Because of course, misfortune never happens to the sexy side. NEVER.
Because of course, misfortune never happens to the sexy side. NEVER.
I'm not even sure what that's supposed to be, let alone how it's even an intelligible reply.
I'm pretty sure it was meant as one, but I know I don't get it.
I was just looking for a reason to post that meme.![]()
Anyway, that seems like the best Leipzig POD.
I am going to majorly edit what happens post-battle w/ A.W. and then post a new update
HOWEVER, the POD of a decisive French victory at Leipzig is very intriguing, i will look into that on my good old friend Wikipedia
Also how is my writing style? Im no Shakespear and dont believe myself to be particularly good a writing, but I did consider listing the events or maybe even telling the story from a soldier`s perspective. I eventually settled on a semi-omniscient view point. Should it be changed?
Also how is my writing style?
Im no Shakespear and dont believe myself to be particularly good a writing...
while im not going to touch down on quick mistakes made while typing, and basic punctuation which was thoroughly ignored (both of which will be fixed in the TL, if it is continued)Until you learn how to spell and punctuate, that is until you learn how to write, you'll have no writing style. Look at this sentence for example:
"Im" instead of "I'm", "Shakespear" instead of "Shakespeare", "dont" instead of "don't", and "good a writing" instead of "good at writing". There are even more examples in your earlier posts. Until you can write, until you take care to write, you'll have no writing style.
I understand that you're fourteen or fifteen years old and that you're very excited about this whole alternate history genre you've recently found. It's grand and wonderful thing to be young and exuberant. I envy you a great deal. You're going to see and learn so much in your lifetime. There's much to see and learn at this site too.
Before sharing your own time lines, why not examine some of the well received time lines posted here? That way you can get a feeling for the amount of research a good time requires. You can also look at the "nuts and bolts" of good writing like spelling, punctuation, and grammar that a good time line requires.
Check out time lines that are Turtledove winners, they're almost always good. Check out time lines from these members too; CalBear, Jared, Rogue Beaver, and Amerigo Vespucci. Their work is uniformly good.
Do some reading, ask a lot of questions, and have fun.
Considering that the cavalry in Napoleon was equipped with the last horses avalible as cavalry in France then Napoleon would be hardpressed to have any cavalry after Waterloo at all.
Also, IIRC there was just one time Napoleon was in front of his forces and that was when the French took a bridge in the 1790ths.
This was one of the less-noted consequences of the Moscow campaign. In addition to the huge numbers of men, Napoleon lost nearly all his horses as well - and cavalry horses take longer to train than infantry "grunts".