It's not a bad scenario by any means, albeit a little implausible, but as for the map itself: please don't mutilate Worldas like this. This map would be infinitely better-looking and more legible if it hadn't had a vignette effect applied and then been jpegged to hell and back. It's very dark and blurry, and you kind of have to squint to make out any details.
Fair enough. I just wanted to try different effects in paint.net.