Is iad na hÉireann Láidir- A Tale of Alternate Ireland

Hello everyone! After watching and enjoying a great many timelines, I have decided to create my own, hopefully to follow in the footsteps of the many greats I have seen. Seeing as how this is my first, I am open to any suggestions, and if you have anything that would help, please pm me!

1170, Leinster, Ireland

Dairmait Mac Murchada looked upon the men with satisfaction as they marched into Connaught. These new knights had taken the throne of Leinster back for him, and with their help, he would have his revenge on that bastard O’Connor they called High King, the man that had exiled him, blinded one of his sons, and killed another that was hostage. A Stain on the Title if ever there was one, he thought bitterly. No matter. We meet him again and show who the true King should be. He will pay for what they did to my son.
His thoughts were interrupted by the sound of an approaching rider behind him. Richard de Clare, leader of this band of Normans and husband to his daughter, reigned in beside him, along with his second in command Raymond Fitzgerald.
“The men are eager, lord. Only a few days’ march and we should be upon O’Connor’s forces,” de Clare reported.
“Aye. The boys are restless, they want a fight. This so-called King should be put in his place in no time. And the loot!…” Fitzgerald grinned at the prospect of defeated enemies and slit purses.
Mac Murrough’s thoughts turned to these new, savage, cunning men now in his employ. Vicious in battle, covered in iron and with massive horses… the Irish had yet to find a way to counter them. They were certainly useful, but he had a feeling they would be harder to manipulate as time went on…..
“Excellent. You will find all you desire when O’Connor is defeated. Just a few days, and you will be lords with lands granted by the new High King of Eire!” For a long moment, Mac Murrough thought only of his revenge on the men who had disgraced him….

Kingdom of Briefne, Ireland
Meanwhile, on a hill forty miles northwest of this meeting, Rory O’Connor stood outlined against a stormy sky as he prepared his army for the fight that lay ahead. Dermot Mac Murrough had returned with new soldiers from across the sea, ferocious, armored warriors that few could stand against. With these men Dublin had fallen, and he once again sat on the throne of Leinster. Mac Murrough wasn't content with regaining Leinster, however, and was determined to destroy those that had exiled him and claim High Kingship. It was a pity that we exiled the man, O’Connor thought. Better that we had slit his throat.
There was no point in pondering the mistakes of the past, he reminded himself. He would march against Mac Murrough, and slaughter his forces, new soldiers or not. Idle men did not have the title of High King bestowed on them.
O’Connor turned to Tigernan Mór mac Aeda, king of Briefne and leader of much of the army assembled. “Tell the men we march at dawn tomorrow. We will meet Mac Murrough and his band of foreigners and crush them!”
As the preparations were made and the warriors cheered upon hearing the news, the High King pondered just how dark this night may be before the dawn.
 
More to come soon- I just would like to know the thoughts of anyone as i continue! This is a TL with the goal of an independent Ireland attempting to unite
 
It looks good. I don't know anything about Irish history, but an independent, unified Ireland is fun, so I'd encourage you to keep going. :)
 
Here's chapter 2, more to come as soon as I can write it! Any comments are welcome.


Rory O’Connor gaped in shock as his men fled across the green Longford hills, the battle cries of Mac Murrough’s men echoing across the valley. The damned foreigners lived up to their reputation, bowmen raining death upon his men as the horsemen, spears lowered, thundered death……. he couldn't expect his lads, as brave as they were, to stand against that.
The clash of steel and the screams of Mac Murrough’s levies snapped him out of his reverie. The battle was lost, and he would be lucky if mac Aeda could rally enough to fight another day. Padraig, O’Connor’s champion, had gathered the Royal Guard around the High King’s banner, hoping to buy time for Rory to leave.
“M’lord, you must be out of here now!” Padraig shouted over the clash of steel and cries of the wounded, now being slaughtered by the Dublin levies. “Mac Murrough will be here soon, and we can’t let him have you!”
10 men mounted up around him, ready to bear him away from the battle. “My King, we must go!” Yet O’Connor paused, watching his champion refuse a horse, instead giving it to a young son of a chief. Padraig gave his King a look that said what he must do. O’Connor nodded, feeling his heart strain at the man’s sacrifice.
The enemy was coming closer, taken by the lust of battle and encouraged by the sight of the King’s standard. Padraig set his feat and hefted his axe. “C’mon you bastards! C’mon and die!” The massive young man screamed, looking like Cu Chulann in his fury. A few men advanced. He obliged them. A growing number followed close behind, like a angry sea foaming against the defiance of the rocks.
“Now, Lord! We must ride!” The man nearest O’Connor shouted, loud enough to finally prompt the king into action. As they rode, leaders of a beaten army, a new fury woke within Rory O’Connor. Mac Murrough will pay, he thought. By St. Patrick, he will not know peace as he lives. This crown shall never rest on his head.
As he gathered the remnants of his army around him at dusk, he realized he couldn't repeat this mistake again and live. We will find a way to deal with these Normans, he thought.
He couldn't stand and fight them, not with the forces in their respective conditions. Harass them, draw them in… and then..
Among the blood and death surrounding him, O’Connor grinned savagely.



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Raymond Fitzgerald clenched his teeth in frustration as he looked at the results of the ambush. 8 more men dead, and nary a sight of the enemy until they struck. Ever since they had been crushed in South Longford, the thrice-damned Irishmen had yet to stand up to him in battle. Now it was raid and bushwhack, men slaughtered and an enemy invisible in the moors. He feared to send out foragers in groups of less than 20, lest they never return. “If only they'd come out, we’d give them a thrashing,” one of the knights next to him muttered. The loyal Irish had disappeared into the woods after the raiders, and came back shaking their heads. The men were ill at ease, the welsh bowmen conversing nervously in their strange language. After a few more miles it became obvious the army would go no further. “We make camps tonight lads,” Raymond shouted, feeling the exhaustion creep into him. Another night, another camp deep in enemy territory.

Fitzgerald woke with a start to cries from the edge of the camp. 3 more had been killed in the dead of the night, throats slit in their sleep. Raymond almost cried aloud in impotent rage. Order had to be maintained, however, and the column resumed the advance, burning and slaughtering as it went. Raymond was venting his fury upon the peasants as they traveled deeper into enemy territory, attempting to atone for the deaths of so many in his command to little, useless battles. The march continued as the rain began to fall, and the increasingly furious Normans and their Irish allies continued, never free from the eyes of O’Connor’s vengeful men in the woods around them.
 
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