Look to the West Volume VIII: The Bear and the Basilisk

And, of course, it was something OTL Stalinist Russia did in some cases - Trotsky, most famously.

Definitely would like to see more flags of the world - that's some spiffy graphic design there.

If Spain and Portugal go societist, I wonder if they will become directly integrated into the Combine? It's something the French would object to, shall we say, strenuously. (And personally, given the historically anti-foreign and insular attitudes of Spaniards, I'm not sure if you could get them to agree to be governed from Urb 1, Zone 1. Sure, there will be pro-union fanatics, but the Combine would, I think, have more trouble sending forces to help make sure the right faction wins than they did in Africa or Indonesia).
They almost definitely get their own zone, question is if it includes Portugal or not. Portugal might be enough of a basket case from their Jacobin era for direct rule from Buenos Aires to be necessary, and it would be a convenient excuse to defer integration into Spain.

Also possible that the Spaniards take advantage of their status of "Combine's European beachhead" and their possession of an independent, indigenous Societists scene to take the initiative on matters like Portugal.
 

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Let me start off by saying that Look to the West continues to be one of my all-time favorite alternate history narratives. I'm sure it's inspired many others along with myself, and it was foundational in my experience with this genre. Recently I've been rereading the entire TL from the start, this time in its published form, and it's been great to experience some of its myriad twists and turns all over again. The present chapters are equally thrilling, and I can't wait for the Black Twenties to enter its second round of societist horror.

Insofar as there is anything to critique about this grand narrative, I really only have a few comments, mostly related to core aspects of the TL which might simply be the result of our differences in opinion. First off, while I acknowledge one of the TL's central conceits--that the main ideological conflict of modern history might be over something other than economics--I do think the element of class conflict has gone a bit too ignored as a result. While the societists don't seem too interested in class as a force of societal discord, their false image of class harmony and meritocracy probably still appeals to some working-class people. More importantly, I imagine that the basic disruptions of capitalism, be that in the form of enclosure, industrial labor, or simple market crashes, would have a greater effect on this world's history than presently seems to be the case. Perhaps the issue is that TTL's historians aren't too interested in labor, or maybe it's just that we see the national perspective more than what's happening to ordinary citizens. Still, the influence of strikes, unions, and other expressions of class conflict would be interesting to see in the context of TTL. Could diversitarianism accommodate non-capitalist societies, for example?

Secondly, I feel like the general perspective that the post-Pandoric chapters have taken is a little too unbalanced, specifically to the detriment of the societists. I understand that their ideologically colored views and scholarship might be harder to articulate than that of their diversitarian counterparts, but their importance to this narrative overall means that depicting them properly is essential. A basic issue I am still faced with is that it's hard to know what living in a societist society is really like. I thought that the move to Carolina would mean we'd see more of their perspective, and while that has been broadly true, there are still many parts where proper detail is lacking. To be clear, it's not that I need more explicitly pro-societist sources, or that I think they have been unfairly maligned. But creating a good antagonist often requires a great degree of 'character' development, and my picture of the Combine is still too vague as of yet. If that lack of detail is on purpose, the result of both societist censorship and the Last War of Supremacy, then I understand. Even so, I think some historical chapters or Pandoric-style narratives written from the ground level of the Combine could do a lot of good for TTL's worldbuilding.

That's about all I have to say! I'm eager to see where this story goes next; in terms of graphics, my only request would be another world map. Maybe when the Black Twenties are roughly 'halfway' (or entering some kind of new phase). Also, I'll be sure to get the volume 5 e-book when it releases; not long now, I hope!
Thanks for the comments. You are right we haven't seen that much inside the Combine yet, but that is somewhat deliberate for narrative purposes - don't worry, there'll be viewpoints there in good time.
 
Could one of you be so kind and point me to the most up-to-date map (if any) of this fine timeline?
The 1922 map is here:

 
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From: “The Black Twenties” by Errol Mitchell (1973)—

The Sankt-Evgeny Offensive had been launched by General Belosselsky from Trebizond in November 1923. Though fought through difficult mountain terrain, the Russians prevailed over the Ottomans under Kemal Fevzi Pasha. This was a measure of both Belosselsky’s superior generalship, but also (and more importantly) Kemal Fevzi’s defensive Army of Anatolia suffering from forces having been transferred for the invasion of Greece. The fortress town of Karahissar fell before the new year. Kemal Fevzi defended his actions by blaming defeats on supposed betrayal and espionage by the local Armenians, abbetting (if not launching – a Heritage Point of Controversy today) pogroms against them.[8]

The situation had shifted by the early months of 1924. The Ottomans took Nafplion in February and Greek state resistance ceased soon afterwards, though Kleinkriegers would be a different matter. This success allowed Constantinople to shift more forces to other fronts. Though the tactically brilliant Ahmet Ismail Pasha would lobby hard for more troops to press the advantage in East Muntenia, he was lacking in friends at court compared to Kemal Fevzi. Ahmet Ismail would have to content himself with merely flinging the Russians and Romanians back against the Carpathians, forcing the surrender of one army and the evacuation of another, leaving much of its equipment behind. When the front froze like others, Ahmet Ismail would hold a front roughly between Buzau and Constantsa, with the Danube Delta and the rest of Dobruja being hotly contested even through the plague years. While it is interesting to speculate how much further he could have reached if he had had more support from Constantinople, that is not the world we live in.

Instead, the additional forces were mostly shifted eastwards. Mehveş Sultan and Ferid Ibrahim Pasha were concerned about Belosselsky pushing westwards, possibly with naval support for coastal bombardment (though the Black Sea was still contested) and taking Ordu and Samsun along the Black Sea coastal lowlands, ultimately trying to threaten Constantinople itself. In one sense this was a valid fear, in that this was the kind of rhetoric General Belosselsky was hearing from his Tsar in Lectel messages. On the other hand, it was clear to Belosselsky that such a narrow and precarious front would greatly advantage the Ottoman defenders, a problem that was multiplied as the reinforcements began to trickle in.

Meanwhile, it was equally clear that the Ottoman position to the south was growing more unstable. Many of the Ottoman forces, unused to this mountainous theatre of war and lacking cold weather equipment, died of hypothermia in the winter months of 1923-24 even before the plague arrived. At the same time, Armenians responded to the pogroms against them by organising Kleinkrieger irregulars to defend their towns and villages against the Turks, weakening Kemal Fevzi’s armies still further as he was forced to add escorts to scouts and messengers to protect them. The Russians were sending out feelers to leaders among the Armenian Kleinkriegers about cooperation. While such collaboration could be framed in terms of Christian solidarity and historic Russian protection of Christians in the region, Belosselsky and his diplomat cousin were not above more pragmatiste moves as well. Many among the Kurdish people of the region had grown somewhat resentful of the centralising and harmonising policies of the Ottomans following the Time of Troubles and Abdul Hadi’s reforms, which had abolished some of their historic autonomous governance. These feelings had been encouraged for years by the Persians, who had historic ties to the Kurds through their ruling Zand dynasty.[9] The Belosselskies worked with General Yakushkin, who was now Marshal and titular governor of ‘occupied’ Persia, though with too few troops to actually enforce his will, to pressure the Persians to in turn pressure the Kurds to rebel against the Turks. The Russians promised that the Kurdish lands would either become an independent state or a Persian province, depending on whom they were talking to at the time.

Jafar Karim Khan Zand, the Shah-Advocate, went along with this in part because it was an easy concession – some good might actually come of it for Persia – and secondly because he was about to announce his famous referendum on the continuation of the monarchy, meaning any successor would not be bound to his policy anyway. The Kurdish revolt was more lukewarm than the Russians had hoped, with many Kurds regarding the Russians with misgivings and the Persians as now no more than a Russian cipher. However, it did make enough of a difference to further pressure the Ottoman troops in the region. With the Choruk Valley now largely under Russian control, Belosselsky’s plan was to hit hard south in an attack through the Tortum Valley on the rebelling Armenian- and Kurdish-populated city of Erzurum. Rather than risking his forces on an ever-longer and more precarious salient to the north while leaving the interior under Ottoman control, he wanted to secure his position.

The Erzurum attack went ahead in April 1924, much to the annoyance of Tsar Paul, who had been expecting a westward push (though never strictly ordering one) and whose Dalekodeon speeches to his people had referenced the fact. It was only the attack’s success that saved Belosselsky’s skin, with Kemal Fevzi once again falling back, hurt as much by the revolts within as from the Russians without. Paul could not publicly condemn his general for a victory at a time when Russia was seeing reversals elsewhere. Instead, he appointed his son Tsarevich Mikhail a Marshal and sent him down to Trebizond. His intention was that the young Mikhail would look over Belosselsky’s shoulder and prevent the ‘unreliable’ general from deviating from the ultimate goal of Constantinople.

However, the result would be rather different. Valentin Belosselsky, Sergei’s suave diplomat cousin, took the young prince under his arm and Mikhail was soon a believer in the Belosselskies’ strategy. Indeed, it was about to be more successful than even they had hoped.

By this point, the plague had already been raging in Persia and parts of the Levant for months, having infected the Mediterranean coastal cities of Asia Minor on its way to Italy and struck Constantinople. But this cold, mountainous battlefield of Anatolia had remained relatively unaffected, lacking many transport links to the outside world. Given the strange pattern with which the plague eventually reached it, some epidemiologists attribute its final entry to the Ottomans sending troops from the Greek campaign as reinforcements to Kemal Fevzi, passing through plague-ridden cities on the way. If this is correct, paradoxically the reinforcements weakened the army far more than they strengthened it. Of course, many Russians at the time instead attributed what occurred to an act of God in recognition of their defence of the Christian Armenians against the Turks – though, for various reasons, this idea would not stay around for very long.

Paul and the Soviet, after much hemming and hawing, had decided to authorise the use of death-luft against the Ottomans. The use of the ‘Scientific Weapon’ had been suspended following the Belgian incident, with Russia’s rhetoric distancing her position from the Belgians’ last desperate revenge attack. There was also a fear that using death-luft against any Cannae state would lead to retaliation in kind from all of them, and Russian troops were generally less well equipped with countermeasures against luft attacks than most (though not all) of the Cannae armies. However, the Ottoman position was orthogonal to that between the Cannae and the Russians (or the Vitebsk Pact), and Héloïse Mercier’s attempts to muddy the waters had largely gone quiet since the Ottomans started killing Armenians. Therefore, the Soviet judged, the Cannae would not escalate matters if the Russians started being creative with the Ratisbon Conventions purely and specifically in their conflict with the Ottomans.

In the end, however, Belosselsky did not need to use the death-luft in combat at all (perhaps barring one, disputed, incident near Mamakhatun [Tercan]. Instead, the luft was used in one of the best-organised fumigation efforts of the period, helping protect the Russian soldiers, their irregular Armenian and Kurdish allies, and their supporters as they pushed deeper into plague-infested territory. Instrumental in this effort was Belosselsky’s capable Quartermaster-General, Igor Vorobyov, and groundbreaking army physician Dr Grigory Vershinin. Between them, they would later quite literally write the book on epidemic management in armies.

Not only did Erzurum fall, but the Russians – to Belosselsky’s surprise – were able to push westward along the Karasu valley almost without resistance to take Erzincan as well in June 1924. The city, now plague-ridden, was almost deserted as many of its inhabitants had fled to neighbouring villages (often tragically bringing the infection with them). Kemal Fevzi’s army had practically disintegrated, and the man himself lay dying with the plague in Harput [Elazig] even as frantic Lectelgrams from Ferid Ibrahim Pasha reached him.

Tsar Paul was less than impressed by Belosselsky once again ignoring his calls for a westward push, and grew concerned that Tsarevich Mikhail’s messages grew ever more adoring in tone about the general he was supposed to be enforcing his father’s will on. As for Belosselsky himself, he had secured effective Russian control over a sizeable slice of Anatolia, and liberated many Armenians (only for them to then often suffer worse from the plague than they had under the Ottoman pogroms – there was only so much death-luft fumigant to go around, after all). He could have rested on his laurels, but he knew he had made an enemy of the Tsar by daring to achieve the wrong victories. He did have the support of the Tsarevich, but that might not matter for many years. And the Ottomans were still weak and in disarray, unable to come up with a way to concentrate a new army without it falling victim to the now-endemic plague. They could still defend Constantinople and the west, with smaller armies standing on the defensive around Sivas and Kayseri, and Ferid Ibrahim began bringing back the aerocraft armada that had helped defeat Greece, using them as defenders against a Russian westward advancement. It was the east of Anatolia that remained in chaos, and that represented an opportunity.

Belosselsky therefore acted as much as from a desire to shore up his personal position as to achieve glory for mother Russia. He was also influenced by reports from Vorobyov that Erzincan’s railway station and several trains had fallen into Russian hands almost intact; Kemal Fevzi’s army had lost cohesion before it could act to sabotage it. With help from Armenian Kleinkriegers to defend the railways, and new locomotives and carriages of the right rail gauge being constructed and shipped in from Tsaritsyn, the army was able to exploit the Ottomans’ own rail connections to push further into the chaotic southeast of Anatolia. It was the same nightmare scenario that many countries’ militaries, notably the Americans in Drakesland, had feared.

Over the next three months, the Russians were able to reach Malatya, then continue to use the railways to finally take Belosselsky’s ultimate target. Based on his discussions with Tsarevich Mikhail, his cousin Valentin had worked out that the best way to outflank the Tsar’s rhetoric was to steal its clothing, giving Paul a way out to pretend that this had been his plan all along. Therefore, though Belosselsky’s real target was the strategic city of Adana, he presented his attack as a ‘Sankt-Pavel Offensive’ aimed at taking the nearby historic city of Tarsus, the birthplace of St Paul. Not only did this evoke the Tsar’s own name, but it fit neatly into his rhetoric about a Christian crusade against barbarism. The real goal, of course, was to reach the Mediterranean, plant a Russian foothold in the Cilician region, and cut the Ottoman Empire in half.

Belosselsky’s plan was audacious and risky. It relied on the assumption that the Ottomans would remain in disarray in the region long enough for a foreign army to plough through and penetrate to Cilicia for the first time since 1608.[10] A second assumption was that the army’s anti-plague measures would continue to protect it as the plague spread ever further. In the event, the first assumption was true enough for the plan to work, but the second was more questionable; though the army itself could be protected, its supply situation became ever more vulnerable.

On October 10th, Ottoman forces in the region rallied under Malik Bey, and the first major battle in weeks was fought south of the city of Marash. The Russians achieved victory, but at the cost of more losses than they had seen since Kemal Fevzi’s death. With the defeat of Malik Bey’s force, which retreated southwards towards Antep [Gaziantep], the path south and west was laid open once more. Adana fell on November 3rd, and by November 6th, the Russians were standing in Tarsus and looking out on the waters of the Mediterranean.

Belosselsky had his victory, being easily the most successful Russian general in history against the hated ancestral foe of the Ottoman Empire. He had done what no-one had achieved in four centuries since the time of the Timurids and the Mamelukes – he had contested control of eastern Anatolia with the Turks. He had pulled off his audacious goal of cutting the empire in half with his salient and preventing either part from reinforcing the other by rail. At the time, his main worry was that that salient would prove too fragile and be outflanked from either side by new Ottoman forces.

Yet that worry was unfounded, as the plague continued to ravage the Ottomans too deeply for such actions to be considered. Nor, however, could the Russians conquer further still. Finally the plague epidemic had become too intense even for Vorobyov and Vershinin’s policies to entirely protect the army from it. Soldiers’ barracks and tents could be fumigated, but not every single supply waggon when one was relying on local villages to keep the army fed and supplied. Some fleas and rats would be missed.

The Russian force remained coherent enough to fend off irregular attacks by Ottoman Kleinkriegers and the degraded armies that Ferid Ibrahim periodically sent against them. The seemingly-fragile salient survived, yet another frozen front like the ones in Poland, Wallachia and Finland.[11] New railway construction slowly and painstakingly took place, trying to link the army more reliably back to Russia’s own network, but the workers – often imported Yapontsi serfs or impressed Tartar prisoners of war – suffered as much as anyone from the epidemic.

Belosselsky could still have repaired his relations with the Tsar; though this was no longer step one in some hypothetical big push for Constantinople, it still represented an historic victory. He could have, were it not for the fact that one flea bit the wrong person. Not one of those nameless Yapontsi plucked from his wood and bamboo hut in Fyodorsk to die for a foreign emperor on the other side of the world, but a man the Tsar actually cared about: his son. After the Tsarevich’s death from the plague (his younger brother Fyodor became the new heir), Belosselsky was lucky to find himself merely exiled to be governor of a freezing prison camp on the northern Yapontsi isle of Edzo [Hokkaido]. Anyone would have been forgiven for thinking he had disappeared from the pages of history altogether, but one would be wrong.

The world’s reaction to the Sankt-Pavel Offensive was striking. It became all the more noteworthy as other fronts, such as that in Poland, ground to a halt as the mass graves piled up more from plague deaths than combat ones. All eyes were on Belosselsky’s army’s methods of plague control, for civilian as well as military purposes. Many, too, were interested in the fate of the Ottomans after the attack on Greece, whether they were motivated by reasons of Christian solidarity or a broader sense of justice. Though few shed tears for the Ottomans’ losses, some worried that Russia once again seemed on a path to world-changing victory.

Yet the reaction from one quarter would be particularly significant. Up until this time, the Societist Combine had not seen the Russians as a notable threat. Indeed, the Russians had even informally helped the Combine in its early years, if only to tweak the Americans’ and French’s noses.[12] To the Societists, the Russians were just another of the ‘nationalistically blinded usurper-gangster states illegitimately claiming authority over the humans of Zones number...’ albeit a very powerful one. It was Belosselsky’s Anatolian campaign which changed this.

Archaeology had been a field which saw rising interest from people in Europe and the Novamund (and beyond, to a lesser extent) throughout the nineteenth century. History had become more of a practical subject, with many interested in their own origins. The Societists, who had already been inspired in part by the reconstruction of extinct languages and what they said about human history, were no less influenced by this. The late Long Peace-era Societists were scarcely unique in becoming fascinated by the history of the ancient Middle East, the first recorded literate civilisations such as the Sumerians, Akkadians, Elamites and Hittites; that had been a craze across much of western society, especially the middle classes from which the Societists of that time mostly drew their ranks.[13] Much of Sanchez’s theories, later expanded by others, focused on how (in their view) humans had transitioned from the First Society, the Tribe, to the Second Society, the City, to the Third Society, the Nation. Reconstructing the history of this crucial region (and, later, ensuring it was suitably manipulated to remain consistent with Societist orthodoxy) was of the utmost interest to the Societists, and remained so as they seized power and expanded under Alfarus.

Archaeologists in neutral nations without censorship (such as Danubia, now influenced by its own Societists) reported in horror that many crucial sites and ancient cities were being damaged by the war. Conflict was taking place not only in places that had seen war a mere millennium before, such as Manzikert,[14] but in cities that were as much as six thousand years old, such as Malatya and, indeed, Tarsus itself. Naturally, Paul’s propaganda was all about demolishing mosques and rebuilding old cathedrals, possibly now with electric vac-lights and giant mosaics of himself included (if we are to believe some contemporary satirists). Around this time, not coincidentally, VoxHumana’s own propaganda ceased describing the war in even-handedly contemptuous terms and began specifically singling out the Russians as ‘vandals of human history’ and the personification of every barbarian tribe that had ever burned libraries and destroyed civilisations.

In the short term, not much would come of this, but time would tell. Perhaps it is no exaggeration to say that the particular enmity between Russians and Societists, which persists to this day, was triggered by General Belosselsky’s desire to briefly take advantage of a plague-weakened foe and win some plaudits at court...





[8] A brief recap of events described in Part #284.

[9] The Zand tribe were part of the Lak or Laki group. Whether this strictly represents Kurdish or Lur extraction is a contentious question, but ties certainly existed, and some Kurdish populations in places as distant as Balochistan are attributed to be descended from those who followed the OTL Zand founder Karim Khan. Of course, in OTL these ties ceased to be relevant after the Zand dynasty was defeated by the Qajars, but this didn’t happen in TTL.

[10] A slightly misleading choice of date, derived from the fact that 1608 was when Cilicia came under direct Ottoman control rather than being part of a vassal state. Note that in OTL the region was invaded by Muhammad Ali of Egypt in 1832, which obviously didn’t happen in TTL.

[11] We’ve already seen that it’s slightly disingenuous to group Wallachia with the others here, as there was more back-and-forth in Dobruja throughout the plague years, and the same is true of Finland, as we’ll see.

[12] See Part #257 in Volume VII.

[13] As mentioned before, TTL saw more interest in the ancient history of the Fertile Crescent civilisations and less in that of Egypt compared to OTL, mostly because it took much longer to get hieroglyphs interpreted without the Rosetta Stone.

[14] A mere 853 years in fact. In 1915, in the First World War in OTL, there was similarly a battle fought in this storied site between the Russians and Ottomans.
 
Russia is definitely rolling a few d20s at the moment, it will be interesting to see how well their luck holds.
 
Well, we know it runs out by the 1950s, if I'm recalling some of the details hinted about the Sunrise war, at least.
 
Not one of those nameless Yapontsi plucked from his wood and bamboo hut in Fyodorsk to die for a foreign emperor on the other side of the world
Now that's a very Human perspective Mr. Mitchell has there. I wonder how that got past the censors.

Anyone would have been forgiven for thinking he had disappeared from the pages of history altogether, but one would be wrong.
Intriguing. I bet a disgruntled general sent into exile in the Russian Far East is going to have no small part to play in the story of how Vostok Russia came to be. Or perhaps he's involved in the Yapontsi rebellion? Maybe both?
 
seems the opposite of 'Human', given that they're emphasizing he's a Yapontsi and that Paul wasn't the same as him, being 'foreign'
 
Intriguing. I bet a disgruntled general sent into exile in the Russian Far East is going to have no small part to play in the story of how Vostok Russia came to be. Or perhaps he's involved in the Yapontsi rebellion? Maybe both?
I do recall the ENA a few updates ago looking for new worlds to conquer as an alternative to demobilizing. This general-without-a-forename could be on a collision course with destiny sooner than we'd think.

Now that I think about it, though, Gavaji seems to be a much easier target than Yapon.
 
seems the opposite of 'Human', given that they're emphasizing he's a Yapontsi and that Paul wasn't the same as him, being 'foreign'
The operative word is 'foreign' here.

I thought pointing out that the life of one Yapontsi laborer forced to die for a foreign emperor ultimately mattered less to the course of history than the life of a princeling of a usurper-gangster state illegitimately claiming authority over Zone[X]Urb[Y] the Tsarevich was a rather Human touch. Though I suppose the author is just stating an objective fact: the death of the Tsar's son affected him more than the death of any of the millions of other humans he sent to fight.

You two are probably right and I'm reading too much into this, but I'm still going to be monitoring Mr. Mitchell's writings for creeping Societist influence. 😛
 
So having gotten a lot of info building up to why Spain goes Societist, I think we're now starting to get some on why the Ottomans do. The Empire's just taken a serious beating and it's taken it on its own home turf, and sure, the Tsar exiled the general responsible but his replacement is still going to be standing in a seriously advantageous position - at least, once his supply lines stop taking a beating from the plague. A state to an internal revolution aimed at bringing the war to an immediate halt on acceptable terms would make sense under the circumstamces, doing so when at least one neighbouring state subscribes to the revolutionary ideology in question and has been more-or-less untouched makes even more sense, participating in such a movement when when it will win you support from the one uncommitted great power is even logical. I think at this point, we should be seriously wondering about the nature of Combine-Eternal State relations.

As for the Tsar, I'm pretty much convinced now my earlier assessment of his motives is correct. He'd built up the Russian position in the first interbellum off this idea that the Russians were unstoppable and the Armart Legions(tm) would roll all the way to Paris and then none of that failed to materialize, and since then his first concern has been to shore up the image of Russian military power somewhere, anywhere, because the Russian diplomatic position is so dependent on the notion that Russia is a burgeoning hegemon and you're better off siding with the Russians and having a place in the new order of the world than siding against them and getting crushed. It's not irrational, but if you bluff like that and then the chips go down and you've actually got an only okay hand it sure leaves you in a bad position.

This, of course, is explicitly why Belosselky both gets away with everything he does, and why the Tsar is so concerned to keep a firm hand on him.
 
Someone upthread suggested more media updates, so here are the flags of Europe as of 1922.

Let me know if you want me to continue this with other continents!

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edit: just realised I accidentally missed Spain off the end so have added it.
Shouldn't Belgium be called Flanders since there was no Brabant revolution and it was called that at the beginning of the story?

Also, I have been re-reading the first thread and I saw something interesting: "Not the same as OTL Maximilien Robespierre 'but worryingly similar" (Thande,2007), So I was wondering what the difference between LTTW Rosbespirre and otl before the revolution?
 
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Shouldn't Belgium be called Flanders since there was no Brabant revolution and it was called that at the beginning of the story?
Belgium ITTL is a classicist coinage dating to after the Flemish conquest of the United Provinces. I'll see if I can find the post where it comes up.

EDIT: Here it is. I thought there was some textual discussion of the significance somewhere, but I couldn't find it.
 
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I'm thinking the Ottomans end up going Societist in an attempt to prevent ethnic resistance (as is happening with Armenians and Kurds rn) going forward, by making everyone one people.
 

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Thanks for the comments everyone.

Shouldn't Belgium be called Flanders since there was no Brabant revolution and it was called that at the beginning of the story?

Also, I have been re-reading the first thread and I saw something interesting: "Not the same as OTL Maximilien Robespierre 'but worryingly similar" (Thande,2007), So I was wondering what the difference between LTTW Rosbespirre and otl before the revolution?

Belgium ITTL is a classicist coinage dating to after the Flemish conquest of the United Provinces. I'll see if I can find the post where it comes up.

EDIT: Here it is. I thought there was some textual discussion of the significance somewhere, but I couldn't find it.
To recap: Charles Theodore of Bavaria in TTL successfully became Duke of the former Austrian Netherlands (as he had hoped to in the War of the Bavarian Succession OTL). This new state I originally called Belgium, but then was advised by commenters that Flanders would be a more likely name. Flanders then became a Kingdom and coexisted with the Dutch Republic for years, but when the latter collapsed in the 1830s, it was absorbed into a new reunited Netherlands known popularly as Belgium. Recall that Belgium as a term originally applied to the entirety of the Low Countries and was invoked as a term in the Eighty Years' War of Dutch independence, for example.
 
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Part #287: Culture Vultures

“There has been a minor diplomatic incident in the Guinean city of Dakar, where – as part of an agreement by the Government of France to provide investment in new factories there – the Ambassador, His Excellency M. Teissier, was received at a reception by the Prime Minister of Guinea, the Right Honourable Mr Kwaku Mensa. Unfortunately, two incidents undermined the occasion; firstly the French anthem was poorly played by the official band, and secondly the bilingual French commentary was provided in the Nouvelle-Orléanais dialect rather than Parisian French. There has been no official comment from M. Teissier or His Most Christian Majesty’s Government, but there are reports that many ordinary French people on the country’s Motext network are castigating the so-called ‘insult’ from the Guineans. We now go over to Professor Richard Salisbury, an expert on the region, for comment. Richard?”

“Thank you Miss Jaxon. Well, over the past few hours, Prime Minister Mensa has commented briefly on the incident, apologising for any offence caused and explaining simply that his people had little history of contact with the French. But in fact, as the opposition leader in the Grand Palaver, the Right Honourable Mr Dauda Nazaki, said in an interview this evening in a critique of the Prime Minister’s statement, part of the logic behind the selection of Dakar for the reception was that it had been a French colony between 1677 and 1758.”

“That’s fascinating!”

“Yes, it was taken by American and English, or British I should say, forces during the Third War of Supremacy. Those days of French rule lie long in the past, and one would be forgiven for thinking there had never been contact between France and the Guinean lands of western Africa; you know, it is an interesting ‘what if’ of history if Dakar had been returned to France at the peace treaty, and perhaps French, rather than English, would have become the primary outsiders’ lingua franca of the region...”

– Transcription of a C-WNB News Motoscope broadcast,
recorded in Waccamaw Strand, Kingdom of Carolina, 12/04/2020​


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From: “A History of Modern France” by Bertrand Woode (1998)—

Ever since the Jacobin Revolution and the years of rule by Lisieux’s brutally utilitarian regime, Paris had lost its crown of Europe’s cultural capital to Vienna. Certainly, there had been a measured recovery since the days when France’s capital was nothing more than a dreary mass of straight roads and blocky warehouses designed to crumble within decades; the city had been reimagined and reimagined anew by generations of architects after the Restoration. Yet many of the old cultural channels were gone and would never return, or at least not in the same guise. The old salons of the pre-revolutionary days had vanished, and the Cytherean movement in France would be needed to plot new paths for women to regain and expand their old political influence.[1] The same would be true of the salons as a venue for new artists, whether they be musicians, painters or a host of other media, to be discovered by society. Indeed, in its old form, ‘society’ no longer existed. Nor did the stately homes and palaces of the aristocracy which had so often played host to such artists as a means of patronage.

Naturally, it is easy to bemoan this loss of heritage and forget that it was this very same elevated, ivory-tower Parisian culture that had thrived while the people starved and helped precipitate the Revolution in its original, idealistic form in the days of Le Diamant. Many Frenchmen and –women of humbler station, even if they had soured on the Republic, would not shed a tear that the painted and powdered aristocracy of the ancien régime would never regain its former privileged isolation from the old Third Estate.

Yet it also meant that France’s cultural ‘industries’ had been set back to square one. Though France would continue to rise back to geopolitical prominence throughout the nineteenth century, the cultural shadow she cast lagged behind military power and political influence. In a large part, this was due to competition. Vienna had seized the crown of cultural capital of Europe in the aftermath of the Jacobin Wars and had held on tightly to it ever since. Paradoxically, this was all the more strengthened throughout the wasted years of Francis II’s rule, in which there was a sense that the clock could be wound back to the heady days of the ancien régime just by shutting one’s eyes and wishing hard enough. Though greatly damaging in the short term to the prospects of the Hapsburg monarchy, this period was a boon for Vienna’s cultural output, with music, painting, architecture and fashion being powered by the rich fuel of nostalgia.

Culturally, this continued even after the Popular Wars, when the Hapsburg monarchy took a new modernising tack and Danubia was created. As new generations grew up, a new word was coined, Schattensehnsucht: ‘longing for a shadow’ or, less literally, describing those who were nostalgic for an idealised image of a time they had never actually experienced themselves. This proved surprisingly persistent as a cornerstone of Viennese culture, also inspiring Rome in Italy to adopt a similar approach to ancient Roman fashion and art. Some historians even trace a direct line from nineteenth-century Viennese idealisation of the past to the Archie youth movement of the 1930s, though this remains controversial.

Regardless, Vienna had a driving principle behind the music, painting, sculpture, literature and other output of the artists who flocked there, while Paris was still looking to find a new identity, its roots cut off at the ankles by the sharp discontinuity of Lisieux. In particular, there was a big divide in the Parisian arts scene of the mid-century in whether to idealise or criticise industrialism and technology, reflecting the broader political divide between the pro-industry Diamantines and the more critical, Neo-Physiocratic Eden Movement of Jules Clément that influenced the Verts.[2] In other times, this conflict might itself have fuelled a cultural flowering, but Paris’ artistic scene was still sufficiently shaky and few in number that it was more a hindrance towards re-establishing a presence on the European stage.

But recovery proper had began by the second half of the nineteenth century, by which time the growth of the Sensualist movement in art had plotted a French-focused impact on European culture for the first time in years, in contrast to the Valladolid School Hyperrealism that had previously been prominent.[3] As France continued to grow in geopolitical power following the Pandoric War and the Panic of 1917, more heads began once more turning towards Paris to see what the next cultural trends would be, just as they had two centuries before. And it would be in Paris that the defining artistic movement of the Black Twenties would be born, known internationally as Morne – the French word for dreary or bleak.

Popular renditions of this period tend to portray Morne as being dominant in the 1920s and then pushed out by the more colourful and hopeful counter-movements of the 1930s. The reality is quite different, for the logical reason that patrons and consumers were more amenable to art dwelling on the pain and suffering of the Black Twenties once they were actually over, rather than in the middle of them. In reality, the 1920s saw a lot of frivolous and upbeat cultural output in a desperate attempt to keep the people’s spirits up; these media are today little remembered except in the ENA, which had some of the more memorable plays and musicals. Ironically, at the time these were often sold only as printed scripts and sheet music to perform at home, as actually performing them in public would be against public health regulations at the time.

In this regard, Morne is frequently compared to the Danse macabre, a cultural movement in France centuries earlier that had been influenced by both the Black Death (the last big plague pandemic before the Black Twenties) and the Hundred Years’ War. The Danse macabre motifs had focused on the inevitability of death and how it was no respecter of persons, with frescoes depicting living people meeting their ancestors as cadavers who warn them of what is to come, and carnivals in which actors would dress up as corpses or skeletons and ‘dance with Death’. Much like the Morne period (but on a grander scale), the Danse macabre did not flower during the period of disaster that inspired it, but in the years afterwards, mostly the 1400s.

While almost everyone today will recognise the ‘look’ of Morne art (which has gone through periodic revivals, most recently in the 1990s), it remains contentious exactly where that look comes from. Gagnaire (1971) is one of many analysts to suggest that the oldest Morne art used contrasts of white and brown, or light brown and dark brown, and therefore stemmed from an imitation of how letters and drawings looked after they had been heated in an oven in an attempt to kill disease animalcules before passing into quarantine. There is some evidence for this claim, but the vast majority of Morne art uses contrasts of black and white, not brown, and if the browned quarantine documents were the original inspiration, that look was soon abandoned. Others have claimed that Morne art always began as monochrome black and white, and there were other sources of inspiration such as the dazzle camouflage on contemporary ships. Still others make the more prosaic claim that there was no direct real-life inspiration, and monochrome Morne was simply a sign-of-the-times reaction against the rich colours of Sensualism and other preceding artistic movements.

Regardless of this argument, which will most probably never be solved, Morne came to define the look and feel of the Black Twenties in later period pieces (even though, as said above, much of it was not produced until the 1930s). Like the danse macabre, Morne often dwelt on the suffering of those hit by both plague and war at the same time, musing on the inevitability of death – though the more subversive pieces drew deliberate contrast with the better life available in countries at peace, such as Danubia and China. Incidentally, Chinese Qinghua blue and white ceramic art is one of the more dubious suggestions for what inspired Morne’s monochrome style. Unlike many preceding monochrome art forms, however, Morne tended to emphasise the use of heavy blocks of black rather than just outlines. This rendered it unsuitable for mass depiction using standard woodcuts and printing presses of the time, which were not capable of simultaneously reproducing both thick areas of solid black while still preserving the subtle pointillism of other parts of an image. Whether deliberate or no (again, analysts argue) this had the effect of Morne standing out from the more mass-produced public art of the period. Originals were highly sought-after by collectors, something fairly unusual at the time for ink drawings rather than paintings.

Morne was not solely a visual medium, with Morne music, drama and architecture also being produced. The running theme is one of gloom and despair, but also sharp contrasts to reflect the harsh black and white of the visual form. Morne music has not had the staying power of Morne visual art, with its experimental, discordant chords (influenced by the gamelan music of Javanese exiles according to some) not appealing to all but the most avant-garde. Conversely, Morne architecture is probably the part of the movement that has had the longest lasting impact, with neo-Morne buildings still popular today. This is probably because the black and white contrast in that context is less immediately evocative of the despair that the original movement dwelt on, and many unfamiliar with the history of the movement consider Morne buildings to be merely striking rather than cheerless.

As is always the case in popular descriptions of cultural eras, Morne was never as defining or as dominant as modern films set in the 1920s would have us believe. Nonetheless, it had a large long-term impact. Not only did it create a visual and artistic style that would leave long shadows in memory of the grief and horror of the Black Twenties (particularly upon European culture), but it cemented into the minds of all that after years of playing catch-up, the culture of Paris was back...

Morne is also somewhat unusual, and perhaps symptomatic of the more collectivist and less individualistic esprit du temps[4] of the 1920s, in which nations pulled together to resist the punishing threats from within and without. Less than most artistic movements, Morne is less defined by its individual artists and more by its general climate. While it is possible to reel off a list of iconic Paris-based Morne artists, such as the painter Ollier, the playwright Caillaud and the sequent artists Montcharmont and Bouvard, these are considered less defining than listing the Sensualist artists of a generation before. This lack of a Central Character [Great Man] approach the genre is partly driven by the brutal reality that so many of the artists produced relatively little before succumbing to the plague or, more prosaically, fleeing Paris for the countryside. It was not the individual talent that mattered, but the collective genius of the shared vision of the Morne artists in their Paris clique, which remained like a greater organism with a Ship of Theseus continuity, even as it shed some ‘cells’ and others joined it.[5]

Of course, this does not stop collectors talking up the works of individuals, and indeed having achieved only a small amount before succumbing to a tragically young death has always been seen as something of a bonus for artists whom collectors choose to place on a pedestal. However, this approach has never been too successful with Morne art, not least because its iconic style is often difficult to associate with a particular artist. Furthermore, many of them bought into the collectivist idea at the time, and deliberately did not sign their work, or signed it with a symbol denoting a collective effort. One exception to this is the case of sequent artists; Morne sequents are typically long enough that a particular style can be recognised, and so it is the work of men like Montcharmont and Bouvard that becomes particularly sought after. It was via the need to produce sequents in larger numbers that printing technology eventually adapted to be able to reproduce the Morne style en masse; this, as much as fading memories of the Black Twenties, contributed to the decline of the genre after the 1930s.[6]

Though Morne was the defining artistic movement in Paris in this period, it was not the only cultural influence France had on Europe and the wider world – for better or for worse. Religious and spiritual responses to the challenge of the Black Twenties were abundant, just as they had been for the Black Death of centuries prior. Both existing orthodox and heterodox movements saw growth in the period (the Old Believers in Russia are one example, despite attempts at persecution from above). There were also splinters from the existing churches; for example, the New Reformed Wesleyans in England and later America, better known by their nickname ‘Straight Shooters’, who adopted a number of unusual beliefs from their leader Pastor Frederick Granville. Among these was a belief that singing the same hymn twice in a month (or repeating any part of it at all in an encore) was an affront to the Almighty. Some speculate this began as something as simple as Granville, in his youth, being annoyed that a large chunk of the existing Wesleyan hymnal was never used in his church due to the pastor and congregation’s enthusiasm for a few old favourites repeated over and over. If its origins were as prosaic as that, though, it became an article of faith for the Straight Shooters. Many of their other unusual ideas also focus on music, such as only using musical instruments explicitly mentioned in the Bible (of which there are fortuitously many, but some disagreements over translation) and playing at extremely loud volume in reference to Psalm 150:5 (“Praise him upon the loud cymbals: praise him with the clash of cymbals”). This made the Straight Shooters popular as a youth revival movement, especially in the ENA, but less than popular with their neighbours, especially as their services often took place as midnight. More intriguingly, the Straight Shooters also devoted much scholarship into attempting to reconstruct the lost Israelite tunes mentioned in the Psalms that the words were originally set to; though most archaeologists consider the results to be nothing more than wishful thinking, the Straight Shooters’ scholars discovered several innovative cryptographic techniques in the process.[7]

There are many other examples that could be discussed around the world (with China in particular home to some especially intriguing movements) but let us return to France and the infamous Massilians. Sociologists still disagree on the exact origins of the movement and which component was most significant. For many years, it was assumed that the primary source of inspiration was a group of Moronite refugees who had been exiled from Tierra del Fuego after the Societists took over and imposed their laws. While the influence of these Moronites (who had eventually made their way to France, probably with the returning IEF) was doubtless important, the assumption that it was the key influence has been more recently criticised by scholars. Guibal (1984), in particular, accuses earlier scholarship of over-emphasising the Moronites simply because of their ‘colourful’, ‘exotic’ and ‘outrageous’ nature. He also notes that relatively few sources survive on the Moronites’ way of life in Tierra del Fuego in the years prior to the Pandoric War and Societist Revolution, and invokes evidence suggesting that the group in question were actually considered heterodox deviant outcasts from the community there as a whole – hence why they were able to escape earlier. Guibal’s assertion is controversial, because it is accounts by the Moronites’ spiritual leader Adam Barmoroni that have formed the basis for modern reconstructions of what all Moronites were supposed to have believed before the Societist takeover. There remains independent evidence for some sociological points, such as them practising simultaneous polygamy and polyandry in which each man took three wives and each wife had three husbands, but many of Barmoroni’s claims about their theology have now come under greater scrutiny.

Regardless, the Moronite exiles in Marseilles were not the only potential source of influence. Gnativist people, often of Métis descent, had left the former Superior Republic after its occupation and division by the ENA and Russians after the Pandoric War. Some of these, led by a French-speaking Huron engineer named Jacques Hochelay,[8] also settled in the South of France and were objects of fascination by the locals. Finally, often excluded from analyses because of their seeming banality, are the French themselves; the Neo-Physiocratic Eden Movement, though no longer as influential upon politics as it once had been, continued to have its supporters among the people. Indeed, near its beginning the movement was often described as a ‘Neo-Edenite’ one by outsiders.

Whatever the relative portions that made up the cocktail of influences, the group later known as the Massilians first came to prominence immediately before the Black Twenties, around 1921, but became much more significant when war and plague came. The Massilians advocated a back-to-nature idea that looked down on modern technology, and claimed humans had grown more sickly as a result of modern agriculture and industry. Evoking the idea of an earthly paradise, they tried to live as latter-day hunter-gatherers – which some argue signifies a rejection of Societism’s orderly notion of a succession of civilisation from hunter-gatherer to tribe to city to nation to Final Society, perhaps indicative of influence from the Moronites or more straightforward Meridian Refugiados. Regardless, what saw the most fascination from the locals, and what has defined them ever since, was their practice of nudism. It was rather fortunate, of course, that their movement had grown up in Provence around the city of Marseilles; such commitment to principle would have been rather bolder in Helsingfors!

The Massilians, named after the old Latin name of the city, were viewed as a curiosity for a while, with occasional condemnations from public authority (both sacred and secular). It was the coming of the plague in 1923 which changed matters. The Massilians began preaching that their ‘natural’ lifestyle would protect them from the plague, in particular exposing their bodies to sunlight, and began more boldly campaigning in the streets, rather than sticking to the beaches and their own communes. This led to a riot in November (by which point the Massilians were having to be a little more principled about eschewing clothing, even in Marseilles) and the Parlement-Provincial of Provence got involved, expelling the group from its territory. A few went west to Languedoc, but more went east to the Ligurian hinterland of Genoa in Italy, where they were generally tolerated and still exist as a curiosity to this day...





[1] See Part #125 in Volume III.

[2] See Part #166 in Volume IV.

[3] See Part #221 in Volume V.

[4] This term is used here with the meaning of ‘zeitgeist’, although in OTL French (in the singular) it more usually conveys simply ‘punctual’.

[5] The appeal to a biological, cell-based metaphor is another sign of the times and influence from recent scientific work, as discussed in Part #273 of Volume VII in the context of its influence on early Diversitarianism. The Ship of Theseus is a famous invocation of the paradox that can one replace every part of an entity and still have it be considered the same entity?

[6] To someone from OTL, Morne sequents would probably superficially evoke the look of some Japanese manga in their use of sharp black and white contrast and hard angles, though the actual style is very different.

[7] For example, Psalms 57, 58, 59 and 75 are speculated to have been set to a tune titled ‘Do Not Destroy’, though scholars disagree on whether that is actually the significance of the phrase.

[8] This is probably an alias, as ‘Jacques’ was an old French term for the Huron or Wyandot people with the implication of ‘peasant’, and Hochelay is an old Huron town or group from centuries earlier which the French might have recognised.
 
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