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.I came to dallas texas to heal a rift in the democratic party i needed desperatly to win the south to win relection in 1964.
memoirs of john F. Kennedy
You can"t say dallas doesnt love you said texas governor john conolly to the 35th president of the united states.Look at all the people that came to see you jackie kennedy said to her hiusband as the president said to his beautifull wife.
Lee Harvy oswald peered through the window of the texas book depository. A ex miltary man. a comunist traitor. He had one thing in mind today
connly a deer hunter all his life, knew the sound all to well. teurning 37 degree"s to his right he witnessed the president geting shot in the left arm.Another shot the president was shot in the hand, his middle finger blown off."I remember all to well my wife screaming he died saving my husband and i am holding his brains in my hands. Richard knox a very good sercret service agent had been runnning along with the car ,jumped on top of me and acted as a human sheild.Memoirs of John F.Kennedy
Oswald was about to fire one last round ,when his rifle unexpectly jammed, he unjammed the rifle. rats! oswald thought to himself. shot himself in the foot and died on the floor of the book depository. having returned to d.c. vice president johnson called soviet premeir knrushev, the communist leader was relieved world war three was not about to happen. vice president lyndon johnson sat down in his office and thought about how close he unexpectly came to being the 36th president of the united states.
 
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I shall give a few tips:

  • Capitalize. It's key, and it looks professional. This is a must for any writing.
  • Organize. Make sure you have properly laid out and broken up paragraphs and areas of information. Also, check for errors in the writing such as misspellings and improper grammar.
  • Amplify. There's far too little right now. You should at least have around a written page worth of writing, give or take.
 
kennedy the 35th president of the united states came to dallas texas ... snip ... Kennedy s relection campaign almost ended in tragedy.

Welcome to AH.com double7double. "JFK lives", an interesting choice for a 1st post, as JFK and the Kennedy clan are popular POD topics/subjects on this forum. Have you checked out some of the recent threads on this POD? This recent one may be infrormative as you move forward on yours:
CAMELOT FOREVER https://www.alternatehistory.com/discussion/showthread.php?t=206525

Two more things:
- Please pay attention to your spelling
- LBJ would not be sworn in as acting president, nor would he just go into the oval office as if it were his own.
 
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Welcome to AH.com double7double. "JFK lives", an interesting choice for a 1st post, as JFK and the Kennedy clan are popular POD topics/subjects on this forum. Have you checked out some of the recent threads on this POD? This recent one may be infrormative as you move forward on yours:
CAMELOT FOREVER https://www.alternatehistory.com/discussion/showthread.php?t=206525

Naw, you can't look at another thread on this. Its best to avoid them, because you'll end up mimicking them.

You must examine things, do your research, and arrive at your own conclusions.
 
Governor rockerfeller is shot by sirhan sirhan and dies a day later. martin luther king is also killed.: we will not let radicals stop us

from says president kennedy. our fight for equality. riots break out in alabama detroit.

richard nixon defeats johnson humphrey,the democratic ticket and wallace lemay american independent ticket.early in 1970

senator ted kennedy dies in boating acident edicott peabody is elected to the late senators seat.

president nixon visits china and over hauls welfare. john fritzgerald kennedy writes a weekly column for a boston newspaper

and robert teachs at harvard. sargent shriver elected governor of maryland and lindsay relected to senate.abrahams beams

elected to full term governor of new yortk. governor


brown loses to san francisco mayor christopher wilson in a tight election for governor of california.
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Not trying to offend, but I would suggest re-writing this timeline, but not without taking a bit of your time to think over it and seeing what you could change to make it more interesting. Maybe get an editor or two to look over your work before posting it.

I'd love to edit, but I'm a bit caught up with other projects and with life, so unfortunately, you're gonna have to find someone else to help you out with writing.
 
This story is still very disjointed, choppy and riddled with spelling & grammatical errors. You need to cover the events in the story in greater depth and amplify greatly what you write about the people in it.
 
This story is still very disjointed, choppy and riddled with spelling & grammatical errors. You need to cover the events in the story in greater depth and amplify greatly what you write about the people in it.

Not to mention correcting the logical inconsistencies and factual errors.
 
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