Hello Nixonshead,
You just keep getting better as you go along. Fantastic work. Thanks especially for the comparative graphic showing relative sizes.
One thing I'm struck by, and a couple questions for the authors:
1) Kibo is a good deal smaller than I expected in the render - smaller than the one in our timeline, certainly. It is also odd seeing Kibo placed on the axial end of the station - but that's clearly shaped by our experience of ISS, where the Shuttle forced the main docking entry to be there, rather than Spacelab, where the ERM was placed on the axial end of the station.
2) Is Sam Ting's Alpha Magnetic Spectrometer ever going to make an appearance in any form on the Station? In our timeline he didn't propose it until 1995. That might get sped up now that a station is already up and running. My gut says that it would probably happen, but in a smaller, more limited and inexpensive form, maybe something you could fit in the external storage bay of an AARDV.
3) I don't see evidence of anything like External Stowage Platforms or ExPrESS Logistics Carriers on Freedom - any plans to add these down the road? Obviously, the station is going to have the same needs that need to be met...