Lords of the north: a story of the house of lade

Norway: 995 AD


the battlefield was littered with the fallen. jarl hakon walked along it contemplating the meaning of his victory, "if i hadent slain the wuld be usurper olaf(1) i would be amog the fallen" he said.

he asked his king sveinn forkbeard for asistance against the revolt but it was ignored. why shuld he trust kings? his own father was attacked by his king and killed. I must become king.

Hakon still walked through along the battlefield looking at the remains of the fallen ''they shall feast in valhalla" he said to himself then sudenly a group of armed men appeard draging a captive."father!" his son svenn called to him ''i captured thorir!". "Exelent news sveinn! we shall rejoice becuse i will declare myself king" "what will we do with thorir father?" "i will blood eagle him".

(1) olaf tryggvason.




hi this is my first story it is about hakon of lade becoming the king of norway. i will be happy resiving constractive critisism
 
Hmm, surviving Norse paganism. I guess there will be less of an exodus to Iceland than. So no Magnus the Good and Sven Estridsen will be able to get elected 1042 king of Denmark if stuff goes like according to OTL - but then you may have other designs! :)
 
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