British Empire remains strong?


I am trying a new type of alternative history, what I have here is more or less a bias out look on the past in the eyes of propaganda from a right wing aristocracy, while obviously some of this is ASB it is supposed be because this is representing how sad State Media can be The Empire Where the Sun Never Sets written by a State Sponsored Professor attempts to be an example of this.


In The reality of a 2012 in this world everything is collapsing around them- as Britain turns more and more totalitarian in the early 20th century the parliament in this world is basically a cooperate oligarchy,



Introduction to​

THE EMPIRE WHERE THE SUN NEVER SETS​

In the year of our lord 2012, the glorious United Kingdom under the careful rule of his righteous majesty George VII the realm spans a good third of the world’s surface and almost half of the worlds people. The Great Empire created in god’s name has brought the light of civilization to even the darkest corners of the world dispelling the darkness of the despots. The world has finally been brought to prosperity as indented long ago.
At the dawn of the 18th century the British Empire expanded massively, so began the history the crown colony of India and the royal new world province of New England. The profits of the newly formed East India Company made the nation rich and along with that a worthy kingdom. During the wars of succession and Seven Years, the old crumbling nation of Spain was cast down along with the usurping nations of France and Austria. By the end of the 18th century under the reign of George III- one of the best rulers in our history, Britain already was already becoming the world union we know today.
The 1800’s began with turmoil in her old foe France- after terrible failures on the part of their bourbons the people had justly overthrown their iron hand- but so much rage to a point they lost conciseness of all practices of the lord’s name. This so called French Revolution tuned to blood and terror- one of the worst incidences of the world’s history. King George III justly ended this fiasco for the sake of the French People in 1804- placing a rising sergeant from Aquitaine as Jaques I- his rule ushered a long time of peace and good times for all of Europe.
Not too long after the French Solution the large scale development of Australia- or the back country as a penal colony for the less enlightened subjects of the crown. As the 19th century progressed not only did Britain extend her mighty arm to even more places of the world, there was also a massive building at home- new technology brought urbanization- new factories maufactued products from Africa, India the Americans and the Far East. As a result of this new burst of social construction at home living standards grew and the people were happy and the reign of Victoria was a golden age. In continental Europe petty uprising failed to threaten the golden peace- and in a bold act to unite god’s people the council of European Nations was formed in 1888- with the Queen as it’s head. And guide
The 1900’s started off at the tip of the queen Victoria’s summer of peace, however new uprisings threatened to turn the summer into autumn, anarchy broke out in China, Russia and Spain in 1918 ,1921 and 1923 respectively, as both nations had been good friends with Britain, the crown felt necessary to save them from the Marxist Rabble. Soon the European Council’s guidance of France and Germany was shook to the core, there was even in trouble in the prosperous and loyal New England. Only through the blood of the Christian patriot was Europe saved from the brutal and cruel starters in 1928. However at the expense of this victory resulted in the loss of North America and of the Chinese Allies. Out of these un called for French Revolutions resulted in the rule of despots that exist today. However even today there are still loyal king’s men in these nations that yearn for freedom and one day they shall have it.
 
Well, it's because there is insufficient detail for there to be much to comment about. There's a strong British Empire that wins the American War, George III presumably isn't mad, and ultimately Britannia somehow rules everything. Could you expand a bit on some of the points? Some could be explained in more detail (for example, the social reforms possibly by a Disraeliesque profusion of One-Nation Toryism becoming more popular; but how does this fit in with Oligarchy? And why is a sergeant made King of France? And so on.) The problem with using one-sided propaganda as a vehicle for alternate history is that it often provides an insufficient view of the topic. Apart from that, good luck, and keep writing!
 
Well, it's because there is insufficient detail for there to be much to comment about. There's a strong British Empire that wins the American War, George III presumably isn't mad, and ultimately Britannia somehow rules everything. Could you expand a bit on some of the points? Some could be explained in more detail (for example, the social reforms possibly by a Disraeliesque profusion of One-Nation Toryism becoming more popular; but how does this fit in with Oligarchy? And why is a sergeant made King of France? And so on.) The problem with using one-sided propaganda as a vehicle for alternate history is that it often provides an insufficient view of the topic. Apart from that, good luck, and keep writing!

ill try another page of the propaganda then Ill give an un bias summary
 
The 1930’s saw the recovery as the monarch and the parliament undertook many reconstruction projects this included a mass building program of rail roads, industry, schools and churches. In 1935 all of Europe from Brittney to the Urals was connected in one trans continental rail road, which is still in vital use today. Other projects included a large hydro damming incentive which still powers Europe today. But as the King Understood a good society isn’t built on public works but on the family and so included in the 30’s rebirth was the start of the Good Children Platform- state sponsored youth groups and family counseling has insured that parents are good models for their children and that all children are worthy of the greater council.

In 1942 the wanton aggression of the despots made themselves crudely apparent, as the rouge New England Workers State subjugated the rest of North America, and China’s instigation of revolt in India and Persia begun the Great Patriotic War. Led by an obscure power monger Peng Shuzi, the Chinese threatened the entire Pacific ruthlessly, while believing they could achieve victory by trying to exterminate British Citizens they grossly underestimated European Ingenuity- the development of the atom bomb. While the crown did not believe in wiping cities off the earth the bombings of Nanjing and Peking were only required to stop the ruthless treatment of god’s choose people. The Chinese therefore surrendered in December 2nd 1947- mass concessions to the council were given from China and the crown is more stronger than ever before. America meanwhile incapable of fighting maintained it’s self through trickery, and seduction of good British Citizens and managed to build an a bomb of it’s own hence the Cold War has unfortunately continued to this day.
The succeeding decades for prosperous times for the European Council and for their allies in Africa and India new relations with Brazil helped to prevent a chock hold on the Americas from crude Socialist New England. As the crown run by Queen Victoria II and the parliament ran by the old patriot Churchill now recognized that the world was in a truly new era. New Technology engineered new spirits, and so the European Council started the trek to space, being the first nation on earth to a man on the moon in 1968, the council’s enemies lagged behind because of their inferior social development and thus failed to do the same things for years.

While even today the opponents of a united humanity continue to attempt harassment of the Western Peoples and those others that are still loyal to the crown they fail utterly. This is because the crown and the clean democracy that guide the nations of the world justly and actuality. While this isn’t a perfect world obviously given the mass murders and terrible crimes committed by the despots all over the world, the Council- and Britain will always forever perfect the world as the eyes of the Lord shall see it. We have never faltered and never will even in the face of crisis for we know that our fickle enemies will be conquered over and even they will see the error in their ways.

NOTES:
The Good Children Plan originated because the Monarch by the early 20th century a dictator felt that the goverment was threatened by changing social standards in European Society to make sure that the hundreds of millions of people would not revolt again. Parents that were deemed "crude" by the state were often outrightly murdered. Meanwhile Children would be shipped off to summer camps, girls were taught to be good home makers and men were bred to be stead fast warriors while this system has seen some moderation according to some accounts- the IOFN (International Organization of Free Nations) is unsure exactly what is going on within Europe and her African Colonies as of now.

Obviously contrary to the claims of this article was the way the World War played out which was undoubtedly a result of British aggression in the Pacific- the war crimes that the Windsor-Hanoverian Dynasty accuses China of committing has been found by non bias sources to have never happened.


Now I want you the reader to try to make your own idea on what has really happened. Obviously this is quite vague and so is a puzzle to figure out what is really going on

An Unbias Update will be coming
 
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rtaker

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Just a tip - the board does not seem to allow for indents, so skip a line between every paragraph so it is easier to read.

Also, good luck with this.
 
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