Onyx
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Whew, that was long, comments and criticism is welcome, as I said, I wasnt good with his time of era of crusades.
Chapter 4: Au-delà de Vahalla
1105, Tripoli.
Tripoli, one of the last major cities in the Levant, it has been in siege for three years, but after three years of harassing the crusaders and well-defending itself, Raymond IV of Tripoli (Who now claims the city) had it. Tripoli was originally under Radwan of Aleppo's control, but after a disastrous assault onto on the castles held by the crusaders which led to the decimation of much of Radwan's men a year ago, the people of the city gave up and joined the Fatimids as Radwan was too late to return to Tripoli with reinforcements (1).
Raymond IV (Who luckily survived the assault on the castle(2) was even more angry than ever and requested Baldwin I to help him siege the city. Baldwin arrived, as with Baldwin of Bourcq (Now Edessa), Bertrand of Toulouse (Raymond's son, and also claimant), and William-Jordan (Raymond's other son and also claimant). Latin Patriarch Anselm IV was requested to join the fray so he can encourage Christian zealous and moral and joined along with a giant cross built on a wagon called "The Great Cross of Tripoli".
The battle was bloody, even though Tripoli gave themselves to the Fatimids, they had no help coming and decided to fight to the last man, even if they lose, the only reinforcements that arrived was a pair of ships of Fatimid soldiers, among them was the vizier successor of Al-Afdal Shahanshah and the vizier killed at Ramla, his name was Al-Darwishi Kaldunashah, a cousin to Al-Afdal (3). During the battle, William-Jordan was killed when an arrow struck him in the chest, Bertrand of Toulouse saw this and wept, there's even a myth saying that when Bertrand saw his body and wept, he said "If my brother is dead, then I shall be ruler of this pitiful town!" (4).
A few days later, Tripoli fell, but Al-Darwishi escaped, but saved many lives of his own men after enduring a suicidal charge into Raymond IV's rear guard, injuring the two, but alive they are. Baldwin I recounted this on his journal and said "I fear, this new vizier will be the ultimate successor to the man my brother fought at Ascalon".
Raymond of IV declared his own domain as the "County of Tripoli" and declared himself no more as Raymond IV of Toulouse, but Raymond of Tripoli, however he was now in his 60's and his rule would've been short, with Bertrand of Tripoli succeeding him if he does.
All of the Levant is nearly in Christian Hands, the few settlements still holding out are usually small and easily to capture such as Sidon, although Baldwin didn't have the resources to capture them. Until in 1107, Baldwin received news of a crusading force, but his one was, strange, the crusaders were Norwegian.
The leader of this was none other than the King of Norway, Sigurd I. Many inspiring tales came from him, from Denmark to Portugal, they gave stories of him such as inspiring Pagan Vikings to join his cause, or defending Lisbon from the Muslims, and acquiring treasures from the Baltic to the Balearics, a legend back then, his tactics included the usual Norwegian strategy since they were Vikings, hit and run and pillage and loot. Sigurd arrived in 1110, Baldwin appreciated a king who ventured all the way from the north, and gave him treasures and gifts, Sigurd also pointed out that Baldwin had trouble in capturing settlements and asked to help him, Baldwin accepted and pointed out that Sidon was still in Muslim hands. Sigurd helped him in attacking Sidon (Along with the Doge of Venice who came later on) and won, Sigurd later captured various other settlements before he finish. Baldwin even told Anselm IV to give him a part of the True Cross to Sigurd and went on a leisurely walk with the Norwegian. Before leaving, many of Sigurds men wanted to stay in the Kingdom, which Sigurd accepted. He left the Kingdom and arrived to Constantinople where he impressed the Byzantines with his ships, gave his treasures and much of his men to Alexius, and left, never to return.
However the stories of Sigurd still inspired many Danes and Nords to join the crusades for many years to come.
A saying was said by Sigurd -
Utover Vahalla ligger et kongerike Himmel ~ Beyond Vahalla lies a Kingdom of Heaven
*1 - Yep, it happened, just altered a bit of it
*2 - Raymond actually was wounded and died
*3 - Not good with Egyptian/Fatimid/Shi'ite names.....
*4 - Not good with quotes.....
Chapter 4: Au-delà de Vahalla
1105, Tripoli.
Tripoli, one of the last major cities in the Levant, it has been in siege for three years, but after three years of harassing the crusaders and well-defending itself, Raymond IV of Tripoli (Who now claims the city) had it. Tripoli was originally under Radwan of Aleppo's control, but after a disastrous assault onto on the castles held by the crusaders which led to the decimation of much of Radwan's men a year ago, the people of the city gave up and joined the Fatimids as Radwan was too late to return to Tripoli with reinforcements (1).
Raymond IV (Who luckily survived the assault on the castle(2) was even more angry than ever and requested Baldwin I to help him siege the city. Baldwin arrived, as with Baldwin of Bourcq (Now Edessa), Bertrand of Toulouse (Raymond's son, and also claimant), and William-Jordan (Raymond's other son and also claimant). Latin Patriarch Anselm IV was requested to join the fray so he can encourage Christian zealous and moral and joined along with a giant cross built on a wagon called "The Great Cross of Tripoli".
The battle was bloody, even though Tripoli gave themselves to the Fatimids, they had no help coming and decided to fight to the last man, even if they lose, the only reinforcements that arrived was a pair of ships of Fatimid soldiers, among them was the vizier successor of Al-Afdal Shahanshah and the vizier killed at Ramla, his name was Al-Darwishi Kaldunashah, a cousin to Al-Afdal (3). During the battle, William-Jordan was killed when an arrow struck him in the chest, Bertrand of Toulouse saw this and wept, there's even a myth saying that when Bertrand saw his body and wept, he said "If my brother is dead, then I shall be ruler of this pitiful town!" (4).
A few days later, Tripoli fell, but Al-Darwishi escaped, but saved many lives of his own men after enduring a suicidal charge into Raymond IV's rear guard, injuring the two, but alive they are. Baldwin I recounted this on his journal and said "I fear, this new vizier will be the ultimate successor to the man my brother fought at Ascalon".
Raymond of IV declared his own domain as the "County of Tripoli" and declared himself no more as Raymond IV of Toulouse, but Raymond of Tripoli, however he was now in his 60's and his rule would've been short, with Bertrand of Tripoli succeeding him if he does.
All of the Levant is nearly in Christian Hands, the few settlements still holding out are usually small and easily to capture such as Sidon, although Baldwin didn't have the resources to capture them. Until in 1107, Baldwin received news of a crusading force, but his one was, strange, the crusaders were Norwegian.
The leader of this was none other than the King of Norway, Sigurd I. Many inspiring tales came from him, from Denmark to Portugal, they gave stories of him such as inspiring Pagan Vikings to join his cause, or defending Lisbon from the Muslims, and acquiring treasures from the Baltic to the Balearics, a legend back then, his tactics included the usual Norwegian strategy since they were Vikings, hit and run and pillage and loot. Sigurd arrived in 1110, Baldwin appreciated a king who ventured all the way from the north, and gave him treasures and gifts, Sigurd also pointed out that Baldwin had trouble in capturing settlements and asked to help him, Baldwin accepted and pointed out that Sidon was still in Muslim hands. Sigurd helped him in attacking Sidon (Along with the Doge of Venice who came later on) and won, Sigurd later captured various other settlements before he finish. Baldwin even told Anselm IV to give him a part of the True Cross to Sigurd and went on a leisurely walk with the Norwegian. Before leaving, many of Sigurds men wanted to stay in the Kingdom, which Sigurd accepted. He left the Kingdom and arrived to Constantinople where he impressed the Byzantines with his ships, gave his treasures and much of his men to Alexius, and left, never to return.
However the stories of Sigurd still inspired many Danes and Nords to join the crusades for many years to come.
A saying was said by Sigurd -
Utover Vahalla ligger et kongerike Himmel ~ Beyond Vahalla lies a Kingdom of Heaven
*1 - Yep, it happened, just altered a bit of it
*2 - Raymond actually was wounded and died
*3 - Not good with Egyptian/Fatimid/Shi'ite names.....
*4 - Not good with quotes.....