldiers at a problem, but I'd suggest that the hurdle you need to overcome is getting them the weaponry. Muskets in the first place is the biggest hurdle, and if they have those they shouldn't be a walk-over. It may still lose, but its losses will be recoverable. Any military encounters China has with Eurasians should then allow it to adapt its tactics and essentially learn the Islamic tactics, plus its manpower advantage should bode well. If China is open to foreign influence it should also benefit greatly from the enlightened thinking which often came out of Chinese philosophy, so you might even be able to see an interesting cross of western hemisphere military strength but conservative, rigid religious and political thought against eastern hemisphere military weakness coupled with an adapting administrative approach (it was after all the Chinese who invented the idea of a tiered Civil Service with entry exams) and liberal, evolving religious practice and government philosophy. While democracy itself might still take an unexpected event rather than being an "ultimate evolution" you might well see China having a society with quite free movement between the upper and lower classes plus perhaps even crude social welfare developing over time.
Yes, I do intend to go with an enlightened emperor, perhaps one who desires to trade with the American civs that the Muslims "discovered" and who is more open to foreign technology. Thus China could acquire weapons tech from Muslim states. China is not exactly a monolithic state without strife. In the ATL, their conquest of east and southeast Asia is long, messy one, and throughout history the Chinese are constantly forced to quell uprisings within their empire. China is dominated by Han Chinese, who in the ATL become very racist toward non-Han. Since an enlarged China naturally has a multitude of ethnicities within its borders, there is continual internal conflict. Slavery is popular for a long while, especially in the diverse southern part of the empire, after it becomes largely outmoded in the Muslim world. I intend to have at least one violent civil war occur in which the pro-slavery secessionists ultimately fail, but military tech advances considerably. China is not without foreign problems either. The Turks remain economic rivals for centuries and serve as the major competitor for Eurasian dominance. Outright war is rare, but frequent small conflicts over territory occur, from which the Chinese incorporate Muslim tactics into their war doctrine. The Timurids and their descendants, including Delhi, which share borders with China are not friends with the Chinese either, and in more recent years a resurgent Iran has made China very wary.

The conflict over slavery may serve as a major catalyst for the development of democratic governance, as slavery is associated with secession and treason and anti-slavery elements push human rights on the Chinese government. The political dominance of the more liberal Buddhist faith (compared to the conservative Abrahamic religions) allows for more open-minded individuals and facilitates democratization. Also, if I can get China to eventually spark its own Industrial Revolution or borrow from the Muslims, technology and in turn education can improve dramatically, allowing people to become more knowledgeable and more favorable toward better treatment by and more participance in the government. Following the last big civil war, the original imperialist/capitalist style government of China is gradually modified by liberal socialist thought, a change which is accelerated by the global economic depression induced by the devastating terrorist attack of Istanbul. The ideas I present here, including the parts I borrowed from you, are still in the developmental stage, so if something doesn't makes sense, please let me know.

Well it certainly can give you a more scientifically advanced Middle East, if that's what you're going for, sure. It will make European politics a mess, though, as the Horde inevitably breaks down into warring states, which will probably resolve into a Dark Ages style of affairs, with all-powerful Kings drinking themselves silly, surrounded only by lackey nobles, riding into battle for profit rather than honour/glory, etc. Religiously it will also be hard to say what happens, as the Mongols tended to "convert" to whatever religion they thought would make it easiest to control their subjects, and the Mongol controlling classes aren't going to last long before they are either replaced by European nobles or integrated into European society, though. You might be able to engineer Islam taking root but it isn't likely to be uniform across Europe, it's not likely to look like the Middle East form of Islam in religion or in government/society, and it will likely depend on slightly tenuous mini-PODs (i.e. conjuring up a Mongol noble who becomes an Islamic fanatic to advance the cause later on). It's possible, but I don't think it's as ideal as your first idea.
I didn't mean the Mongols would conquer Europe, but rather that they'd go a little further into Europe and smash Italy to pieces before pulling back and/or dissolving as an empire. I'm not sure how this could lead to Baghdad later being spared, but I could probably judiciously employ butterflies to do so. In that way the Islamic civilizations could remain more scientifically advanced, and in turn more technologically powerful, than Europe, allowing for easier conquest of the Christians. In any case, I don't intend to go with this idea; it's just a last-ditch fall-back for me.
 
These discussions are becoming longer and more essay-like as we go. :)


They certainly have. I think this one will be shorter, but since I'm writing this before any of my other replies, I don't know yet. Ask me again in another 90 minutes, when I've finished ;)

I may be getting too precise here, but when you refer to the "5 or 6 cardinals and an elected Pope" do you mean in addition to the 10-20 cardinals or instead of them? And by candidates, do you mean candidates for new Pope or to replace the cardinals? In OTL, Clement died in 1352, presumably of natural causes and not the plague, by which point the plague had mostly run its course through Europe.


You aren't getting too precise, I assure you. Rather, I've fallen back into one of my bad habits - I spend some time thinking up an idea, working it out, and then I assume that the person I am talking to has a direct line into my mind and knows that when I refer to something generic I actually mean that specific thing I'd been fleshing out in my mind. I apologise, let me clarify myself. The "5 or 6 cardinals and an elected Pope" are kind of both in addition to and in replacement of. By this, I mean that after the <insert figure here> number of cardinals' deaths at which point the first Pope dies (the one who was Pope from before the Plague hit), only 5 or 6 Cardinals need die during the election of the next Pope, plus preferably the final elected candidate, to derail the process and make the election of a third Pope unlikely. Thus those 5 or 6 mean the priests being sent to resupply the Cardinals College as we discussed, and heading into the worst areas of the Plague, but also could include existing Cardinals who died during the election process, since the Plague of course killed steadily over a period of 3-4 years rather than killing every victim simultaneously in one immediate outbreak. And of course that "5 or 6" is just a placeholder figure. Considering what we say, about the priests being sent to the Conclave heading due into the worst-ravaged areas, the dead Cardinals during the election could go higher. It's a balancing act. The fewer you kill off at this stage, the less reason that they would struggle to elect a third Pope, which is kind of a story-critical point. The more you kill off, the less realistic it feels. 5 or 6 feels a bit of a weak number, perhaps too small, but you don't want to go much higher or you're starting to prescribe a death rate that's just too high. But this is your TL after all, so I'll leave this decision in your capable hands.

On the second point, by "candidates" I meant wannabe Cardinals, since they would only be confirmed in their position upon reaching their destination, and so deaths on the road wouldn't technically be Cardinals dying. Again, sorry, to my mind it was perfectly clear but I forgot that I hadn't broadcasted my entire thought stream.

Do you suppose the replacement pope could be Innocent VI, who in OTL succeeded Clement VI (albeit later, in 1352)? I guess it doesn't matter much who he is, since he dies shortly thereafter. Also, do you mean Avignon instead of Rome as for where the conclave meets? Otherwise, I'm a little confused.


I can't see any reason it shouldn't be Innocent, but as you say, he's about to die. And I almost certainly did mean Avignon, yes. I apologise, I have a bit of a tendency to associate Avignon with the Anti-Pope since it's so much more convenient to assume that the real Pope is in Rome. It's been a while since I read up properly on this, the details are starting to slip.

There's already a lot of tension over the Avignon-Rome split, which works in my favor, right? It makes it even easier to trigger the Papal Wars. With no Avignon pope, Rome may assert itself again and appoint its own pope. France gets pissed at Italy for this preemption, diplomacy fails as Rome refuses to back down, and war breaks out. Other nations join in the fray, with some siding with France, some with Italy, and some going rogue and declaring their own popes. The Holy Roman Empire fragments as the various little states within bicker and brawl. All this fighting compounded by the ongoing plague serves to tear Europe apart. Granted, it's simplistic and not well fleshed-out, but what do you think?[/quote

Sure, but I think you would be wise not to treat this as like a medieval version of WWII or the Thirty Years War. This isn't going to be a situation where all of Europe is embroiled in one big, destructive conflict. Yes, it's big and destructive, but what you would actually have most likely is several smaller wars all occurring at roughly the same time. For instance, if Castile elects its own Pope, it could get in a dispute when Portugal refuses to acknowledge said Pope after the worst of the plague; perhaps Portugal has their own Pope. So they get in a war which may drag in Aragon as a natural rival to Aragon.
By the by, when I've referred to Popes here I did originally mean actual anti-Popes, but it does occur to me that you needn't actually have loads of rival Popes to provide every casus belli. Rather, you just need some measure of overarching religious authority which claims to be second only to God, maybe only as a stop-gap measure until the plague has gone and travel is safe but refusing to recognise foreign control either way. So while Spain erupts into war you might have, say the University of Paris issuing several polemics criticising England's attempt to create a doctrinal council (Councils were the main threat to Papal infallibility; why not throw in some theological curve balls after all ;)) which provokes another war which drags in Scotland reluctantly, though maybe Scotland has its own religious issues and proceeds to conduct the war separately to France, having fallen out over their own problems. In the east, Poland and Lithuania could both be picking a fight with the Holy Roman Emperor (presently the title rests on the head of the King of Bohemia) over an anti-Pope, but could themselves be fighting internal unrest over several Bishops refusing to acknowledge the decisions of their own King/Archbishops, and thus leading movements within their own country to hand control back to Avignon, or Rome, or something completely different. In Germany, meanwhile, you could just have a kind of anarchy as few states recognise the HRE's solution but none can agree on a solution - the imperial states, especially in the north-west where the Knights dominated, loved taking disputes to war and thus you could have myriad little wars over the issue even though none of the Germans even have their own plan to offer - and in this chaos, family feuds could provide further fuel on the fire. If you really want anarchy you could have vassal rebellions, say a movement in the south of France by several influential Counts to restrict the King's authority, but disguising their protests behind a basic complaint that they want to recognise the Roman Pope for some reason. Remember, though, (if I've read you right) that all of this is just designed to produce a total lack of cohesion to enable a Muslim conquest. You don't need to have Europe tear itself to pieces to the point where the Muslims conquer the continent without firing a shot. A nice period of instability with sporadic bouts of violence and infighting are all you need to accomplish your goal. The rest is just embellishment of the story.

On top of this, you'd probably want several areas of calm, however. Wars are never uniform. There's always good Kings who keep a cool head and stay at peace, there's always areas where the Kings actually come to an agreement and spearhead genuine efforts at Christian unity, and there's always areas where there's just no-one to oppose the King. The trick is not going too far with the chaos, I guess. Also, remember that the wars won't just spontaneously occur but probably will simmer over the course of a number of years before erupting whenever people try to unify the disparate countries and their anti-Popes and get it wrong. This means that the wars will break out at completely different times based on different circumstances and different personality, and some of the "Papal Wars" may well be over and resolved before other parts of Europe erupt into their own Papal Wars. Don't think of it as one big war, but remember it would almost certainly be several smaller ones giving an overarching view to a modern person looking back on history as being a period of total anarchy.

Over time, Delhi's power wanes and the Hindus reclaim much of south India, though their numbers are much smaller than in OTL. This more intense persecution of Hindus will become more important later in the TL. I'm aware that I digressed a bit from the discussion on Orthodox Christianity, but does all this sound like a reasonable series of events?


As far as I know about this stuff, it looks fine, though I personally was under the impression that the Golden Horde mainly collapsed under internal pressure rather than the strain of fighting the Timurids. However, my knowledge of certain parts of this extends to knowing the names of the empires, so don't place total faith in my assertion here.

So if you think a mid-16th century contact will provide enough time for the Aztecs and Incas to sufficiently gear themselves up for a mid-18th century conflict with the Old World, I'm willing to go with a time scale similar to that.


I think it will, but if you feel an event needs an extra 50 years to develop, give it the extra time. It's usually best to err on the side of caution. Personally I would consider not even thinking about what year "the modern day" is set in until you're probably only one or two hundred years away, but you've got to do what suits you best. Either way, I reckon there's enough time for everything to develop properly according to the (very) rough guideline I sketched in my last post.


Speaking of technology, some prior discussions on this TL have indicated the unlikelihood that an Industrial Revolution would come about in the TL, even a delayed one, without Europeans digging for coal and iron in northwest Europe as they did in OTL.....They would not proceed in exactly the same fashion or pace as in OTL, as that's unrealistic, and they'd start later, too. I'm hoping for an enterprising Chinese emperor to make China more open to outside trade and foreign technology than in OTL so that China isn't outpaced by the Muslim world.


You're right, of course. With coal comes the ability to use steam for power, and I think the Muslims have everything going for them to invent such machines. However, the thing to consider is that you need the right economic and social conditions for the Industrial Revolution to take off. With coal and iron you have the Industrial, but it's not "Revolution"ary unless you have a society which has evolved beyond the medieval, to a state where you can have big (relatively) companies able to import their own supplies of coal in large quantities as well as the iron, and then to ship out the resulting products in large quantities. If you gave 1400s England the vast quantities of coal to do stuff with, and the ability to use blast furnaces and such, then the only real by-product would be the vague introduction of steel into the world; there wouldn't be a huge boom in production and money because individual skilled labourers don't have the resources to run blast furnaces on their own, only a few individuals could do it. Similarly, if everyone still thinks the only way to make cloth is by hand, then the the first industrial machines which set the English economy going (the spinning jenny, etc etc I can't recall the other ones immediately) won't be invented because no-one will realise there's a need to use big machines to be more efficient, and those machines are what gives the whole steampunk tech stuff the incentive to sudden shoot up from nothing. So in short, you need a society where companies are starting to grow and look for efficiency - this probably equates to however mercantilism turns out in your TL. Sure, there can be an Industrial Revolution, but it can only be a Revolution if society is ready to make it a Revolution.

If you don't mind, I may incorporate some of your ideas or variants thereof into the TL.


Please do. I enjoy being able to share ideas with other people, and if they think them good enough to use themselves then I really feel like I'm achieving something :). Thank you.

Ah, so what prevented penetration inland from the coastal European colonies in sub-Saharan Africa was mainly the lack of penicillin? I had envisioned a Scramble for Africa by more powerful foreign nations, but if I delay the discovery of penicillin or something similar so that the indigenous peoples of Africa (and the Americas) can grow in power enough to develop better tech on their own and/or acquire it from elsewhere. However, I do fear that the low population of the native people of Australia and Oceanic won't prevent the Chinese from incorporating them into its Pacific empire, but that is probably unavoidable.


Actually my statement was kind of half-cocked. What stops a country expanding southwards over the Sahara is the Sahara. There's no need for penicillin because there's no-one there to catch diseases off. Try marching an army through the Sahara and you will assuredly run out of water before finding anything to conquer. However, penicillin is what is needed to avoid the issues when you go around the edges of the Sahara and try to penetrate the African interior from much further south (which limits the approach to only the countries on the far east and west of Africa anyway, since a country in Algeria, say, is hardly going to be able to march around via Morocco go get to Nigeria. Once you get to the more fertile land south of the Sahara where the land is actually worth conquering, you need the penicillin to avoid massive loss of life to tropical disease - it would frankly take too long and too many deaths to acclimatise an entire ruling class and army to the diseases to make trying this worthwhile. Hence, of course, why the Scramble For Africa occurred only a handful of years after penicillin was discovered, and why a lot of historians will generalise to say that penicillin facilitated the conquering of the African interior. The only other contact the Maghreb has with sub-Saharan Africa occurred via Bedouin traders, and I guarantee you that no matter what you do you cannot make a feasible empire reliant on Bedouins to hold the faraway conquered province in thrall to the capital.

As I understand it, the Incas had better technology than the Aztecs, with some knowledge of bronze-working. Also, the other tribes under their dominion didn't have the same animosity toward the Incas that the human-sacrificing Aztecs' subjects did. I think this would give the Incas an initial edge which would keep them even with the Aztecs if the Aztecs acquired Old World tech a few decades ahead of the Incas. I also intend to have the Aztecs go through some social upheaval at some point as human sacrifice becomes increasingly unpopular among a better educated citizenry.


Sounds fun, and I think you're right about the bronze-working.

I like your idea of having the native American civilizations form loose alliances with competing Old World colonial powers better than my full-on proxy war idea. Maybe the Aztecs and Incas could hire private advisors from the Old World (or they could ask for advice in exchange for military assistance) to help them govern their vast empires and avoid collapse. Ultimately, I envision the Turks to have control over eastern North America, the Chinese over western North America, and the Mamluks over eastern South America. How's about that?


Military advisors are an inalienable part of the spread of technology and the alliances with "less civilised" powers - they tend to be sent directly from the interested (European-based) government to ensure that the ally becomes as functional and deadly to opponents as possible - so that's eminently plausible. As for the Turks/Mamluks thing - it all sounds fine, though I would advise considering that the more likely parties to get involved in America are the bigger Islamic states who have Atlantic access. If you intend Europe to be full of smaller, bickering emirates or vassals to more Mediterranean-based powers, or just want to promote the Turks and Mamluks that's fine, but if you do persist with them then I'd recommend you find a reason that they become the dominant parties in the Americas over the other candidates. Remember, for instance, that the Ottomans never tried colonising IRL, neither did the Mamluks, because they were centred on Middle Eastern affairs (animosity with Christianity of course added to this problem) and it's no coincidence that the biggest imperial states of the 19th century, the height of empire, were the ones furthest west in Europe. The others just didn't get a look in, because the Atlantic access was a huge advantage. As I say above, there are ways around this, but they are ways that need to be explained in your TL. Otherwise, I like it all.


All the stuff about China and the rest of the post sounds cool - I didn't quote it to save space. Nice work, though.
 
How so, Bill?


DJC,

I think this "melded" sentence should explain things nicely. Falastur's original sentence will be in italics while the actual dates of the events mentioned will be in bold:

The Scramble For Africa occurred between 1880 and 1914 only a handful of years after penicillin was discovered in 1928.

See the problem?


Bill
 
DJC,

I think this "melded" sentence should explain things nicely. Falastur's original sentence will be in italics while the actual dates of the events mentioned will be in bold:

The Scramble For Africa occurred between 1880 and 1914 only a handful of years after penicillin was discovered in 1928.

See the problem?


Bill

No, I meant how does it sum up the entire thread? What other errors have we made?
 
No, I meant how does it sum up the entire thread? What other errors have we made?


DJC,

I don't like the word "error". :(

Falastur has already pointed out the fact of the Little Ice Age and, in a paradox, making things colder is going to help Europe survive the Black Plague by killing off rats and fleas. Starvation will be a problem, but someplace in Europe was always starving during this period.

Changing the climate that much should also have a greater effect on Europe's immediate neighbors and societies around the world.

The less said about Vinland the better.

Finally, given the substantial changes you're making so far in the past, your time line's "Current Day/2009 Situation" isn't changed enough.

I think we're looking at a rupture as great as the somewhat mis-named Grecian dark ages.


Bill
 
DJC,

I don't like the word "error". :(

Falastur has already pointed out the fact of the Little Ice Age and, in a paradox, making things colder is going to help Europe survive the Black Plague by killing off rats and fleas. Starvation will be a problem, but someplace in Europe was always starving during this period.

Changing the climate that much should also have a greater effect on Europe's immediate neighbors and societies around the world.

The less said about Vinland the better.

Finally, given the substantial changes you're making so far in the past, your time line's "Current Day/2009 Situation" isn't changed enough.

I think we're looking at a rupture as great as the somewhat mis-named Grecian dark ages.


Bill

Well, the timeline has been evolving considerably. I've essentially discarded the Black Winter idea and the neo-Vinland idea. I'm trying to make some interesting parallels to OTL using different players. The "present" in the TL is (so far) going to be sometime in the 2100s, when a world war breaks out in which the primary belligerents have technology somewhat comparable to that of OTL WWI. I'm hoping that the conquest of pre-industrial Europe won't automatically mean that no one else will achieve a similar industrial revolution, though it would take more time to get to that point than in OTL. I'd like to think that non-Europeans would have been capable of eventually going industrial on their own had European civilization been taken out of the picture.
 
DJC,

I think this "melded" sentence should explain things nicely. Falastur's original sentence will be in italics while the actual dates of the events mentioned will be in bold:

The Scramble For Africa occurred between 1880 and 1914 only a handful of years after penicillin was discovered in 1928.

See the problem?


Bill

OK, that's fine. I wrote this at 5am when I was feeling tired, and made a mistake. I should have checked that fact. Whenever I say something here, I never claim to be an authority about it. I say what I've read to be accurate, and I wait for someone to challenge me so that I can expand my knowledge. In this case, I made a stupid comment because at the time, I thought it was right. Having looked it up, I should have said "quinine" instead of "penicillin", and yes there was still a significant delay between quinine being mass-produced and the Scramble for Africa, but what I've read suggested it was a factor.

You seem to suggest that everything else I've written here is either wrong or naively inaccurate. I offer you the chance to take over my role here and correct my mistakes. I probably don't know enough to make all the suggestions that I am here without significant scrutiny and disproving, so I'd be happy for someone who knows more to take over.
 
OK, that's fine. I wrote this at 5am when I was feeling tired, and made a mistake. I should have checked that fact. Whenever I say something here, I never claim to be an authority about it. I say what I've read to be accurate, and I wait for someone to challenge me so that I can expand my knowledge. In this case, I made a stupid comment because at the time, I thought it was right. Having looked it up, I should have said "quinine" instead of "penicillin", and yes there was still a significant delay between quinine being mass-produced and the Scramble for Africa, but what I've read suggested it was a factor.

You seem to suggest that everything else I've written here is either wrong or naively inaccurate. I offer you the chance to take over my role here and correct my mistakes. I probably don't know enough to make all the suggestions that I am here without significant scrutiny and disproving, so I'd be happy for someone who knows more to take over.

Hey, Falastur, don't leave :( -- you've been very helpful. Bill can add his two cents if he wants, but I'd still greatly appreciate your input, as you have been doing.
 
1 - The asteroid cooling the Gulf Stream. Two points here. One is, Europe is already experiencing what is known as the "Little Ice Age", circa 1200-1600 AD. The world in general is colder at this point, and as an example, the Thames in London is recorded as freezing so solid every year that Londoners used to hold the city market on the river for about 2 months over winter - the Thames itself would be frozen for 3-4 months, which gives you an indication of the level of cold.


Sorry, have to correct you there. 1348 is just at the tail end of the medieval warm period. Temperatures were dropping from the highs of the 11th century, we aren't at the level of cold required to freeze the Thames, the first frost fair on the Thames took place in 1607. We still have around 5000 norse living in Greenland etc...

See temp graph below

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We don't really know how much fresh water would be required to disrupt the thermohaline circulation in the North Atlantic. The last time climatologists think this happened was 8,000yrs ago when the ice dam on lake Agassiz broke and drained an area twice that of the Great Lakes through the St-Lawrence river.

Cheers,
 
Sorry, have to correct you there. 1348 is just at the tail end of the medieval warm period.

Fair enough, though on this topic at least I am not wrong when I say that many historians say the Little Ice Age started before 1348 (though there is disagreement), and it's certainly a whole lot colder then than it is IRL, which was half of my point. Still, you clearly know more about this stuff than me, so I invite you to correct the TL as regards these issues where I am incapable of doing so (accurately).
 
First, I'd like to speak up in defense of Falastur -- he's helped me substantially with this TL, his replies have been in-depth, thoughtful, and highly informative, and I hope he continues to add his input. Second, I'd like to remind everyone that I've already decided to drop the Black Winter idea in favor of the Papal Wars idea.
 
First, I'd like to speak up in defense of Falastur -- he's helped me substantially with this TL, his replies have been in-depth, thoughtful, and highly informative, and I hope he continues to add his input. Second, I'd like to remind everyone that I've already decided to drop the Black Winter idea in favor of the Papal Wars idea.

No offense meant, I just read the first response, didn't see the rest of the discussion. (let that be a lesson to me :))
 
You aren't getting too precise, I assure you. Rather, I've fallen back into one of my bad habits - I spend some time thinking up an idea, working it out, and then I assume that the person I am talking to has a direct line into my mind and knows that when I refer to something generic I actually mean that specific thing I'd been fleshing out in my mind. I apologise, let me clarify myself. The "5 or 6 cardinals and an elected Pope" are kind of both in addition to and in replacement of. By this, I mean that after the <insert figure here> number of cardinals' deaths at which point the first Pope dies (the one who was Pope from before the Plague hit), only 5 or 6 Cardinals need die during the election of the next Pope, plus preferably the final elected candidate, to derail the process and make the election of a third Pope unlikely. Thus those 5 or 6 mean the priests being sent to resupply the Cardinals College as we discussed, and heading into the worst areas of the Plague, but also could include existing Cardinals who died during the election process, since the Plague of course killed steadily over a period of 3-4 years rather than killing every victim simultaneously in one immediate outbreak. And of course that "5 or 6" is just a placeholder figure. Considering what we say, about the priests being sent to the Conclave heading due into the worst-ravaged areas, the dead Cardinals during the election could go higher. It's a balancing act. The fewer you kill off at this stage, the less reason that they would struggle to elect a third Pope, which is kind of a story-critical point. The more you kill off, the less realistic it feels. 5 or 6 feels a bit of a weak number, perhaps too small, but you don't want to go much higher or you're starting to prescribe a death rate that's just too high. But this is your TL after all, so I'll leave this decision in your capable hands.

On the second point, by "candidates" I meant wannabe Cardinals, since they would only be confirmed in their position upon reaching their destination, and so deaths on the road wouldn't technically be Cardinals dying. Again, sorry, to my mind it was perfectly clear but I forgot that I hadn't broadcasted my entire thought stream.
Sure, but I think you would be wise not to treat this as like a medieval version of WWII or the Thirty Years War. This isn't going to be a situation where all of Europe is embroiled in one big, destructive conflict. Yes, it's big and destructive, but what you would actually have most likely is several smaller wars all occurring at roughly the same time. For instance, if Castile elects its own Pope, it could get in a dispute when Portugal refuses to acknowledge said Pope after the worst of the plague; perhaps Portugal has their own Pope. So they get in a war which may drag in Aragon as a natural rival to Aragon. By the by, when I've referred to Popes here I did originally mean actual anti-Popes, but it does occur to me that you needn't actually have loads of rival Popes to provide every casus belli. Rather, you just need some measure of overarching religious authority which claims to be second only to God, maybe only as a stop-gap measure until the plague has gone and travel is safe but refusing to recognise foreign control either way. So while Spain erupts into war you might have, say the University of Paris issuing several polemics criticising England's attempt to create a doctrinal council (Councils were the main threat to Papal infallibility; why not throw in some theological curve balls after all) which provokes another war which drags in Scotland reluctantly, though maybe Scotland has its own religious issues and proceeds to conduct the war separately to France, having fallen out over their own problems. In the east, Poland and Lithuania could both be picking a fight with the Holy Roman Emperor (presently the title rests on the head of the King of Bohemia) over an anti-Pope, but could themselves be fighting internal unrest over several Bishops refusing to acknowledge the decisions of their own King/Archbishops, and thus leading movements within their own country to hand control back to Avignon, or Rome, or something completely different. In Germany, meanwhile, you could just have a kind of anarchy as few states recognise the HRE's solution but none can agree on a solution - the imperial states, especially in the north-west where the Knights dominated, loved taking disputes to war and thus you could have myriad little wars over the issue even though none of the Germans even have their own plan to offer - and in this chaos, family feuds could provide further fuel on the fire. If you really want anarchy you could have vassal rebellions, say a movement in the south of France by several influential Counts to restrict the King's authority, but disguising their protests behind a basic complaint that they want to recognise the Roman Pope for some reason. Remember, though, (if I've read you right) that all of this is just designed to produce a total lack of cohesion to enable a Muslim conquest. You don't need to have Europe tear itself to pieces to the point where the Muslims conquer the continent without firing a shot. A nice period of instability with sporadic bouts of violence and infighting are all you need to accomplish your goal. The rest is just embellishment of the story.
On top of this, you'd probably want several areas of calm, however. Wars are never uniform. There's always good Kings who keep a cool head and stay at peace, there's always areas where the Kings actually come to an agreement and spearhead genuine efforts at Christian unity, and there's always areas where there's just no-one to oppose the King. The trick is not going too far with the chaos, I guess. Also, remember that the wars won't just spontaneously occur but probably will simmer over the course of a number of years before erupting whenever people try to unify the disparate countries and their anti-Popes and get it wrong. This means that the wars will break out at completely different times based on different circumstances and different personality, and some of the "Papal Wars" may well be over and resolved before other parts of Europe erupt into their own Papal Wars. Don't think of it as one big war, but remember it would almost certainly be several smaller ones giving an overarching view to a modern person looking back on history as being a period of total anarchy.
I did some rummaging around in Wikipedia and learned here that the College of Cardinals never exceeded more than thirty members prior to 1555. The conclave which met to elect Innocent VI in 1352 had only 25 members (out of the 26 living cardinals), 12 of which were promoted to cardinal in 1350. That year, the cardinals approved a capitulation to limit the number of members to 20, although Innocent VI declared this invalid shortly thereafter. The conclave prior to this, in 1342, had only 17 of 19 living cardinals present. So we're looking at probably about 19-26 cardinals maximum attending the ATL conclave of 1348 after Clement VI's premature death by plague. However, it appears from the list of cardinals that they didn't have far to travel; rather than coming from all over Europe, they were mostly located in Italy to begin with. I hope that the short travel distance from Italy to Avignon (and thus less exposure time) won't make the cardinals' deaths unrealistic. The article on Innocent VI indicates he was more paranoid about the plague than Clement VI; Innocent surrounded himself with fire to purify the air while Clement shunned this strategy in favor of pastoral care of the infected. Still, that doesn't mean Innocent couldn't get infected in spite of his caution, as all it takes is one flea. So here's what I'm thinking:

In early 1348, Pope Clement VI dies of plague. Forced to travel through heavily-infected areas, of the 21 cardinals sent to the conclave (several recently elevated), 5 are infected by the plague in transit. Three die before they reach the conclave and two die during the election process. The remaining 16 (including Etienne Aubert = Innocent) elect Innocent the new pope that year and return home. Of these, 3 more die on the way back. Despite his "precautions," Innocent succumbs to the plague within a month of his election. Meanwhile, 4 of the priests sent to replace the lost cardinals die of plague along the way to their posts. Given the losses already, the remaining cardinals are quite wary of traveling to hold another conclave and collectively decide to wait until the plague passes. (Note: I don't think it's necessary to be so precise with the numbers in the TL itself; maybe I can be more general and say "a few" or "several.")

Word quickly spreads of France's decision, and the nations of Europe (already fighting each other in the first part of the Hundred Years' War) are dismayed and now feel bereft of spiritual leadership. France appoints its own pope to Avignon, to the outrage of the rest of Europe. With the support of the Holy Roman Empire, the Papal States appoint a different pope in Rome, where they claim the pope should be in the first place. While diplomats in France and the HRE bicker over the best way to handle the situation, England issues particularly vitriolic response to France's unilateral decision and sets up a doctrinal council (a.k.a. "synod"?) in London to question the decisions of the Avignon pope. Naturally, Paris takes offense, and cooler heads fail to prevail. The OTL Edwardian War phase of the Hundred Years' war escalates as the English and French redouble their efforts. Scotland and Ireland take advantage of the distracted England by stirring up peasant revolts against English "tyranny."

The lack of centralization in the HRE foments disagreement between the numerous constituent states. The leading dissident faction establishes a doctrinal council in Nuremberg to serve as a temporary substitute for the pope. Various conflicts erupt within the HRE as one state picks a fight with another over the matter; the Teutonic Knights prove notorious for their role as key instigators. While no cohesive fronts are established amongst the belligerent parties (the disputes occurring in something of a free-for-all), the fighting is collectively referred to a civil war within the HRE. Exacerbating the problem for Holy Roman Emperor Charles IV are Poland and Lithuania, who seek resolution of the conflict in the HRE over the rightful pope and are increasingly willing to intervene militarily. Like England, other areas of Europe are dissatisfied with the improperly appointed Avignon and Rome popes. [As you suggested,] Castile appoints its own pope in Burgos but Portugal refuses to accept this imposter, instead favoring the Rome pope. Hoping to weaken their rival Castile (and perhaps gain favor in Italy), Aragon supports Portugal and an Iberian War breaks out.

What do you suppose might happen with southeast Europe? Hungarian king Louis I seems to be something of a warmonger, so I'd anticipate his involvement in the Papal Wars in one way or another. (Maybe he'd declare himself Pope.) He wasn't friendly to Venice and Naples in OTL, so they'd probably side against him (along with Neapolitan client Greece) in whatever he does, while Hungarian vassals Wallachia and Moldavia might side with him. Poland, Serbia, and Bulgaria were later conquered by him, so they likely would oppose Hungary too. Presumably, the Byzantines would keep out of the fight, though that won't do much good when the Ottomans come. Also, what of northern Europe? Orthodox Novgorod would probably remain impartial, but what might happen in Denmark, Sweden, and Norway? Maybe they could remain the most stable Catholic areas, simply waiting out the conflict in a peaceful manner.

What do you think? Too many popes? I tried to incorporate the ideas you suggested, but my general unfamiliarity with medieval European politics leaves me at a disadvantage. I am learning, though...

As far as I know about this stuff, it looks fine, though I personally was under the impression that the Golden Horde mainly collapsed under internal pressure rather than the strain of fighting the Timurids. However, my knowledge of certain parts of this extends to knowing the names of the empires, so don't place total faith in my assertion here.
My old friend Wikipedia says here that the Black Death a major contributing factor to the collapse of the Horde. Then there was also the assassination of Jani Beg which led to a civil war, and then Timur/Tamerlane came and crushed one of their armies, and then there was another civil war, and the Horde fragmented into various Khanates which were eventually incorporated into the Ottoman Empire and/or Russia. So in my TL, I intend for the Horde to fragment in a similar fashion, except that there's no powerful Russia which emerges (the Turks take over western Russia instead).

I think it will, but if you feel an event needs an extra 50 years to develop, give it the extra time. It's usually best to err on the side of caution. Personally I would consider not even thinking about what year "the modern day" is set in until you're probably only one or two hundred years away, but you've got to do what suits you best. Either way, I reckon there's enough time for everything to develop properly according to the (very) rough guideline I sketched in my last post.
The "modern day" in the TL, as in when the world war takes place, is not set in stone; I'm willing to move it around in time as needed. My most recent estimate, based largely on your advice, for the start of a WWI-type war would be in the 2100s, though the development of various technologies will occur differently than in OTL. It can always change, though -- in fact, I prefer to err on the side of caution, so long as it's realistic.

You're right, of course. With coal comes the ability to use steam for power, and I think the Muslims have everything going for them to invent such machines. However, the thing to consider is that you need the right economic and social conditions for the Industrial Revolution to take off. With coal and iron you have the Industrial, but it's not "Revolution"ary unless you have a society which has evolved beyond the medieval, to a state where you can have big (relatively) companies able to import their own supplies of coal in large quantities as well as the iron, and then to ship out the resulting products in large quantities. If you gave 1400s England the vast quantities of coal to do stuff with, and the ability to use blast furnaces and such, then the only real by-product would be the vague introduction of steel into the world; there wouldn't be a huge boom in production and money because individual skilled labourers don't have the resources to run blast furnaces on their own, only a few individuals could do it. Similarly, if everyone still thinks the only way to make cloth is by hand, then the the first industrial machines which set the English economy going (the spinning jenny, etc etc I can't recall the other ones immediately) won't be invented because no-one will realise there's a need to use big machines to be more efficient, and those machines are what gives the whole steampunk tech stuff the incentive to sudden shoot up from nothing. So in short, you need a society where companies are starting to grow and look for efficiency - this probably equates to however mercantilism turns out in your TL. Sure, there can be an Industrial Revolution, but it can only be a Revolution if society is ready to make it a Revolution.
It doesn't necessarily need to be "revolutionary"; perhaps I should simply say "industrialization" instead of "Industrial Revolution," as it could take place over a long period of time or in spurts. Economics is far from my strong point, but if I understand it correctly, mercantilism was heavily intertwined with European imperialism and provided the foundation for modern capitalism, and socialism developed later in response to the excesses of capitalism. In the ATL, the major imperialist powers could similarly develop alt-capitalist economies. The Turks, the Chinese, and (to a lesser extent) the Mamluks are all competing against each other from an economic aspect for a long time, and competition can provide the motivation for innovation in industry. (The industrial achievements of OTL will, of course, not be exactly mirrored in the ATL.) I had intended for an alt-socialism to manifest itself eventually, and in the case of the Mamluks, come to be the dominant economic philosophy (a la Russia of OTL).

Please do. I enjoy being able to share ideas with other people, and if they think them good enough to use themselves then I really feel like I'm achieving something. Thank you.
No -- thank you. :)

Actually my statement was kind of half-cocked. What stops a country expanding southwards over the Sahara is the Sahara. There's no need for penicillin because there's no-one there to catch diseases off. Try marching an army through the Sahara and you will assuredly run out of water before finding anything to conquer. However, penicillin is what is needed to avoid the issues when you go around the edges of the Sahara and try to penetrate the African interior from much further south (which limits the approach to only the countries on the far east and west of Africa anyway, since a country in Algeria, say, is hardly going to be able to march around via Morocco go get to Nigeria. Once you get to the more fertile land south of the Sahara where the land is actually worth conquering, you need the penicillin to avoid massive loss of life to tropical disease - it would frankly take too long and too many deaths to acclimatise an entire ruling class and army to the diseases to make trying this worthwhile. Hence, of course, why the Scramble For Africa occurred only a handful of years after penicillin was discovered, and why a lot of historians will generalise to say that penicillin facilitated the conquering of the African interior. The only other contact the Maghreb has with sub-Saharan Africa occurred via Bedouin traders, and I guarantee you that no matter what you do you cannot make a feasible empire reliant on Bedouins to hold the faraway conquered province in thrall to the capital.
As Bill helpfully pointed out, it was quinine instead of penicillin which was developed first and helped permit penetration into the African interior from the coasts, but that's just a detail -- all of your points, Falastur, remain perfectly valid. I think all I need to do to is delay the discovery of quinine (or some analogue thereof) long enough to give the African empires time to develop a sufficient technological base to ward off greedy foreign imperialists.

Military advisors are an inalienable part of the spread of technology and the alliances with "less civilised" powers - they tend to be sent directly from the interested (European-based) government to ensure that the ally becomes as functional and deadly to opponents as possible - so that's eminently plausible. As for the Turks/Mamluks thing - it all sounds fine, though I would advise considering that the more likely parties to get involved in America are the bigger Islamic states who have Atlantic access. If you intend Europe to be full of smaller, bickering emirates or vassals to more Mediterranean-based powers, or just want to promote the Turks and Mamluks that's fine, but if you do persist with them then I'd recommend you find a reason that they become the dominant parties in the Americas over the other candidates. Remember, for instance, that the Ottomans never tried colonising IRL, neither did the Mamluks, because they were centred on Middle Eastern affairs (animosity with Christianity of course added to this problem) and it's no coincidence that the biggest imperial states of the 19th century, the height of empire, were the ones furthest west in Europe. The others just didn't get a look in, because the Atlantic access was a huge advantage. As I say above, there are ways around this, but they are ways that need to be explained in your TL. Otherwise, I like it all.
The Turks and Mamluks will become the dominant powers in western Eurasia and northern Africa. In OTL, the Ottomans did manage to push pretty far into southeastern Europe, but in the ATL, they'll be able to sweep through all of Europe. This gives the Mamluks a break, since in OTL they were destroyed by the Turks, but in the ATL, the Turks are distracted by taking and holding down Europe. Thus, the Mamluks are free to carve their own empire out of Arabia and northern Africa. Since both the Turks and Mamluks have capitals (Istanbul and Cairo, respectively) which have Mediterranean sea access, the Marinids, who control the Strait of Gibraltar (a.k.a. Bab al-Zakat), are seen as a common enemy and are eventually conquered in Iberia by the Turks and in Morocco by the Mamluks. So both the Turks and Mamluks will gain Atlantic access and will be the next wave of Muslims to contact the Americas after the Marinids.
 
So here's what I'm thinking:

In early 1348, Pope Clement VI dies of plague. Forced to travel through heavily-infected areas, of the 21 cardinals sent to the conclave (several recently elevated), 5 are infected by the plague in transit. Three die before they reach the conclave and two die during the election process. The remaining 16 (including Etienne Aubert = Innocent) elect Innocent the new pope that year and return home. Of these, 3 more die on the way back. Despite his "precautions," Innocent succumbs to the plague within a month of his election. Meanwhile, 4 of the priests sent to replace the lost cardinals die of plague along the way to their posts. Given the losses already, the remaining cardinals are quite wary of traveling to hold another conclave and collectively decide to wait until the plague passes. (Note: I don't think it's necessary to be so precise with the numbers in the TL itself; maybe I can be more general and say "a few" or "several.")


Sounds fine so far.

Word quickly spreads of France's decision, and the nations of Europe (already fighting each other in the first part of the Hundred Years' War) are dismayed and now feel bereft of spiritual leadership. France appoints its own pope to Avignon, to the outrage of the rest of Europe. With the support of the Holy Roman Empire, the Papal States appoint a different pope in Rome, where they claim the pope should be in the first place. While diplomats in France and the HRE bicker over the best way to handle the situation, England issues particularly vitriolic response to France's unilateral decision and sets up a doctrinal council (a.k.a. "synod"?) in London to question the decisions of the Avignon pope. Naturally, Paris takes offense, and cooler heads fail to prevail. The OTL Edwardian War phase of the Hundred Years' war escalates as the English and French redouble their efforts. Scotland and Ireland take advantage of the distracted England by stirring up peasant revolts against English "tyranny."


Fine except, what do you mean "against English tyranny"? Inciting revolt inside another country wasn't really a tactic used in this period, though offering support to existing rebels was. If you're looking at them attempting to tear England apart then you've probably got enough ammunition in the religious rebellions which are entirely plausible, but my advice would just be to avoid suggesting that what is happening is the Scots and Irish are creating the unrest themselves. They don't have the ability. For that matter, the Irish lack the unity and strength to interfere in English affairs, except by raiding the English settlements in Ireland. You aren't going to be able to get Irish armies assaulting England proper - no way, no how - and they probably wouldn't do anything coordinated with Scotland either. In this era, Scotland viewed the Irish as a potential conquest, too, or at least as a region needing outside control to pacify it. The idea of pan-Gaelic cooperation just does not exist in this era.

The lack of centralization in the HRE foments disagreement between the numerous constituent states. The leading dissident faction establishes a doctrinal council in Nuremberg to serve as a temporary substitute for the pope. Various conflicts erupt within the HRE as one state picks a fight with another over the matter; the Teutonic Knights prove notorious for their role as key instigators. While no cohesive fronts are established amongst the belligerent parties (the disputes occurring in something of a free-for-all), the fighting is collectively referred to a civil war within the HRE. Exacerbating the problem for Holy Roman Emperor Charles IV are Poland and Lithuania, who seek resolution of the conflict in the HRE over the rightful pope and are increasingly willing to intervene militarily. Like England, other areas of Europe are dissatisfied with the improperly appointed Avignon and Rome popes. [As you suggested,] Castile appoints its own pope in Burgos but Portugal refuses to accept this imposter, instead favoring the Rome pope. Hoping to weaken their rival Castile (and perhaps gain favor in Italy), Aragon supports Portugal and an Iberian War breaks out.


Very reasonable, IMO.

What do you suppose might happen with southeast Europe? Hungarian king Louis I seems to be something of a warmonger, so I'd anticipate his involvement in the Papal Wars in one way or another. (Maybe he'd declare himself Pope.) He wasn't friendly to Venice and Naples in OTL, so they'd probably side against him (along with Neapolitan client Greece) in whatever he does, while Hungarian vassals Wallachia and Moldavia might side with him. Poland, Serbia, and Bulgaria were later conquered by him, so they likely would oppose Hungary too. Presumably, the Byzantines would keep out of the fight, though that won't do much good when the Ottomans come. Also, what of northern Europe? Orthodox Novgorod would probably remain impartial, but what might happen in Denmark, Sweden, and Norway? Maybe they could remain the most stable Catholic areas, simply waiting out the conflict in a peaceful manner.


I think any ruler declaring themselves Pope is a little far-fetched...save perhaps one of the German sovereign Arch-bishops. He does, however, sound a prime candidate for the kind of guy to declare his own solution to the problem, then start using military force to make his immediate neighbours accept his solution. Demanding people honour his ideas, walking into conflicts that aren't his, trying to place his candidate in Rome itself, even, by simply marching him there at the head of an army.

What do you think? Too many popes? I tried to incorporate the ideas you suggested, but my general unfamiliarity with medieval European politics leaves me at a disadvantage. I am learning, though...


Certainly I wouldn't try to shoot for more than 4-5 potential Popes. 4 is probably the highest I'd go. Remember to an extent you can use willing suspension of disbelief in your TL by overemphasising the anarchy and chaos of the period.

My old friend Wikipedia says here that the Black Death a major contributing factor to the collapse of the Horde. Then there was also the assassination of Jani Beg which led to a civil war, and then Timur/Tamerlane came and crushed one of their armies, and then there was another civil war, and the Horde fragmented into various Khanates which were eventually incorporated into the Ottoman Empire and/or Russia. So in my TL, I intend for the Horde to fragment in a similar fashion, except that there's no powerful Russia which emerges (the Turks take over western Russia instead).


OK.

The "modern day" in the TL, as in when the world war takes place, is not set in stone; I'm willing to move it around in time as needed. My most recent estimate, based largely on your advice, for the start of a WWI-type war would be in the 2100s, though the development of various technologies will occur differently than in OTL. It can always change, though -- in fact, I prefer to err on the side of caution, so long as it's realistic.


Sure, just thought I should point out the need to let your TL control the details where necessary - working to preset end conditions often restricts you to an extent.

It doesn't necessarily need to be "revolutionary"; perhaps I should simply say "industrialization" instead of "Industrial Revolution," as it could take place over a long period of time or in spurts. Economics is far from my strong point, but if I understand it correctly, mercantilism was heavily intertwined with European imperialism and provided the foundation for modern capitalism, and socialism developed later in response to the excesses of capitalism. In the ATL, the major imperialist powers could similarly develop alt-capitalist economies. The Turks, the Chinese, and (to a lesser extent) the Mamluks are all competing against each other from an economic aspect for a long time, and competition can provide the motivation for innovation in industry. (The industrial achievements of OTL will, of course, not be exactly mirrored in the ATL.) I had intended for an alt-socialism to manifest itself eventually, and in the case of the Mamluks, come to be the dominant economic philosophy (a la Russia of OTL).


Logical, I never really gave enough thought to the idea of a slow industrialisation process but actually it'd be quite an interesting idea. I'll back you on this one, I like it.

As Bill helpfully pointed out, it was quinine instead of penicillin which was developed first and helped permit penetration into the African interior from the coasts, but that's just a detail -- all of your points, Falastur, remain perfectly valid. I think all I need to do to is delay the discovery of quinine (or some analogue thereof) long enough to give the African empires time to develop a sufficient technological base to ward off greedy foreign imperialists.


I'm not 100% on this, but I reckon there could be other ways. Waiting for every other civilisation to bring itself up to scratch technologically etc isn't a fully plausible idea - to an extent, it would just take an unlikely amount of work to build them up like the Aztecs and Incas could be, and since Africa isn't accommodating to sprawling trading colonies, the exposure to "civilisation" wouldn't come fast at all. I would suggest that you tried to find a way that lets African tribal states come to an understanding with your Islamic empires in Eurasia and North Africa. Maybe the expansion outwards of the Mamluks etc about the time when they first try cross-Atlantic voyages also involves trips around Africa to the east, which brings more exposure to states like the Ashanti and maybe even the Congo kingdoms. Rather than just claiming swathes of the coast and settling it gradually a la RL European states, they respect the Islamic states and spread Islam further south, before trying to get those states to subscribe to the Caliphate ideal - that is, pledging religious homage to a Caliph (one of the Islamic rulers, maybe the Mamluk ruler since at times IRL the Mamluks claimed the Caliphate. This also carried very, very, very loose political homage ideals too. Essentially the African states stay self-ruling but by recognising Mamluk/whoever suzerainty they are protected from conquest and are free to develop on their own. Over time, the growing technology leads to growing levels of contact and, being Mamluk/whoever vassals, they are given access to weaponry and so on etc and are slowly "westernised" or whatever this reality's version of that is. That, or you could simply have a lack of intent to colonise "undesirable" areas lead to the Islamic states being far more diplomatic to the more powerful African states (of which there were quite a few) - you could even go for your proxy wars idea with different states sponsoring different African tribal kingdoms to conquer their surroundings and war other proxies for control of swathes of Africa with no exposure to disease and horrid climates necessary.

The Turks and Mamluks will become the dominant powers in western Eurasia and northern Africa. In OTL, the Ottomans did manage to push pretty far into southeastern Europe, but in the ATL, they'll be able to sweep through all of Europe. This gives the Mamluks a break, since in OTL they were destroyed by the Turks, but in the ATL, the Turks are distracted by taking and holding down Europe. Thus, the Mamluks are free to carve their own empire out of Arabia and northern Africa. Since both the Turks and Mamluks have capitals (Istanbul and Cairo, respectively) which have Mediterranean sea access, the Marinids, who control the Strait of Gibraltar (a.k.a. Bab al-Zakat), are seen as a common enemy and are eventually conquered in Iberia by the Turks and in Morocco by the Mamluks. So both the Turks and Mamluks will gain Atlantic access and will be the next wave of Muslims to contact the Americas after the Marinids.

OK, cool. All of that sounds great. I would, however, encourage you to mention other (weaker) Islamic states occasionally. The way the Islamic states worked seemed to go down two roads - in the earlier periods, and for the less dominant empires later on, control always seemed to be weak. The states could hold together when they were of decent size (Spain-sized or smaller usually) but when they expanded too far they would start to buckle under internal pressure - they didn't have the strength of bureaucracy to manage larger empires. That, or the end of dynasty (surprisingly common among the early Islamic states for some reason) would provoke the collapse of the empire among bitter, squabbling factions all claiming the throne. The other way things played out, particularly typified by the Ottomans, was that the stronger empires would keep a core territory, divided up into autonomous regions controlled hereditarily by trusted grandees, who were directly and frequently held accountable to the Sultan, while areas further out would be divided up into far largely territories and entrusted to men with no direct accountability and largely the ability to live their entire lives without much contact from their suzerain lord, occasionally paying tribute and being forced to contribute to the Sultan's armies but that's about it. In such a situation, the Sultan/Caliph, whatever would often lose the ability to project his power to the peripheries and they would gain independence for themselves frequently by ignoring their commitments to the Sultan/Caliph. These territories were usually made so independent because they were of little value to the Caliph, being largely uninhabitable desert or with no natural resources or whatever, and you could argue that Europe has sufficient natural wealth to demand control from their conquerors, but I think you'd be wise to consider that Europe is unlikely to be ruled by two powers alone. Large parts are likely to break away over time, forming into small sheikhdoms or somesuch, which a few generations later will likely be reconquered and then drift free under a new dynasty of governors, etc etc and so the process continues. But my point is, anyway, just consider that the Mamluks and Turks aren't necessarily going to be "the" European states. You might even get a third, or even fourth, rival Islamic power forming as a rival to these states - say, a Germany-Poland-Lithuania shaped state with no sea access (thus allowing your Mamluks and Turks to continue being your American colonisers, and so on) with a smattering of highly autonomous weak states around the edges and so on. It's entirely plausible that the British Isles won't owe homage to any greater Islamic power, for instance, and could be a mash of small Islamic states a la Dark Ages Britain, maybe. A continuing Christian presence is unlikely to go unconquered, of course...

Hope that gives you more to think about to hone your ideas. I reckon you're getting about as far as I can help you with this stuff, though. Your events are well-considered now and pretty much wholly formed, and most of the stuff now to do is just detail. Will be interesting to see the TL.
 
Fine except, what do you mean "against English tyranny"? Inciting revolt inside another country wasn't really a tactic used in this period, though offering support to existing rebels was. If you're looking at them attempting to tear England apart then you've probably got enough ammunition in the religious rebellions which are entirely plausible, but my advice would just be to avoid suggesting that what is happening is the Scots and Irish are creating the unrest themselves. They don't have the ability. For that matter, the Irish lack the unity and strength to interfere in English affairs, except by raiding the English settlements in Ireland. You aren't going to be able to get Irish armies assaulting England proper - no way, no how - and they probably wouldn't do anything coordinated with Scotland either. In this era, Scotland viewed the Irish as a potential conquest, too, or at least as a region needing outside control to pacify it. The idea of pan-Gaelic cooperation just does not exist in this era.
I apologize; I meant no offense to your country (I hope that's not what you thought). I put "tyranny" in quotes to reflect the viewpoint of the Scottish and Irish who resented English control over them. I also didn't mean to imply they were allied against the English, just that general discontent would foment riots and many small, ill-organized revolts as the English army is distracted by the intensifying war with France and as the debate over the rightful pope remains open. This wouldn't tear England apart but would certainly exacerbate their problem. However, I realized just now that Scotland was independent at the time, so such riots would be limited to Ireland instead. Scotland, rather than inciting revolt within England, would simply declare war on them if they disagreed with the English creation of a doctrinal council. I had figured they'd be displeased with England no matter what the English did, merely because the two are rivals. Does this sound better?

I think any ruler declaring themselves Pope is a little far-fetched...save perhaps one of the German sovereign Arch-bishops. He does, however, sound a prime candidate for the kind of guy to declare his own solution to the problem, then start using military force to make his immediate neighbours accept his solution. Demanding people honour his ideas, walking into conflicts that aren't his, trying to place his candidate in Rome itself, even, by simply marching him there at the head of an army.

Certainly I wouldn't try to shoot for more than 4-5 potential Popes. 4 is probably the highest I'd go. Remember to an extent you can use willing suspension of disbelief in your TL by overemphasising the anarchy and chaos of the period.
Yeah, I kind of threw that comment about Louis I declaring himself Pope as a joke. I do like the idea of him trying to supplant the Rome pope with his own. Poland and Lithuania could either appoint their own popes/doctrinal councils or perhaps side with the Nuremberg council against the HRE-allied Rome pope and the controversial Hungarian pope. As long as you have no issue, I'll keep Scandinavia largely quiet, as like you said not all of Europe will be warring over the Pope issue. As for potential popes, I'll settle on 4 for now -- Avignon, Rome, Burgos, and Hungary's choice in Buda.

I'm not 100% on this, but I reckon there could be other ways. Waiting for every other civilisation to bring itself up to scratch technologically etc isn't a fully plausible idea - to an extent, it would just take an unlikely amount of work to build them up like the Aztecs and Incas could be, and since Africa isn't accommodating to sprawling trading colonies, the exposure to "civilisation" wouldn't come fast at all. I would suggest that you tried to find a way that lets African tribal states come to an understanding with your Islamic empires in Eurasia and North Africa. Maybe the expansion outwards of the Mamluks etc about the time when they first try cross-Atlantic voyages also involves trips around Africa to the east, which brings more exposure to states like the Ashanti and maybe even the Congo kingdoms. Rather than just claiming swathes of the coast and settling it gradually a la RL European states, they respect the Islamic states and spread Islam further south, before trying to get those states to subscribe to the Caliphate ideal - that is, pledging religious homage to a Caliph (one of the Islamic rulers, maybe the Mamluk ruler since at times IRL the Mamluks claimed the Caliphate. This also carried very, very, very loose political homage ideals too. Essentially the African states stay self-ruling but by recognising Mamluk/whoever suzerainty they are protected from conquest and are free to develop on their own. Over time, the growing technology leads to growing levels of contact and, being Mamluk/whoever vassals, they are given access to weaponry and so on etc and are slowly "westernised" or whatever this reality's version of that is. That, or you could simply have a lack of intent to colonise "undesirable" areas lead to the Islamic states being far more diplomatic to the more powerful African states (of which there were quite a few) - you could even go for your proxy wars idea with different states sponsoring different African tribal kingdoms to conquer their surroundings and war other proxies for control of swathes of Africa with no exposure to disease and horrid climates necessary.
That's a much better idea than mine. It uses more of the subtle Islamic-style conquest like you mentioned, with spreading influence by converting the African states to Islam rather than coming in and conquering guns a-blazin' like the Europeans. And yes, you're correct about the Mamluk Caliph. In OTL, after the Mongols trashed Baghdad in 1258, the Caliph moved Cairo and remained there until the Ottomans defeated the Mamluks in 1517, when the current Caliph was forced to surrender the Caliphate to the Ottoman Sultan. In my TL, with the Mamluks surviving, I intend to keep the Caliph in Cairo, although he'll be forced to temporarily relocate to Tunis at least twice. The city of Cairo will change hands a few times as the Ottomans and Mamluks struggle for dominance in the region, but will ultimately return to Mamluk control. I hope to also incorporate your second suggestion, about the Islamic powers hesitating to colonize undesirable areas, into the mix somewhere to vary the conquest strategies.

OK, cool. All of that sounds great. I would, however, encourage you to mention other (weaker) Islamic states occasionally. The way the Islamic states worked seemed to go down two roads - in the earlier periods, and for the less dominant empires later on, control always seemed to be weak. The states could hold together when they were of decent size (Spain-sized or smaller usually) but when they expanded too far they would start to buckle under internal pressure - they didn't have the strength of bureaucracy to manage larger empires. That, or the end of dynasty (surprisingly common among the early Islamic states for some reason) would provoke the collapse of the empire among bitter, squabbling factions all claiming the throne. The other way things played out, particularly typified by the Ottomans, was that the stronger empires would keep a core territory, divided up into autonomous regions controlled hereditarily by trusted grandees, who were directly and frequently held accountable to the Sultan, while areas further out would be divided up into far largely territories and entrusted to men with no direct accountability and largely the ability to live their entire lives without much contact from their suzerain lord, occasionally paying tribute and being forced to contribute to the Sultan's armies but that's about it. In such a situation, the Sultan/Caliph, whatever would often lose the ability to project his power to the peripheries and they would gain independence for themselves frequently by ignoring their commitments to the Sultan/Caliph. These territories were usually made so independent because they were of little value to the Caliph, being largely uninhabitable desert or with no natural resources or whatever, and you could argue that Europe has sufficient natural wealth to demand control from their conquerors, but I think you'd be wise to consider that Europe is unlikely to be ruled by two powers alone. Large parts are likely to break away over time, forming into small sheikhdoms or somesuch, which a few generations later will likely be reconquered and then drift free under a new dynasty of governors, etc etc and so the process continues. But my point is, anyway, just consider that the Mamluks and Turks aren't necessarily going to be "the" European states. You might even get a third, or even fourth, rival Islamic power forming as a rival to these states - say, a Germany-Poland-Lithuania shaped state with no sea access (thus allowing your Mamluks and Turks to continue being your American colonisers, and so on) with a smattering of highly autonomous weak states around the edges and so on. It's entirely plausible that the British Isles won't owe homage to any greater Islamic power, for instance, and could be a mash of small Islamic states a la Dark Ages Britain, maybe. A continuing Christian presence is unlikely to go unconquered, of course...
I do intend to discuss the fate of other Islamic states. For instance: the Golden Horde will eventually collapse and their territory divided mostly amongst the Turks and Timurids; the Hafsids will end up conquered by the Mamluks; the Ottomans will overrun the various little fragments of the Ilkhanate in Anatolia; the Timurids will similarly overrun the weaker fragments in Iran and the Mashriq.

Below is a very loose outline of events in Europe as a result of the Papal Wars, and details can certainly change (esp. the dates and the possible over-stretching of the Ottoman military), but here goes. Let me know what you think. Don't feel obligated to say a whole lot about these outlines, but just a general "looks good" or "not so good" would be appreciated.

While the Papal Wars grind on, the Ottoman Turks make their entrance into Europe in the late 1300s-1400s while pacifying the various fragments of the Mongolian Ilkhanate in Anatolia (as in OTL). Besides conquering the Byzantines and the Balkans (also as in OTL), the Ottomans manage to push across the Alps and down into Italy in the mid-1400s. The tattered remnants of the HRE are brushed aside by the Turks in late 1400s/early 1500s. Meanwhile, the Marinids cross over into Granada in the late 1300s. Capitalizing on the ongoing Iberian War between Castile and the Aragon-Portugal alliance, the Marinid army is able to expand to the Pyrenees by the end of the 15th century. The Hafsids in north central Africa temporarily lay claim to Malta, Sicily, and Sardinia in the early 1400s before being booted out by the Turkish army in Italy and the increasingly powerful Turkish navy in the mid- to late 1400s. France, already weakened by repeated conflicts with England, eventually succumbs to the Marinids coming in from the south and the Ottomans from the east in the mid-1500s. Seeing the writing on the wall, Poland and Lithuania pledge their allegiance to the Turkish Sultan and accept Islam in the mid-1500s, and the Scandinavian states follow suit later in the century. The Marinids, more interested in overseas exploration than territorial conquest, fall back to the Pyrenees in the face of superior Ottoman strength.

By the late 1500s, the Turkish navy in the Mediterranean has been built up substantially (largely due to the continual efforts to keep the Mamluks at bay while supplying their European armies) and is roughly on par with that of the English. The Turkish armies in France give pause as the Ottomans spread settlers and Islam throughout Europe and establish shorter supply lines. An Turkish agreement with the Marinids to leave Iberia alone allows the Ottomans naval passage through the Marinid-held Gibraltar Strait. The Turkish navy attempts to form a blockade around the British Isles, with moderate success overall. Though depleted from the blockade and the long wars against France, England gears up for a Turkish invasion. The late 1500s and early 1600s would see three massive efforts by the Turks to breach the English defenses and invade the island, the last of which meets with the most success. The Anglo-Turkish Wars ultimately turned out to be pyrrhic for both sides. London is razed to the ground and the English army and navy are finally broken by the Ottomans, but the overextension of Ottoman power and the amount of effort wasted in the failed attempts to conquer Britain force the Turks to pull most of their military to the south and east. They leave behind several client states governed by Ottoman-allied Muslim overlords in Britain and northern Europe.

The mid- to late 1600s would see Turkish military expeditions into western Russia (where the last major Christian European holdout, Novgorod, would be incorporated into the empire) and the Ottoman betrayal of the non-aggression pact with the Marinids. The Mamluks, having conquered the Hafsids in the early to mid-1500s, recognize the vulnerability of the Marinids and seize the opportunity to take Morocco. The Turks complete their domination over the northern Mediterranean coast in the late 1600s, wiping out the Marinid remnant in Iberia. The Turks and Mamluks fight a series of bitter wars over control of the Gibraltar Strait, with the Turks finally prevailing in the early 1700s. The Ottomans establish a massive fortress on the southern coast of the strait which would withstand many Mamluk offensives.

Of the two typical fates of Islamic states that you describe, I hope to have the Timurids follow the first path and the Ottomans and Mamluks follow the second. Not long after the death of Timur, his empire will wither in power and eventually break up, with the largest and longest-lasting fragment being the Delhi Sultanate (which will serve as an alt-Mughal Empire). The Ottomans will rampage through Europe for a couple centuries (see above) before retreating to a core empire in Anatolia, Palestine, and the Balkans. The rest of Europe is carved up into several territories (in addition to those which voluntarily submitted to Ottoman rule) with varying degrees of autonomy, depending on how far they are from Istanbul. Occasionally, military intervention is required when the territories try to act too independently. The formerly sovereign states of Britain and Norway retain the most autonomy, and would later found small colonies of their own on the Atlantic coast of North America. Much of Europe (esp. the northwestern part) will later be subsumed again into the Empire proper for a while once the coal deposits are discovered. Eventually, the Empire will expand overseas, creating outlying territories in Greenland and eastern North America which swallow the small European ones. The large American Turkish colony is first to become fully independent, and the European colonies are granted independence following the big war in "modern times." The Mamluks will follow a similar, albeit less belligerent, path, with Arabia, Africa, and eastern South America as their playgrounds.

Though the Catholic Church collapsed in the wake of the Papal Wars and the Islamic conquest of Europe, Orthodox Christianity and various new Christian sects survive. Though Islam would become the religion of choice in Europe (whether voluntarily or not), Christianity would remain a significant minority religion for centuries afterward. While the Muslims and Christians of Europe would for the most part get along, a dissident fundamentalist Christian movement would arise and become a thorn in the side of the Muslim population.

Hope that gives you more to think about to hone your ideas. I reckon you're getting about as far as I can help you with this stuff, though. Your events are well-considered now and pretty much wholly formed, and most of the stuff now to do is just detail. Will be interesting to see the TL.
Well, they're more well-honed now thanks in very large part to your input. I'd be interested to see the TL too. All I have to do is write it . . . . I may post a thread first to check the plausibility of the details of the Papal Wars. If I do, don't take this as my questioning your input; I'd just like to submit an outline of events for communal scrutiny prior to writing the TL.
 
I apologize; I meant no offense to your country (I hope that's not what you thought).
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Does this sound better?


You have me wrong. I wasn't complaining about a slur to the English - I know we have our faults, but I didn't read it the way it seems my comment suggested. It was merely the idea in the first place I was questioning - I just happened to quote you. It seems we're clear on the issue now anyway, but my thought was merely that you might have misunderstood the way English relations with Scotland and Ireland worked. The idea of the English as a foreign abuser taking control and money away and leaving the rest of Britain as mere territories is a new invention, and not one for this era, and I merely wanted to double-check your motives, but as I say, I think we see eye to eye on this issue now.

Yeah, I kind of threw that comment about Louis I declaring himself Pope as a joke. I do like the idea of him trying to supplant the Rome pope with his own. Poland and Lithuania could either appoint their own popes/doctrinal councils or perhaps side with the Nuremberg council against the HRE-allied Rome pope and the controversial Hungarian pope. As long as you have no issue, I'll keep Scandinavia largely quiet, as like you said not all of Europe will be warring over the Pope issue. As for potential popes, I'll settle on 4 for now -- Avignon, Rome, Burgos, and Hungary's choice in Buda.


All sounds fine and dandy to me.

That's a much better idea than mine. It uses more of the subtle Islamic-style conquest like you mentioned, with spreading influence by converting the African states to Islam rather than coming in and conquering guns a-blazin' like the Europeans. And yes, you're correct about the Mamluk Caliph. In OTL, after the Mongols trashed Baghdad in 1258, the Caliph moved Cairo and remained there until the Ottomans defeated the Mamluks in 1517, when the current Caliph was forced to surrender the Caliphate to the Ottoman Sultan. In my TL, with the Mamluks surviving, I intend to keep the Caliph in Cairo, although he'll be forced to temporarily relocate to Tunis at least twice. The city of Cairo will change hands a few times as the Ottomans and Mamluks struggle for dominance in the region, but will ultimately return to Mamluk control. I hope to also incorporate your second suggestion, about the Islamic powers hesitating to colonize undesirable areas, into the mix somewhere to vary the conquest strategies.


Glad to help, and to help clarify another issue. I think this is coming together well.

I do intend to discuss the fate of other Islamic states. For instance: the Golden Horde will eventually collapse and their territory divided mostly amongst the Turks and Timurids; the Hafsids will end up conquered by the Mamluks; the Ottomans will overrun the various little fragments of the Ilkhanate in Anatolia; the Timurids will similarly overrun the weaker fragments in Iran and the Mashriq.


Ok, cool. Maybe it's just my own bias slipping in, but I have a thing for remembering and specifically detailing what happens to the parts of the world which are on the periphery of the powerful empires, and are far less significant but are affected by the events of the world. I'm also not entirely a believer in the notion that big states will take control of all territory when expanding - some areas will be considered insignificant and will be left to develop on their own (i.e. how Morocco was never really attacked by any Islamic or Christian power in RL, or how Baluchistan was left to simply exist as a mass of independent states in the Persian sphere of influence for centuries) while others will be so autonomous they will be considered their own countries, or might resist the invasion (or successive changes of government) and be culturally assimilated but not politically. But that's just my way of doing things. My thought was simply that Europe would be unlikely to be taken over by one or two blob-like empires. Similarly, the collapse of the Golden Horde will likely spawn several independent Khanates in the Russian Steppes where resources are sparse and the population is low, as the land isn't very worth conquering. Over time those states will have their own stories to tell - maybe not very interesting but if they cross swords and fall under the control of various empires over time it just all adds to the depth of the plot. But that's stuff for you to decide on. You shouldn't have to tell your story in my style, naturally. Just something to ponder on.

While the Papal Wars grind on, the Ottoman Turks make their entrance into Europe in the late 1300s-1400s while pacifying the various fragments of the Mongolian Ilkhanate in Anatolia (as in OTL). Besides conquering the Byzantines and the Balkans (also as in OTL), the Ottomans manage to push across the Alps and down into Italy in the mid-1400s. The tattered remnants of the HRE are brushed aside by the Turks in late 1400s/early 1500s. Meanwhile, the Marinids cross over into Granada in the late 1300s. Capitalizing on the ongoing Iberian War between Castile and the Aragon-Portugal alliance, the Marinid army is able to expand to the Pyrenees by the end of the 15th century. The Hafsids in north central Africa temporarily lay claim to Malta, Sicily, and Sardinia in the early 1400s before being booted out by the Turkish army in Italy and the increasingly powerful Turkish navy in the mid- to late 1400s. France, already weakened by repeated conflicts with England, eventually succumbs to the Marinids coming in from the south and the Ottomans from the east in the mid-1500s. Seeing the writing on the wall, Poland and Lithuania pledge their allegiance to the Turkish Sultan and accept Islam in the mid-1500s, and the Scandinavian states follow suit later in the century. The Marinids, more interested in overseas exploration than territorial conquest, fall back to the Pyrenees in the face of superior Ottoman strength.


Nice. I might throw in a token sub-plot about a last-minute attempt at a united European campaign to push back the Islamic armies at some point when it's probably already too late (a few minor victories before a massive defeat sends them all back to each others' throats perhaps) but otherwise it looks very good. Constantinople could feasibly hold out as a city-fortress for a few decades as it did in RL, having such massive fortifications, and again could be an interesting side-story surviving as the rest of Europe falls but it will eventually fall too. I'd also suggest that Poland and Lithuania will likely make a token attempt at resistance - they are too large states to simply believe that all is lost without having their confidence shaken in battle, but their resignations are believable, especially if Germany is already falling. There is quite possibly some scope for mentions of Turkish Beys (regional governors) trying to conquer extra territory on their own for personal glory and making a fool of themselves, or maybe succeeding and becoming too powerful and warranting a Caliph smacking them down as unruly and dangerous, but that's all detail. I like it otherwise. Rebellions can also be expected but rebellions aren't hard to put down.

By the late 1500s, the Turkish navy in the Mediterranean has been built up substantially (largely due to the continual efforts to keep the Mamluks at bay while supplying their European armies) and is roughly on par with that of the English. The Turkish armies in France give pause as the Ottomans spread settlers and Islam throughout Europe and establish shorter supply lines. An Turkish agreement with the Marinids to leave Iberia alone allows the Ottomans naval passage through the Marinid-held Gibraltar Strait. The Turkish navy attempts to form a blockade around the British Isles, with moderate success overall. Though depleted from the blockade and the long wars against France, England gears up for a Turkish invasion. The late 1500s and early 1600s would see three massive efforts by the Turks to breach the English defenses and invade the island, the last of which meets with the most success. The Anglo-Turkish Wars ultimately turned out to be pyrrhic for both sides. London is razed to the ground and the English army and navy are finally broken by the Ottomans, but the overextension of Ottoman power and the amount of effort wasted in the failed attempts to conquer Britain force the Turks to pull most of their military to the south and east. They leave behind several client states governed by Ottoman-allied Muslim overlords in Britain and northern Europe.


The English navy wasn't historically as good as other places in this period, but this is cool. Under such threat England could raise a sizable army, but it would probably fall after two or three invasions. Otherwise, I like it.0

The mid- to late 1600s would see Turkish military expeditions into western Russia (where the last major Christian European holdout, Novgorod, would be incorporated into the empire) and the Ottoman betrayal of the non-aggression pact with the Marinids. The Mamluks, having conquered the Hafsids in the early to mid-1500s, recognize the vulnerability of the Marinids and seize the opportunity to take Morocco. The Turks complete their domination over the northern Mediterranean coast in the late 1600s, wiping out the Marinid remnant in Iberia. The Turks and Mamluks fight a series of bitter wars over control of the Gibraltar Strait, with the Turks finally prevailing in the early 1700s. The Ottomans establish a massive fortress on the southern coast of the strait which would withstand many Mamluk offensives.


Considering Novgorod/Muscovy/other Russian kingdoms' contemporary history of being Islamic client states, these invasions may be unneeded - maybe, but maybe not, your call. You potentially could have the region left to be Orthodox by the Turks in exchange for higher tax rates, or it converting slowly by itself in the face of the collapse of western Christendom. The last bit is fine, though you might want to mention that the new Ottoman Beyliks in Europe either exert enough strength and disinterest not to get involved in the war, or are already very autonomous (as was the Ottoman style) and simply aren't called to war. Perhaps this era would be a good time for one or two of the Beys to try to assert political independence from Constantinople. The Beys did tend to think themselves more important than they were, and being in control of territories so rich as those in Europe they would likely believe themselves powerful enough to demand their right to sovereignty. Of course, that's just my idea again, and I do find stories of independence in such circumstances interesting. You may not like this idea, it's only a little thought either way. If you were to use it, then whether or not the Bey(s) succeed in breaking free is entirely up to you. Either way, keeping the European resources out of the Ottoman war effort is probably going to be important in preventing the Ottomans simply walking all over the less-affluent and capable Marinids, who have drawn the short straw in territory controlled.

As an aside, I'd say an Ottoman Empire controlling so much of Europe is top heavy and liable to either several civil wars over the autonomy of the European territories, or to breaking up into several rival empires. Over time, perhaps it could break apart, be partially reformed and then threaten to break apart a couple of times more. Such was the way of the Islamic states, after all. The security of the Ottoman Empire was largely down to its strong hold on the homeland of Anatolia, which served as a base of operations. Anatolia isn't big enough to serve as a base of operations for all of Europe though. Again, yours to do what you will with, though.

Of the two typical fates of Islamic states that you describe, I hope to have the Timurids follow the first path and the Ottomans and Mamluks follow the second. Not long after the death of Timur, his empire will wither in power and eventually break up, with the largest and longest-lasting fragment being the Delhi Sultanate (which will serve as an alt-Mughal Empire). The Ottomans will rampage through Europe for a couple centuries (see above) before retreating to a core empire in Anatolia, Palestine, and the Balkans. The rest of Europe is carved up into several territories (in addition to those which voluntarily submitted to Ottoman rule) with varying degrees of autonomy, depending on how far they are from Istanbul. Occasionally, military intervention is required when the territories try to act too independently. The formerly sovereign states of Britain and Norway retain the most autonomy, and would later found small colonies of their own on the Atlantic coast of North America. Much of Europe (esp. the northwestern part) will later be subsumed again into the Empire proper for a while once the coal deposits are discovered. Eventually, the Empire will expand overseas, creating outlying territories in Greenland and eastern North America which swallow the small European ones. The large American Turkish colony is first to become fully independent, and the European colonies are granted independence following the big war in "modern times." The Mamluks will follow a similar, albeit less belligerent, path, with Arabia, Africa, and eastern South America as their playgrounds.


Ok, that's good. My comments above stand but this is all fine. In fact, in light of this perhaps I should retract my idea about the Ottoman Empire collapsing entirely earlier on, since it appears you have plans for that afoot already in a later time period, but you know what you're doing so I'll roll with whatever you go with.

Though the Catholic Church collapsed in the wake of the Papal Wars and the Islamic conquest of Europe, Orthodox Christianity and various new Christian sects survive. Though Islam would become the religion of choice in Europe (whether voluntarily or not), Christianity would remain a significant minority religion for centuries afterward. While the Muslims and Christians of Europe would for the most part get along, a dissident fundamentalist Christian movement would arise and become a thorn in the side of the Muslim population.


Naturally. This is all good.

Well, they're more well-honed now thanks in very large part to your input. I'd be interested to see the TL too. All I have to do is write it . . . . I may post a thread first to check the plausibility of the details of the Papal Wars. If I do, don't take this as my questioning your input; I'd just like to submit an outline of events for communal scrutiny prior to writing the TL.

Of course, of course. I'm always slightly wary of naive comments by other people, but I do like playing my ideas off against other peoples' thoughts. I'd be equally as interested to see how your plausibility thread affects your plans.
 
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