Well, I've read the last two updates, and I can only say that LTTW has hit another major milestone.
Thoughts:
- lovely interlude chapter, had some great banter that was both funny and informative. Though I have to wonder whether this is the last time we see our intrepid multiverse spies... I'm getting the impression you'll be putting them to rest from further missions in TimeLine L.
- the more I read the interlude chapters, the more I get the distinct impression that TimeLine A
isn't fully what we'd perceive as OTL. Still, it certainly seems closer to our reality than LTTW's timeline. Interesting bit of observation on speculative romance not being perceived as broadly as over here, given the lack of enough backing for multiverse theories.
- great map ! Detailed enough (B Munro style) to give one an idea of what the situation is nearly 200 years after the POD, and yet sparse enough to stay easily readable and not reveal too much. If I may ask, could we also get a rough map of the major pre-Pandoric political/military alliances, in respective colours ? I'd love to see one like that (if only because I enjoy all the Entente and Central Powers alliance maps from OTL).
- I actually approve of your decision to do the Pandoric War chapters in a more narrative style. No shark jumping expected. Given how dry or endlessly detail-obsessed our non-fiction about 20th century conflicts can get, I feel a more vignette/snippet approach could be actually beneficial. I'm already wondering how much ideological bias will be present in the period materials documenting all of the conflicts...
"This broom closet is sealed shut."
"C4 would blast it open."
"WE'RE IN THE CLOSET!"
"So?"
"C4 WOULD BLAST US OPEN TOO!!!"
"What's this ?! We've landed in a walled-in cupboard ? I need a breacher on the door. Get this door opened !"
"Right away, sir. C4 to the door. One shattered door, coming up..."
*places charge*
"3, 2, 1..."
"Um... No ! Wait ! We'll..."
*terrifying explosion*
Would have been a really anticlimactic end to captain MacCauley and his co-workers.
