BlairWitch749
Banned
Gentlemen, forgive the false start on the rewrite, I will post here my modified and expanded offering for the first segment of Manstein in Africa; as with the original submission, your feedback is enjoyed, observed and taken to heart - BW
The old quartermaster - (new prologue) "It became widely known that [the strategy that led to the fall of France] was essentially the work of one man ... General von Manstein." - Baron Freytag Von Loringhoven
Berlin Late January 1941
Hitler: Send Manstein to look again Jodl
Jodl: My fuhrer General Von Funk is more than competent and his evaluations should be considered fully trustworthy
Hitler: He is a defeatist and I can't have that, he says the problem is supply, so send Manstein to see what can be done, he is an old quartermaster, he will find a way things can be done properly
Jodl: He doesn't speak their language my fuhrer and he is not known for being cooperative
Hitler: (glaring with eyes and grinning with mouth) I think he would say the same of you Jodl, and considering the result of his planning for our attack on France, it should be you cooperating with him and not the other way around; stifling success is not the mark of a good commander (he let that insult sink in and wound the general before answering the other item)... send Richtoffen with him; he speaks their language and the Duce likes him; he will make things easier if Manstein is "uncooperative" as you say; send them right away, I want to get this settled immediately before Italy is completely rolled out of her colony
January 27th 1941, Tripoli
Manstein set foot on the ground that would become his theater of fame over the next several months just as the Sabartha division was collapsing several hundred miles to the east at Derna. He and Richtoffen barely bid good morning to the Italian laison officer before they set about exploring the port and followed by a rapid tour of the front aboard a Heinkel bomber. Over the next 48 hours Manstein and Richtoffen conducted a major staff study for the potential for German intervention in Africa to stave off a total Italian collapse; and collapse was certainly in progress.
As Manstein reported to Hitler on the scale of the calamity befalling the Italians on the 29th a telegram arrived from the foreign minister Ciano desperately requesting German aircraft and tanks to recover the situation, to which Hitler remarked "Failure has had the healthy effect of once more compressing Italian claims to within the natural boundaries of Italian capabilities."
to be continued...
thoughts?
Wolfram Von Richtoffen was sent to study the possibilities of German intervention in Africa, with his long record of service in Spain and his doctorate in engineering; he was uniquely qualified to find solutions to the multi dimensional problem the Germans would face fighting so far from home
Manstein observes the fighting in Africa
The old quartermaster - (new prologue) "It became widely known that [the strategy that led to the fall of France] was essentially the work of one man ... General von Manstein." - Baron Freytag Von Loringhoven
Berlin Late January 1941
Hitler: Send Manstein to look again Jodl
Jodl: My fuhrer General Von Funk is more than competent and his evaluations should be considered fully trustworthy
Hitler: He is a defeatist and I can't have that, he says the problem is supply, so send Manstein to see what can be done, he is an old quartermaster, he will find a way things can be done properly
Jodl: He doesn't speak their language my fuhrer and he is not known for being cooperative
Hitler: (glaring with eyes and grinning with mouth) I think he would say the same of you Jodl, and considering the result of his planning for our attack on France, it should be you cooperating with him and not the other way around; stifling success is not the mark of a good commander (he let that insult sink in and wound the general before answering the other item)... send Richtoffen with him; he speaks their language and the Duce likes him; he will make things easier if Manstein is "uncooperative" as you say; send them right away, I want to get this settled immediately before Italy is completely rolled out of her colony
January 27th 1941, Tripoli
Manstein set foot on the ground that would become his theater of fame over the next several months just as the Sabartha division was collapsing several hundred miles to the east at Derna. He and Richtoffen barely bid good morning to the Italian laison officer before they set about exploring the port and followed by a rapid tour of the front aboard a Heinkel bomber. Over the next 48 hours Manstein and Richtoffen conducted a major staff study for the potential for German intervention in Africa to stave off a total Italian collapse; and collapse was certainly in progress.
As Manstein reported to Hitler on the scale of the calamity befalling the Italians on the 29th a telegram arrived from the foreign minister Ciano desperately requesting German aircraft and tanks to recover the situation, to which Hitler remarked "Failure has had the healthy effect of once more compressing Italian claims to within the natural boundaries of Italian capabilities."
to be continued...
thoughts?
Wolfram Von Richtoffen was sent to study the possibilities of German intervention in Africa, with his long record of service in Spain and his doctorate in engineering; he was uniquely qualified to find solutions to the multi dimensional problem the Germans would face fighting so far from home
Manstein observes the fighting in Africa