By the way, it is Mario.
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By the way, it is Mario.
Wouldn't this effectively make SEGA Nintendo in everything but name. It wouldn't even be called SEGA realistically since SEGA is short for Service Games, the initial name of one of the two companies that eventually merged to make SEGA.
All of the bad games in this world needs to be stopped.
Are you even putting effort into this story?
Yeah what is this?![]()
Are you even putting effort into this story?
Yeah what is this?![]()
I try my spelling its just my computer and tablet mess up sometimes the same with grammar and i do not like capitalization or punctuation and i try to respect english laungage but I think of the best Sega Nintendo Sony Microsoft games of the year but i dont have too much ideas And i made this acount from inspiration from player two start cronus invictus and of koopas and kremlings redux and like I said to neo bear I put all of my time and effort on this TlYeah, I mean it sounds like an okay enough premise (after I read it for the fourth time to understand what was going on) but I quite simply don't think I can read it.
I'll check it out when it's formatted better. As it is right now, Sony, it looks very hastily glued together and rife with poor spelling, grammar, punctuation, spelling, capitalization...to put it plainly it looks very dirty and unprofessional and I mean no offense by that. The chat-style dialogue also doesn't help and makes it look even less professional.
I recommend you clean it up some to where it's easier to read, follows more proper literary rules and respects the English language a bit more maturely, it'll attract a lot more people to your TL. Also, do focus on more than 4 or 5 lines of story in your post. Most TL authors post several paragraphs at a time. You have absolutely 0 rush and all the time in the world, and we can wait until you have enough for a proper post.
I'm sure you have a great timeline planned ahead, but if you don't put effort into your story nobody will read it.
This should also probably be moved to ASB because of its unrealistic (and unexplained) premises.
I try my spelling its just my computer and tablet mess up sometimes the same with grammar and i do not like capitalization or punctuation and i try to respect english laungage but I think of the best Sega Nintendo Sony Microsoft games of the year but i dont have too much ideas And i made this acount from inspiration from player two start cronus invictus and of koopas and kremlings redux and like I said to neo bear I put all of my time and effort on this Tl
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Im Calling Troll On This One Guys!
one of the most strangest comments on my threads...![]()
Im Calling Troll On This One Guys!
Come on now, I wouldn't be so quick to think so.
It's more likely and really obvious that Sony is just very (extremely probably) young, as you can tell by his mannerisms in addition to his English, which he may not be used to typing or writing formally outside of a few school problems. Mastering English is a very good skill to learn, by the way, and isn't as hard as school might make you think. People judge a lot from you by the way you type.
If you like, Sony, you can send the TL posts you're working on to one of us to proofread, and we can word it into a form that looks better to read, fix grammar and spelling errors etc. I myself would be happy to help.
AND I AM NOT YOUNG IM NEVER GONNA TELL YOU MY AGE!
geez even neobear sent me a message on that...
No need to rage. This TL has potential.![]()