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As promised I plan to in the very near future go back and rework my first TL, Austria: Never Forget Thy Past. As part of that process, I need legitimate criticism of events, ideas, and the like from the TL if anyone would be so kind as to give me it. Let me be clear, I want helpful, constructive criticism, anything else will likely result in grumpy Ivy, who will tell you to shove it where the sun don't shine.

If needed, I can link/repost the whole thing to make for an easier read, however it's late, and I'm feeling lazy so I've only linked the thread for now.
Austria: Never Forget Thy Past
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