Look to the West (Thande's first proper timeline, and it's about time!)

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Thande

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Well, I have to echo that it does look like a repeat of Hiedler, but...
I honestly hadn't realised the backstories were similar until someone pointed it out.

Probably because I planned the two things months apart and it didn't occur to me. Oh well.
 
I honestly hadn't realised the backstories were similar until someone pointed it out.

Probably because I planned the two things months apart and it didn't occur to me. Oh well.

Please its the classic archetype of a hero. Person finds new purpose after his family is killed and goes on to fight the opressors who killed his family and does extraordinary things. They sound familiar becuase every hero is like that. I personally like reading stories about them so I have no problems with it. :D
 
I honestly hadn't realised the backstories were similar until someone pointed it out.

Probably because I planned the two things months apart and it didn't occur to me. Oh well.

No, now you just have to run with it. Have the Spaniards rise up under a man whose family was trapped in their house and burned down by the French! The Poles rise up under a man whose family was trapped in their house and burned down by the Russians! The Greeks rise up under a man whose family was trapped in their house and burned down by the Ottomans! The Maori rise up under a man whose family was trapped in their house and burned down by the Royalists! The Japanese rise up under a man whose family was trapped in their house and burned down by the Ainu! The French scientists rise up under Lavoisier's kids!

C'mon, you know you want to. Then you can rename the story "Look to the Burning House Where Your Family Lived!" ;)
 
And without further ado, I present the TL as it stands in 1803 (please point out any mistakes).

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Looking at Roberto's Shiny New Map (and very nice it is too), I can't help but wonder what'll happen with Saxony-Poland and the Issue of German Nationalism...
 

Thande

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No, now you just have to run with it. Have the Spaniards rise up under a man whose family was trapped in their house and burned down by the French!
Fucking hell, man, I just realised I had actually had planned that at some point :D

Well, nearly. Time to rip out the red pen...
 

Susano

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Fucking hell, man, I just realised I had actually had planned that at some point :D

Well, nearly. Time to rip out the red pen...

:D :D :D

Well, for a suprising plot twist it could be a woman whose family died in a burning house! :D

...actually, that has potential. Much potential. A reverse Jean d'Arc! After all, Spains very catholic, too! And allied Propaganda would exploit that to no end!
 
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