On the subject of rewrites/2.0s

I'm working on rewriting much of "Precarious Heights", so that it's all in the same style, and less convoluted. What's the general consensus here on posting 2.0s of otherwise dormant/dead TLs?

Better question: does anyone want to see a 'bigger/better' rewrite/repost of Precarious Heights at all? I was thinking I'd remove the 'a Teutonic Order TL' tagline, and just try and make the whole thing flow better. Then I'd feel better about continuing where I left off (~1420, didn't get very far).
 
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