Ed Dawn

I'm saddened by this but I can see that fleshing this into a full TL would almost spoil the fun. A great piece of writing, if not exactly stellar AH for the purists among us - the 'Militant wins' POD is definitely original though and worth exploring in more depth some day too.

Let me be by no means be the first to say I'm very pleased by this upsurge of activity from you. Makes me think we should go back to Gordon...

I really appreciate that, but you're right, I do have it a bit more fleshed out in my head but I'd like to leave the world to the reader's imagination for now. The only thing I'll say for now is that the Tories were in power for A Very Long Time, as you probably guessed.

That said, I am horrified about what you've turned poor old Dan into. You vile creature.

I quite like Dan really, but he's a big guy and it seems like he'd be good with knots. At least he's gotten a promotion!
 
Sorry to bump this when you've said this is a one shot (which is a shame, by the way) but This was excellent. As much as I'd love to see a full TL, leaving it alone does let our minds fill in the gaps.

I look forward to seeing more from you Red.

Long live Comrade Ed!
 
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